IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 448

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think parents should control the behaviour of children from a very young age but others think we should give them more freedom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is common belief amongst most people that we should manage the attitude of kids while others have a different opinion that the kids should be better with liberty. I believe both control and freedom together. We will discuss both points of view.

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in their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this?Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays businesses use their advertising to emphasise the products they launch and to communicate to the customer it has new features. Even to some extent that even by using the word "New' they give a fresh sense to customers to buy the product they have been using for a period of time. For that, advertising includes innovative ideas which fascinates the customer to continue to buy the product they have been using or to purchase it as a new customer.

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Why it is needed to take tremendous initiatives through spending money on a few particular aspects of the governing authority? It is thought by some individuals that money is wasted by the government on arts and it should be better utilized. I agree with for many critical issues are issues that are required to be addressed. In my opinion, one is poverty and the other is the lack of infrastructure in healthcare.

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Today, people are buying more consumer goods lik ejwelry and household appliances. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In modern worlds, people are buying many things, however, if it is necessary there will not be a problem. Because people have to arrange their spendings. On the other hand, sometimes we need electronical devices at home. As a result of we are paying too much and purchasing new technological goods.

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Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fuel resources

The recent Ukraine and Russia war has led to a significant increase in the world price of oil (fuel). Furthermore, it is believed that by rising fuel prices, nations would be able to reduce the consumption of fuel, which will lower the burden on the world's finite resource of fossil fuel. In this essay, I will outline that increasing fuel price is not the most effective solution in dealing with this global issue and provide the reasons for this.

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Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

1) ANSWER: in 1927. QUESTION: a) When was this building constructed? b) Who painted this? c) What time does the tour start? 2) ANSWER: Leonardo Da Vinci. QUESTION: a) What year is this painting from? b) Who painted this? c) How long does the tour last? 3) ANSWER: Two hours. QUESTION: a) How long does the tour last? b) What year is this painting from? c) What time does the tour start? 4) ANSWER: I'm sorry, but pets are not allowed. QUESTION: a) How much are tickets for children? b) How long does the tour last? c) Can I bring my dog on the bus? 5) ANSWER: $14 dollars. QUESTION: a) What time do you close today? b) How much are tickets for children? c) Can I bring my dog on the tour? 6) ANSWER: It's the old courthouse. QUESTION: a) Do you have guided tours? b) How long does the tour last? c) What is this building? 7) ANSWER: No, we have them in English only. QUESTION: a) Do you have these brochures in Japanese? b) Do you speak Japanese? c) Do you have ...

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Technological and scientific advances are changing the food people eat. Some believe that these are changes can be harmful to the health of the people. Others challenge this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Scientists are always eager to make life easier and healthier, but sometimes their inventions might lead to adverse consequences in which thousands of people can suffer. In this regard, some communities claim, those technological and scientific applications on intake can cause bad effects on people's well-being. From my angle of view this situation, it needs to be investigated in accordance with specific products, and in this essay, I will discuss both sides with relevant examples.

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The number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries are changing/ Give your oppinion describing the topic of mobile phones and landlines.

The graph shows us a picture of usage of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in 6 dofferent countries.

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Some companies and organisations require their employees to wear uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniform.

I have an experience on both sides of the coin which makes it mandatory for wearing a homogeneous on effort, with that effort experience. Companies and grouping use the code of conduct differently one is used to develop the association, while others used it to sustain and at the risk of their employees. I will provide my analysis as follows.

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Nuclear power is used for many purposes. There are advantages and disadvantages to having nucleear power. What do you feel they are and do you believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? Why or why not?

People in the world dive into two parts. One side support the nuclear power for environment because they believe that nuclear power is a good solution and choose for producing power. Other side support the clean energy that means people prefer clean energy source like solar power or wind power because they believe that the nuclear power can produce much more energy than other clean energy source but nuclear power chemical process is too dangerous for environment, people and animals.

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Many people join distance-learning programs (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does. Do you agree or disagree?

It is the online learning that many people attend to used in recent years ; which has been modified by the technology’s development. However, other people believe that the same advantages as attending colleges or universities could not be brought up by that learning method . Personally speaking ,I think that the online learning is far from presenting the same quality and pros as traditional learning associations do. This essay will discuss and highlight the two major reasons behind my belief.

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Today, majority of children are raised by their grandparents due to the fact that their parents are busy working. To what extent do you think it affects the whole family?

Nowadays it has become normal to raise children by their grandparents. Since immediate parents are occuipied by their carriers and they can hardly find any time for childrens. The upcoming essay will ellobrate the benefits and drawbacks of being brought up by grand parents and how it affects the family.

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Advantages and Disadvantages of children watching TV

In the past few years, the figure of children watching tiktok has become higher and higher. For many parents, keep their child staying at home and watching tiktok is a good way so that they can control their kids and do somethings else without worrying. However, everything has its pros and cons. In this essay, i will discuss the reasons why children love watching tiktok and some advantages and disadvantages of allowing kids to use smartphone to watch tiktok.

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in some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some nations, it is believed by groups of people that human being has health issues because of consuming fast food more than normal.

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You have just read an article containing incorrect information about your town. Tell them about incorrect information and importance of correcting it.

I am writing this letter with regards to inform you that the last historical article from your newspaper which I have read it recently, has some misleading information.

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It is important to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Understanding the difference between socially approved and inappropriate behavior is immensely important for children. I totally agree that parents and teachers have to use punishments to settle down the fundamental cultural norms of society inside the personalities of kids, although, as long as phrasing practices are also presented. From my point of view, there are two main reasons for this.

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is the possibility of viewing the web of companies as a multitude of money gaining apparatus, however, according to some, firms have also a duty to benefit the public in some manner. There is reasonable argumentation for both perspectives.

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In the past, Most people used to travel to their place of work. With increase use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What is advantages and disadvantages of this development?

After development of Advance technology, People start to used it for their benefits as it make their lives easier in particularly, Employees. With the current COVID-19 pandemic, many companies allowed their employees to work from home to protect their health. This assay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home.

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Many people play sport when they are young, but then stop when they become adults. Why do so many adults stop physical exercise? What can be done to solve this problem?

Most children like to play around more often rather than sitting at their study table and revising subject material. It's perfectly natural for children to prefer playing sports over anything else. However adults on the other hand move around and play sports significantly less in comparison to children. There are various reasons for this and some of them are outlined below.

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Some people say that with the new technology there is no need to develop handwriting skills anymore. Others believe that it is still necessary to teach handwriting. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Handwriting is an essential skill to mankind, passed down by generations. However, there also may be disadvantages of this. The pros and cons of this are discussed below.

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