IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 739

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Nowadays, more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, As the world continues to undergo rapid changes, people tend to prefer fast alterntives that enable them to accomplish their tasks rapidly. Food is no different. For many people, purchasing ready meal much easier and less time-consuming. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why many people would rather eat-out to cook at home, and some of the challenges to be overcome.

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Research shows that business meeting, discussion and training are happening online nowadays.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantage?

According to the recent ,research it has been observed that most of the company meetings and employment trainings are happening online these days. No doubt this approach brings many benefits to individuals like a decline in traffic and saving transportation time. ,However this idea also minimizes the in-person gathering.

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“Có người cho rằng tăng trưởng kinh tế là cách duy nhất để chấm dứt đói nghèo, trong khi những người khác lại cho rằng tăng trưởng kinh tế đang hủy hoại môi trường nên phải dừng lại. Thảo luận về cả hai quan điểm và đưa ra ý kiến của bạn.”

Phát triển kinh tế giải quyết được nhiều vấn đề đói nghèo.Bên cạnh đórằng, Nó đang gây tổn hại và phá hủymôi trường Mà còn.Cái nàybài tiểu luận sẽ giải thích thêm về tác động kinh tế đối vớimôi trườngvà hữu ích cho con người. Chúng ta có thể dễ dàng nhận thấy công nghiệp hóa của các nước đang ngày càng phát triển như Mỹ, Đức, Nhật Bản,Trung Quốc… mà đitayTRONGtayvới họMà cònthuộc về các quốc gia hàng đầu về khí thải và ô nhiễmmôi trường. Trên mộttay, Kinh tế phát triển đã giải quyết hầu hết các vấn đề đói nghèo như tạo ra nhiều công ăn việc làm cho người dân, giúp họ cải thiện cuộc sống và gia đình. Lấy thực tế từTrung Quốc, nhiều năm về trước,Trung Quốclà một đất nước quá nghèo và quá đông dân. Nhưng ngày nay, Đô thị hóa đã giúpTrung Quốctrở thành một siêu quốc gia về kinh tế, và The Lives ofTrung Quốccon người tiến bộ nhanh chóng.

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Many people decide on career path early on their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do in order to have satisfying working life?

The majority of people choose to get an early start on their career and keep to it. They think it is better for a satisfying working life. of course, this has pros and cons and I will talk about it in this essay.

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some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. do the advatages of this topic outweigh the disadvantages

Learning a non-native language is crucial. However, it is debatable whether to start learning from early academy days or after higher institute, but from my ,perspective students should begin the education of secondary language from the first day of school so the advantages are more than disadvantages.

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Even though organic fruits and vegetables are more expensive than conventional fruits and vegetables, they are worth the extra cost. Do you agree or disagree?

Considering one of the most significant problem in the world - increasing productivity of agriculture to feed growing population - it can be said that all alternatives as organic food are worht any resourses, including money, time and etc. As a result, some persons consider that price for such products is quite understandable and berable. So, only partly do I.

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More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions to make people drink less?

Sugar-based drinks are so popular among youngsters. However, in recent times, individuals are drinking large amounts of sugar-based canes. In this essay, I will explain why consumption increased, and suggest some steps that can mitigate the issue.

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Some think that the government should support retired people financially while others believe they should take care of themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that retirees should get financial support from the government. However, some people think that they are able of serving themselves. In my opinion, both of these are necessary.

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Many people spend a lot of money on clothes, haircut and beauty products to enhance their appearance. Discuss advantages and disadvantages.

millennium has ushered mankind to ever increasing need of maintaining one’s image. It seems easier to people to get same by purchasing apparels and cosmetics. I intend to explore merits and demerits of this tendency in upcoming segments.

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In some countries, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

Sometimes parents give their children freedom to make their own decision on everyday matters. Some people say it is a wrong idea because in the future these children more likely to think only about themselves, I think it plays a crucial role in the development of children.

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Smacking childern is the best form of discipline To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education comes from parent plays an importance in the growing process of children. And each parent will have different actions and Smacking children is also a way to teach them when they are spoiled. In my point of view, I disagreed that Smacking is a good way to control Children. The effects of Smacking on children and some serious issues will prove this.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's topic, few people believe that the adolescent group should do their part for the community in the meantime without getting paid. As well they do trust that it will benefit them and society. In my opinion, I agree that teenagers taking part in volunteering will help in their personal growth.

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In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

In the recent years, There is a trend of having external cuisine instead of the domestic one. There is a multitude of reasons contributing to this issue, so several measures must be taken to surge the turnover of the local cuisine.

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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. what damage does plastics do to the environment? What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem?

There is no doubt that plastic pollution is one of the serious and growing issues to the environment. In this essay, I will discuss what negative impacts plastic products has on the earth, and also outline what measures government and individuals can take to deal with this important matter.

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Some people think that in the modern world we have become more dependent on each other, while others think that people are now more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The swiftly evolving modern society has been deeply changing the live pattern of all the people. Especially after we steping into the era of the internet , everything that had been considered a complex task can be easily finished without too much effort. Some people thus claim that we are associated more and more tightly.

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The take below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates the details of the underground railway network in six several cities over the centuries. Overall, it is immediately apparent from the chart that the highest number of commuters frequently used the railway network in Tokyo, while London has the oldest railway system with the longest route.

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Social media addiction: Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s ,world it is argued by some people that the use of mobile applications such as Facebook has bad effects on individuals and society as well. I partly agree with this point of view.

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Some people think it is acceptable to use animals for the benefit of humans. Other people think it is wrong to exploit animals for human purposes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about animal protection and animal rights. However, whether we should utilize animals for human purposes has recently caused a heated debate. In my view, it is acceptable to reasonably use animals for the benefit of mankind and impossible to completely cut down the human's reliance on animals.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutio

Nowadays mankind is dealing with a huge headache caused by global climate change , and the gradual increase of ocean levels has been frightening. This essay will try to examine several problems caused by global warming and two elementary measures for tackling the problem.

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