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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as unemployed and homeless people. do you agree or disagree?

In this modern era, the world is changing a lot as compared to the past and unemployment is the biggest problem nowadays. Some people believe that it is government's social duty to take care of the people who don't have home and job. This esaay will discuss why it is superior if the country's authority will take of disadvantaged people.

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some people think that having a set retirement age for everybody , regardless of occupation is unfair. they believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an early age. do you agree or disagree? which type of workers do you thinkhould benefit from early retirement? GIVE REASONS FOR YOUR ANSWER AND INCLUDE ANY RELEVANT EXAMPLE FROM YOUR OWN KNOWLEDGE OR EXperience

Rertirement at a right age is vital decision by authorities. Some people opine that this should be based on the work whilst others have contrast viewpoint. Although everyone should retire at a certain age, I believe workers who work in difficult labour jobs should relief early.

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Nowadays, many people use the Internet to get medical advice instead of going to see a doctor. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is undeniable that the majority of people prefer to get information about their illnesses online. This essay will analyze this negative trend, possible terrible causes of this and some aftermaths using relevant examples.

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Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

A lot of nations are offering salaried jobs to children. While some people believe that this step is good for them, few are worried and think that it is not appropriate. I agree that working at a younger stage not only help children to develop new professional skills but also makes them more clever and disciplined. This essay will outline the advantages children have if they start working at an early age.

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Fresh Water has always been a limited Resources in some parts of the world. Today, However, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. what are the causes of the increased demand and what measures can government and individuals take to respond to this problem,

It is an irrefutable fact that the level of pure water is drcreasing at alarming rate in most of the countries in the globe. Which make It a global issue. There are number of reasons responsibile for this problem. In this essay, I would shed light on the major causes and try to give some reasonable solutions in following paragraphs.

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some believe that charitable organisations should help people no matter where they live. others argue that charities should only help those living in the country where the charity is based? discuss both views and give your opinion?

Welfare trusts and establishments play an incredible role in terms of serving poor and needy by providing adequate financial and emotional support. As result of which, a few individuals contend that such organisations should equally aid people without any discrimination on the basis of country, language and religion. However, others insist that they should only help their regional population. This essay will decipher both the claims prior to any feasible conclusion, along with particular premise.

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Some people suggest that international news should be studied as a subject in secondary school. however, others say that it will be a wastage of valuable school time? discuss both views and give your opinion?

It is undeniable to say that the educational institutes have been playing an incredible role to educate the students. The school curriculum is jam-packed with a plethora of courses. Remarkable individuals advocate that worldwide newscast should be made obligatory in educational institutions. Whereas a few opine that it is solely a wastage of academic hours. This essay will explore both the viewpoints prior to any feasible conclusion.

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In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development??

In the world of globalization, people are concerned about themselves more and more from the past two decades,especially who are living in metropolitan areas. Whereas, believe that,this trend could have both positive and negative impact on the society which, i will discuss further.

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Government investment in arts, such as music and theater, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or dis agree?

In every year budgeting, Indian government is allotting some share of profit to the arts and culture, this is common in all the countries.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive development or a negative development?

There has been an increase in number of shopping malls recently which results in closure of small businesses. Now it is a trend that shoppers like to buy several items from one place and I think it is beneficial and will state reasons for my opinion in this essay.

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People think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The process diagram depicts the life cycle of Salmon in approximately 10 years, additionally their length during this period.

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Genetic engineering is a dangerous trend. It should be limited. To what extent do you agree?

Genetic engineering has long history. Today everybody is highly dependent on it. Especially when we discuss about health, environment. In fact, we can not imagine life without of it. Human community as well as other living things enjoying lot's of benefits. However, it is serious threst to a complete community.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and if so, how?

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

A part of the population believe that the funds allocated by the government on the arts should be spent in other areas. I totally agree with this people. In my opinion, the money given to art should be reallocated because programs such as education and health need improvements, also because the tax revenue is falling so money should not be wasted.

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Some people believe that the government should spend more money putting in more works of art like paintings and statues in cities to make them better places to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

To agree or Disagree with the statement whether the state should spend more capital on the arts and structures to improve the living pl is an important issue. putting the discussion on wider context, many people agree to the statement that the government should spend more money to make cities more attractive by spending money on arts and crafts. i wholeheartedly believe that the government should focus on the other aspects which are more important to provide better and safe place for living. First, I will share some thoughts to support my side. followed by some aspects against that will be presented.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed paper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is an irrefutable fact that internet plays a significant role to learn new material in today' time. It is believed by some that in upcoming years people will avoid to parchase hard copies to books or paper because these all will avialable on internet at free of cost. I agree with this statement. In this essay, I would shed light on both sides.

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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Lately, there has been an increase in the number of people who prefer to read e books instead of paper books. In my opinion I believe, that the benefits of read electronic books outweigh its drawback.

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Some educationalists think that a programme of international exchange visits will offer various benefits for teenage school students. Do you think the advantages of it outweigh the disadvantages?

The two pie charts compare, how the government spent money on art and education in 1995 and 2005. The bar chart reveals, the number of participants in Art events in the same years.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays one’s self-worth is measured by such capitalism -infused values as position in social hierarchy and material wealth, while essential characteristics, like integrity and compassion seem to have faded into the background. Thus, it is important to state, that despite the hardships of the reality, humans should remain humane. This essay is aimed to support the introduced view point with relevant arguments.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customer travels to large shopping centre and mall to do shopping. Is it a positive or negative development?

The field of commerce plays crucial role in people's daily life. While the number of trade centers and outlets experience a sustainable growth, other small trade points have been closing. I believe that this trend has more benefits than demerits and in this essay I will provide reasons to support my viewpoint.

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