IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 448

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family, we just watch television. To what extent for you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, it is argued that television provide benefits to society. However, some people think that it is destructive to families and communities rather than being involved more with the family gatherings, activities and social festivities, they watch television. I strongly agree with the latter opinion. This forthcoming essay will discuss both point of views.

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Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Arguments appeers among people that phones are not allowed to used by children during school days but other believes on the opposite. Phones in school day can distract children from study, but in the other hand, phones can be helpfull for them to study with many advance features. I believe the use of phones by children in school days should be ok as long as there is a parents control

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Today, more and more people are waiting until their thirties to get married and have children. Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

Nowadays, In a modern days people are too much busy and they don't have enuough time to get married and take a children on time. Despite some drawbacks of this trend, there are obvious benefits as well. In this eassy, I will outline the perceived drawbacks and benefits of modern communication means and explain why i feel this has more significant advantages.

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These days people are using the Internet for shopping, work and to communicate with others without the need for face-to-face meetings. Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

Some people believe, that nowadays the benefits of the Internet within the modern world cover all the essential needs from obtaining basic groceries from the market, up to crucial interconnection with society. All these requirements are conveniently covered by contemporary online tools which leave in person contact far behind. As a result, for many people it is complicated to consider is it a positive change or a horrific side effect of world web usage.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

While it is widely claimed that the best solutions is to accept bad situation such as jobs or shortage of money sometimes, others argue that the struggle to improve such situation is better. Both points of view and reasons why I agree with the latter statement will be elaborated on in this essay.

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Most people believe that social media such as facebook and instagram negatively impact on society and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the globe, many populations are thinking that social media such as facebook and intragram badly effect on the community and independents. while I accept that approach is jusfied and I believe that there are other factors which is humans liked that similar platforms.

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Some people think it would be beneficial for school children to study international news as a school subject, while others argue it would be a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people claim that if children study international news at school , this is beneficial for them , while other group believe that it is not necessary to know that and it can be waste of time. I will survey both views as well as my opinion.

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Public celebrations such as national days etc are held in most countries which is expensive so govt. should not spend money on it and on more useful things. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that government spend a lot on national days cermonies. I agree with this statement due to the fact that celebrations requiers a high cost of money and government should saves big amount on other important public enhancements.

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Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?

Usually, male and female are having dissimilar of strengths and weaknesses. Some people believe that defined of positions of the work might separate by fellow and women. In this essay I will write my opinion.

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too much emphasis is given for education of the young. more government money should be spent to time activity of young people. to what extent do you agree or disagree

Education is becoming all-pervasive in this modern world than ever before. However, thre remains certain discrepancy as to whether the total impacts of learning have been advantageous or disadvantageous to the sustainable growth of civilized society. Whereas many put forward opposite proposition, I hold to the belief that the imperfectness of studying is far outweighed by its practical benefits.

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Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinion in this?

During the past few decades fast food industry has been becomimg increasingly popular among nations. While some people claim that this phenomenon has advantagous influences in people's lives, others are againt this statement. This essay discusses my point of views and states why I do not agree with the aforementioned claim.

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In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single –sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, people in several countries think that parents have an option to send their children to single sex schools or co-educational schools. However, some people do not want to register their children to singe-sex schools to prevent the drawbacks later in life. Personally, I agree that children should to know well the opposite-sex. It is because naturally there is a different character between a girl and a boy, and for that we need to explore each others. In addition, it is to prevent a sexual harassment.

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Some people believe that children's time outside of school should be filled with scheduled activities such as art and music classes and sports. Others feel that children need free time to play and relax. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While some people think childrean have to spend their time in some classes like art and music or sports activities after their schools othe groups think that is better to let them to be free I completly agree with rather group.

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Despite health warnings, a large number of people countinue to smoke all over the world. why should we be concernec about this?what soloutions would you suggest?

The number of people who are smoking in all over the world is huge, while the warning about damage healtness are alot. I wil explaing some cause and solution in this essay for this matter.

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task2: Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives. In what ways can society benefit from the contribution that older people can make?

Nowadays, people over the age of 65 can live full and active lives, demonstrating some older people who continue to work to contribute to the community . Even so, they continue to work to contribute to society for many reasons . In this essay, we will offer a few ways in which this can benefit society.

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“Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”

Most society are spending their time to use some platform like email and text message that is challenging to get new friend in real life. I totally totally agree with the statement because most citizen can spend a lot of time focus using the platform, so that the effects are lack of social life, health and disturbing physicology.

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Some people think that it is necessary to use animals for testing medicine intended for human use , while other argue that it is cruel to do that . Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

People have different points of view when it comes to testing medicine on animals, there are two different opinions. The first opinion states that it is necessary to use animals for testing medicine. Meanwhile, the other opinion is quite the oppsite of the first opinion they see that it is cruel to taste medicine on animals. In my opinion, I do agree with the second opinion, and in this essay, I will discuss the reasons why.

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in many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

The population of eldery people in the world is rising recently as people are living longer than before. This phenomenon indeed have both positives and negatives impact in society. But this essay will contend that on balance the advantage of having more elderly people outweigh the negatives.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

while some people beileve if let childreen choice by their own for their dayli routine activities make them selfish in society when they grow up, others think it is necessary for children to decide aboput events which are effective on them I strongly believe we have to give them this apportunity to decide by themselves, this is their own life .

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, people are believed that it is an important need spending a huge amount of money for making new railway lines for fastly transporting from a city to another one, while others think that better to spent money on growing the public transport which are exiting, I strongly believe that the rather group are right.

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