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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people believe that children should be brought up in cities. Other believes that countryside offers a better environment for children. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Children is one of the boon from deity and parents are guardians for them during their growing period. Some of them are thinking children whose are fostering in the urban areas they are all will become most active and smarter. Other hand of people hopes the rural area is most suitable for children to live in a good surroundings. This essay will discuss about both the views of this statement.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

In this competitive world education is one of the important factor to enhance the human life. Few people are thinking junior college students should spend their school time partially for serving community such as teaching athletics to the younger students. I completely don’t agree with this statement by giving the below mentioned points.

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your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. she would like your advice about finding a place to live. write an email to your friend. in your email describe where you lived when you were a student at the university recommend the best way for her to look for accommodation warn her of mistakes students make when choosing accomodation

How have you been? I don't miss the wonderful time we had together at the school. I am very glad that you have been offered a place on a medical course at the White College. I was living in the Abdi Dormitory that was located on Abdi Street. This street has a lively and upbeat atmosphere and it offers lots of recreational facilities. You can find a pool, two restaurants and a cinema there.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, corrJpared with the number of older people.

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. This essay will explain the advantages and disadvantages of this situation which shows demographic skew towards younger populations.

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These days in many countries people live longer time away of their family.whu this happens?what effescts this problem has on individuals and families?

Nowadays, the style of working can play a crucial in many aspects. In most of the country, many individuals live longer far from their family members. This problems come from the society and their ambition. This situation can have a negative effect on their health.

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Buying things on the internet, such as groceries, books and air tickets is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping this way outweigh the disadvantages.

Internet has become a parts and parcel of our life. We can not imagine a life without an internet. By using an website, people can get done their work from home. Now a days, we do not require to go out for shopping because of different kind of services available onilne. I will pen down my viewpointof advantages of technology.

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Artists need an certain amounts of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should gave total freedom to express any thought and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that artists require a large extent liberty to support their creativity. Some people say that artists should need a full freedom in order to they can convey notions and thoughts. I strongly disagree with this statement because a full liberty can stimulate more crime and affect society. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Buildings are the aesthetic of every nation whether ancient or modern. Some people say that ancient constructions have a bulk amount for maintenance

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Some people think secondary school students should study international news as one of their subjects, while others believe that this is a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.

There are differing views regarding whether global news should be made a subject in secondary schools or not. In my view, making international headlines as a required subject in school is worth this, because it could ignite motivation for students’ future excellence.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatifactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While a group of people think that it is great to egnore a hard situation like having a not favoritable job or not a well paid one must not bear that, the other group say taht is better than not trying to being succsefull on it I believe rather group.

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Some people believe that allowing childern to make their own choices on everyday matters (Such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuls who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for childern to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A lots of individuals have an opinion that enable kids to make their decisions on everyday issues (such as meal, clothes and the items in order to entartain). It is often argued that this is a positive development for childs in our their lifes, whilst others disagree and think it will lead to the people in society who selfish only think about their self and their own requires. This essay agrees that for young individual make a decision by their self about everything around their lifes is beneficial to children and parents.

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In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society.

While it is widely claimed that a newly profitable market of whitening products has emerged across the world due to a new beauty standard, others argue that this whitening trend could bring about the negative development. Both points of view and possible effects in terms of health and society will be elaborated on in this essay.

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Many modern children spend a lot of time sitting in front of a television or computer screen. This is extremely harmful to their development. Therefore, parent shoul strictly limit the time that children spend in this way. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today digital's age, more and more children stay in full-time sitting in front of the screen of modern technology such as TV or computer. This thing cause serious damage to their growth. Critics argue that the solution to solve this problem is managing the limited time for children by their parents. This author agrees with the latter viewpoint that parents should take action on spending screen time of children so as to contribute to preventing shortsighted issue and the enhancement of their maturity.

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In many countries , more and more people choose to buy imprted food than food eroduced locally. Why people buy imported food?what could be done to encourage to buy local food

In many nations, there is a forward trend of consume more foreign food than the local one. Which suffer form the better food quality. However, it can be tackled by the improve dramatically the imported food’s tax

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Some people believe that television programmes are of no real value for children. How far do you agree or disagree?

Many are of the opinion that television shows have no benefit for the children. In as much as some of these programs are not age appropriate and also kids can easily be distracted by constantly watching them, if well supervised can contribute positively to the mental growth and moral values of these pupils. Hence, I partially agree to this view. I will discuss my notion extensively in this essay.

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Some scientists think it is very soon that computers will be more intelligent than humans. Some people think it is a positive development, while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In today's world, the use of computers is ever increasing.It is one of the most important things in human life. It became a common part of modern society. Scientists think that it will become smarter than human. Some people discover that it is a positive trend, but others have a negative attitude towards this dependency on computers. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of such a measure.

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Nowadays, more and more people from different cities are spending more time away from their families. What are the possible reasons and effects on the people themselves and their families.

The contemporary society, an increasing number of citizens from other cities are investing lots of time away from their families. This writer believes that this is a positive development due to they do not waste this time, it bring more benefit for a growing nation.

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Some people believe that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your opion.

In recent years, movies and TV programmes are become and become popular with the spread over the world therefore, some individuals think that importing foreign films are quite good for coutry culture whereas some others believe supporting to produce these locally. The writer of this essay assume the foreign movies can bring a lot of better cultural values then, persuading the citizens to donate local film to make producers get more moltivation to produce and compete with others

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Some people think all young people should be required to have full-time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many residents have an opinion that most of the time people e spend before 18 years old should be fully on school. This writer completely agrees with this opinion because the benefits of improving citizens’ intelligent better when people can have more time to focus on studying, moreover the quality of people in school can also improve a lot.

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In the past, people used to travel abroad to look for many differences from their home country. Nowadays, cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar. What are the reason? Do the advantages outweigh the disavantages

It is argued that in the past many people used to go abroad to find many differences from their home country. Others think that cities around the world have an increasing number of the similar. This writer believes that the benefits of travelling abroad outweigh the drawbacks.

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