IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 448

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think the news has no connection to people's lives, so then it is a waste of time to read the news in the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some individuals argue that news it is far away from real-life and people waste their time when they watch news or read newspaper. This essay totally disagrees with this statement because the news keeps us informed about global and local events , and news provide curical weather updated and warnings that can affect daily activities and safety.

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When it comes to dwelling in a country where we use a foreign language in place of our mother tongue, many people opine that this can be the cause for problems in terms of social and practical challenges. From my perspective, I fully agree this opinion.

When it comes to dwelling in a country where we use a foreign language in place of our mother tongue, many people opine that this can be the cause for problems in terms of social and practical challenges. From my perspective, I fully agree this opinion.

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Some people believe that the internet has positive effect , others think that It has negative trends .Discuss both views and give your opinion .

Recent years, implementation of the internet has a great impact on the people lives. Some people believe that internet has favorable effect while some argue and consider it unfavorable. In this essay, I will discuss both perspectives and express my opinion.

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some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve mind, such as doing word puzzles or reading. Other feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The debate over how to utulize free time is an ongoing one, while some people believe in free time it is better to enhance cognitive ability by doing activity , for instance like studying or playing, others argue that it should be reserved for relaxing the mind. I agree with the former view point of utilizing free time.

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Topic: It is common for young people to go abroad to study at university instead of studying in their home contry. Do the advantages of studying at university in another country outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people believe that most young people prefer to go abroad to study at university instead of studying in their home country. This statement is an essential issue nowadays. It has positive and negative aspects . In this essay, I will shed light on the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad at university.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed. What are the advantages arid disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

Nowadays, different countries are noting to the tourism discipline. Likewise, tourism has main source of income, especially economic increasing our state. However, tourism has become very bad influence to the state's environment, and it is causing many more problems. In this essay, I will try to discuss both positive and negative sides of this and draw a conclusion.

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Many people use social media on regular basis in order to keep in touch with the news and with other people. Do you think that the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The popularity of social media are quickly increasing nowadays. Moreover, a high proportion of the population are diary using this networks to be updated with the news or to mantain contact with their friends. In my opinion the merits outweight the drawbacks and this essay pretend to explain why.

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SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT HAVING A SET RETIREMENT AGE (Example 65 YEARS) FOR EVERYBODY, REGARDLESS OF OCCUPATION, IS UNFAIR. THEY BELIEVE THAT A CERTAIN WORKERS DESERVE TO RETIRE AND RECEIVE A PENSION AT AN EARLIER AGE. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE? WHICH TYPE OF WORKERS DO YOU THINK SHOULD BENEFIT FROM EARLY RETIREMENT?

This statement refers to employee’s minimum retirement age have been fixed by the authorities at around 65 years and this rule for all types of job categories. Some people argued that these rules will not match to such employees and they are eligible to get a pension fund at an earlier age. I strongly agree with the statement by giving the below-mentioned points.

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Nowadays many people travel to foreign coutries foe pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the coutries travelled to. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A number of people believe that create a journey as tourist to overseas carry the negative impacts for the countries as the destinations. In my opinion, These are numerous possibilities, however I more refer that the travelers can can contribute for areas' development and it is positive impacts for that zones.

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Some people think that best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Other however believe that there are other alternatives ways of reducing crime. Discuss your opinion?

A number of crime cases still become massive concern for numerous counties in the worldwide. Meanwhile, ongoing arguing regarding the best solution to reduce the scale of the crime still exist nowadays. In my opinion, giving additional period to the perpetrator is not the best option for this issue, as well as there are the various ways to accomplish this problem.

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Many people believe that the world’s most urgent problems can only be solved by international collaboration. Do you agree or disagree?

In this universe has encompasses a lot of countries and there are lot problems between the countries specifically border problems many people claiming that this can be solve by international collaboration. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition of appears more to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.

Today, learning a foreign language is a necessary subject and people all over the world should learn a second dialect. A group of individuals say people have to learn another speech just to working or travelling while other ones say there are other reasons to learn a new language.

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.

Individuals' average life expectancies are enhanced due to the world development nowadays. It imposes some negative impacts on citizens and society, but there are several ways to handle theses problems.

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In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?

People are restricted to smoking in public areas in some states. Some say that banning smoking for people in public area is justified. This essay totally agrees with this statement, because smoking in public spaces raise the risk of health problems for passive smokers and children. This actions are good to reduce pollution in public space.

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The best way to make roads safer is to make vehicle drivers take a driving test each year.

I to some extent reinforce the new rule that every driver should retake their driver's licence each year to make the road safer. while this approach has some merits, it also faces with significant drawbacks that make it an imperfect solution.

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Some suggest than young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what the itadvantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this.

It is recommended for students to work in their gap year before joining the university. I will be discussing benefits and disadvantages in this essay.

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The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,andmake comparisons where relevant.

The two maps depict the transformation of a coastal harbor's arrangement from the year 2000 to the present.

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Instructions Read the question below and write an opinion essay. Remember to write down a clear thesis statement followed by your essay plan. Only then attempt to write this essay. Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth rather than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To What extent do you agree or disagree?

it is argued that , at the peresent time famous celebrities own fortune and appealing apperance rather than other talents . this can contributes bad influence on minors . I beleive that it can affects on juniors confidence and beliefs so this can consider as deterimental for them.

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Some people are of the opinion that children should be rewarded for good behaviour. Others think they should be punished for bad behavior. Discuss both views and give your personal opinion and reasons.

Part of the society believe that kids should be punish when they misbehave. Nevertheless, I think that better option is that kids get a gift when they do a good thing, because they will love to do that good thing again.

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Schools don’t give proper health educations to young people. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give you own opinion.

The importance of health education must be teach to the pupils from their schools, it is one of the vital scope of government. Others believe most of the academic institutions are not ready to teach health education lessons to their students. In my opinion, I will not support this statement by giving the below mentioned points.

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