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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many people believe that television programs are no value for children. Do you agree? Why and why not? Provide reasons and examples to support your response.

Contents of TV programs have recently been an issue around the world. Some people think that they are pointless for children while others are thinking the opposite. In my opinion, there are shows that are educational and could be of benefit to kids.

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many people believe that a university education is necessary for a good career. do you agree or disagree? what other factors can contribute to a good career?

A Majority of us commit that the University education is essential for a bright future while, am not agree with the aforementioned statement. There are so many other aspects which can lead to the better career. In this essay, we will talk through on both phases.

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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

It is true that a rich variety of musical styles can be found around the world.Music is a vital part of human cultures for a range of all human cultures for a range of reasons.And I would argue that traditional

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Nowadays both men and women spend a lot of money on beauty care. This was not in the past. What may be the root cause of this behaviour? Discuss the reasons and possible results.

As men and women both prefer to do makeup and use a lot much more beauty care produces compare to past. This behaviour has two sides possible and negitive.

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Some people believe that sports competition are a source of emotional stress for young people. Therefore youth should be banned from participating in sports competition. Do you agree or disagree?

Sporting events play a significant role in a youth's life, be health or career, sports has always been fruitful. Sporting events has undergone umpteenth success stories, stories of converting raw talents into legend of the game. Presently, it has been a burning issue whether youth should participate in sports competition or not? Here, I will discord with the given statement.

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Inventors are not as important to society as doctors. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays, there is thought that developers do not play a significant role in community as healthcare workers. I completely disagree that some jobs should be more valuable than others as all of them make contribution to the well-being of the whole society.

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In some countries, the number of people visiting art galleries is reducing. What do you think the reasons for this are? How can we solve this problem?

In certain locations around the world, the number of people visiting art galleries is declining. This essay shall outline some of the reasons for this trend and then go on to suggest ways in which this issue could be resolved.

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Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Given the escalating manufacturing of touch phones, children nowadays including babies enjoy more screen times in their daily-life and this trend transcends day by day. In this matter, I would like to mention its contributing factors and its grave aftermath.

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The plans below show the layout of the ground floor of a museum in 1990 and in 2010

The two planes present changes to the ground floor of a museum between 1990 and 2010. Firstly, the most striking alteration was the size of the entrance, which was extended and approximately doubled in size. Secondly, the reception was moved further to the right from the museum office and enlarged almost twice the initial size. Another major change was made to the gift shop area, a café was built and the area became larger. Furthermore, a lift was constructed between the café-gift shop zone and the natural history room. Needless to say, one of the biggest modifications was the replacement of the biggest area on the ground floor, the archaeology gallery. The gallery was split in two sections, the children’s interactive zone and the poster display area. Moreover, the statue that was initially located to the left of the stairs, was relocated right in the center of the ground floor. Taken as a whole, the ground floor of the museum has undergone a number of adjustments between 1990 and 2...

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Serious social problems can appear to the surface when move to a new place that have different language and you should to talk a foreign language, as well as practical problems. In my perspective, I totally agree in this case, since language is a method to communicate with others.

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Media violence encourages violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In this modern era, media is becoming popular for getting information but it inspires individuals to create violence in society. Although people might become aggressive to watch it , owing to it spread awareness among the general public and individuals get a chance to know about their rights. I will discuss it in the impending paragraphs.

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Many students do not finish school why is this and how can problem be solved?

I strongly agree with this statement that many students do not finish school. There are so many reasons besides people who do not complete their education.

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Some people agree with spending lot of mpney on large wedding while others thinks it is a waste of money. What is your opinion?

Spending lots of money on weddings has both sides. Many public thinks that less money should be spent on weddings but on their hand some even think that more and more money should be spent on that. According to me as a wedding function is the most important function in life so money should spend but, it should have also a limit on it.

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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

There is increasing tendency amongst people from some nations who want to know more about the history of the house or building they live in. This can be out of some curiosity or just for fun to share with their family. However, it can be needed for more practical reasons such as interior or reconstruction. This essay will explore the reasons behind this trend and suggest how to find out useful information.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people hold the idea that everyone should get equal punishment for their crimes. While others believe that before reaching a final verdict one should always listen to their side of the story . What were the conditions and events which compel them to do so? I will explain both viewpoints in forthcoming paragraphs, Although I agree with the latter ones.

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Some believe that people who do physical work should be paid on par with the people who have high level degree. Do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals are of the view that people who engage in physical jobs are to be paid equally as scholars who have high degrees. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this statement and I will elaborate further on my reasons and give some examples to support it.

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Many peoplebelieve thay a university education is necessary for a good career. Do you agree or disagree? What other factors can contribute to a good career?

In this contemporary era, folks spend many years in colleges and universities to get proper education regarding their future desires. However, some reckon that, to become successful in the upcoming time, a body needs to complete his graduation in an institution. Well, I partly agree with this notion and I am going to shed light upon my views in subsequent paragraphs.

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Human activities have had a negative effect on plant and animal life all over the world. Some people think that it is too late to do something about it while others think that there is still time to take effective action. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Human activities such as operating factory and agriculture has left a big damaged on plants and animals life on earth. While there are more countries and people realised this fact and started to take action to fix the problem, however many think it is too late to try and do something while others believe there is still enough time to heal the planet. In this discussion I will be talking about whether there is still time left or time is running out to fix all problems arised from human activities.

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School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. this is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. teacher need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all cost and go back to teaching basic study skills. do you agree or disagree?

NOWADAYS,STUDENTS ARE VERY MUCH DEPENDENT ON ONLINE SOURCES FOR EVERYTHING . THIS IS REALLY A BACKDROP FOR REASING AND WRITING SKILLS .IN THIS ESSAY I WOULD LOVE TO DISCUSS ABOUT THE PROS AND CONS OF USING COMPUTERS IN EDUCATION AND GIVE MY OPINION .

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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason behind the growth in the number of overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is undeniable fact that there are number of people who are facing serious health issues due to being overweight .It has become more visible these days wrecks havoc not only on the developed nations but also to the third world countries which have led to catastrophic scenario caused bty infinite reasons which has made the situation more worse. This essay will outline causes and solution of the people suffering from overweight due many grounds before coming to the final conclusion.

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