IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 448

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many people these days have computer, laptops, telephones at their homes for work. Do you thibk, working from home has more advantages or disadvantages? Give reasons

"Working from home" has become an integral part of rising debate in the present world, including Vietnam. While components of the argument, are in favor, however the components are completely against the relevance of the working from home. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of such a situation and draw a conclusion.

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hildren should take part time jobs in their free time or they should totally focus on their studies. What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so?

Children should do partial work in their leisure time or they should totally pay attention to their studies. This essay will discuss and articulate both the aspects merits and demerits along with relevant examples and a logical conclusion.

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Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or diagree with this opinion?

These days the many of people imortant in the popular events . So , some people think support of the idea because that filling for their habitat and making another chalnnage between their . While other belive that makes a lot of enemies . This essay will discuss both sides and will draw my opinion .

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In recent years a large number of highly skilled professionals like doctors, engineers and IT professionals from poorer countries are migrating to developed countries for better-paying jobs. What are the possible problems of this and what solutions can you suggest to deal with this issue?

These days many well-qualified white-collar workers from medical, engineering and information techies from low-settled nations are moving to well-settled nations for high-salaried positions in big multi-national companies. If this practice continues these low-settled countries will lack good talented professionals who can help this nation to grow.

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Some people believe that it is best to encourage children to have a healthy diet at school while others believe that parents should be the ones to teach children to have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some indivisual claim the it is good to advice young children to have a heallthy diet at school while others believe that parents responsibility to educate their children to have a healthy food. This eassy will discuss both aspects and articulate the given problem along with my opinion and logical conclusion.

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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Exploring far-flung natural places can bring more benefits to visitors despite one conquerable downside. By travelling to an island that is unknown to the vast majority of people, for instance, travellers may have a chance to participate in exotic religious practices and experience a whole new way of life. Although such a trip could be potentially dangerous with climatic differences or animal attacks, these risks can become less serious with the aid of modern technology such as drones or heat sensors. It is therefore believed that visitors should take a trip to novel destinations for once in their lives.

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The char below gives information about science qualificatiin held by people in two countries.

The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of individuals with science qualifications in two nations (Malaysia and Singapore)

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Some people think that children should have the freedom to make mistakes, while others believe that adults should prevent them from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There are a number of people believe that children can be freely to make mistakes, while the rest think that adult must prevent them from wrong action. Children who have freedom tend to development in education and health field, however, it also make them become perfect and have impact on social and technology. In my opinion, prevent children from making mistake is best way to live.

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‘Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of above appearance.’ Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Recently, most the organisations learn from each other, for that they think to dress their employees smartly to have high prestage, in order to make the people atractt to that company, that help them to be the same group.

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Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

The issue of what student should wear at schools is debatable as some people prefer school uniforms while others prefer casual clothes. This essay agrees with the policy of wearing school uniforms because uniforms promote sense of equality and they are more decent.

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Increasingly, many young people are deciding to work or study in other countries. What are the causes of this phenomenon? Do you think it is a positive or negative situation?

In these days a phenomenon is spreading in the devoloped countries which is immigration for young people. So, some people think that the this stuation is very harmful to the young generation, while others believe that it is an opportunity to the students who are on the beginning of their journey. This essay will discuss both sides and will draw my personal conclusion.

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In Some Areas Of The US, A Curfew Is Imposed In Which Teenagers Cannot Be Out Of Doors At Night. Do you agree or disagree with this?

Teenagers cann't be out of doors at night has become an intergal part of the rising debate in the present world, including Vietnam. While components of the argument are in favor, however, the opponents are completely against the relevance of the "Teenagers cann't be out of doors at night". i will discuss some of the biggest causes associated with " Teenagers cann't be out of doors at night", before suggesting possible solutions.

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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student’s performance. Continual assessment such as course work and projects are not a satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree?

In these days with the advanced technology students can use it to achieve their study goal. So, some people think that the only way to assess the students is by tests, while others believe that it is un fair to not include the other criteria. This essay will discuss both ideas and will draw my personal conclusion.

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Science is more useful than human judgement in stopping crime. To what extent do you agree?

Some individuals believe that Science is more beneficial than human judgement in criminal cases. I partly agree with that because If there are DNA evidences science may solve the whole crime. However, sometimes there is no evidence and we should trust the Judge's decision.

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It’s widely believed that children of different levels of intelligence should be taught together, while others think that more intelligent children should be taught separately. Discuss both views and present your own opinion.

Some people thought that children of varied intelligence quotient (IQ) must be taught in the same class, while others believe youth with high IQs must be on different program. This essay discusses different takes on separation and unity of classes, and why I favor on the teaching more proficient children with different program.

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Many children today spend a lot of time on social media which hurts their grades. what is the cause of this? What can be done to solve this?

In the morden epoch, a plenty of children surfing on diggital platform almost every minute. There is no doubt that, social media is harmful to those youngster's grades, mental health and responsibility. Some of the major culprits of this problems will be discussed before the most important solutions are drawn. The factors behind are digital products' wild use, no limit and feeling bored . Ways to solve are purchased electronic products cautiously, parents control and try to live in a real world.

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Is it better to live in a countryside or in a city? Explain your reasons and give examples .

The optimal live is intrinsic and important act. urban or rural are preferable place for living. I believe that urban life more easily than rural. due to facilities and technology services that provide to the societies .

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Some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as the unemployed and homeless people. Do you agree or disagree?

I strongly agree that the government has a crucial role in supporting the population. The reasons for this include the authority's capacity to provide social security and well-being of citizens, This responsibility includes providing essential services and support systems that help these individuals meet their basic needs and improve their life system for the betterment of their future.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Protecting the Environment is the responsibility of the government. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

The issue of environmental protection is one of the most critical challenges facing the world today. I strongly agree with the statement that protecting the environment is primarily the responsibility of the government. Government should create and enforce proper

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The percentage of overweight children in western societies has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the possible causes and effects of this disturbing trend and offer solution.

The statictic reflexes the reality, and the reality is a massive increase of overwighted kids all around the world. We have been witnessing the puzzling situation with fast food and other types of non-organic food. Over 20 per cent increase of younger generation has been sufferinf from obesity for the last decade shows the trand. In this essay we will consider a list of efforts and potential solution we could have come up with.

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