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Today people do less exercise. Some people believe that conducting sporting events such as the Olympics or World Cup encourage people to live healthy while others indicate that there are various other methods to remain healthy. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

It is considered by some that Olympics or World Cup can encourage people to keep fit, while there are other who think that we have other chioce to remain healthy. In my opinion, I believe that Olympics may not encourage people to keep healthy, and if people want, there have a lot of way to stay healthy.
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At the present time, populations of some countries include a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no doubt that these days young humans are becoming a huge number in some countries rather than older people. The question is, in some countries have populations , young people are variety than older people in somewhere. In this essay, I will compare between advantages and disadvantages to discover what the main reason.
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Some people argue that fashion items cost too much money. Others say that this is acceptable because fashion is an important part of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowdays, some people belive that fashion accessories are very expensive. other people claim that this is acceptable because fashion is a very necessary part of life. in my point of view, i think I agree with both opinions.
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some argue that governments should take care of disadvantaged people such as the unemployed and needy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

While a group of people say that governments have to help people who are poor and jobless another group aren`t agree with that However I strongly agree with this matter.
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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Research has shown that a lot of significant scientific discoveries have became because of experimentation on animals. However, some people are opposed to that animals' use while others are not. Finally, is experimentation on animals right or wrong?
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Some people think that big companies should provide sports and social facilities for the local community. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, the role of corporations in society has expanded beyond merely generating profits. One proposed responsibility is that companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. I strongly agree with this opinion since it could support community well-being and company's fame.
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Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is reason for doing this? Is this negative or positive development?

these days children are facing severe pressure from their parents to become successful in life. In my opinion , this is positive change, eventhough there are some drawbacks. In this essay, I will explore it.
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Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?

these days children are facing severe pressure by their parents to become successful in life. In my opinion this is positive change, eventhough there is some drawbacks. In this essay, i will explore it.
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Nowadays, many people choose to be self-employed rather than to work for a company or organizations. Why might this be the case ? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed ?

In recent times, workers prefer to be self employed instead of work for a company or organisation. This essay will discuss cause of people’s prefers and then what would be disadvantages of being self-employed.
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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There aren't providing sports facilities that everyone can use in some countries. While some countries have providing sports areas for eveyone. the other countries don't care society and they only focus to top athletes. I strongly agree with the everyone can use the sports facilities and in this essay, both views will be discussed and my own opinion will be stated.
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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts illustrate the layout of a university's sports center now, and how it will be updated after replacement.
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When asked to choose between a life without work and working for most of the time, people would always choose not to work. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people believe that if they were to give an opportunity to choose between working or not, they would no doubt choose to let their hair down. The writers agree that the majority of humankind will opt for the second choice due to excessive workload and potential mental illnesses arise in the modern era.
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(VMN)When asked to choose between a life without work and working most of the time, people would always choose not to work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a statement that when it comes to two choices, whether working or not working in most of the living time, the latter is commonly inclined towards. From the writer’s prospective, this decision can be understanding, due to the desire to having more leisure time to enjoy their hobbies or improve themselves after a hard-working and tiring phase of working time.
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When ask to choose between a life without work and working most of the time, people would always choose not to work. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

People are said to always have a tendency of not choosing to work. The author strongly with this statement due to passion as well as stress-relieving activity.
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the type of media that people of differnt age groups used to get daily newsw in one country in 2011

The given bar chart compares the usage of three different media that were chosen by people to get annual news in the same country during 2011.
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When asked to choose between a life without work and working most of the time, people would always choose not to work. Do you agree or disagree?

Upon being asked to choose between working and not to, most would decide on the latter. This essay agrees with the statement because of the abundance in freedom and time to pursue meaningful activity.
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When asked to choose between a life without work and working most of the time,people would always choose not to work. do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In our modern world, people being asked to opt to a life without work or working most of their entire life, most of their decisions are a life without working. While the writer contends that a life without working should not be popularized over different generations due to its effects on the economic growth and how healthy humans are in the future.
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Governments should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

The recommendation of whether to fund scientific researches whose consequences are unclear is an ongoing debate. While funding such kind of researches encourages further developments and can possibly contribute back to the society, it is also important to be constantly cautious about the negative impacts that these progresses could bring. In my opinion, it is beneficial to grant fundings to support these actions, but futher supervisions, audits, and inspections are necessary to ensure to diminish the negative impacts.
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When asked to choose between a life without work and working most of the time, people would always choose not to work. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

There are plenty of views about the answer for choosing a life that individuals do not necessary to work and work for their whole lives, however, citizens mostly chose the more comfortable one. The writer disagrees with the statement because of the lack of services and exhaustion of energy due to there is none of individuals run the occupation.
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When asked to choose between a life without work and working most of the time, people would always choose not to work. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

According to a survey, people would live a life without working rather than working in the whole life. This author disapproves of it because working is a necessary activity of live and to bring our dream in real life.
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