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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?

In any country traditional celebrations and festivals have disappeared or in the process. The main problem this causes is the possibility disappearing of official language of the country and the most viable solution is just keeping national traditions and language.

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In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experienc

At the beginning of this task, I will say that it's essential for everyone to search for opportunities that may change his life it doesn't matter if he will study or learn from where what is really useful is what is the efforts this person will do to get this knowledge some students will do whatever it wants to get outside countries where they live to go to a high-level universities like oxford or Cambridge because these universities deserve the efforts to at least study there for part-time.

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Below are two charts showing the top 12 nations in military spending for 2005 and those countries' GDP growth for the same year.

The given bar charts illustrate 12 countries that had the highest military expenditures and their GDP growth in 2005.

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You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. ● describe the problem with the equipment ● explain how this problem is affecting your work ● say what you want the shop or company do

I am writing to inform you about a problem I am experiencing with a lawn mower that I purchased from your company on 12th March. The problem is the lawn mower is not turning on. When I purchased this machine from your company, your managers told me that there is no any problem with this machine.

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Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is a positive trend while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both points and give your own opinion.

It is believed that the computer is one of the greatest inventions in history. however, most people think it is smarter than humans, and other opponents. In this essay, I will explain my view on both aspects.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss bot these views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about the challenge bad conditions. While some people believe that accept this situations, some people believe it is not acceptable and try to improve our living conditions. I agree that we can overcome bad circumstances.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting University studies. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage for young people who decide to do this.

Getting a gap, before going to higher school has become a trend among the youngsters due to several reasons which some of them brings a positive or negative effects on their personal life. Both aspects will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs with appropriate examples in brief.

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‘Social networking sites such as Facebook and Twitter are observed to have more negative effects than positive being more useful for the criminals than others. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

the social media websits like Facebook and Twiiter are observed to have more nagtive impact than positive and use it for the bad people to do crimes

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount that people can earn.

It is being argued that, some people earn high amount of salaries which is good for a nation. Meanwhile, others, think that government should restrict the amount of salaries people can earn.I think limiting the salaries is not a good practice, there sare severals others alternatives which can counter this issues.

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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

the wifi has many facilities to access to information

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Look at the two maps of a beach hotel at different times. make notes on the key changes

The maps illustrate changes in a beach hotel in 2003 and 2013. As it is observed, some significant alterations occurred during a 10-year period.

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Example 6: Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the punishment. Why are this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

It is true that there has been increasingly more in the rate of commiting crimes after imprisonment. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this solution, steps can be taken to mitigate these potential problem.

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Science and technology have improved the standards of living in all over the world. Some people claim that the role of the arts has become insignificant. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is a fact that scientific improvements have bettered our life standards. With this development, many believe that artworks have become less and less important. I totally disagree with this view. Technologic enhancements has made easier labor-based works and, it cannot be replaced by the vital role of the arts.

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.More and more people today are spending large amounts of money on their appearance in order to look younger. Why do people want to look younger? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is goes without saying that every human beings in the world have an enormous desire to be attractive, gorgeous and of course look young. Nowadays, we have a tendency among individuals in senior age, who spend a lot of money in order to change their appearance considerably. Let me examine both sides of this issue before making a concrete decision about ramifications of this trend.

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Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?

Several discussions surround the opinion that customers are suffering from commercial advertising programs from disputing businesses. Meanwhile, societies said the opposite side when people could not be influenced by these programs. However, this essay will shed light on the matter by showing both sides of the equation have their positives, albeit with a stronger argument supporting the best statement also the best measures, which will be presented in the next paragraphs.

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Should healthcare be funded totally by the government for everyone? Some people think that studying history is a waste of time while others think it is essential to learn history. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

I see both sides of the argument about government-funded healthcare. Some believe that healthcare should be fully funded by the government to ensure that everyone has access to essential medical services without financial barriers. On the other hand, some argue that a completely government-funded system may lead to inefficiencies and lack of innovation in healthcare.

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Some people change to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their health but also benefits the world as a wide. Discuss they view and give your own opinion

A section of people reckon that to be vegetarian is not only good for our body but also for whole world. In my view, not eating meat or fish has loads of advantages than disadvantages.Argumets to crutch my notion will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Most artist earn low salaries and should therefore recieved fundings from government in order for them to continue thier work. to what extent do you agree?

Majority artists obtain low basic income compared to other occupations, hence the government should contribute concerning artists’ long term work. From my perspective this idea is profoundly true in terms of its social responsibility and productivity.

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Some people believe teenagers should focus on all subjects equally, whereas other people think that they should concentrate on only those subjects that they find interesting and they are best at.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Individuals believe that adolescents should learn only those subjects that they are appealing in and they are good at. From my point of view, youngsters ought to pay attention to all subjects. This paragraph will provide my supporting ideas for my opinion.

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You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems.You returned the camera and spoke the companyrepresentative a week ago but the camera has still not been repaired.Intoduce myself,Explain the situation,Say what action you would like the company to take.

I am writing to complain about your company enterprise workers. Firstly, I intoduce myself, my full name is Jo'raqulova Dilnura. I live in Mubarek and your company has located behind "Nur" market in the Mubarek. A week ago, I bought a new camera in your company. I found beautiful camera in your company. That is why I bought it but this camera did not work when I got home.I found any problemes. Than I was very upset and I called company service.They said came to our company and tell what is problem with the camera.I explained problems to to them. Workers said:"We will go for a week. But the camera has still not been repaired. I panicked becouse l wanted to take pictures of my family. Than I waited two weeks. Furthemore they still have not arrived.I was very nervous and I called company director. Why your service employers do not work on time. There was no news from them.I asked : they must receive a full refund money.

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