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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people get into debts by buying things they don't need and can't afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Nowadays, some people prefer get into debts by buying tersier needs and cannot afford them. This kind of behavior will reflected on their bank account. I believe there are several factors that drive this attitude towards spending. There are Personal desire, star syndroms, economic status.

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Some people think that the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather to benefit them as individual. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals believe that teaching children in school is the main purpose of being good citizens and workers rather than to benefit them as individuals. Therefore , others disagree with this statement. In this essay , I will discuss both views and I will draw my personal conclusion.

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Success in formal "pen and paper" examinations is often seen to be a sign of intelligence. To what extent do you agree with the view that formal examination measures

previouslyً, "pen and paper" examinations was popular with people and believed that it could be a sign of intelligence, as such, intelligence could be estimated through it. In my point of view, I do not agree with this opinion for some reasons.

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There are many zoos around the world now. Some people think zoos are cruel and should be banned. What is your opinion?

A significant number of zoos among countries has been more popular in the lest decade, while many people believe that zoos is disrespect for a right of animals, government ought to banned the zoos. In my opinion, I agree that zoos should be close as it will greatly benefit both animals and society.

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Some people regard work as the most important thing in life and have little interest in anything else. Other people are most enthusiastic about their hobbies and leisure interest than their jobs. Discuss both of the attitudes and give your opinion,

It is true that, human's lives is a mistery lives, people are confusing to choose which is the most importance. Some people believe that work is the most significant thing in mankind's live while others say that hobbies, and past time activities should be ranked first than their works. This essay will discuss both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons.

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Some people think universities should provide knowledge and skills related to a future career; others believe the proper function of the university is to give access to knowledge for its own sake. What is your opinion of the primary part of the university?

Tertiary education is expected to give knowledge and skills related to future career by others while some believe that they should impact knowledge for its own sake. In my opinion they should train and provide information that is related to future career. More details will be alluded in the essay below.

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Government should spend money to increase the development of sport and art for school students rather than supporting professional sport and art performances for general public. Do you agree or disagree?

In this era, the budget for developing sport and art fields are raised by the government. On the other hand, the performance of professional sport and art are needed to increase for the general public in the country. I totally disagree if the government focuses on students in the school because not necessarily the students in school love sport. Another reason, the professional sport in the general public will increase income per capita of the country.

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Some countries encourage foreign companies to open a branch office in their country. Many people think that the government should focus on encouraging local businesses to expand rather than inviting foreign businesses to open branches To what extent do you agree?

It is true that, it is irrefutable that traditional cultures will be lost when technology develops. Some say that technology, and traditional values are mismatched. I strongly disagree with this statement for the following reasons.

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Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce these increasing levels of crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Criminal activities are at an all time high under the current justice system. Some believe that the only way to curb this issue is to post more police officers to watch the public. Others, myself included, completely disagree with this sentiment as there are deeper issues that need to be addressed to help with this problem.

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It has been observed that in many countries notenoughstudentsarechoosingto studyscience subjects at university. What do you think are the causes of the problem? What are the effects on society

It has been observed that in many countries note bough student to studyscience subjects at university. has emerged as one of the most significant pro facing humans. In the following essay l will discuss some of main problems associated with this issue, before suggesting possible solutions.

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Nowadays, a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think it is negative for children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, advertisement sector plays a crucial in modern

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many college students agree to acquire additional other subjects beyond their main stream. On the contrary, other people believe that the most crucial thing is to focus on learning the main stream for the best achievement. In my opinion, even though it is important to get the deeper understanding in the main subject, but to gain the wider knowledge student could consider other main subject to learn something new.

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Some people prefer to travel to somewhere new and different when they go on holiday, while others like familiar places. This question type asks you to discuss the advantages and disadvantages. You are not required to give your opinion. note Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of visiting new places.

Most people like to travel during their holidays. They may go somewhere they know very well, or to a place they have never visited before. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of travelling to new places.

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Topic: The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So government and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. The what extent do you agreed or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge

The environmental issues, nowadays, have become increasingly to serve, leading to widespread concerns. Many argue believe that the effort of regular people is insufficient to address the issues. Others argue that only the government and large firms have the powerful to be responsible to tackle the problems. I partially agree with this viewpoint. I think that both individuals, and larger organizations have a crucial role to pay in addressing the environmental problems.

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Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to their studies in school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that some students can to concentrate on the lesson, thinking about something less. It is undeniable that a new knowledge has become an essential part of our life. However, personally I tend to think that student should be thinking about his lesson and head on the lesson.

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Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness aﬀect individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend?

Many people consider competitiveness as one of the most precious personality among humans. I believe competitiveness can provide benefit to individuals by encouraging them obtain more knowledge and overcome weakness

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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

I would say there is more benefits when you have to find work and move away from your friends and families.

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It is important for people to take risk, both in professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disavantages?

Generally, it is one of the most necessary decision for once to take risks, both in professional lives and their personal lives.

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Buying tickets on the internet such as books, air tickets, and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this outweigh the disadvantage

Purchasing tickets by online like books, air tickets, and groceries is gaining more popularity. I think this thing will give many benefits to people.

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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tooL Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh tne benefits?

on this advancement of technology era, more and more video games have been created and covered all parts of the globe. Therefore, It is debated among the public whether the video games as harmless or opposite effect on the people who is playing on them. From my perspective, the drawbacks of video games outweigh the upsides which I will explain in the following paragraph.

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