IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 448

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school .other , however , say that cooperation and team working skills are more important .discuss both side of this argument and give your own opinion.

As some individuals provides a positive reaction to competiton in our daily life assuming its beneficial drawbacks,others highly doubt it by suggesting cooperation instead of regular competition with which i agree.

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In many cities, there are areas of land that are used as parks. With increasing population levels, these areas would be better used to provide more housing. Do you agree or disagree?

There are many areas of land that currently used as parks in many regions. Some community argue that it would be better to convert these areas to residential areas to provide more housing. I agree with the idea because even though parks are important, but housing availability is more important when population level are increasing.

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As science and technology is developing so far, some people argue that the standard of people's health will be getting higher in the future than it is now. On the other hand, counterparts say that people's helath will be becoming weak in the future. I agree with the opinion that people will become not healthy as time goes by.

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The best way to reduce youth crime is to educate their parents with parental skills . To what extent you agree or disagree

Parental responsibility is the world-wide controversy topic . It is opined by some that educating parents fostering tactics is the top most soluyion to reduce the juvenile deliquency . This writer contends that although there are many ways to prevent youth crimes, especially parenting skill , those way need to be considered effectiveness .

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Some people think all lawbreakers should be sent to prison, while others think there are better alternatives for those whose crimes are minor, such as making them do work for the local community. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The majority of the public argued that if a person had illegal activities in society, he should transferred to jail. However, I agree with those who believe that it would be better to implement other substitute ways instead of sending to jail if the crimes were not too major.

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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology wich can prevent and save crime. Do you agree or disagree?

The activity of violent action can vary over the years and that affects ey various factors. Currently, most people thoughts that the crime rate declining due as a result of the development of Technology. I totally agree that Solutions to these types of crimes can be easily detected by advanced devices . This essay will provide more important points regarding this topic.

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‘Some people think children should have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes.’ Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Firstly, we have two sides the first one being to let children have complete freedom and the other opinon believes that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. I would like to start with the first side which is the " complete freedom " side I really do get what this side is trying to show us as adults how to rise our children by letting them be on there own and make them ready for adulthood by giving there child the freedom of making mistakes, and I do believe that is kind of true but also standing by this side 100 % would not be the best choice do to the fact that if you give your children complete freedom to make mistakes you as an adult can't gusse what kind of mistake the child would be making maybe as simple as spelling water or as big as being stealing. Thats the end of the first side as I call it the freedom side. Secondly the side that believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes, this side is sadly unrealistic I really can't see myself or an...

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that students should study subjects they prefer in the university. Other people think that it's more important to learn materials related to science and technology because they are useful in the future . In this essay , I will discuss two different opinions about this debate and provide supporting and relevant examples .

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Millions ofpeople every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language?

Education is an imoprtant subject for the parents. The choice of the excellent school, college or university is difficult. Then, Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. It exist some reasons for this choice.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

As science and technology are developing fast, humans' life expectancy extends longer and the portion of elderly classes gets bigger. Some people argue an ageing population is burden for governments but other people say large portion of ageing people gives help to our society. This essay will contend the advantage of belonging with ageing people.

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Schools are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history. Some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays there is two ways of compeleting school, either by teaching one type of skill, which the student intrested on or the traditional way. So some think that, providing the student directly with skills they need can help them in many ways , while others believe that, during shool years student should have broad knowledge by studying all subjects. This essay will discuss both sides and will draw my personal conclusion.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the recent years, it becomes a trend to move from the rural areas to cities due to this phenomenon the population of villages have been declined. Many citizens are moving to make better future of their families, others believe that it puts extra burden on cities’ infrastructures such as expansion of pollution, transport system,medical , and an increae in crime rates. In my view it is a negative development if individuals moved out, villagers will suffer with the shortage of skilled workers and upcoming developments will stop, for this notion I will provide some examples, why it is not beneficials for both rural and city’s residents.

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Some people believe that elementary and high school students should be taught how to manage money because it is an important life skill. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Money is crucial for life. People use it to exchange goods and services. Food, home, clothes and medical care can be bought. Therefore, managing money is so essential.

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In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The practice when governments restrain salaries is well known. As a result people polarazed on supporters and opponents of the phenomenon. This essay will explore both view and I will give my personal opinion why such regulation should not be implemented.

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The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagrams illustrate how a harbour transformed after some developments in 2000.

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Band-9 Samples: In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Promotion of product and services is a vital part of industries, nowadays. Businesses try to attract consumers for their product by showing of that the product is a updated version. This phenomenon has some pros and cons, which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many researchs found that nowdays teenagers are prefering online friendships rather than real-life. The main problem this causes is isolating individuals from their society and the most valuable solution for this is inovlving them to society's activities.

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With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Now a days the percentage of seniors has been increased, so some people think that new generation of elderly maintaining a good health comparing to previous generations, while other believe that new lifestyle will produce seniors with bad health who will need more care, this essay will discusee both sides and will draw my perosnal conclusion.

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In many countries people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governmemts. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages

Some countries have many elderly people, some people think that will be an issue for governments. While others think that will be benefits when the country has many old people. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having an ageing population in the country.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Education is an important element in the life of children. It helps children to choose their futures and works. Then, Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.

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