IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 59

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Newspapers play a significant role in shaping public opinions and beliefs. Do you consider this to be a positive or negative development? Explain your viewpoint with reasons and include appropriate examples based on your knowledge or experiences.

It is argued that newspapers play a significant role in shaping public opinions and beliefs. In this essay i want to explore both postive and negative arguements and why I think it is mostly a negative development.

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In spite of improvement in the healthcare by governments many people in developed countries are suffering from overweight and obesity. What are the causes of this and what other the impacts

The developed nations has always been praised by the world how the top class facilities especially the education and health, they provide to their citizens. In spite of improvement in the healthcare by the governments, a plethora of people in progressed countries are suffering from overweight and obesity.

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learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local language if these are not taught many are at risk of dying out in your opinion is it important for everyone to learn English? should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and if so how?

In recent years English has become increasingly viral and has been the first language worldwidly. Some people believe that learning English instead of other languages is a waste of time , while others think that it is useful and offers a better knowledge for students. This essay will argue that both English and local languages are crucial for individuals

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and daily life is a good thing. Others think we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Competition is often seen as a driving force for improvement. While some argue that cooperation is more beneficial, I believe healthy competition motivates individuals to excel, fosters innovation, and prepares people for real world challenges.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that some students at university want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects.While others think it is more important to give their time and attention to studying for a qualification. This essay will analyze this topic in both point of view.

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Successful professional athletes can earn much more than people in other important professions, such as nurses, doctors and teacher.Someone considers it quite justified, and someone considers it unfair.To what extent tdo you agree or disagree?

There is a debate among some folks that successful sportsmen can make more money than other major professions, for instance tutors, doctors and nurses. Few believe that this fair while others think that it is not justified. I agree with this statement but upto some extent and will discuss it further in the following essay.

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Some people believe that universities should only offer places to young students who receive high marks at school. Others think that universities should offer a place to anyone of any age. Discuss and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Discussions about places at universities continue for years. It is a hard question with many different opinions, who has more options to be enrolled in the study. On the one hand, people think that the ability to get a place at college or university is an easy thing and should be provided to everyone. On the other hand, you must earn a place with your knowledge and grades.

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Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are some people spend all their life to work for only a organization. Others think people work for diversity organization is better. From my point of view, I totally support this statement.

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Nowadays the lifestyle and culture in the world are increasingly similar to each other. What causes are behind it? Is this trend positive or negative?

Some people argue that the lifestyle and culture all over the world become similar to each other and this is positive while others belive that this trend is negative. In this essay, I will going to say a personal opinion what causes are behind this trend and why I think this change is beneficial.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

A lot of people think that children who make their own decisions on everyday matters is a result of people who thinks and cares only for themselves, while others believe that it is important for children to make this kind of choices. Both of them have their own valued reasons and this essay will discuss them, before presenting my opinion.

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In order to solve traffic problems government should tax private cars owners heavily and use the money to improve public transport. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

Traffic problems is one of the major concerns of the public nowadays. It is always frustrating to experience a traffic jam or even a car cursh whenever we are in a rush. Therefore, finding methods to address traffic problems is becoming more and more crucial. One suggestion to alleviate traffic problems is that private vehicles owners should be taxed by government heavily, while the taxes are implemented to enhance public transport. This essay discusses the pros and cons of such a suggestion.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expentency is increasing. Do u think the advantages outweight the disadvantages?

On recent years medical care develope on signifcant way because of this improved pepole are living longer and life expentency is growing up the avrage . in my opinion i believe improved medical care are necesacary for socity moreover,i would firmly agree with this statement however this essay will express the poin of my view and reason that relevent to this argue .

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The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Over past 50 years, undoubtedly, families had gone through a massive drift in society's but on other hand committees witnessing this change cannot claim to have attained gender quality. I deeply agree with the statement and will elaborate my opinion in upcoming paragraphs.

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In order to solve traffic problems,governments should tax private car owner heavily and use the money to improve public transportation .what are advantages and disadvantages of such a solution.

In this contemporary ear, many countries have traffic jams due to increased of privet vehicles. Some people argued that to develop the public transport sytem, the private transport system ought to pay high amount of tax in order to avoid traffic congestion. This solution has some advantages and disadvantages and this essay will discuss both sides with points.

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Some people consider sports to be their career in the society. For others it is mostly a work out to stay fit. Discuss both views snd give your opinion

It is an undeniable fact that sport has a big role in our life in all over the world. While some individuals prefer to do sport in order to stay healthy, some others think of a career path in sports. This essay will examine both views and come to a reasonable conclusion. My opinion will be said in the further.

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Few individuals have opinion that it is not important for adults to gain knowledge in class and self study is the better way for them to study more efficiently. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Few individuals have opinion that it is not important for adults to gain knowledge in class and self study is the better way for them to study more efficiently. I strongly agree with the given statement and will elaborate my point of view in upcoming paragraph.

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Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen or pencil.

It is true that a small number of people write by hand utilizing a pen or pencil in the modern world. There are many reasons why this is the case, and I believe that it has detrimental effects on individuals.

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Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

many parents are unable to give time to thier children because of work. some parents wants to keep their children with family members for take care, but other believe that daycares or childcare centres are ideal. According to me, chidren should be kept with grandparents rather than other childcare facilities. In this essay i will discuss both view with example.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as Sahara desert or antarctica . What are the benefits and disadvantages of people visiting there .

Nowadays, the increment has seen among the visitors on main attractions of the world like sahara desert and antarctica because people are now more adventurous as compared to the past times. in this essay , i will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of this issue.

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Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both veiws and give your opinion

Most of the individuals reckon that it is comfortable for the children to study web material as compared to the books and written reports of the classes.However, some ponder that printable pages are usable in education.in this essay , both of the ideas would be discussed and later the own opinion will be shared at last .

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