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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In some Countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Having a good place to live in entails making crucial decisions of whether renting or buying a property. In many parts of the world, buying a home is very essential than leasing for two reasons. First, it is cheaper and secondly it provides a sense of ownership. This essay will further discuss these reasons and why this is a positive situation.

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Should Government funding be spent on education and healthcare systems? What is your opinion?

Is it necessary for the government to invest money into healthcare and education institutions? In my ,opinion it is an essential part of any government structure, and we must spend money on that.

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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

It is a well known fact that tourism has contributed world economies in a positive way, in which the universal lanaguage "English" is also playing an important role. English has become a prominent language through tourism and international trade. Some people even belive that English will become the single language for the world. The next paragraphs will be discussing the pros and cons of considering English as single language globally.

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Some people claim that not enough the waste from homes is recycled. they say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. to what extent do you think laws are need to make people recycle more of their waste?

It is said that, recycling of household wastages is not adequate. so, it is necessary to enforce citizens by laws. in my opinion, laws are necessary. and, in this essay, I will give my reasons .

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able ho read everything they want online without paying . To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Thanks to modern technology, humans now have remarkable ways by which they can access unlimited information related to the topics and it can observe that a large number of people drawing attention towards the latest technology. I partly agree with the above statement I will articulate my pinpoint in forthcoming paragraphs.

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Nowadays, discusses about children education taking their place a lot.

Nowadays, discusses about children education taking their place a lot. I think it is due to last events, like bulling in the schools or some villain actions of children and something like this. As result, many people started to discuss about child education, someone think that parents must take response for their children and educate them, other ones think that this role already busy by schools, colleges and university and such education places are not fulfilling their task clearly. And there might appear question, who is right?

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Environment problems such as pollution and climate variations are incresing nowadays. The goverments have taken some measures at problem be solved.?

Pollution of nature qnd climate change and various problems in the environment are increasing today. Governments are taking some measures at the global level,but it is difficult to climinate them .This essay will firs suggest that the biggest problem caused by this intends to look into the problem have always fallen short of the mark and offer some solutions to the problem.

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

academy plays an important role in the overalll development of children. Young minds learn alot from the school and it's environment. Children develop their social, physical and emotional skills over here. During this some of kids started facing issues with their social skills as a result of this they started having problems with student behaviour.

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The best way to improve health is through regular exercise, to what extent do you agree or disagree

It is sometimes considered that the most effective means of promoting health is by engaging in consistent physical workout. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this view because exercise promotes physical fitness and reduces the risk of developing certain diseases.

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some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing

Some people argue that there is not nothing bad if you are sticked doing same activities regularly while others can not live without changing. In this essay, I will look both sides of the argument and give my own opinion.

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People nowadays tend to have children at older ages Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent times, people prefer to have their offsprings at older age, this might lead to some complications but I think it enables the couples to be able to prepare for the child birth financially and psychologically,moreover,complications as a result of having children at older age can be corrected with the modern technology.

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Today more people are waiting until their thirties to get married and have children. Do you think this is a positive and negative development?

Presently, most of the people do not want to get married and have children in order to create the career till thier thirties. I am completely certain that first of all, every human being should create thier own life before they get married and have children.

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Many can’t speak or present well in public. Some people think that it is important to speak well in public, so the training should be from school. Do you agree or disagree?

No doubt , it is crucial to speak well in public for school going student ,however the school play significant role in this trends as the student spend maximum hours in the school .Although this issue contains various views and i Personally agree with this statement which i can briefly explain in upcoming paragraphs.

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Studies show that many people in the prison have low level of education. For this reason, some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate in prison, so that they can get a job when they leave prison. To what extent do you agree.

Most of the prisons around the world have majority of prisoners who are confined for one crime case or the other, however it is supposed by people that that the best way is to ensure formal learning so that they would get job after they leave the prison, therefore in my opinion it is agreed that this theory should be emphasized, however this essay will pinpoint the reasons.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this contemporary era, there are contrasting views, where one section of society believes that it is preferable to put boys and girls in separate gender schools for their education, and other section is of the mindset that all students may find it more advantageous when they study in co-education school. This essay will elucidate both these view points in detail over subsequent paragraphs.

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Although most people are richer than in the past, modern life seems very stressful and the number of people are suffering from stress is at a record level. What are the main causes of stress in modern life and how stress could be reduced.

here are several reasons why people are more anxious in modern society in comparison with previous centuries. Both problems and its solutions will be mentioned in the following paragraphs. This essay elaborates on the reasons for high stress in regular life and possibilities to solve this.

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some people think that iNTERNET HAS BROUGHT PEOPLE CLOSER TOGETHER WHILE OTHERS THINK THAT PEOPLE AND COMMUNITIES ARE BECOME MORE ISOLATED. DISCUSS BOTH SIDES AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

There are some arguments that agree that social network connects everyone together, while many people would not agree with that point. This essay will discuss how social media can help everyone keep in touch easily, showing the confidence of people who would prefer face-to-face meetings, and why I prefer using the social network to offline meet.

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The picture shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram given illustrates the process of how wasted glass bottles are recycled.

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Some children spend hours on their smartphones everyday. Why is this the case? Do you think his is a positive or negstive development.

Nowadays some youngsters overuse smartphones daily. The main reason behind it is risen demand on these devices amoung the elder people that are role model for youngsters and also amount if intertainment that smartphones contain.This is overall a negative trend for young generation despite one single benefit that it may bring out.

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More and more people are moving away from agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work.What will be the reasons of this.What solutions can you offer.

In the contemporary epoch individuals opt to reside in urban areas rather than in countryside in order for them do make a decent living.To me not only does this phenomenon have adverse impact on countries economy,but also dwindle agricultural sphere and I will develop this idea in subsequent paragraphs.This discourse is to appraise reasons of this issue and preventive measures to tackle with it.

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