IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 41

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many think that a religion should be taught in school, while others think it should be part of a wider discussion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Most of opine that a religion ought to be taught in schools, whereas others think it must be prohibited. This essay will analyze both views. As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of latter notion.

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Some people say that online study is the most effective and convenient way to learn. Others believe that online study will never be as effective as learning at school, in person. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Since the early 2000s, technology has become increasingly widespread. After technological advancements, several technology-related activities have gained prominence such as online study. There is an ongoing debate about whether online classes are as effective as face-to-face classes. I utterly believe that online study has a positive impact on students in terms of time management and accessibility.

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The rise of digital technology has led to a significant increase in mental health issues among young people. What are the main causes of this problem, and what solutions could be to address it?

The increase of mental health problems among young generations nowadays is because of the development of digital technology .this essay seeks to explore the primary reasons behind this and propose viable solutions to mitigate this issue.

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In this technological personal information of all kinds is held on computer by different companies and organization in many countries. Do the advantages of this development out weigh the disadvantages?

There is no denying the fact that in many countries personal information of all kinds is held by computers from different companies and organizations, this essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages

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The increase in the production of consumer goods (food, clothing) results in damage to the natural environment. What is the cause of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

In this recent era, public concern regarding the growing demands of goods has been a topical issue as some individuals argued that negative impacts will happen due to this action. In respon to this issue, I will give my own opinion about the cause of this problem, along with the solutions.

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Write an essay about sustainable environment. • What are some sustainable ways to save the environment? • How can you play your role as a student towards sustainable practices? • What is The UAE government doing to promote sustainable environment? • What are the innovative technologies used by the UAE government to protect the environment?

Our planet Earth needs us, we're living here to protect our home "Earth' and work all, hand in hand to be sustainable, because if we didn't, who will? because of the significance of this trend, in this essay, we will present exceptional way to save the enivironment, show our duty as a student, and the UAE's achievements and technologes use towards it.

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Some people believe work for the same organisation all thier working life. Others think that it is better to work for the different organisations. Duscuss both these views and give your opinion.

Is is believed by someone that a career inside the same company is the best situation for their working life. Some others think that changing job is a good way to fasten their career advancement. Although working in the same organisation has advantages like developing strong expertise and good relationships with collegues, I think that the advantages to planning proper changes of career is an opportunity because this could be the reason of fincrease salary and professional status.

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Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns leaving only old people in the countrysides. What problem does this cause? What can be done to solve the problem

Many youth people move to cities and leave the countryside. This move causes serious economic issues. The viable solution is to make the countryside kind of similar to the cities.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In several nations, people prefer to buy a house than rent it. There is a reason where owning a property determine whether people are success or not. In my opinion, it has some drawbacks, such as doing more repairment and living in a less strategic location.

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Whether enacting the high taxes is the best way to encourage the economic growth

Whether enacting the high taxes is the best way to encourage the economic growth. While it might became the financial burden in many businesses, it not merely improve the public facilities, but it also reduce the discrimination within society. This essay will discuses why has higher taxes is more advantage.

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It is a natural process that animal species such as dinosaurs become extinct. There is no reason for people to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The extinciton of an animal species, like dinosaurs, does come from natural selection. However, it is also something that should be helped prevented. I believe as modern people, we have valid reasons to preserve the diversity of animals as they can protect the food chain, and that every species serves a purpose of their own in the environment.

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Zoos should be closed because they are cruel and unnatural places for animals. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Zoos should be closed because they are cruel and unnatural places for animals. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? There is no denying that there has been an increasing number of animals live in zoos. The conditions of zoo were planned based on their habitat. Many people contend that zoos are cruel for animals and all of them should be shut down, while others claim that zoos are more suitable for other environments for some kinds of animals. I strongly believe that zoos should be closed down.

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Consider the arguments from both aspects of this possible debate and reach a conclusion “Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.” Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no denying that there has been an increasing number of animals live in zoos. Condition of zoo was planned based on their habitat. Many people contend that zoos aee cruel for animals and all of them should be shut down, while others claim that zoos are more suitable for other environments for some kinds of animals. I strongly believe that zoos should be more widespread to protect them, particularly endangered animals.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Several people say that advertisements tell as regarding new products that may increase our lives, and a large number of community say that advertising encourages us to purchase things that we do not need. In this essay will discuss about my opinion.

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Life is more complex right now, the longer we live in earth the more rubbish we producing and rubbish is one of the biggest problem that we face recently, there are a lot of people didn't care about this problem due to our understanding and awareness of importance to keep nature clean is really less. we often to ignore the environment until we don't realize can affect our daily life especially in city or village.

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In recent years, the use of personal digital assistants (PDAs), such as virtual AI assistants and voice-activated devices, has significantly increased in both personal and professinal environments. Do the advantages of relaying on those technologies outweigh the disadvantages?

In today`s era, we are using AI devices and personal asistance tool everywhere around us at work place as well as in domestic use. Use of this type of asistance made our lives very easy compare to before, this is the reason behind incresed use of such tools. advantages of such instruments outweigh any disadvantages.

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In some countries, schools are open till late so that children can be looked after when parents are at work. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

A new trend has been observed where the schools remain open after its normal hours to take care of children, whose parents are working and are unable to take care. This essay will discuss both the advantages and the disadvantages of this trend.

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Whether fewer possessions life is the best way for having better quality of life

Whether fewer possessions life is the best way for having better quality of life. While this trend create a finance freedom, it also make the life less convenient and decrease the spirit life. This essay will discuss why fewer possessions in life would be disagreed.

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theater, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Some believe that government investment in the art , such as music and theatre is waste of money. While others argue that government must invest this money in public services in state of art.

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The amount of time spent on traveling to work has significantly increased in the past few decades. Discuss the causes and effects of this situation, and provide possible solutions.

It is believed that last decades people spend more time on commuting to work. It might cause due to several reasons like urban sprawl, traffic conjestion, disfunction of public transport. While these problems exist, I will also describe possible solutions to them.

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