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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In the past 100 years, there are many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. What do you think is the most important invent for the past 100 years? Why?

In the last century the civilization of humanity has develop a lot of valuable inventions which have affected the human being in a positive way. In this essay, I am going to write about the most important invention in my point of view.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are sufferring from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

These days it can be seen that in many nations a high density of folks are surviving with many diseases as an outcome of consuming a lot of junk food. To control this situation it is mandatory for authoraties to implement a strong income tax rate on such eatable things. It is disagreed since the choice of eating fast food is made by the community as it is not forced by anyone to have such harmful food, government bodies

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Most people accept that we now live in a globalized world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extent is globalization a positive or negative development.

Some individuals think that the world convert into a village due to the development of modern technology while others think this is not good for any nation in the world. My opinion on above mention statement is quite different as I believe that globalization has both advantages and disadvantages. As a result of globalisation come smaller people who live in one corner be able to communicate with other people who live in another corner. However, diseases are rapidly spread all over the countries during short periods due to foremost reasons.

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Some parents believe that their children should do educational activities during their free time. Others say that in this way children are underpressure. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is understandable that some parents may believe that their children should engage in educational activities during their free time, as they may see this as a way to help their children succeed in school and prepare for their future. However, it is important to also consider the well-being and happiness of children.

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Write a paragraph about the benefits of a personal device that is necessary for students’ study (120-150 words).

Thanks to advanced technology, smartphones are getting smaller, faster and stronger. And with superior functions, nowadays it has become one of the indispensable personal devices in students’ study. In particular, teenagers can benefit from this useful tool a lot. Firstly, it is portable, so they can take it with them. Secondly, it is very versatile, as it can be used for many educational purposes. For instance, students can take an online course and interact directly with their teacher. They can also research topics on the Web. There are tons of online resources in all fields, which help learners widen their knowledge. As a result, school students are likely to study far more independently and productively. In conclusion, it is a wise choice for each student to own a smartphone because it is an essential tool which brings a lot of benefits to their education.

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Some people argue that the government should spend money on public services and facilities, but not on the arts. Do you agree or disagree?

The governments spend a considerable amount on budgets, from public service to arts. However, I agree that government should support public service financially. I do not think it is a waste to spend money on art.

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Some scientists think that computers will soon become more intelligent than humans. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays. the artificial intelligence is a hot topic among experts. some of them believe that well-trained computers and artificial intelligence machines will outperform people in many topics. while many others think the computer intelligence has no opportunity to compete human in mental activities. This essay will explore both point of view and shows how computer has no chance to get smarter than the human brain.

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Families who do not send their children to government financed schools should not be required to pay taxes that supports universal education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? Support your answers with specific reasons and examples.

Nowadays, the quality of the educational system of a country is vital since it influences the development of a nation. From my perspective, it does not matter whether the schools are government or not, taxes should be paid by every citizen of a country.

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SOME PEOPLE DO NOT LIKE CHANGES AND PREFET TO DO THINGS THEY ARE GOOD AT, WHILE OTHER PEOPLE LIKE TAKING RISKS AND TRYING NEW THINGS. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

It is the biggest truth that taking risks and trying new things is mandatory to develop personal growth, because from several life experiences a person learns and sometimes it is important to take risks for individuals to achieve their goals. However, others believe that they only do those things, where they feel comfortable and very good in performance. In this essay, I will discuss both these views and give my opinion in the last paragraph.

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More and More wild animals are on the verge of annihilation and others are on the rare list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve the problem.

Due to globalisation and industrialisation, large number of animals are disappearing from the globe. Human's unjustified needs are the main reasons for this and for solving this major issue, Government should take strict actions against the wrongdoers.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s life others think adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.Discuss both views and give your opinion .

No doubts teenager has less responsibilities than grownups. Thus, people tend to think that they it was a golden stage on their life, with a lot of fun and way less burdens on their shoulders. in this text we are going to discuss teenagers and adults views of happiness and responsibilities.

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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, supermarkets owned by global organizations have started to open branches in remote locations,like, villages, and mountain areas where local markets have lost thier consumer base to this mart.Local businesses and society have an invaluable connection to each other with thier traditions,culture and lifestyle.My opinion, I agree that local communities are also under threat. because these big malls is attracting consumers from these markets not only is this affecting local work but also local communities.

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Global warming is one of the most serious issue that the world is facing today. What are the causes what major can government an individual take to tackle issue?

no, it is one of the most threatening concern for what is global Barbie. There are certain causes behind this phenomenon, which could be resolved by factoring initiative on both organizational as well as individual levels. Both be discussed in the essay.

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Many working people get little or no excercise either during the working days or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not to get enough excerise? What can be done about this problem.

Nowadays,numerous people including stuff and emplooyer do not have physical activity due to lacking of workingout. it has been had negative consiquences on their body. In this essay l will delve into this subject and represent some solutions.

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Some people think companies should employ old people to work as they have a lot of working experience. Others, however, think it is better to recruit young people. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Recently a debate has a raised about which type of employees would be better to employ by companies, experienced workers or fresh graduates. Although skilled workers in general are often ready to start a job without training, they struggle to adapt to change. While young workers even they are eager to start their careers, their lack of experience may result in accidents at work. A balanced working force will assure an excellent mixture of experience and enthusiasm.

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many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. why do many working people not get enough exercise ? what can be done about this problems?

Nowadays, numerous employees do not work out because of plenty of reasons . in this essay,I will delve into these subjects and represent some solution for this tribulation.

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many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. why do many working people not get enough exercise ? what can be done about this problems?

Nowadays, numerous employees do not working out because of plenty of reasons . in this essay i will delve into this subjects and represent some obviats for this trobulation.

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All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills, but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children's future. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In the first line of this essay, I should maintain that, you cannot find any person who wants a dark fate for his children. Because of the difference of society members, they have distinct opinion for the shing future of their babies. one of These believes diversity is in education that everybody believe the good education is play an axial role in glamorous fate. A group of human think the best thing for training in school is skills while there we have another group that think having a big range of subjects is pretty suitable for dear children.

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In order to study at university, student are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone

Fees for higher education are expensive and not affordable by everyone so according to some university should be free for all people regardless of their background. In my opinion, I agree that university education ought to be free as it will greatly benefit both individuals and society.

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In many workplaces, online communication is now more common than face to face meetings. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Squabbling between online communication and face to face meetings is interminable in today's aeon. Controversy exist as it whether online communication is advantageous or not in impediment to society. In this essay, I will weigh up the benefits and drawbacks along with my credibility with the bifitting paradigm.

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