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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people believe that parents have a great influence on thechildren's growth but influence from the outside plays a moreimportant role. Do you agree or disagree?

Influence can be good or bad. Some people think that people have a great influence on children's growth but the influence from the outside plays a more important role. This essay will discuss whether it is a good option to get affected by our parents or the outside world.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is true that the question of whether to study at university or get a job straight after school remains a source of controversy in the education field. While a number of people believe that working after graduating high school is better, I would argue that studying at higher education is one of the best routes to a successful career.

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Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes?

For many countries, international tourism contributes a significant impact on the national economy. However, it also causes many setbacks for their country. This essay will discuss the biggest impact of tourism to the environmental situation as well as giving some solutions in order to keep our natural environment in balance.

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The behavior of students in class is becoming worse and worse.. What are the causes of this? What solutions can be offered?

Nowadays, the student’s behavior is much worse than before. I believe parent’s education and the negative of social media are the main causes and parents, schools and the government need to work collaboratively to tackle the issue.

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It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics.

In today's perpetually transforming epoch , studying of all subjects are very necessary for any individual's life .As a consequence, it opined by a few people that it is more beneficial for learners to study art as well as literature instead of maths and science.I disagree to huge extent with above notation and , I have given my reasons along with suitable justifications in the impending subdivisions.

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Many criminals commit further crimes as source as they released from prison What do you think are the cause of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

It is undeniable that, more and more crimes are increasing with time . And most of them are after allow leave jail and again engaged in similar crimes . These things are done by some wrong steps of society and government, so criminals are helpless to do the same thing . In this ,essay I going to discuss are causes and relevant solutions to decrease this.

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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviours. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Recently, travelling to different societies with various traditions, is one of the most contemporary controversies, which viewers and travellers are better to stick on respecting to appropriate cultural values, however, disputers believing the local and settlers should be concerned about their old fashioned manners, regarding admitting other nations disparities. Overall, due to some detrimental consequences; take being arrested or subjected because of lack of sufficient knowledge as the most patently obvious example, visitors are supposed to follow the rules, on the contrary, local residents are going to take advantage of the tourism industry, so, must change their attitudes towards this phenomenon.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The set of maps compares the changes in Southwest airport now and after reconstruction for next year.

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Some people think that schools should choose students according to their academic abilities, while others think it is better to have students of different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion

Criteria for student recruitment of schools is always a difficult issue to set. While some individuals suppose that academic capabilities are the most important factor, a mixture of various capacities are obviously able to evaluate a student much more comprehensively.

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In contemporary society, everyone should have equal opportunities in education. Therefore, universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I concur that everyone should have equal access to educational opportunities in a just society. I disagree, however, that every topic at universities should accept an equal proportion of male and female students. Admissions choices ought to be made on the basis of merit and credentials rather than gender. The integrity of the admissions process can be harmed by accepting students based on quotas or fixed numbers, and it's possible that the best and brightest applicants won't be accepted. Furthermore, it's critical to acknowledge that some professions can have a smaller proportion of female applicants, making it unlikely or inappropriate to mandate equal gender representation in these industries.

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some jobs are based at a single work place where the hours are the same each day, while other jobs involve frequent travel and irregular working hours. Discuss the advantages of both types of job and give your own opinion about which one is best.

Many job is partime where they are manage time with the same activity every day, mean while other work have doing traveling and another jobs not consistent such as work from home or in the office.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, a number of experts claim that it is the best way to children to learn a foreign language at primary school rather than at secondary school. Merits does not outweigh demirits since pupils at primary school does not such as mature to start learning a foreign language. This essay will examine advantages and disadvantages and give reasonable conclusion.

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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this overweigh the disadvantages.

In some countries more families choose to educate their kids at home instead of at school and this view has both positive and negative points. In this essay, I will discuss the pros and cons of homeschooling and give my opinion at the end.

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Some people think that governments in developing countries should introduce new technologies to people in order to improve the quality of life, while others believe that in order to achieve that governments should offer free education for all. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The advancements in the field of technology have not only improved the standard of living in the world but also ignited various issues globally. It is often argued by a substantial proportion of individuals opine that the administration should introduce new technologies in emergent nations to make a better higher standard of life. However, others believe that authorities should give free education. This essay will discuss both views as far as I am in favour of the latter notion.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are marries or single. some people say this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, employers sometimes want to know employee's personal details before for applying new job, for example, like and dislike, interest and their marital status and others argue that these details might be relevant and important. Others believe it is not so significant. According to my ,opinion it is good practice to ask beforehand. In the coming ,essay I will discuss more about this.

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Companies nowadays rarely offer long term contract to their employees. What are the advantages and disadvantages to this practice?

The importance of hiring permanent employees is infrequent now, which was always debatable and has become more controversial. While concerns about the issue are on the rise, persuasive arguments in the favour of the subject matter also have momentum. Beneficial workers can bring many advantages and profits to the business and employees who are skilled have many options to switch and continue their jobs are the two justifications that will be emphasized in this essay to reach a rational conclusion.

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Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others, however, believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days, all technologies are developing, as well as, cell phones. People use them more than other technology, especially children. This essay will be considered the pros and cons with examples of how children should use their phones during the school day.

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Some people think that teenagers should follow what the old people say whereas some believe that it is good for teenage people to challenge what old people say.

Mostly elders have got through a great variety of diverse happenings from the perspective of decades of their lifetimes. It has been acquired from overcoming misfortunes and any sort of things alike happened along the way. It is clear that hands-on experience shapes a worldview. However, sometimes it doesn’t have a semblance with the reality which younger generations may be immerged into. So, it should be used wisely, with respect to curcumstances followed by a feedback.

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in the future all cars, buses and truck will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicle will be passangers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicle outweight the disadvantages?

The development of transportation in the future is possible to autopilot the cars, buses, and truck. Only passenger will be left on the vehicle. This essay firstly suggest about the advantages of driverless vehicles. On other hand, it will discuss about several disadvantages.

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In many countries, not enough students study science subjects. What are the causes? What will be the effect on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are not enough students student science programmes in some countries especially in recent years because the construction of society changed a few years ago. Due to many reasons such as politics, education systems, and social media, I agree that many facts will affect students when they make decisions about the subjects.

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