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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Is money or job satisfaction more important to consider when choosing a career?

The argument when money or job satisfaction go first highly depends of the age of individuals regardless of the career they choose from. Although, it is clear that there are some professions which are better paid than others, it is the experience that determines how well paid a candidate can get.

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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Food has been considered the fuel of human beings and, with water, it is the most important element to survive. Moreover, it is becoming a central topic of discussion in our society because nowadays the quality of food is decreased due to overfarming of animals and crops. Thus, it is agreed in the educational system that students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. This essay analyses the importance of a deep understanding of this topic in our society, which has to be considered at the same level as other subjects, and the approach of countries that already have given importance to this topic.

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Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree

Technology is improving globally. Technology will help students in learning and understanding in a faster ways we can ever think of. Technology also helps students to have access to different knowledge. The use of internet has served as a means of sensitisation and also a means of improving learning in the world.

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As a result of electronic inventions such as the computer and television, people do less physical activity, and this is having a negative effect on their health.

Cause of modern technologies, people stopped doing physical activities, therefore this is having a negative implications on their liveliness. As far as i am concern, people's health is major thing but without new inventions our life might be more difficultly, furthermore I agree with point that modern technologies not all the time can harm people's liveliness.

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Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives. What are the reasons for this? How can this problem be overcome?

Many individuals struggle to have a balance between work and their casual life. The main causes are working long hours and competition with colleagues. The most viable solutions are making a timetable and setting priorities in their life.

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Many think that religion should be taught in schools while others think it should be avoided. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there is an increasing number of arguments that religious education should be promoted , while others believe it should be prevented. In my opinion, the study of religion should be stopped leading to class conflicts and misbehaving.this essay will discuss both notions.

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The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is widely acknowledged by people that participating in sports at school is the best way to educate children to be cooperative in their daily lives. I personally do not stand for this assumption since nowadays pupils can easily learn it from movies. Besides, the fact that not every child is eager to do activity that needs physical ability like sports should be considered.

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These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

With the increase of careers women have switched the household roles which are inclined to be done by mothers, but lately, it has been also undertaken by fathers. This essay will elucidate in detail some reasons for this trend, and I reckon this has brought a new positive perspective for a family.

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The health benefits of physical activities are well known. Despite this, many people do not exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to encourage them exercise regularly?

Physical exercises have been said to improve health. Although this is well known by people, still others pay little attention to a daily workout routine. This essay will discuss the causes and possible solutions to this matter.

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some employers offer their employees subsided membership of gyms and sports club.believing that it will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work.Others see no benefit in doing so.Discuss both views and give your opinion

Few entrepreneurs to make their workers stronger and healthier, give them a good opportunity to start being a member in different sport centers, gyms and clubs. However, employees are divided into two groups, part of which think that it will not impact well and the second one is not against about it. This essay will discuss such kind of decision of employers and I will make my own point of view about it.

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People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?

In this day and age, individuals take sufficient sleep in their life span as compared to the past. Because of the latest technology and such as mobile phones and has many Detroit effects on their health. I will articulate their causes and give feasible reasons for this new trend in individuals.

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Some people today prefer to get advice for medical problems from the internet and do not want to visit a doctor. Why is this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

The more popular the internet is, the more people refer to it to seek the information for any health issue without going to hospital. This essay will outline several reasons why this is, and personally I believe it is not a good way to have a health check-up online.

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Since science and technology are becoming more and more important in modern society, schools should spend more time on teaching these subjects rather on arts and humanities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It can be claimed that in the modern world technologies are intruding into our lives more and more. We are literally surrounded by them. We use our gadgets to reach many different goals, move by modern various vechicles like cars with some futuristic options or some kinds of electric transport.

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Scientists predict that in the future cars will be driven by computers. What are the reasons behind this? Is it a positive or negative development?

In this cutting edge era, it is estimated to replicate the automobiles with artificial intelligence methods. This essay shall delve into narration the worthwhile impact of this innovation in this world.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “When people succeed, it is entirely because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with their success.” Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

Successful always considered due to persistent effort. However, it is said that people reach the achievement without fortune. In this essay, I will discuss why I partially agree with this statement.

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Nowadays, people have little awareness of the importance of the natural world. What are the reasons and how can people learn more about the natural world?

In recent times, individual have small knowledge of the relevance of the natural world there are various reasons do this which include increasing death rate affects and the effects of pollution and an individuals can be taught more through the social media and government creating more awareness.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them to learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowedt o use to teach good behavior to children?

Children are like sponges always ready to absorb new information always under the assumption they are learning something valuable and the onus is on us adults to teach them the value of questioning and differentiation between facts and data. However, there is a fine line between good punishment and bad punishment even guardians are not able to distinguish them. I will present my views on punishing kids.

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Many working people get little or no exercise during the working day or in their free time, and hand health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Working in a busy place have no time to do exercise result which will cause problems in health. In this, essay I will share my opinion.

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Many small, local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with large supermarkets in the area. What problems do it creates? How could this situation be improved?

In today's globalised world in many megapolises hippermarkets replase local small shops. Because they can not compete with supermarkerts. It greats different problems in cities. In this essey some aspects of this issue will be elaborated and I will try to give explanation for this problem.

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The most effective way to make crime rates go down is by giving the police more power. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is a common belief that making the police have more power is not the most effective way to decrease crime rates. People who think in that way would say that campaigns or education will be a more effective way to let crime rates decline. However, there is a more persuasive argument that giving the police more power is the most effective way to prevent crime.

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