IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 72

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Crime rates, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. Why do you think that is? What can be done to reduce the crime rate?

In most countries, the level of crime is higher than in cities than in villages. This essay will explore the causes of this issue, such as the high level of poverty and the lack of education and will find the ways, like providing highly-educated tutors and opening new workplaces to combat this problem.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed.however,others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments can animal experimentation be justified?Are there any alternatives ?

Nowadays,in this modern world all human beings are doing some sort of experiment in their daily routine life to try something new.Likewise,some people believe that animal testing should be banned while,others people feels that to achieve accurate results in the form of science then animals are the best source of doing expeperimentation in further paragraphs .

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The worldwide population of children aged 15 and younger is rising. What are the current and future advantages and disadvantages for countries with this kind of growth?

Nowadays, the population of youngesters are growing rapidly in all over the world. Currently the merits that children are easily evolving in new advance technology and in coming years it will be considerably increasing through more use of artifical intelligence. Thus, demerits are that they are not engagging with their parents. I will endeavour to shed some light on both points with relevent example.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed. rather than to work for a campany or organization. Why might be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

It is true that more and more people are drwan into the cultural sphere of self-employment, while it defenitely is accompanied by a plethora of advantages, it brings some draw backs along, which should be taken into concideration.

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Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, an only offers practical degree courses that maximize chances of employment. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that courses like medicine and IT engineering should be prioritized over arts related subjects due to the increased university fees and jobs unavailibility after graduating from those departments. This essay will strongly agree with this statement because of the huge demands for those experts in the market and finacial advantages a nation can get from them.

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Research shows that some activities are good for health and others are bad.Despite knowing that millions of people engage in unhealthy activites. What is the cause of this? What can be done?

There are lots of studies showing different activities that are benifical and adverse for our well being, However even after being aware of it lots of people indulge in things that are unhealthy. In the following essay I'll discuss the main reasons behind it and how we can refrain people from doing that.

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view? (frequently repeated topic)

It is true that authorities spend make lot of budget for art. As a result, some people think that, this is the wastage of the money and this money should be spend in those areas where developments will need. I am partially agree with the given statement which will discussed below.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Several individuals think that we should get along with the problems that face us in our lives as getting unsatisfine postion or lack of money. While there are other people who refuse this concept and see that we have to find solutions to enhence these deterrents. In my opinion both notions are right but we should occered wistly to reach the best.

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Many people think that libraries are essential for society. Others, however, disagree and say that it is more practical to access information on computers, while libraries are a waste of money and resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, It is an undeniable fact that development of library has always been a debatable issue in a community. Some people believe that libraries are must for a society to grow, whereas others think that technology can replace this issue. In this essay, I will talk about both the views, and going to favour the former statement.

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Research shows that some activities are good for health and others are bad.Despite knowing that millions of people engage in unhealthy activites. What is the cause of this? What can be done?

Studies display that some habits and activites are beneficial for health , while others are damaging . There are many people that contribute in variant unhealthy actions . This can be caused by many issues and many terms must be applied .

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More and more companies allow their employees to work from home or “remotely” rather than going into an office each day. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

Majority of corporations give a chance to their workers to complete there tasks online by staying at home.Hence, this could have some pros and cons .But according to me,the overall benefits are likely to be greater the the drawbacks.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think advantages of driverless vehicle outweigh the disadvantages

In the upcoming years the autmobile industry will be fully automated.As a result,individuals using cars and buses will only sit on the side and could enjoy the ride. This will give them plenty of time to enjoy and observe the ambient of the surrondings and allow more time to do other activites during their traveling. According to me this could have more advantageous.Some of the benifits of this are elaborated in the following paragraphs .

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Studies have shown that in many countries the income gap be tween the rich and poor is ever increasing. What problems can arise from this situation and what could be done to address this situation?

In this century, human beings are in race to earn more money than others. Some studies shows that the difference between income of rich and poor folks in many countries is rapidly increasing. This essay will examine the problems caused by this trend and some measurements to tackle.

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Studying abroad is thought by many students to be the best way to get a good education. On the other hand, On the other hand, some students believe that studying in another country has many drawbacks. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, international study has gained unprecedented attention. Some people agree that studying abroad brings great benefits to students, while others argue that it may do more harm than good. In this essay, I will discuss both views before concluding that I am on the prior side.

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Every one of us should became vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems.to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays every human being's are trying to be healthier to avoid health problems. In upcoming paragraphs I will discuss what are the benefits and drawbacks of being vegetarian and also for non- vegetarian persons even though how they indulge in different health issues by being so

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(XADA) Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, it has become very common for children to spend several hours a day on their smartphones. This is mainly due to easy access to digital content and the increasing role of technology in daily life. In this essay opinion, this is a negative development that can harm children's physical and mental well-being.

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(SS)Some believe that students should begin learning a language very early in school,while others think these subjects be taught later.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Today,there is an ongoing discussion that while a large number of individuals think that students should start learning new language at an earlier time in school, others believe it might be postponed to learn later.Due to stronger mind, it is useful for students to learn at younger age,however some educators prefer teaching other subjects than a language.I will discuss both perspectives in the following paragraps before presenting my own opinion.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as Sahara desert or Antarctica what are the benefits and the disadvantages of going there.

In this diverse country, human beings want to explore all around the world where they haven't been before. There are many places where survival is very difficult for example in the Sahara desert or Antarctica but people want to travel in these places. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of visiting those places.

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Some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than local when they visit cultural and tourist attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree with this view?

It is true that tourism plays an indispensable role in the economic growth of any country. Therefore, some individuals have a firm belief that tourists should be charged more when they are visiting any tourist attraction of any country. However, I disgree with this notion because I believe that it promotes the ineqality among tourists and restrict them to visit these costly nations which automatically worsen the econimic situation of any country.

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Some people believe that the government should help the unemployed or just laid off from work on a weekly basis. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion

There are many individuals who claim that the authorities must offer support to jobless society in their daily lives, at the same time, even employee is fired. In fact, I strongly agree that the government should give a hand to the unemployed for two determined consequences.

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