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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email 1)Describe where you lived when you were a student at the university 2)Recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation 3)Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

Thanks for asking about my wellness, I am doing good. Hope you are doing well. Firstly, congratulations on receiving offer from the university. I believe you will cope up well with the academics and get a good scores. Don’t worry about the accommodation part as there are plenty of options available and also you will find university hostels available initially for 1 year where you can opt for it. If you didn’t find any good place initially.

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Some think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Needless to say, fossil fuel is one of the biggest pollutants that emitted greenhouse gases and cause widespread environmental problems, although, increasing the cost of fuels might be one of the small solutions, but, it should not be the only option, then I do not agree with this claim.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

With a plethora of entertaining features and the ability to help owner keep up with everything up to the minute, smartphone is gradually gaining ground among the young and the increase in the average time for phone use has sparked a controversy of whether it would bring harm to children or not. This essay will delve into the two mentioned reason leading to this perception as well as how phone addicts’ well being are affected.

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In the future all cars, bues and trucks will be driverless. The only people traevelling inside these vehichcles will be passengers. Do you think the adventages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

(10+3) It is true that never before have scientists invented cutting-edge science such as nanobots. (15+16) The more homework you were done, the higher achievement you attained. (3 + 21) To protect the environment, not only should we reduce pollution, but more reusable products we can use. (17+11) The government should buy itself more time implementing effective policies to deal with that road is being congested because of the detriment brought by the typhoon. (6+2) Inventing more useful facilitated technologies, such as reliable telecommunication tools, is a goal for every scientists. (4+6) Balancing proportion of time between rest and study will be an effective way to achieve higher academic results. (17+25) Students should follow the instructions produced by teachers, preventing themselves from harmful attractions such as drugs. (21+5) To handle the destruction produced by the typhoon, not only should the government implement some direct and effective policies, b...

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Nowadays, it is possible to move ocean creatures from their natural habitat at sea and have them relocated in amusement parks for the purpose of people’s recreation. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

At present days marine creatures shift from their natural places to entertainment parks for the sake of human recreation. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages to a logical conclusion.

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In some countries, it is common for women to participate in the workforce when their children are young. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In these modern eras, more and more women have been involved in employment opportunities, and they have contributed significant amounts of profits to society while their children were in their young ages. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss the pros and cons of this culture and how it impacts society.

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Some people believe that schools are no longer necessary, because students can get so much information through the Internet, and study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A section of society is of the opinion that institutions will not be relevant ,because students can get data online and in their homes.I totally disagree because tutors are significant.This essay will explain in detail the reasons for my stance as well as examples in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Exposure to international media, such as films, TV and magazines, has an impact on the local culture. What do you think of these impacts? Do you think that the advantages of these impacts outweigh the disadvantages?

In the past, local cutures like regional music or dance were enjoyed by the public, as well efforts were made to preserve them. However, nowadays due to exposure to the media, films, television shows and magazines from around the Globe has started affecting the local culture. I my opinion these unnecessary factors are leading to detrimental effects on the local culture. In this essay, I will argue that there are more disadvantages than advantages.

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1)Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

These days, advertisements are normal for businesses, products and brands as well. Although many organizations have an expensive cost contributing to advert expenditure, they get much more profit due to a higher customer's demand. In my personal perspective, companies obtain positive development from advertising ,and I will give more details in the following paragraphs before the conclusion is reached.

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PEOPLE FROM CITIES GO TO UNIVERSITY MORE OFTEN THAN THOSE WHO LIVE IN THE COUNTRY. SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT THE GOVERNMENT SHOULD MAKE IT EASIER TO ENTER UNIVERSITIES FOR PEOPLE WHO LIVE OUTSIDE CITIES AND TOWNS BY SETTING LOWER ENTRY REQUIREMENTS AND TUITION FEES. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YO AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT

It is normally said that government should take some steps in order to make easy to visit at university for those people who are from outside of of the city and towns. I believe that it should be done to encourage student to get education so i agree with this statement.

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An increasing number of people is buying one they need on the internet. What are the advantages and the disadvantages for both individuals and company shopping online

A consistent amount of people are purchasing what they need on the internet. As it is based on the web, people find it interesting to buy what they want. But there can be weaknesses on buying and selling over the browser which will affect the person or as well the organisation.

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The funding of a police force in a British region between 2017 and 2018 is highlighted in the table while the distribution of those funds during the same period is shown in two pie charts.

The table illustrates the funding of a police force in a British region in 2017 and 2018, while the two pie charts present the distribution of those funds during these periods.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, some numbers of sick communities are no longer going to their professional doctor to get medical treatment. However, they are moving to use another altenative as their medical treatment. I agree that this is positive development for the people in terms of reducing the usage of chemical drugs and finding an option for poor people to get recovery cheaply.

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Do you think that kids under 14 should be allowed to participate in boxing competitions?

This is a big controversy in my country, Thailand. Last year we had an accident in a boxing competition one kid died after a boxing competition. because the kid’s brains were severely impacted. We have two groups between allowed and disallowed. some people in the allowed group give the reason is Thailand need to develop boxing sport to be the best one in the world that is why we need to train kids under 14 years old and competitions.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in.

Nowadays, in many parts of the world many people are interested to know the history of the house or the building where they live in. There are many reasons that can lead people to investigate the history of their house and in this essay I will try to explain them.

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Some people think that children should not be given toys as they distract them in their studies, whereas others believe that toys always help them in their education. discuss both views and give your own opinion

Crowds of people believe that toys should not be provided to a child as it distracts them from their academics. Whereas, others like to believe that toys help in a kid's education.

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Some people said that with the help of parenting and child development courses parents can improve the life of children. To what extent do you agree?

The table illustrates information about how the unemployed spent their time (UK, previous year).

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thenumber of children that read books for fun has dropped dramatically in recent years.What are the reasons and how can we encourage children to read more

Technological development has given rise to new activities for children such as computer games , phone games or videos on Youtube etc. Instead of the read books , children prefer other fun activities which are due to a decrease read books levels significantly. In this essay , I will explain how technology affects leisure time and how can we encourage heir to read more.

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Some think newspapers are the best method for reading the news while others think other media is better. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt is that these days people can easily know the conditions of the world by a lot of methods. The question is, is it still the newspaper's best way to know the news? Or are the modern methods of reading and watching better? In this essay, I am going to discuss both views, and my opinion will be given.

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Some people say that family has the most powerful influence on a child’s development; however, others say that influences such as music, other people,... have the greatest influence on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many today come to the conclusion that the most powerful impact on the development of a child is family, while other people believe that the surrounding factors such as music, acquaintances, have the most huge influence on children.

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