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Unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example, working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood, or teaching sports to younger children). To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is often suggested that unpaid community services should be mandatorily added to the curriculum of a high school students. Personally, I agree that the benefits of this required program, which include effective communication skill and better understanding of handling situations. I will explain my rIt is often suggested that unpaid community services should be mandatorily added to the curriculum of high school students. Personally, I agree that the benefits of this required program, which include effective communication skills and a better understanding of handling situations. I will explain my reasons in this essay.

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Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?

Many countries are worrying about people who have a lack of the ability to read and write nowadays. I think there are two main causes and several effects, which I will outline now. The main cause is probably people who live far from urbanization or rural areas are likely to have chance of becoming literate less than the villagers. It is a well-known reason that teachers are not employed in a sparsely populated area. The second key cause is a certain part of the total population of many countries does not have the natural ability to learn this kind of knowledge. If that number of people have severe mental illness, their chances of study something in any part of education institutions may be even lower. Firstly, Due to an individual's inability to acquire enough knowledge and information without the help of others, their opinion is sold and easily influenced by others who are not even sure whether he can lead others. Secondly, Universal Education is a social immuni...

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Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?

Many countries are worrying about people who have a lack of the ability to read and write nowadays. I think there are two main causes and several effects, which I will outline now. The main cause is probably people who live far from urbanization or rural areas are likely to have chance of becoming literate less than the villagers. It is a well-known reason that teachers are not employed in a sparsely populated area. The second key cause is a certain part of the total population of many countries does not have the natural ability to learn this kind of knowledge. If that number of people have severe mental illness, their chances of study something in any part of education institutions may be even lower. Firstly, Due to an individual's inability to acquire enough knowledge and information without the help of others, their opinion is sold and easily influenced by others who are not even sure whether he can lead others. Secondly, Universal Education is a social immuni...

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Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?

Many countries are worrying about people who have a lack of the ability to read and write nowadays. I think there are two main causes and several effects, which I will outline now. The main cause is probably people who live far from urbanization or rural areas are likely to have chance of becoming literate less than the villagers. It is a well-known reason that teachers are not employed in a sparsely populated area. The second key cause is a certain part of the total population of many countries does not have the natural ability to learn this kind of knowledge. If that number of people have severe mental illness, their chances of study something in any part of education institutions may be even lower. Firstly, Due to an individual's inability to acquire enough knowledge and information without the help of others, their opinion is sold and easily influenced by others who are not even sure whether he can lead others. Secondly, Universal Education is a social immuni...

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Some people believe that the society should be based on rules and laws. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It's argued that Commimtent to the laws and regulations is one of the main marks of today's civilization, this essay discuss the shape of countries directed by laws and the main benefit of that, but also represent the opinions of those who want the opposite.

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Some people say the fashion industry has a bad effect on people’s lives. Do you agree?

In this modern era, people like to spend a large amount of money on clothes, jewellery and many more items to look beautiful benefits the fashion industry. While some folks concur that the fashion industry has a bad negative influence on people's lifestyles. I tend to stand with the statement that does hold a valid ground which will elaborate in the forthcoming paragraph.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving chilren this message?

Some societies told their childrean you can have whatever you want if make a lot of effort. the following essay will examine the benefits and drawbacks of this notion and provide logical conclusion.

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The flowchart illustrates the system of hydroelectric generation which is well-known as an environmentally friendly electric generation system over the world. As a whole, there are four stages in the process namely water through a sluice gate, turning a turbine, power generation, and power transmission.

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Some people prefer to rent accommodation while others buy their own home. Does renting a house or apartment have more advantages than buying one

In some countries, the vast majority of the community tend to buy accommodation rather than rent it, whereas, in others, the population prefers renting. In this essay, I will examine both views and explain why I believe buying a home is a wise decision. There are several reasons why families prefer to rent. Firstly, freedom of movement. If someone buys a flat or house in this city or neighborhood, he will be stuck in this city. Therefore , if he finds work somewhere else, he will find it challenging to move to a new place. Secondly, renting allows people to save money because they don't have to put down a large initial payment or buy expensive furniture. It also reduces maintenance costs because the landlord is responsible for any repairs that need to be done. Finally, renting offers more flexibility, as it's easier to move out of a rental property at any time in case of any unexpected issue. On the other hand , I believe purchasing a home is a crucial decision to ...

