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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Advantages and Disadvantages of children watching TV

In the past few years, the figure of children watching tiktok has become higher and higher. For many parents, keep their child staying at home and watching tiktok is a good way so that they can control their kids and do somethings else without worrying. However, everything has its pros and cons. In this essay, i will discuss the reasons why children love watching tiktok and some advantages and disadvantages of allowing kids to use smartphone to watch tiktok.

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in some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some nations, it is believed by groups of people that human being has health issues because of consuming fast food more than normal.

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You have just read an article containing incorrect information about your town. Tell them about incorrect information and importance of correcting it.

I am writing this letter with regards to inform you that the last historical article from your newspaper which I have read it recently, has some misleading information.

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It is important to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Understanding the difference between socially approved and inappropriate behavior is immensely important for children. I totally agree that parents and teachers have to use punishments to settle down the fundamental cultural norms of society inside the personalities of kids, although, as long as phrasing practices are also presented. From my point of view, there are two main reasons for this.

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is the possibility of viewing the web of companies as a multitude of money gaining apparatus, however, according to some, firms have also a duty to benefit the public in some manner. There is reasonable argumentation for both perspectives.

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In the past, Most people used to travel to their place of work. With increase use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What is advantages and disadvantages of this development?

After development of Advance technology, People start to used it for their benefits as it make their lives easier in particularly, Employees. With the current COVID-19 pandemic, many companies allowed their employees to work from home to protect their health. This assay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home.

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Many people play sport when they are young, but then stop when they become adults. Why do so many adults stop physical exercise? What can be done to solve this problem?

Most children like to play around more often rather than sitting at their study table and revising subject material. It's perfectly natural for children to prefer playing sports over anything else. However adults on the other hand move around and play sports significantly less in comparison to children. There are various reasons for this and some of them are outlined below.

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Some people say that with the new technology there is no need to develop handwriting skills anymore. Others believe that it is still necessary to teach handwriting. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Handwriting is an essential skill to mankind, passed down by generations. However, there also may be disadvantages of this. The pros and cons of this are discussed below.

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Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that the Internet becomes more and more popular nowadays and more people read news on it, but newspapers will remain the most important source of news. I partly agree with this view.

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Some sports are extremely dangerous for those who play them. Why do people participate in such sports? What measures could they take to minimize the risk involved?

All of people prefer to play games without age limit. As well as, sports give us a lot of benefits such mental relaxations, increase fitness. However, adventure sports may be life threating. Therefore, ensure paragraphs of this essay will discuss reasons for play adventure sports and how keep safety of players.

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Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

More and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. I completely disagree that newspapers still become the most important source of news.

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Nowadays, experience is more valued in the workplace than knowledge in many countries. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that these days the experience is the priority to get a well-paid job position, but at the same time we can not underestimate the importance of knowledge.

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Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers.To what extend do you agree?

In this present scenario,It is commonly seen that, there is an ever increasing number of people who desired to learn more about the history of their residence. Living in a contemporary society individuals are showing more interest in investigating the background of their accommodation. This essay will first outline the reasons why people are becoming more interested in their ancestor’s hoise history including used materials, and then it will explicate how to find information by simply asking local residents and researching in community libraries or online.

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Giving lecture in auditorium to large number of students is an old way of teaching. With the technology available today there is no justification for it, and everything should be done online. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

There are various methods of teaching for teaching staff to adopt including practical lessons, lectures, online, presentations, seminars, etc. However, the method of teaching to be adopted depends on the type of students being taught as well as the teacher's personal experience with the particular method of teaching.

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At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of younger adults, compared with the number of older.

It is true that nowadays some society have a large number of younger generations and it provides the country with many benefits over the increasing the older generation.

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Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

Most people nowadays believe that the younger generation can do some volunteer work in their leisure time because this will be fruitful for society. In my opinion, I agree with this belief as described in the following paragraphs.

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Many children are encouraged to do part time work by parents? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Many parents believe that encouraging their own children to do a part-time job besides their school will help them to grow as credible members of society, but it has certain drawbacks too. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of a child's job and provide a logical conclusion. I believe that young people's work has more advantages than drawbacks.

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Some People claims that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

One part of society opines that we need much more strict laws to persuade people to recycle their waste from homes because they think it's not satisfying what's happened these days. I strongly agree with them and I also think that nowadays it becomes even more vital because of the lack of sufficient consideration about our resources and the environment. In this essay, my opinion will be explained.

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Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product ( such as cell phone) or service (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?

Now a daNow a days everything is over pricing not only for the laxarious product but also daily needs. I strongly believe pricing is import for buying any type of goods.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The subject about what should people do after school sparked much debate between individuals. I tend to believe that it is important to apply into university straight after school to get education you need and only later on start working. Other people believe differently. In this essay I will argument both views and explain my opinion.

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