IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 55

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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the working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, having a job plays a significant role in people’s lives. Some people believe that the working weekend should be shorter. However, some argue that employees should spend more time on weekends. It is widely believed that workers should have enough time to spend their time on leisure activities. In this essay, I will examine in this argument and provide evidence to support my viewpoint.

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Parents are putting a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Today parents1 are demanding more from their children so that children can succeed in life. A large number of reasons made parents to put this pressure on their own boys and girls, the main factors resulted in this demand from the is parents desire2 to observe their sons and daughters have a good life, and be proud of their own children. Although there are some negative points rose from this development, it is in general a positive development for the society3 and the country. This essay will discuss the reasons that led parents to put a lot of pressure on their children to succeed, and present my own point of view which tend4 to believe that this is a positive development.

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Some people believe that university education should be free for everyone, regardless of income. Others think that students should pay tuition fees to maintain the quality of education.

People tend to argue that should the population to study in university for free. Although others believe that students should have pay tuition fees to equal higher education quality. I agrees with this sentiment i believe that bachelor degree must be without paying fees. Because investment in people is the greatest force will return for the country.

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People are more aware of fashion nowadays and it continues to be a huge business, with a lot of advertising involved and millions of dollars of being paid to models. Discuss whether this is a good or bad trend. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Fashion to be one of the important things nowaday, it also push marketing of textile through social media advertising. This essay will discuss whether fashion is a good or worst trend with spesific opinion support.

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With the increased global demand for oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

Many people believe that to meet arising appeal for oil and gas, new areas of the World must discovered and opened to the inhabitants. Undoubtedly, it is a great idea in order to provide the resources to the individuals. But I partially agree with the statement and I will elaborate my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.

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In some countries, there is an increase in number of parents choosing home education for their children. Do the advantages of home education outweigh its disadvantages?

It is widely acknowledged that a growing number of parents tend to choose home education for their children in some countries. However, I believed that the disadvanatges of home education outweigh its advantage.

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Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work in different organization. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In recent years, some argue that work in different organization is better to get a new circumtances than work in the same organization in whole life. This essay will discuss both view before I give my perspective.

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Some people think that there should be a law to ban young people under 18 to go out after the midnight, others think it should not be. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

According to some individuals, young people should not be allowed to go out past midnight whereas some think they should do so. Let's delve into both aspects before giving a personal opinion about this.

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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

In this modern era, it is very hard for everyone to spend time to learn theoretical part rather than they have more interest in performing tasks. Hence, many people believe teaching facts to children from lower level of education to their graduation level, takes a lot of time whereas for performing skills, they donot have enough time. However, my views are strongly opposing this statement which I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?

There is no denying that nowadays technology has been transforming, and it totally changes the way of intraction in the communities. People are using technical gudgets for their daily living to save money annd time. This trend has more positive development instead of negative feedback.

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In many countries, the number of people suffering from stress is increasing. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to tackle it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are many different kinds of stress, people nowadays get confronted with. In our modern society, we have to deal with various forms of stress causing situations.

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Some say that sports play an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

When some people tend to think that playing sport is simply an activity people do for leisure, others would argue that it has a significant role to play within society. I believe that sport does have an important function in society, but can also simply be enjoyed as a leisure activity by people.

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Some people think that there should be a law to ban young people under 18 to go out after the midnight, others think it should not be. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this recent era, the number of young generations, aged under 18, having outside activities after the midnight becomes topical since a part of society argued that this should be restricted by a law, while the others complained that they did not agree. To respond to this issue, I will provide explanation based on both sides and believe that making a policy for restricting the youth going outside after 12 pm is more convincing due to the benefits.

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Long distance flight consumes the amount of fuel that a car uses for many years and pollutes the air. Some people think that we should discourage non-essential flights, such as tourists travel, rather than limit the use of cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is claimed by some people that for long travel, air planes requires more quantity of fuel as cars requires in many years which causes air pollution. That's why they are suggesting to ban un-neccessary travel like visiting to tourists places instead of baning cars. I totally disagree with this statement, which I will explain in the upcoming paragraphs.

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The scientist believes that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is a positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both points and give your own opinion

There is no doubt in the belief system of scientist that computers will be more analytical and precise than human beings there are adverse and beneficial effects of it. In my opinion there are more benefits of technological advancement as long as it does not harm human beings and be in proper control of humans.

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Even though some cities have extensive public transportation system, many people still drive cars. why do you think this happens? how can people be encouraged to use more public transportation?

In the recent survey, 90% number of people that they would like to drive cars instead of using public transportation such as trains or trams. This survey answers even though some metropolitans had top-notch public transport transportation systems driving privately still is ideal for largely citizens choices.

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Some people believe that the expansion of tourism is ruining the culture of a country, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individueles believe that tourism is ruining the culture of the country ,wihle others consider that tourism are valuable to protecting a culture . In mt poinion, i believe that tourism would be more posetive to our culture because they going to open up the world about the cultures .However being a country that tourism prefer to travel too is actually perfect for the ecconomy .

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Parents are putting a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Most of parents are putting a high pressure on their sons and daughters to be successful people. In some cases, this happens because they wanted to achieve a dream, but they cannot or some parents are affected by others' words. In my opinion, I believe that this development is a negative development because it leads to makeing children failture and makes them hate their families.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achive anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this messages?

There is no denying the fact that in many cultures, kids are usually told that they could achieve anything they want if they try and work very hard. This essay will analyze the advantages and the disadvantages of giving children this message.

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Over-reliance on modern technology means that people are failing to learn, or are forgetting many basic skills. To what extent is this true? Are people becoming so reliant on modern technology that they are no longer able to do some things without it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today`s rapidly changing, technology has its own place in society. Many people are reliance and hard to do something fully by themselves. Even a small task, some people always use technology`s help. This essay will explore reasons why many people are reliance to the technology.

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