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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people today prefer to get advice for medical problems from the internet and do not want to visit a doctor. Why is this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

The more popular the internet is, the more people refer to it to seek the information for any health issue without going to hospital. This essay will outline several reasons why this is, and personally I believe it is not a good way to have a health check-up online.

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Since science and technology are becoming more and more important in modern society, schools should spend more time on teaching these subjects rather on arts and humanities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It can be claimed that in the modern world technologies are intruding into our lives more and more. We are literally surrounded by them. We use our gadgets to reach many different goals, move by modern various vechicles like cars with some futuristic options or some kinds of electric transport.

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Scientists predict that in the future cars will be driven by computers. What are the reasons behind this? Is it a positive or negative development?

In this cutting edge era, it is estimated to replicate the automobiles with artificial intelligence methods. This essay shall delve into narration the worthwhile impact of this innovation in this world.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “When people succeed, it is entirely because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with their success.” Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

Successful always considered due to persistent effort. However, it is said that people reach the achievement without fortune. In this essay, I will discuss why I partially agree with this statement.

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Nowadays, people have little awareness of the importance of the natural world. What are the reasons and how can people learn more about the natural world?

In recent times, individual have small knowledge of the relevance of the natural world there are various reasons do this which include increasing death rate affects and the effects of pollution and an individuals can be taught more through the social media and government creating more awareness.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them to learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowedt o use to teach good behavior to children?

Children are like sponges always ready to absorb new information always under the assumption they are learning something valuable and the onus is on us adults to teach them the value of questioning and differentiation between facts and data. However, there is a fine line between good punishment and bad punishment even guardians are not able to distinguish them. I will present my views on punishing kids.

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Many working people get little or no exercise during the working day or in their free time, and hand health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Working in a busy place have no time to do exercise result which will cause problems in health. In this, essay I will share my opinion.

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Many small, local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with large supermarkets in the area. What problems do it creates? How could this situation be improved?

In today's globalised world in many megapolises hippermarkets replase local small shops. Because they can not compete with supermarkerts. It greats different problems in cities. In this essey some aspects of this issue will be elaborated and I will try to give explanation for this problem.

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The most effective way to make crime rates go down is by giving the police more power. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is a common belief that making the police have more power is not the most effective way to decrease crime rates. People who think in that way would say that campaigns or education will be a more effective way to let crime rates decline. However, there is a more persuasive argument that giving the police more power is the most effective way to prevent crime.

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More and more people today are b drinking sugar based drinks. What are causes? And solution.

In this day and out, Coca-Cola's other beverages are increased drastically in population. They show off their social status and are motivated by the role model celebraties. which would detroits their health. The possible reason for this new trend as well as some feasible solutions will discuss in detail

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These days many people prefer online shopping to conventional shopping.What are the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping

In this modern age, there are more and more businesses that are turning to e-commerce or online shopping. It has proved to be a hit as nowadays,many people prefer online shopping to conventional shopping. However, online shopping has both its pros and cons. They will be elaborated further below.

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The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The authority is the body which handles the country. There are different governments for different nations and hence on daily basis there is news of conflicts. In such circumstances an idea of having one government for the entire world as compared to an individual authority for every nation. I will discuss benefits and drawbacks with pertinent arguments in upcoming paragraphs and thus will lead to a logical conclusion at last.

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The world today is a safer place than it was a hundred years ago, and governments should stop spending large amounts of money on their armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is inevitable that the world has fewer wars compared to the old time in most regions. However, the shortage of natural resources as well as religious issues are undergoing which could potentially foster wars. I personally disagree with the suggestion of a nation to stop supporting its armed forces, since it could put them into vulnerable situations.

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Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? ________________________________________

There is an army of people who believes that individuals who have early career plans and stick at it tend to have more satisfying career lives than one of whom change their jobs on a daily basis. As far as this argument goes, I am not in favour of the aforementioned stance for the following reasons.

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Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this day and age, our means of communication In this day and age, our means of communication has changed significantly because of electronical inventions such as email and messaging. People have various opinions with regard to the question of whether communicating electronically has detrimental effects on people's social lives or vice versa. Personally, I disagree with this statement because I believe that modern communications benefit people's socializing.

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Some think that ambition is a good quality. Is it important to be ambitious? Is it a positive or negative characteristic? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In our, life we need to achieve what we want we need to think about our future and how we take our ambition. Always we need to think about how we reach our goal. In this ,essay I will agree with the statement.

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some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled.they say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. to what extant do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

In Our modern society as the population grow more crisis’s are born. Nowadays the waste From homes is a major problem in big cities so, we use our technology to recycle them.

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People argue that team sports should be a part of the school time able for children rather than individual sports such as swimming or running. Do you agree or disagree?

Sports activity is a must activity in schools. This is one of the activity that helps students to gain physical and mental strength. Thus, this helps them to get more benefits in later times such as, graduation, jobs and so on.

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Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students sports activities as they allocate to their libraries. To what extent do you agree with this view

In today’s world, the idea of spend money to students sports activities has been a contribute issue for individuals . As far as l am concerned, there are many advantage for spend money for students exercise. I am agree with this subject . The illustration of these reasons is provided below .

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children aree facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and waht measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

Recently, there has been growing concern about the stress from the children due to the higher level of competition in different dimensions, and it is able to lead to severe mental illness. Some people agree that there are a number of factors causing the pressure on children such as education and parental expectation. Therefore, this essay will identify two reasons and solutions for the issues.

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