IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 448

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is often argued that music can bring people of different cultures and ages together effectively. I totally agree with this view, as music can enhance the association between people and give positive values to people.

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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

one of the grate issues of these days is finding appropriate job which the public should emigrate and leave their hometowns and family and friends.

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Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

People have different views about the choices of several companies to advertise their products by sponsoring sports events. In my opinion, this is the best option for companies to promote their products and have various beneficial to sports members.

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Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

First of all there are divided opinions about life existing out of our solar system furthermore deep space exploration is one part of economical growth that drives the growth of the country in terms of education, space program, astronomy etc. Moreover looking for life in space also provides us with the opportunity to look for other aspects of the space which relates to creation of the stars, solar systems and the destruction of the planets, solar system galaxy etc.

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Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find it difficult to get a university education. Universities should make it easier for such groups to enrol. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find it challenging to attend the university, therefore, universities should give them more opportunities to enroll. I totally agree with this statement.

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is widely claimed that the popularity of an internet was unintentionally outshined that of the newspapers, others argue that this might the case that any media before pre-internet era were considered to be obsolete for youngsters. The reasons why I agree with these statement regarding with this view of newspapers will be elaborated on in this essay.

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TASK: Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to solve this problem? Please study the example and write your own essay. You can use information from the example, but in case you do, make sure to rework it.

Global warming is a long time growth of the temperature on the Earth during a last century. On average the temperature growth on 1 degree. Scientists claim that it is a result of people activities. It creates greenhouse gas and hearts the Earth.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other . Disscus both views and give your own opinion.

A number of adults believe that competition is a vital factor for achieving good results. However, other group of humans argue that society should encourage cooperations between people more than competition. I strongly support that normal competition in society is a key for achieving a success.

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It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

one of the most important places where all cities should have is public places including various parks and squares.

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In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

pupils tend to live with own family and city when theta study and another group of students would prefer to study in another city and have private life and home.

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To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

according to raise population, government have to find alterantive food resource like insects product in order to strike balance betwenn supply and demand while group of people have notion that consuming its is not appropriate for human health and having hazardous effect on environment.

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In many countries around the world, life expectcy is increase. Discuse the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.

Every day, millions of people around the world have different opinions about life expectancy. However, Does it have disadvantages? while, some feel it does not have, I strongly believe it has .

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Children from age 7-11 now spend more time watching television and/or playing vedio games than before. What are the effects of this on children, families and society? What are the possible solutions to this problems?

These days, thechnology has been developing immediately, so we can see a number of children spend their time on electronical gadgets. This essay discuss about the effect of this problem on Societies and how can we solve it.

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The regular quality of individual's health is going to be worse in the future than it is in the present. I personally agree with this statement due to standards of food and people's addiction to lower quality healthcare.

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Children are facing more pressure nowadays from an academic, social and commercial perspective. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

The debate of how many pressures aspects young generation has to deal with nowadays. Has become a major concern in today's world. This essay will discuss the primary causes of this problem and suggest some potential solutions to address it.

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Individuals can do nothing to change society. Any new development can only be brought about by governments and large institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Any new development in the world can be brought only by government and big institutions and individuals cam do nothing to change society. I personally disagree with this statement because people have any possible abilities to make world better.

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Nowadays people use bicycles less as a form of transport. Why is this case? What can we do to encourage people to use bicycles more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Before the advancement of technology people used to utilize bicycles to travel from one place to other. These days many people using other transport methods as compared to bicycle and the population can be encouraged to use bicycle to commute at their work places and perform other tasks. This essay will outline two causes and how people can be motivated to use bicycles and at last I will provide my experience.

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Some people think the government should spend more money on sports facilities for top athletes, while others believe that spending should focus on facilities for the general public. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Matter of considerable debate I my opinion to agree or disagree with the discussion Some people think the government should spend more money on sports facilities for top athletes, while others believe that spending should focus on facilities for the general public.is an important issue to discuss l will present agreement supporting this description ,after which some aspect against that will be discussed .

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Band 9: in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided bar graph illustrates the data on the number of trips made by children in a particular country in 1990 and 2010 for different modes of transport when traveling to and from school.

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In many coutries, women are allowed to take maternity leave during the first month after the birth of the new born. Do you think the advantages of maternity leave outweight the disadvantages?

In several countries, a lot of companies give permission to female employees to take maternity leave in the first month after giving birth to their baby. In this essay, I will explain why I think this idea is totally advantageous.

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