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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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More and more people are suffering from health problem caused by modern life style which cannot be treated with modern well science some people think that return to traditiin medicine should be encouraged? To what extent do you agree or disgree?

It is undeniable that advancement in each sector enhanced the sedentary lifestyle, which results in acquiring various diseases and health issues. Numerous personnel believe that the adoption of ancient medical treatment would be more beneficial to tackling modern issues. In my, opinion both modern and Vedic sciences are equally important and cannot overweight each other.

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In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them

In some regions, the average body mass index of its Citizens is on the rise and their state of wellness and agility is reducing. This essay will discuss that one major cause of this problem is their poor nutritional habit and the most viable solution is providing awareness on the importance of adequate diet intake as it concerns their health.

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. to what extent do you agree or disagree

Some folks opine that using social news sites for instance Facebook provides a negatory influence on society. However, I completely disagree, with this notion. This essay intends to explicate my views by taking instances to demonstrate points and prove arguments.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Convenience food and beverages are increasingly becoming popular among. The high sugar level in these products can have adverse effects on people’ health which result in some diseases such as diabetes and obesity. The opponents argue there should be a significant rise in the price of them due to prevent people from consuming them. In my view, I entirely agree with this perspective and the following paragraphs examine the reasons provided to support this thesis.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation.

It is sometime thought that it is good to receive bad situation for example unsuitable job or shortage of money and other feel that it is better to change this situation.In this essay I agree that individuals should try to improve their condition.

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Nowadays museums and historical sites are mainly visited by foreign tourists instead of locals. Why is this happening? What can be done to get the locals to visit museums and historical sites more?

In recent years international tourists are more likely to visit museums and historical sites than locals. This is because of lack of interest and offering free entry in a week and exhibitions could solve this problem.

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Nowadays more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?

These days people use technology for every move, especially for communicating. There are two sides of using it, one side has some pros like speed, global reach or time saving. While, the other side has more cons like loss of connection, lack of self-confidence in a real meeting or addiction to technology. ThisIn this essay will discussbe discussed both sides of this topic.

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people naturally resist making cahnges in their lives. what kind of problems can this cause ? what solutions can you suggest.

People are always frightened to make a decision in their life if they have no experience with this before. Additionally, as human nature, they don’t want to feel insecure and have no confidence to meet with new environments like new society, new jobs, etc. Undoubtedly they are still so stubborn to change and want to be stable in their lives without any ambitions. Then, all of this could cause much trouble. This essay will first explore several problems of this issue, then examine possible, solutions and finally, evaluate those solutions.

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Some cities ban private cars from entering the centre and force people to use bicycle and buses. Do the advantages of this police outweigh the disadvantage

Some cities ban private cars from entering the centre and force people to use bicycle and buses. Do the advantages of this police outweigh the disadvantage?

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Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

There is no doubt that people choose to continue their education to get better job offers in the future. However, I believe that there are more significant advantages which will be dicussed below.

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If some people get a chance to choose between life without work in spending most of the time working, then they would choose not to work. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued by many that if the masses are given a chance to select life without work, then they tend not to show their interest in work. I completely disagree with the statement stated above, and in this essay, I will state the reasons from my view.

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Some people think that it is a very good idea to bring your family when you have to travel overseas to study or work. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages? What is your opinion?

It is often considered few masses argue that it is better to travel with your close ones while going to various places in the world for different purposes like work or study. In my, inclined peoples get fewer opportunities while travelling overseas, thus they should make it memorable by taking their family along with them. Thus this essay will elaborate on the positive sides which lead to a logical conclusion.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisement tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

If city livers want to get a bit of peace and quiet, they can go to a park and satisfy with nature, bird’s songs and maybe sounds of river flow. For people who want to work in quiet place the best decision is a library. Usually there is a “No noise” rule. And one more place to find a peace is a church. Special place and it’s not for everyone, but people can to be by themselves there.

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Fast food is becoming one part of life everywhere:this has bad effect on our lifestyle and diet. To what extent agree or disagree.

People have created several aim facilitate for yourself lifestyle they use fast food a lot because they went they do not cook meal as well as do not spend a lot of time use foodstuff it is agree or disagree will discussed in the essay.

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Many people believe that good planning is the key factor to success in life, while others believe that other factors like hard work or luck are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is said that there are a variety of factors which lead to a successful life. Some believe that the major reason is to have perfect planning, while some argue that other reasons, such as hard work and luck are much more crucial. However, I entirely concur with the latter statement based on hardworking

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What are advantage and disadvantages of immigration?

There are many negative and positive reasons for immigrating. Progressing at the job is an advantage and increasing psychological issues is a disadvantage. Initially , some people leave their country to find a better job moreover the new position is accepted by the employer. Having good facilities in life might bring about a growing request for jobs. For ,example Canadian government find that any people who send a document to apply are willing to have positions in this country's company. This person not only has the best job but also an increased salary. In the past ,years some people who have unemployment on the other and want to immigrate to Canada were successful in this plan. On the other disadvantage has some reasons.some of them who are immigrants might have many psychological issues . University oxford finds that after 2 years in emigrate, raising mind issues about 30% of these people . Moreover not only faring this family but al...

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Do you think people notice how advertisements influence their decisions?

The table illustrates the percentage of six different categories of less-privileged families in Australia in the year 1999. Overall, poverty was the most popular issue among single parents and single people with no children were the second highest affected group, in contrast,the aged couple category was least affected by poverty.

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Some people claim that the government should provide free health care. Others think that the government will not provide the most innovative methods of treatment and it’s better to invest those funds in education and culture. What is your opinion?

It is said that the authority ought to invest in the healthcare sector and provide free of charge medical services to citizens, whereas some argue that the expenditure should use for the protection of local culture and education. However, I entirely concur with the former statement based on the ageing population and the emergence of the "Super Virus".

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To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?

In today's world, the population grow up fast. The needs of food also grow spontaneously with the population. As to support the huge amount of population, some countries are trying to make use of edible insect as food source. For having insect as food source, there are more goods than harms for the world.

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Water scarcity is a serious in many countries. What are the causes of this？And what solutions can be done by individuals and the government

Nowaday many nations are facing with water crisis.In this essay i will discous both the reasons and solutions to alleviate this phenomenon

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