IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 555

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Protecting the Environment is the responsibility of the government. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Although, some citizens think that saving the eco - system is the responsibility of the government, I totally disagree with this notion. I strongly believe that, the main reason for destroying the environment is human activity, and nothing else. Therefore, as citizens, we are unable to point out the government's failure to protect our environment. We all benefit from our surrounding environment, not only the government. Humans are the most dangerous enemy of the environment, so as humans, it is our responsibility to protect the environment, not the government's.

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Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying products (such as cellphones) or services (medical treatments) do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals in society have an idea that when they are purchasing items or getting a service, the first priority should be the amount of money spent for it. I strongly disagree with this statement because I believe that when we buy a product or service, we first have to think about the quality of the service as well as the product. Secondly, one should consider the cost of the item or service in contrast with the quality of the product or service.

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Some people think that environmental conservation is a global concern. Some others think that some countries do not need it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Protecting environment is considered as a spheral anxiety, while others believe that it is useless for most domains. I personally think that environmental preservation should be global concern.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

On the one hand, some people believe in destiny. They think that whatever happens in life is God's will and you should accept it. This point of view more belongs to older generations who are more religious. The other reason for this opinion, is the poverty and a lack of infrastructures and facilities. For instance, people who were born in poor countries, like Africa, believe that there is no way to change the way they live and must accept their destiny.

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Job applicants’ social skills are more important. Some employers believe that job applicants’ social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In this modern world, the staff has to be talented in multi skills especially, should be able to possess social values rather than qualifications. I strongly believe social skills help an individual to be more effective and efficient in their work area.

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Some people belive that money is one of the most important factors in a person's happiness. to what extend do you agree with this?

money as we all know holds important role in people's lives. But, speaking about money, people believe that money is one of the most significant aspects to bring people joys. This statement, however, is always contradictary. through this essay, it will discuss that money afterall is an important factor in people's delightments.

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Some people think that advertisements aimed at children should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some people argue that the governments should ban to advertisements if they aims to children. I completely agree with this view because childrens can easily manipulated and gain unhealthy habits.

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Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers remain the main source of news for the majority of people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The unprecendented growth of social media currently takes the advantage compared to other information channels. Even though most people still read newpapers in their daily life, I believe that majority are getting their daily updates by social media dominantly. In my point of view, I moderately disagree with the old-fashioned newspapers to keeping abreast to news.

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Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort. To what extend do you agree with this? How do you think space exploration will change in the future?

It is argued that the main aim of do space travel is to attract other countries to see their new invention of technology rather than international matters. I agree to this notion because of the following reasons.

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The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate, and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?

These days, the coomunity utilizes the cell phones in an increasing rate which influences their lifestyles. Even though, there are a few positive effects of this case, there are also some adverse impacts. I personally think that the side effects are significantly less than the benefits.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this disctinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Understanding correction and false behaviour is one of the most substantial items for young children. People have mixed views on whether the penalty is an indispensable reaction or it is a wrong treatment. In this particular essay, I will explore my opinion with some reasons and examples of how positive punishments aim at young folk.

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More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, car and other items. Why is this trend? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is widely believed that nowadays, many customers tend to buy clothes, cars and other products that have hot brands. While people are more likely to buy products from famous brands more than other brands as these products are better than others, it has both positive and negative developments for the customers.

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In some countries, companies allow people to work from home. In others, people are still expected to work in an office. Dicuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays maximum companies are allow to work form home after the corona pandenmic. Many employees are taking the benfits of this facilities. But some pople are stiling searching a job.

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Some people believe that schools should teach foreign language for primary school children. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Now a days, language is most important factor in this competitive world. Some public argue that in education systeam school have to foucus on foreign language as to go abored for education is trending today. This eassy will be discuss pors and cons of this topic.

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Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices would help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Currently people use the private and public transport to their transport requirements.

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In the furture, buses, cars and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside will be passengers. Do you think tha advantages driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In the cutting-edge era, many innovations lead improvement of technologies, especially in transportation. Moreover, in the future, inventions, namely buses, cars, and lorries, will be automatically moved without drivers. In this case, people argue that it leads beneficial for humans; however, the rest think that technology has some drawbacks. To respond this issue, I agree that it creates more positive impact than the negative sides.

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These days, people tend to change many jobs during their lifetime. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

Modernization has put a enormous impact on people life and due to that many individuals change their jobs during their lifetime . I believe that this method has both positive and negative effect however positive effects are much higher than negative and i will elucidate my views in both terms

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Some people think studying in groups is better, while some think self study is better for school students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Many people believe that studying in groups is more acceptable while some believe that individual study is preferable for school students. In this ,essay we will discuss both sides of the study. Both have some benefits and drawbacks.

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Some people believe that it is best to eccept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfaction job or shorage money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such satuation. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that, working is essential thing to life in a relevant way. While it is a commonly held belief that, improving yourself and your care always is very crucial, others think that staying in the same place and accepting it is the best solution. In this ,essay I will analyse both points of view and give my opinion.

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Some people believe that a college or university education should be aviable to all students. Others believe that higher education should be aviable only to good students. Discuss these views. Which view do you agree with? Explain why.

It is argued that education is not exclusivity and everona should take advantage of it , independent of their social status and fortune. This essay agrees with that opinion because of the benefits of education. The essay will first look at benefits that learning brings to health sector then discuss about family well-being with it.

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