IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 559

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In some countries ,more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this ? How can people research this ?

It is often said that nowadays the population who live in the world are interested in finding out more report about homes and buildings they settle in. There are multiple reasons for this. Different types of methods can be used to investigate this trend.

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

Life expectancy is one of the characteristics of the development of countries. Nowadays, there is no doubt that average life expectancy is showing an increase. Nevertheless, having a long time of life does not always bring positive impacts. This essay will highlight the possible problems and the way some solutions could be taken into account.

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nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology

There have been ongoing concerns regarding the fact that technological advancement has become an obvious contributor to changes in terms of how individuals interact with each other. This essay will explain the effects of technology on people’s several relationships and I hold the point of view that this major change results in harmful progress.

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nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology

There have been ongoing concerns regarding the fact that technological advancement has become an obvious contributor to changes/transformation in terms of how individuals interact with each other. This essay will explain the effects of technology on people’s several relationships and I hold the point of view that this major change results in harmful progress.

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Health experts claim that walking is the best exercise. However, people are walking less on a daily basis. What has made it happen and how to deal with this?Write at least 250 words.

Health experts state that walking is the best exercise for human. However over the last decade, people tends to neglect the importance of it as they were exposed to the advancement of transport medium and sophisticated technology, which helps running errands easier with little effort of movement. This essay will discuss on how these two factors can make people walk less on daily basis and how to overcome it.

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Computers are becoming an essential part of education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Since the technology hit us, most of people operate computer for daily basis. For example, to work, study also play games. Nowadays, society depends on gadgets, phones and internet.

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Computers are becoming an essential part of education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Learning is the backbone and a crucial thing people experience in their life, be it theoritical or practical. The adulterization in education has became an integral part which uses hi-tech appliances such as computers, that have been an inseparable part in the process of getting things known. I completely agree on using electronic goods for the comprehensive studies nowadays without any hesitation.

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In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The fact that recently the world gets (delete the get replaced with has just become) more competitive day by day is undeniable (As day goes by, it is undeniable fact that the world gets more competitive), and it is followed by the popular belief that to compete in the (current) situation, both parents must take part (participate) to make the families’ ends meet. (grammatially correct, but unncesarily complicated). A lot of people think that children who come from such families will not need to worry about their financial condition, however, I reckon that many children suffer from the loneliness resulting from being left unattended at home by both parents sometimes until late at night.

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What distinguishes young people from their parents' or grandparents' generation is a lack of physical exercise. Today's generation are spending far too long playing computer games, chatting aimlessly on social networking sites or simply watching TV, and too little time being active. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the digital age, Some individuals claim that the current generations spent their leisure time far too long playing games, communicating with their comrades on social platforms, binge-watching TV shows instead of doing outdoor activities, especially physical exercises, leading to distinguishing youngsters from their parents and elderly people. Personally, I disagree with this statement as there are many effective indoor activities.

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some people think the government should focus on improving the economy of the country. other people think the government should focus on social services such as health and education programs which statement do you agree with? explain and provide examples to support your opinion.

With the accelerated life pace of modern society, various pressure from study, work and other aspects have troubled lots of people, some of whom even had depression ascribed to excessive pressure. In this essay, I will account for the causes corresponding to this adverse phenomenon, and some plausible solutions will be provided.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled.They say that the only way to increase recyling is for the government to make it a legal requirement.To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste.

Today, waste management became a major threat to the environment. Few people constantly raise the concern that people are not making enough contributions to recycle household waste. They believe imposing legal regulation is the only way to address this issue. In my opinion, I strongly believe the implementation of such requirements will make people recycle waste wisely.

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TASK 2: Some people think the money spent on developing technology for space exploration is not justified. However, there are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals claim that the amount of money squandered in advancing space technology is unjustified and they go further to say that, it could be invested in more advantageous applications. Personally, I strongly agree with the view since there are world regions starving. Albeit, these spatial researchers have their boons. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide anecdotal evidence to prove the arguments.

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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagrees with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Most of our friends tend to have their own opinion about everything. While a stratum of society believe that it is beneficial to give preference to the folks who usually have same perspective as themselves, I would strongly argue that friends who occasionally disagree with you can provide a diverse point of view and broaden your horizons.

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Using the Internet, find an article about another way people use technology in their free time, such as playing video games or reading the news online. Write a one-paragraph summary of the article and then a personal response paragraph. (Make sure to include a link of the source at the end of your summary

The writer illustrates the variety of the importance of Technology in our basic daily life, we might not see how it changed us but if we think of our routine we can see how much it is involved. Such as texting on cell phones, using the GPS on cars, playing video games and many digital inventions. Although, the benefits of Technology are various, On the other hand, as the writer inducts that it also has a negative impact, for example, friends can stop hanging out with each other because they can do anything online, people can be addicted to technical devices easily.

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Social media enable people to keep in touch with each other and learn about news events. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

In recent years, social media and the Internet have caused people to be so close together their communication has become closer. As far as I am concerned, this is a beneficial approach, and its benefits are beyond its drawbacks. And in this essay, I will explain some of these advantages and disadvantages.

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In some places, old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this modern scenario,the worth of elder people has been decreasing day by day due to their high age,but in some regions,aged individuals are considered to be more imperative.Whereas,in other areas youngsters are dominant rather than senior citizens.According to me,nowadays,adolescents are playing a significant role in the globe as our world rely on them due to their innovative creations.This essay will discuss both views.

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Adults do very less exercise these days. Some people think that showing sporting events on the television such as Olympics and international tournaments can be the best way to encourage adults to do exercise. Others believe there are other effective ways to do so. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Support with relevant examples.

Many companies are debating over the periodization of policies and the importance of dressing. With that in mind, researchers argue whether the appearance or the work outputs is more significant in company's atmosphere. This essay sides productivity over the good-looking apparel but will provides each argumentative's points for both sides. Analysing freedom of clothes selection creates more productive environment, which outweighs the feeling of being a team by wearing uniform.

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Despise the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done to solve this problem?

In this twenty-first century, although there is a major development in the agriculture sector for increasing food production, starvation around the globe still exists. The primary consequences and solutions related to this issue are mentioned in this essay.

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Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

The issue whether working for a successful business is brought more benefits than working for a developing company. From my personal point of view, I think every option used to have pros and cons that I will base my opinion in the following point.

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the online shopping sales for four various retail sectors in Canada between 2005 and 2010.

The given pie charts illustrate the online shopping sales for four various retail sectors in Canada between 2005 and 2010.

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