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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online ?

Online retail business has witnessed a boom over the last decade and now a days, a growing number of people are shopping from online stores instead of purchasing from physical stores. The major benefits of online shopping for customer are the convenience and time saving and for companies it saves millions of dollars that were spent in the past on the construction of stores. However, online shopping has drawbacks as well in the form of online fraud for both the customer and the vendor.

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Education in financial management should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.

It is generally accepted by a plethora of people around the world that schools are the basic foundation to learn innovative things and they are an imperative part of everyone's life, which aids us to build our professional and personal growth. It is often claimed that the knowledge to deal with financial management must be an incumbent component, that should be taught to children since childhood in schools.

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Some people think that children would benefit if they attend nursery school before primary school while some people think that children should stay all day with their families. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Nuresry school is an important primary school for kids to learn the basic things at an early stage. According to the survey kids who attend the primary school are well mannered when compared to the kids who stay all day with the families. According to my point of view, kids should be sent to nursery schools to enhance their skills right from the starting of their education.

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Some cities create extra housing by building tall buildings. Other cities do this by building on wide areas of land. Which do you think is the best solution to the problem of housing?

More than half of the world`s population lives in cities and that number is growing. This rapid influx of people creates challenges, such as extra housing. From my point of view, building tall edifices is the best solution of the problem of housing.

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Some people believe that all children should learn a foreign language from the time they start school while others believe it is better to wait until a child is at secondary school. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

It is argued that the children start learning foreign languages in schooling itself. This essay totally agrees with the statement of learning foreign language in schooling. Many people have recommended to learn other than native languages at earlier stage. It keeps children motivate to learn new skills.

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Some people feel that exams are a good way of accessing the students .Other people feel that they put stress on the young learners and tell us very little about the students' abilities. Discuss both the views and tell us your opinion

Some people feel that exams are a good way of accessing the students .Other people feel that they put stress on the young learners and tell us very little about the students' abilities. Discuss both the views and tell us your opinion.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Nowadays, working environment is moving so fast, some people think that self-employment is better than work for a corportation. In this essay, I will consider what might cause and the drawbacks of being self-employed.

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People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic. You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, many people often argue the best way to decrease the number of crime. Some believe in longer sentences, while others insist of different methods such as capital punishment. This essay will examine reasons of both arguments and my opinion regarding this topic.

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Violence in the society is largely promoted by violence shown in media. Th what extend do you agree?

In today’s world the spread of information or the awareness of the news is largely depended on media. Although, media communicates tumultuous world of today to viewers, it would even exaggerates in different way. In my opinion I moderately agree with statement that violence in society is promoted by rampage shown in media.

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The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today we are living in the world of competition where everybody is trying hard to achieve some goal. While doing this, few things matters like your passion, physical, mental health and goal. Majority of people working hard for quality lifestyle and job satisfaction which give them great life experience. Higher income allows them do take real taste of like for instance they can travel around the world, buy anything and have a luxurious life.

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Some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones. Is this a positive development or a negative one?

In most countries the usage of mobile phones are limited in educational institutions. Although these devices can play a significant role in safety, connectedness and even in learning. In my point of view this is a positive step and can bring benefits not only academic but also physical and social aspects too.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. What might this be the case? What could be the advantages if being self employed?

These days people want to become their own owner to earn more and live freely from hardship of the job.There are various advantages as being the head of their own business.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

We had entered in the twenty first century , even today around fifty percent of the world population remains below poverty . Even today developed or developing countries has significant percentage of poor people and each of these countries have different legislation of dealing with poverty. This essay will outline the some reasons of the poverty and will suggest the ways of overcoming the same.

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Many famous sports players advertise products. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development.

These days, several renowned sports persons have started advertising many products at national and international level. The advantages of this trend includes publicity of goods which are new in the market and extra income to athletes. However, there are plethora of disadvantages that includes loss of focus among sports people and could also lead to promotion of wrong items in the market. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of this notion in detail along with relevant examples.

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Government should reduce their investment in arts, music and painting. Agree or disagree.

These days, the government spend a large part of its budget on arts, music and painting. Many people argue that the money spends on it should be decreased in the amount. I disagree with this statement and believe that it is as important as spending on other services. There are various reasons that support, the government should not decrease the amount of budget allocated to these areas. Firstly, arts, music and painting help to give a glimpse of a country's culture and traditions to tourists and young people of the country. It is true that earning from such exhibitions and promotions are really low to support its survival, therefore, without the help of the authorities, the survival of such theatres is impossible. For instance, museums in New Zealand are fully financially supported by the government and people can visit these places without any charges. As a result majority of tourists visit these places and learn about their culture and traditions. Additionally, for many people...

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Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Today many people consider abortions must be allowed while others, mostly conservative, feel it should be prohibited. Some go as far as to suggest severe punishments for the act. I'm of a belief that abortions should be made legal until of course, it's safe for the mother and the baby is in the early gestation cycle.

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When cars and cyclists use the same roads, there are often problems. Why is this the case? What are the solutions?

Roads are the prominant medium of the transportation, they connect all cities across the country. Highways and freeways are particulary for high capacity vehicals, but when it comes to the main roads in the suburbs, they are shared by everyone including cyclists. Use of same road by the cyclists and other vehicals like cars sometimes may cause problems. This essay will dicuss reasons of the issue and the potential solutions for the problems.

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Some people think the qualities a person needs to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institution.To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Some people are of the opinion that the assets of a successful person cannot be gotten from curriculums in casual universities or indifferent courses. While it is true that there are lots of qualities a pupil cannot learn from schools, I strongly disagree with this statement, mostly because of the lectures and the other skills that schools probably provide to students.

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Some people think zoos should be illegal. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The given picture gives an account of the mechanism that takes place to produce electricity in a hydroelectric power station.

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The average level of people's health is likely to be on the lower side in the near future than it is now. This essay completely agrees with the statement mentioned above because the water pollution is increasing significantly and also, teenagers are diverting to online games rather than physical games.

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