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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world costs enormous government expenditure. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, many countries are spending a lot of money to rebuilding of old architecture. Some people argue that the money should be used to other places like new bulidings and new roads. However, I strongly believe that new buildings and new roads construction will not have positive effect more than old buildings are restored.

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Some people think that news and media are affecting our life in a positive way while others disagree. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.

Some people argue that our lives have no good affected by several news and kinds of media, I strongly believe that they are positive influenceing our lifetime.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that teenagers should be spend time of their free time on local community service for free. I strongly believe that thier work in the community has a negative effect.

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There have been many inventions in human history, such as wheels. Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that the internet is the most significant invention throughout the history of human beings. However, I strongly believe that it is a very important invention but it is not the greatest as other inventions.

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Since people can study through the internet, schools have become unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some people argue that schools will be unnecessary in the near future. Because, pupils are able to study on the internet in the house. I strongly believe that schools are necessary places for students.

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Some people say that advertising has positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because it will make people feel dissatisfied with who they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that the advertising have a double edged sword. Although, they have good effects for economy, they are able to bad effects for individual. I strongly believe that the advertising have negative effects people and society.

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It is suggested that everyone in the world should have a car, a TV and a fridge. Do you think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages for society？

Some people argue that the number of people of has convenient devices for life such as cars, and Tv, and fridges should increase to 100%.I strongly believe that it will have a good effect more than a bad effect on society.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age .punishment is necessary to help them learn the distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?. What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Nowadays, it has become a hot debate about the issue whether parents should punish their children in order to nurturing them distinguish between correct and incorrect or not. I opine that this attitude can be destructive for children and some arguement surround my notion.

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In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is assumed by a growing number of people that conventional food is surrogated by fast food which is affecting families as well as society. I completely opine this view as this situation is detrimental to both family bonds and community health.

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letter to a manager of hotels for left items at the hotel.

We had an absolutely amazing time at the Voyage Hotel. Nothing was too much trouble. The staff went out of their way to help us, and besides, they made us feel very welcome.

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Some believe that history has little to teach us about today while others think that the study of the past helps us to understand the present. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A section of social believe that history has no important of our knowledge whereas others people thin that learning history is necessary for us to understand what happened in the past. In this essay will dicuss advantages and disadvantage of this point of view.

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Describe the trend of employment in Australiain the year 1990-2000

The given line graph shows a trend of workers who were employed in the engineering, service industry and the agricultural sector in the year between 1990 and 2000.

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The process below shows the Human Resources (HR) recruitment process for a company. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The given flow chart describes the steps of a candidate selection by a Human Resource department of a firm or corporation.

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Some people prefer to work in the same type of job throughout their lifetime ‎while others like to change the type of job they do. Discuss both views and give ‎your opinion.‎

Change is inevitable in everyone's life. There are many who belives to work in same job for whole life whereas some people fancy to change the work time by time. Both the arguments will discuss in essay further.

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The plan below show a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The accompanying diagrams delineate the transformation of a school from its original layout in 1985 to its current setup. It is evident from the illustrations that the campus has undergone substantial modifications, resulting in an enhanced, capacious environment.

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The pictures show the process of making cherry jam. Describe the process.

The above illustrations demonstrate how to manufacture cherry jam. The production of it involves nine main stages, from shaking the trees to collecting fruits and transporting them to the manufacturing plant to sticking labels on the jars.

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These days, it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city. Discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation (migration from the country to the city ) and suggest some ways on which this trend could be reversed.

While provincial towns were once vibrant and growing places, these days many appear to be dying as community move to the city in search of work and excitement. In this essay, I intend to discuss the impact of this problem as well as how more folk could be encouraged to live in the rural areas. Surprisingly, the most serious consequences of rural depopulation are often felt in urban areas. As a result of overcrowding, cities throughout the world today are increasingly prone to environment problems like air, water and noise pollution. Beijing is a particularly good example of this. Further, the uncontrolled growth of cities also gives rise to social problems such as high unemployment, crime and in less affluent countries, the creation of slums. Clearly, there is a limit to how many people can live in one area before living standards are negatively influenced. In order to stem the tide of rural depopulation, I believe we must first address its root causes. At the heart of the matter is...

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In the future it may be necessary for us to live on other planets. For this reason, some people believe that we should spend money now to research other planets, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly, increasing globalisation and sudden climate change would cause difficulty for human beings to survive with unlimited resources. Therefore, some individuals would be thinking of organising research on the capability of living on the other planet, where we could survive in the future and the government should put investment into this phenomenon. For this, I partially agree with the given fundamental of life living on the other planet.

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Some people believe that it is possible for a country to be economically successful and have a clean environment. Others argue that these two aims are not compatible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, economic growth and environmental green is the goal of all nations. Some people believe that economic success can be hand in hand with the nature environment. Others argue it is extreme ends to achieve this harmony in life. I think it is possible to be economically success with sustainable green nature.

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Young people are highly influenced by famous people and they look up to them as role models. Is that a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, many well-known celebrities and influencers inspire many adolescents towards their careers and life. With the positive impacts and life lesson-learned they may bring to the young generation, I believe that looking up to famous people as role-model is a positive trend for many youngsters.

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