IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 46

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Buying things on the internet, such as book, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweight tha disadvantages?

In this era, buying items or booking services through e-commerce has became mainstream. Everyone loves to buy something from shopee or Tokopedia due to attractive deals. Although there are good points about buying online, Some people have bad experiences about that. The following passage will explain my point of view.

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Nowadays, instead of locally sourced produce, many supermarkets sell a variety of foods imported from countries all across the world. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Many supermarkets prefer to sell diferent types of foreign food items rather than domestically grown foods. This trend has more benefits, this essay will discuss it followed by relevent examples.

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Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

These days, People prefer to watch foreign films compared to films which are produced in the local country. There are some significant reasons that have negatively impact on locally produced films and governments should invest more money to enhance local film industries.

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Many people say that they believe it is important to protect the environment but make no effort to do anything about it themselves. Why do you think this is the case? What action do you think individuals should take to protect the environment?

Today, the number of people who know the prominent of protecting the environment has increased. However, they believe that they do not require to try themselves about it. Therefore, it is essential to be investigated the reasons and solutions. In addition, I think the two main reasons are related to their characters as an irresponsible person or another reason is they are unaware of this issue. So I believe that the most influential solution should be taken by governments and by advertising.

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Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, people are arguing due to the growing amount of abortions in women. Some citizens are in favour of legalisation of abortion and others want to stop this trend. I am in favour of former viewpoint.

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In some places, teenagers are encouraged to get part-time jobs while they are still in school. Do the advantages of teenagers working outweigh the disadvantages?

There are different opinions weather students should experience part-time jobs. Some claim that students should focus on their academic tasks only without waste of their time and effort. Others believe that working is helpful to students because that experiences make them more sociable and they can develop their own talents. This essay claim that the latter view outweigh the former view.

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There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children, Dscuss the advantages and disadvantages for couple who decide to do this.

Towards modern life, there has been a growing number of “Double Income No Kids” or DINK lifestyle. This is because procreation possess some pros and cons. Entering parenthood mean a range of responsibilities, not only to economically provide but also to nurture. Thus, time, career, and couple’s aspirations will become considerations on deciding have or not to have. However, by having kids, parents could continue lineage and might have someone to takecare of them when into old age.

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Some people think that it's a good idea to socialize with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it's important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that, socializing with the co-workers is curial to enhance creativity and performance at workplace, however others opine that personal life is more important to lead a stress free life. I think privacy plays significant role in everyone's life. This essay will discuss both the views in subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The question of whether to choose a friends who holds same belief as you do or choose the one with opposing views is a subject of debate. I firmly believe that an ideal friendship is one where individuals have different opinions. The reasoning behind my perspective will be discussed in this essay.

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Is it sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30 as this is the best for the individuals and for society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

In the current era, the mentality of the community about getting married has changed due to their career prospects. However, in ancient time people were forced to get married before 30, as they considered that this is -the perfect age according to society. From my perspective, i completely disagree with the statement because it should totally depend on individual choice.

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Some believe that younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting older family members when they become physically, mentally and financially unable to look after themselves. Do you agree or disagree?

In this recent time, the resposibility in taking care of older generation has been a topical issue since some people argued that young people shoud take care of their older families due to incapability in handling themselves. In response to this perspective, I thoroughly agree with the aforementioned argument as this will give benefits due to their welfare.

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In many countries, a small number of people earn extreamly high salaries.Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that Governments should not allow salaries above a criteria level. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In countries like South Africa or the USA a small number of people earn extremely high slalaries. Many believe that this is good for the country, whilst others argue that governments should regulate salaries above a certain criteria level. In this essay, I want to illustrate both opinions and why i believe governmental interference can be dangerous.

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Some people think that the Olympic Games can bring nations together. Others, however, think that it is a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Write an essay with no less than 250 words.

Olympic games have a globle event, since many decades. In addition, many believes that, olympic event has capability to bring different culture and people from around the world under one roof. While, few individuals thinks its waste of money. This essay will discuss both the point of view and provide personal opimion with examples.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, most children use their smartphones for several hours on a daily basis. This trend may be because children have access to their needs, and I strongly believe this development has a positive impact on children's improvement.

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More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

In recent years, a growing number of people have left rural areas to seek work in cities, leading to significant consequences for both urban and rural communities.

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Modern lifestyles are completely different from the way people lived in the past.Some people think changes have been positive by others believe they have been negative.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today’s Lifestyles totally differ from it was before. Some may agree that it has a positive impact while others say otherwise. People with different perspectives on the given topic will be discussed later on this essay.

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Environmental pollution has become one of the most serious issues in today's world. what are the causes of environmental pollution? What measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

It is irrefutable that in today's world one of the most serious problem is environmental pollution. This issue is creating various causes and will be discussed in the following essay along with some measurements to tackle this problem.

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some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The most people know that climate change is happening gradually due to globalization. Some people say that we should just accept whatever happens to us. However, since nature is unpredictable, we must prepare ourselves to live safely and in harmony. I will discuss and provide examples to support my argument that preventing is more important to avoid more further damage.

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In recent years, many people have started working remotely from home instead of commuting to an office. Some people believe this shift improves work-life balance, while others think it reduces productivity and teamwork. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that in the present era, more and more people tend to work from home. Some individuals believe a shift is an accomplished balance between work and life. While others argue this point and claim to reduce production and tea work. I agree this shift is important to improve lifestyle. This essay will explore both arguments, by supporting relevant examples and insights.

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There is no doubt that globalisation has benefited the world by bringing together people, business and nations. People who criticise it stand in the way of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Some people argue that criticising globalisation is preventing progress of the world. I believe that criticism is a part of freedom of speech and does not represents pushback for further development, as this essay will demonstrate.

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