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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In the past, people ate local food in season. Nowadays, people buy a variety of food from all over the world. Does it advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

These days, a vast majority of countries in the world has deeply engaged in the international food trade. It is commonly seen that ordinary citizens consuming various food imported from foreign countries.

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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

English becoming the most used dialect in the world of developing tourism. This will lead English to become only used in global speech in the opinion of some communities. There are advantages and disadvantages to this situation.

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One of the consequences of improved technology is that many jobs that used to be done by people can now be completed by robots or computers. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The rapid advance of technology now allows computers and robots to perform tasks that previously carried out by people and consequently, generates inevitable threats to those professions. People are divided in opinion about whether the advantages of this phenomenon exceed the disadvantages. This essay will show that the positive impacts do not surpass the setbacks by a couple of reasons.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

People in several places around the globe believe that buying a house is much more beneficial than renting one. After this essay demonstrate that this phenomenon could be caused by two principal reasons, it will vividly show that preferred choice of these people may lead to detrimental situations.

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some people think that robots are very important to humans future development while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society . discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed that robotic machinery is a vital part of technological development while others think that it can have destructive effects on society. I strongly agree with the idea that this machine is one of the finest advances which is created in this era due to its brilliant accuracy and high-fi speed.

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Nowadays, many people send their children to boarding schools so that they can have time to work. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's modern life parents do not have time for their children. As a result, they take the decision to send them to boarding schools. In my ,opinion I think there is more negativity than positivity in the further coming paragraph I shall discuss my point of view.

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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Teaching those days is not as it was before. New rules, new studies and new methods are invented to change the classic old teaching ways to new, interesting ones. Although with all improvements, Homeworks still playing a tricky part in the teaching process. Many of the teachers are calling to stop giving homeworks to student, but on contrary many are arguing that homeworks plays an important role in Children's education. In my opinion,

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countries are becoming more and more simlar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.

The diagram illustrates the process of producing sugar from sugarcane. The process involves seven steps of different lengths and types including growing, crushing, harvesting, purifying etc.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

Music is considered as an international language. Different countries , various cultures have their own unique music types. However different they are, I think that music can bring the whole world together.

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Some people buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having large number of toys ?

It is true that some individuals purchase their sons and daughters a hundreds toys to play with , and though this essay is mostly beneficial, there are also some negative aspects that will also be considered.

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The death penalty is the best form of punishment for people who commit serious crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that death penalty is essential to punish serious criminals while others disagree. I personally think the benefits of this penalty outweigh the disadvantages for our society. In this essay, I will highlight both views and state my personal opinion.

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Many people agree that free public transportation should be available in most major cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this idea?

It is considered by many people that transit should be provided at zero cost to all citizens ,especially in metro cities. Nevertheless, there are some problems associated with it. The below essay will highlight the pros and cons of the given idea.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays some people strangely believe that educating foreign language is very useful in mush more contexts and majors which overshadowed these issues. But everyone thinks, teaching and learning a foreign word just is justifiable and useful for travelling to another country. In the following ,essay we discuss both views.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today

The two maps show the features of Grange Park in 1920 and today respectively.

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Some people think that students in single-sex schools perform better academically. Others, however, believe that mixed schools provide children with better social skills for adult life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It has been a matter of debate whether single-sex schools provide better benefits or mixed schools. Some people claim that single-sex schools’ students are good at academics ,,however some many argue that mixed school students are more sociable leads to better social life.

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Businesses are established with profit motive and their activities are directed towards earning money. Meanwhile, these businesses also have corporate social responsibility towards the community where they exist. I personally believe that the corporate houses should be aware about their roles and responsibilities towards the society.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Music has a long history on our planet. Nowadays some people talk about the topic that music can bring people closer to each other. I would like to express my opinion on this argument below.

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Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the casde?What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?

In these days, travelling is easier and cheaper than before. So more people can travel to wherever they want. This situation has lots of beneficial results. People could develop themselves via travelling.

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some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate school. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed shool.

It argued that boys and girls learn in separate school is better. On the other hand, a lot of people believe that more advantage if both of gender educate together. In this essay i will offer my opinion at the inclusion.

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Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat for healthy diet. Agree / disagree?

It is commonly said that today's children are more vegetarian in comparison to previous years. Because they think that flesh is not necessary for their healthy diets. I disagree with this statement. I personally believe that meat is certainly important for our health.

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