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Some people prefer to rent accommodation while others buy their own home. Does renting a house or apartment have more advantages than buying one.

In some countries, the vast majority of the community tend to buy accommodation rather than rent it, whereas, in others, the population prefers renting. In this essay, I will examine both views and explain why I believe buying a home is a wise decision. There are several reasons why families prefer to rent. Firstly, freedom of movement. If someone buys a flat or house in this city or neighborhood, he will be stuck in this city. Therefore , if he finds work somewhere else, he will find it challenging to move to a new place. Secondly, renting allows people to save money because they don't have to put down a large initial payment or buy expensive furniture. It also reduces maintenance costs because the landlord is responsible for any repairs that need to be done. Finally, renting offers more flexibility, as it's easier to move out of a rental property at any time in case of any unexpected issue. On the other hand , I believe purchasing a home is a crucial decision to ...

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Some people say that education and heath care should be the responsibility of the goverment but other thinks that it is the responsibility of the individuals themseves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There's no denying that, staying healthy is one of the most crucial aspects of every developed and civilized society. It is believed by some that the authorities should be responsible for the education and healthcare while others suppose that this reposibility fall upon the shoulders of the indivisuals. This essay will discuss both sides of the coin and argue in favor of the latter.

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Some parents believe that watching TV and playing computer games should be limited and substituted by book reading. Do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary era, some fathers and mothers are of the belief that their children should spend more time reading physical books and limit digital screens watching time. This essay disagrees with this statement because video learning can be more effective and cheaper.

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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals argue that addressing with global warming is not effective way.They recommend that it would be better if we look for new methods to live with this situation.I completely disagree with this statement.

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Some people are happy to spend their whole life living in the same area. Others prefer to live in many different places in their lifetime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, people have the freedom to choose where they live. Some prefer to stay in their beloved house for the rest of their lives; however, others enjoy nomadic living. This essay will examine both views and elaborate on why I think that living permanently in a designated place is more beneficial compared to moving constantly.

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Students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Many students around the world are having a hard time lately. This is caused by many factors such as the pandemic. The covid-19 pandemic has stroked the industry so badly. Many parents are being unemployed. This case leads to many challenges faced by the family members for instance the financial problems. Parents who are being fired will not be able to afford their children’s tuition. Many students must work to fund themselves and this occurs in many countries such as Indonesia. What is the explanation to this? And what can students do to minimize the effect of doing both working and studying all together? This essay will elaborate the reason why students are required to earn money and the advice that can be offered to them consecutively.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There has been a debate regarding which education method is better between homeschooling and regular school. Both have their own benefits, however, some people may think one is better than the other. This essay will examine the advantages of the two education methods followed by a suggestion of which method is superior compared to the other.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The general public is arguing whether the professionals, such as doctors and engineers should be required to serve in the nation where they finished their studies. I can understand why people think that it is necessary for someone who has learnt something in their country is required to stay at that country and work for them, because they want them to give back to their society. However, i believe that it is better to let the professionals having the opportunity to choose where they want to work at.

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Visa regulations should be relaxed for overseas students. Do you agree or disagree?

To persue higher education in abroad to a renowned University in a desired subject every year many foreign pupils travel one country to another.Therefore, they have to pass through many hard and strict visa policies.Personally,i totally agree to this statement that visa and immigration policies should be made easier.

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Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?

In the modern world, there are approximately 773 million illiterate people despite the advancement and spread of education. There are three main causes, and a number of key impacts, which I will outline now. The main cause is probably having parents who are illiterate. Many illiterate parents do not put much emphasis on the importance of education, especially those in remote areas where many people in the older generation have not gone through formal education. Furthermore, they often prioritize work before education and have lower expectations in regards to schooling. The second key cause is unemployment of the educated as many people believe that without the promise of employment, education is not a necessity to them. For instance, in a country where many of the educated are unemployed, there may not be enough motivation for the illiterate to go to school. Another important issue is social barriers such as restrictions on girls’ education in some societies. Recent statis...

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In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In a few states, organisations have to accept the job seekers’, although they are in young or elderly age because of rights of workers.