IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 739

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crimes is to apply longer prison sentences, other people think that there are better methods of doing so. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is a debatable issue in society the leading way to mitigate offences is to keep the offenders in jail for a long period or whether there are other where techniques to do this;however, I strongly accord with the latter view and will discuss my consideration along with another viewpoint in upcoming paragraphs.

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some organisations believe that their employeea shuld dress smartly. Other value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

The bricks have been made by various processes to become useful in the construction industry.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture information about Grange Park in the past and right now.

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The barchart illustrates the volume of complaints received in 2019 in millions.

Figure 1 shows the volume of complaints received in 2019 H1 compared to previous periods. Excluding complaints made about PPI, the volume of complaints received decreased by 6% between 2018 H2 and 2019 H1. This is the lowest volume of complaints received and the largest decrease in the volume of non-PPI-related related complaints between two reporting periods since 2016 H2.

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Many businesses in the world today are run by family members. Do the advantages of family-run businesses outweigh the disadvantages.

Title: Evaluating the Pros and Cons of Family-Run Businesses

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show a park called Grange Park, which the differences between when it was opened in 1920 and how the park now is.

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While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that the deforestation has more devastating impact to our world.

Nowadays, many believe that global warming is currently the most alarming environmental issue. Others, however, argue that the effects of deforestation are much more severe. This essay will discuss both views before coming to the conclusion that both of these phenomena are posing a huge threat to all living beings on Earth.

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

In many countries, they lay more emphasis on gender equality, and many experts opine that all kinds of educational institutions ought to allow a similar amount of men and women pupils in every kind of subject. I totally agree with the given statement due to particular reasons as well as the following expository paragraphs will expatiate both stances with lucid examples.

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Some people think that schools should give prizes for academic successes. Others argue that it is more important for schools to give prizes for other achievements (for example, for sports, music and behaviour). Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Several parents have suggested that prizes should be awarded for academic success, while others disagree, arguing that prizes should be given to other achievements instead. I will further discuss these views below and formulate my personal judgement on the matter.

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Scientists say that junk food is harmful to people’s health. Some say the way to ask people to eat less fast food is to educate them, while others say education does not work. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is irrefutable that junk food is harmful to people’s health. It contains a lot of fats and salts which are detrimental to health. Therefore some people say that people should be educated and made aware of its harmful effects. However, others opine that education does not help in making people eat less junk food. In the following paragraphs I intend to discuss both issues and finally give my opinion.

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One of the most widely discussed issues nowadays is various problems, such as polutions of air and water caused by the influence of the tourism industry.

One of the most widely discussed issues nowadays is various problems, such as polutions of air and water caused by the influence of the tourism industry. Thus, people think that the state of each country ought to enact supplementary taxes on air travels and accomodation in order to limit today's tourism area. Personally, I definetely disagree with this affirmation and believe that governments should find another desicions to solve this kind of problems.

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Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, it creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowaday we can travel to another country more comfortable rather than in the past. The choices of vehicles are various and we don’t take much time to commute. Tourism industry becomes popular and many countries have this industry as the main income of the country such as Thailand. Because of many tourists have several cultures that may lead to some conflicts between people. In my opinion I don’t feel like it’s a problem, but it’s the opportunities to learn new things from each other.

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Some people argue that teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them. Others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the contemporary era, there is an ongoing debate about whether youngsters’ development is better taught in group or individually. This essay contends that effective learning method not only just focus on children intelligence separately but also require interactions with each pupil such as club discussion, class projects and teamwork, offering collaboration that significantly give positive impacts to their characters and mentalities. Thus, teacher should consider teaching-method interactively so the lessons can give magnified experiences to all individuals.

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experts say that older people were happier and healthier in the past as they had more exercises and spent more time with their friends. What are the causes of this and what are the potential solutions?

In today’s society, people’s lonely feeling are increasing is a perhaps unavoidable phenomenon almost countries in this contemporary life. Lack of exercise time and economic pressure are the most prevailing ones drive a considerable number of young folks feel unhappiness.

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Some pepole say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and becom disciplined. Others argue that teenagers should not sacrifice their rest and after-school activities to work . Discusee both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals believe that working half-time and earning money can benefit teenagers. They will learn the fundamentals of work and become regulated. While others proclaim that teenagers should not forgo their rest and extra activities to work. In this essay, I will look at both sides of the argument and give my opinion.

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people naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems of problems can this cause? Whats solutions you can suggest?

It is considered that people avoid changes in their lives.In this essay i will discuss problems connected with the statement and will propose some solutions to solve this problem.

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Some people believe that professional workers such as doctors and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Salary is an issue that many people have strong opinions about, and the pay gap between top entertainers and sports stars on the one hand, and professionals in vital service sectors such as medicine and education on the other, have been quite controversial for sometime now. However, I personally think that, except in certain cases, the latter the group do not necessarily deserve higher pay than the former. One reason is that the cash flow of service sectors is significantly lower than that of sports and entertainment industries. People willingly spend trillions of dollars every year buying tickets to sports matches, concerts and movies, while the revenue in service sectors like education or medicine originates mainly from households in need of their services. And even then, those services have to be provided at a discount to guarantee proper access for all citizens regardless of their financial status. This means that the funds available to service providers like doctors ...

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Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. Do you agree or disagree

Informational technologies destroyed or going to destroy a lot of traditional forms of knowledge sharing and keeping - classic university classes, newspapers, printed books, encyclopedias and etc. That is why there is very popular public opinion on the problem of public libraries funding. They say that there is no need to maintain financially public libraries because Internet, electronic libraries and computers replaced them.

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Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the citizens. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

As this is the era of global warming, environmental care is of utmost importance. Today, through this platform, I am given a chance of expressing my thoughts on who should be responsible to look after the environment. There are two schools of thought, one says that the government should be active in taking measures to secure it. On the other hand, the second is linked to the people. According to this, people should individually be working.

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Some people claim that it is acceptable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings, while others argue that it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Globally, the animals are the first victims of trials before a new drug arrives on the market. Because of this reason, many individuals feel that is cruel whereas others believe it is essential for humans and their safety. I completely agree with the latter notion and will explain both sides with reasons and examples.

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