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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Give reasons? Suggest Solutions

Humans are born innocent in nature without sins. They come to life like angels. Either they acquire good behaviours or bad ones. One of the bad behaviours, that is spreading fast in many countries, among teenagers is crime. There are many reasons standing behind these bad attitudes.

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Being a celebrity-such as film star or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits. do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

Nowadays, there are occupations who provided by the society. If we look into social medias, there's a plenty of influencers who influence people to do and behave something like they do. Let's take a look for an example of job that influences others' perspective, celebrity.

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In some places, old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It would seem that in some areas the old generation is valued ,however, in other cultures the young generations are cherished. From my point of view ,youths are the most significant assets in all countries all around the world.

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Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Friendship is a beautiful asset to our lives. A section of society believes in finding friends who always agree with the viewpoint of each other whereas many people opine that it is better to have friends who show disagreements occasionally. While both views are worth discussing, in my opinion friends with different perspective on a subject can sometimes help us to make better decisions. I will discuss the merits of having friends who always agree with us and who sometimes disagree in the following paragraphs.

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the comparison of the Thailand online sales in six various sectors between 1958 and 2008.

The given pie charts illustrate the comparison of Thailand's online sales in six various sectors between 1958 and 2008.

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the main source of energy for USA between 1980 and 1990.

The given pie charts illustrate the main source of energy for the USA between 1980 and 1990.

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Some experts are concerned that people in modern society change their electronic devices when not necessary.

The two diagrams indicate the changed layout of the apartment, before and after the design of the flat was constructed.

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Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure.What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest?Write at least 250 words

In spite of being busy in studying for their education, some students also have to spare their time to their job. This will result in poor time management for their study and they will frequently feeling a tension. The cause of this phenomenon wil be describe in the following paragraphs.

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Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure.What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest?

There is a familiar phenomenon among us that students often face problems in their school performance because some of them have a part-time job after school. They chose to work outside because of several reasons. The main factor is the economic ability of their family and the other one is the ambition of the student itself.

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Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to change our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

The kind of person we are is already destined because of the genes we share even before we are born and we have nothing to do to change ourselves and our traits. I disagree as we grow we change to the different situations around us and as we grow our characteristics do change. I would want to discuss about the personality of and person and their Characteristics along with how the genes don’t actually play a role in our personality. First and Foremost, the character is everything. A characterless individual with a bunch of cash can't build anything, including a house or a business. A person's personality is defined by how he/she acts, speaks, is polite, is socially committed, etc. It's not the genes that determine a person's personality; it's the situations that shape who they are. I accept that certain things are passed down for generations, such as physical traits and some genetic problems, but not personality. Character, like other states of mind, deve...

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of a high school programme ( for example working for charity, Improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The world has become a safer place due to the volunteers. There is a debate between people as the free volunteering activities should be a mandatory of high school programs as charity, improving the neighbourhood or coaching the youngsters for sports. I totally agree with this statement and it will elaborate in this essay.

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, there has been a growing trend that people tend to buy things on the Internet. This present both pros and cos, however, in my opinion, its benefits are much more significant than the drawbacks.

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Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the numbers of people who travel to other places increase significantly. This essay will discuss why this becomes a new trend and the benefits behind this activity.

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It is often said that governments spend too much money on project to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important? Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the invention of technology allows researchers and those in the tourism industry to reach remote places. However, this has problems and advantages. The essay below will discuss both views at length.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

The diagram illustrates data about the rainfall rates and temperatures of a certain city in one year. Overall, the lowest rainfall was received in December while the highest was in July. On the other hand, the highest temperatures were experienced in May and the lowest in January.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the advanced age, people can see various advertisements at TV, shopping malls and so forth. Many corporations emphasize on that their goods are novel in some way. The essay will discuss why they advertise that way and it blows whether positive or negative influence in the following paragraphs before leading to a logical conclusion.

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Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this good thing or a bad thing?

In the 21st century the social media is becoming essential part of the people’s life. Day after day it is growing more to reach everyone on earth. Getting stuck with it, is affects various aspects of people’s lifestyles. One of them is the way to dress up. Dressing up in a way or another reflects people’s identity. However, following fashion trends is it good or bad?

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Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Marriage can occur in perfect time and certain age. Few individuals concur that there should be a proper age in entering a marital status. I somehow coincide with the notion, but almost entirely I do not concur with the idea, all the justifications and precedents shall be elicit in the ensuing paragraphs.

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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime

Nowadays, crime level is decreasing due to new technologies that allow preventing and solving crimes. I totally agree with this point.

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Some people say that school leavers should start working immediately. Others say that they should continue their studies at university. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays a lot of people think that after the school, the students should find a job whereas others give importance to study at the University. In my opinion, I think that they should go to the University due the following reasons.

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