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Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Naturally ladies are giving more concern to the children’s to compare with gents therefore women’s are not giving priority to their job carrier. I completely agree with this statement of this essay by giving the below mentioned points.
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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this .

The young people of some countries, would sooner looking for a job or take a vacation between graduating high school and enrolling university. One of the main benefits of this decision is that the students will be able to make their minds free, moreover, the principal drawback is tending to quit university. the details of both pros and cons will be explained in the following paragraphs.
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Some people believe that nuclear weapon is the solution to world peace. Others, however, think that they only cause conflicts. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In August 1945 our world changed forever when two atomic bombs was thrown on Japanise cities Hiroshima and Nagasaki. The effect of the explosions was stunning. The cities were devastated totally. It was the start of the new era of military technologies. Henceforth the global security was based on the balance of the nuclear weapon between the different countries. After 1945 our world created much more the horrendous weapon is based on Hydrogen with power of hundreds of megatons. In this essay we will discuss reliability of the peace with using the nuke, we will think about eventual conflicts with the use of the mass destruction weapon.
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INCREASING THE PRICE OF PETROL IS THE BEST WAY TO SOLVE THE GROWING TRAFFIC AND POLLUTION PROBLEM To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Due to the revolution of automobile industry most of the people are using private vehicles, hence the traffic crisis and environmental impacts are soaring daily, especially in urban areas. There is a good solution to eradicate this by escalating the cost of fuel. I strongly disagree with this statement by giving the below mentioned points.
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Some people believe that if an individual behaves in an anti-social manner, such as committing a crime, then society is to blame. What are the causes of anti-social behavior? Who do you think is responsible?*

Individuals with anti-social manner exist in any society. They make up a small proportion in the population, but they expecially often commit crimes therefore these persons are danger for other people. We will discuss causes of anti-social behavior and responsibility for it.
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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology wich can prevent and save crime. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, there is no doubt that rate of crime is an important issue to discuss. So, most of people believe that the crime rate is falling down compared to the past because of advance technology. It can prevent and save crime. This essay will discuss about both views and I will draw my personal conclusion.
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In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples

There is no denying the fact that a person should depend on himself in period of his life.while it is a commonly held belief that in many countries across the world young people decide to move out from their parents' home once they finish school, they start to living on their own of sharing home with friends. This essay will analyse this topic.
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Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence in films on television and at the cinema. Others feel that violent films should not be regulated. Discuss both view

It is argued by some people that movies shown on television or in the theaters which contain ferocity should be control by the government while an alternative point of view is that the amount of violence should be kept intact. This essay agrees with the sooner statement and lay out the resoning below
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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, human beings are living in a digital civilization. Everything is almost automated to limit human labour. All thanks to the efforts and dedication of talented people. How do they can create those fascinating inventions? Is it competition for individuals to become superior or is it thanks to solidarity in coming up with a solution?
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Some people think that as long as professional sportsmen and sportswomen are good players, their behavior on and off the paying fields is not important. Do you agree or disagree?

In the controversial era, myriad people fascinated in sports.In which Most people work hardly to lighten-up sports around the world.Besides that,nowadays few individuals believe that a qualified athletes are well competent.Their character is not necessary in arena.I strongly agree with this statement.This essay will discuss an agreement of the statement in detail, along with a relevant conclusion.
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In many large cities, people have to spend hours driving in heavy traffic every day. What are the effects of this on society and the individual? What can be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In number of metro cities people communting by using their vehicles, which waste a lots of time and number of effects fell on people's health such as lungs cancer and heart diseases. With some developments this issue can be shorted out like, provide jobs nearby their residences and public transport at cheap rates. At the end of this topic I will give my personal experience which I mostly faced.
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Some people believe that women should be treated as equal to men when applying for a job with the police or the military. Others think that women are less suitable for this kind of job. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

On one hand, we have the ones voting for equal treatment argue that job applications shouldn’t be decided on gender, but rather the ability of each individual. They believe that many women have the physical and mental capabilities to perform demanding tasks. Also, military and police work does not only rely on physical strength, but also improvisation, communication, decision making, and more. From this viewpoint, completely cutting women might mean missing out on talented and capable people suited for these careers. More than that, equal opportunities promote equality and fairness.
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Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some would argue nowdays men and women they can shop easilly by using new technology, while other do not agree with that. I believe with first group because this improvment in technology let us choose different shops and get it fastlly.
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in many countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Many today assume that having a home is essential in today’s era. Basing on this statement, the writer of this essay believe this position is a positive situation due to the fact that it is not only decrease the rate of lacking of accommodation, but also increase human’s marry opportunities.
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Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy for them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The importance of keeping pets for children which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The subsequent influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate both views of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar ,which causes many health problems .Sugary products shoud be mad more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar . do you agree or disagree ?

Sweet foods and beverages are becoming more and more popular every day and some people believe that increasing the price of these products can reduce people's consumption and prevent future health problems preemptively. By highering the cost of this junk food not only can't hold people's usage but also can have some negative effects adversely.
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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people argue that whether we should put a great deal of effort to improve our conditions, or accept bad things and situations as they are. This topic is a intense debate with both attractiong supports and critics. This essay aims to discuss both of the views, but argue in favour to the first statement.
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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advatanges of having an ageing population outweigh the disavantages?

It is argued whether older individuals are considered an issue for governments . But that might not be the case , people off all ages are equally important in order to form a society . In this essay I will further elaborate my views to reach a logical conclusion .
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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactiory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The bad situations happens in our lifes. The two reactions exist against these problems. Some people believe that they should to accept this situation and to enjoy their lifes. Others believe that they cannot live happily with life difficults and should solve any problems. We discuss both approches.
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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar ,which causes many health problems .Sugary products shoud be mad more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar . do you agree or disagree ?

There are several products contain with high calories and sugers, and this in the long term will effect badly on their bodies. I totally agree that the government should do more process to make people avoid these foods and drinks. There are variety ressons to prefer products with huge levels of suger even if they know that will impact in pessimism way such as obisity, while others more muture and have good knowledge about that harmful products and work hardly to avoid it and replace it with anothers products.
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