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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phones should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Mobile phone is firmly established as part of our life. Almost all of us can not live without our mobile phone. Following that, the use of smart phone has affected as much as smoking to our social negatively. There is some arguments that phone also have to be banned like smoking in certain areas. But I disagree with that opinions. I will discuss some reason why I disagree with that discussion in this essay.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argued that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There has been an ongoing debate about the attitudes toward hard situations like unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate the design of Grange Park in the year 1920 when it was established and its form in the present time.

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In the past people usually stayed in one place throughout their life.These days people often move around.They often live in several different places in their lifetime.What are the advantages and disadvantages of both?

Many years ago, people live in only one place throughout their live. Nowadays,they are living in several diverse places in their lifetime .

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The most important reasons for a young person to attend a university is to increase the amount of money that he or she will earn in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Being Financially independent as early as possible in life is becoming the mantra of the today's generation. Students think the whole Purpose of attending to the University is for the better earning in their upcoming careers.In this essay i would like to discuss about how my opinion differs from that.

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it is importtant for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Taking a risk is crucial for people, both in their carrier and their personal lives. I think that the advantages are outweigh the disadvantages.

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Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The two maps exhibit Colwick Arts Centre in 2005 and its alterations till now. It is evident that a lot is changed, including new buildings and planting trees.

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Your friend has been offered a place on course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email - Describe where you lived when you were a student at the university - Recommend the best way for him/her to look for accomodation - Warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

I would like to give you some advice or two regarding the accommodation in Oshawa. During my 4 years of study, I spent the first 4 months staying in the college's dormitory before renting an upstairs room living with an old couple and settling there till graduation. In my opinion, my recommendation is to look for any ad posts in the international student groups on Facebook and verify the contacts properly before coming to see the room and discussing the contract.

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some people think that success is the best measure of intelligence while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways.

Few people have opined that Intelligence can be estimated with success and on the other hand, there are others who think success can be measured in different ways. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument. Firstly, I will shed some lights on why success is predominant factor and secondly, I will talk through some other factors that contribute to measurement of intelligence.

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"Some people think that more money should be spent on protecting endangered species while others think it is a waste of money. Give your opinion."

Paucity of people think that more investment should be made on safeguarding imperil species. Conversely, others think it is the wastage of fund.Throughout this essay, I will explore both the sides of discourse, whether to spend or not in this extinct species.Firstly, I will discuss why we should do it, and Secondly I will talk through why we shouldn't expend on this.

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people naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems of problems can this cause? Whats solutions you can suggest?

Afraid changing life is becoming more widespread among many people these days. There are several problems caused by this happening, and various measures could be taken to improve the situation.

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Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is debatable whether first world countries increase in economic growth makes a difference to its citizens. I completely disagree with this statement and in this essay, I will support my opinion with relevant examples.

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Many countries are experience in population growth and need more home. Should these new home be constructed in existing cities or should new town be built in the countryside?

House is a vital and it is a basic need of the growing human population. A recent survey published by the Government of India states that cities are congested due to the migration of people from rural to urban hence it is a good thought to build houses in the countryside. In this essay, I will describe pros and cons of building houses in the existing cities vs in the countryside.

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High Rise building - advantage/disadvantage These days more people prefer to live in vertical buildings. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the people?

The majority of the public claim that skyscrapers have more benefits than choosing live in the countryside. I tend to think that there are many main gains to living in a multistory building while at the discretion of each.

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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are debates around whether punishing driving offences heavily is the most crucial factor when it comes to reducing traffic accidents. In my opinion, while strict punishments can deter some of the offenders, I think other measures are more crucial in road safety.

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Changes in the town of Dalton between 1815 and 2015

The two maps illustrate how the time of Dalton changed over two centuries from 1815 to 2015. They clearly show that there have been a considerable number of changes and developments during this time, and that a large number of buildings have been constructed.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss ofparticular species ofplants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is often argued that the extinction of typical species is the most important problem or other more serious environmental problems are existing. And I believe that there are more important problems which people have to care about.

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Many schools these days have problems with poor student behaviour. Why do you think these problems occur? What could be done to tackle these problems.

Students spend the majority of their time in school and it has been proved that school has an undeniable effect on making and developing student’s character. As schools are considered the second home of students, they are struggling with lots of issues related to students’ behaviours. So, this essay has tried to cover some of the sources related to students’ behaviours and also will suggest some impressive approaches to schools to control and eradicate bad behaviours of students.

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E-mail has had a huge impact on professional and social communication,but this impact has been negative as well as positive. Do the disadvantages of usinge-mail outweigh the advantages

In today fast forwarding world, E-mail is the one of the quickest way to reach a person from one end to the other end.However, through E-mail lots of suspecious activities and dangerous viruses are being sent.In this essay I will discuss about the merits and demerits of E-mail and complete with my conclusion.

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Many people prefer to use public transportation while others say that personal cars are the best mode of transportation. Excessive use of private cars is considered to be the main reason for the traffic jam in many cities and that’s why the use of public transportation is encouraged. In your opinion what are the pros and cons of using public transport?

While some people tends to like to commute in their private vehicle whereas other belives that use of too much private vehicle contributes in major case of traffic congestion and road accidents. Hence, public transportation should be promoted. In my point of view Thare many advantages and disavantages of using public transport. This essay will further discuss both.

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