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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather than rent it. Do you agree with this statement or not?

It is held a view that buying a home is better than rent it. Personally, I totally agree with this statement because it not only provides financial security and stability, but it also offers the ability to enjoy the independence and convenience of a comfortable lifestyle.

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Many people hold the view that it is better to buy thier home rather than rent it. Do you agree with this statement or not?

Many individuals have their opinion that purchasing homes instead of renting accommodations. I totally agree with this statement.

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Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather they rent it. Do you agree with this statement or not ?

There are many individual’s point of views that is more suitable to purchase homes instead of renting them. The writing totally agrees with that statement which will be discussed through this essay.

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A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most'. 1.describe what this book was about 2.explain how this book influenced you 3.say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

I would lıke to talk about the most influenced to me book. its called What Men Live By by the Tolstoy.

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In spite of improvement in the healthcare by governments many people in developed countries are suffering from overweight and obesity. What are the causes of this and what other the impacts

Obesity is a significant public health concern in societies throughout the world. Nowadays, although governments are improving the systems of healthcare, we are witnessing a volume number of obesity in developed nations. This essay will outline the causes of overweight and the effects of obesity on people.

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Some people think that it is better to take part in team sports, while others believe that individual sports are better. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that sports are very important in our lives ,whether played in a team or individually.While it is a commonly held belief that playing in a team is better,there is also an argument that individual sports are better.This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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Question: Traffic congestion in many cities in the world makes it difficult for people to get in and out of cities, and to move around inside them. Why do you think this is happening? What could be done to solve these problems?

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Nowadays families are not close as they used to What the cause and how to solve this problem

Familiy bond has become less strong not like before which people are familiar with each other and participate all their days. In this essay I will discuss the reasons and solutions for this problems.

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Some feel that government should prioritize healthcare instead of other important areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Health preservation plays a vital role in human life and the government should take it into consideration. It is argued by some people's health protection is more important than other aspects. While I firmly believe that there are several sectors such as environmental conservation and education which are a mutual effect on each other as the government keep the same balance among them.

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Men occupy most of the top-level jobs. Should government reserve more jobs for women? Give your opinion.

Our society seems to be a bit biased on the topic of providing top jobs to women. Though we pretend to show equal rights to women still trends tell a different story. let's discuss further to find out the best possible solution along with my opinion.

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In some countries, celebrities complain about the way the media publicize their private lives. Some people say that they should accept it as part of their fame. Do you agree or disagree?

When it comes to famous people, people hold conflicting views on whether the media should publicize the private lives of celebrities. While people believe that they should accept these lives as a part of their fame, I disagree with this phenomenon.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is not fair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In today's modern world, it has become allocating exceptional budgets for athletes around the world are extraordinary. While some people believe that it is important to appreciate successful players, others argue that there are other professions that have paramount importance and should gain better salaries than athletes. This essay will discuss both views and I am against the view that spending considerable amounts for sports players.

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Should parents be obliged to immunize thier children against childhood diseases? Or do individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?

As medical science advances, many countries have mandated infants and young children to be vaccinated in order to have immunity against certain diseases. On the other hand, there is minority voice advocating for parents to have the rights to decide if their children will receive vaccination. Personally, I believe in parents should be in the driving seat when it comes to getting their children vaccinated.

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some people think that the developments involving the internet have brought people closer together. while others think that people and communities have become more isolated Discuss both views and give your opinion

At Present, social media have asiginifant influence on our daily life, while some people view that internet have led to more connected communities and became a pivotal factor in social interaction. Other people argue that internet is the reason of people’s solitary amonge the communities. This essay will discuss both points of view, and argue in favour of the former.

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving school at 16 or 18 to work instead of going to university?

Although the fact that education is essential for progress and mental upgrades, some people contend that being sufficient with the school have more benefits, while others believe that completing in high education is preferable. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages for both prespectives.

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‏In many countries, schoolchildren are required to wear school uniforms. ‏Do you think this should this be enforced in all schools?

Undoubtedly, equality should be maintained between the student of any school. Therefore, several schools have a specific uniform for every child which is mandatory to wear even if some individual would have more privileges than others. The essay will examine the prospect of this fundamental and my personal views on it.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that the main purpose cause of subjects is debatable,

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The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world costs enormous government expenditure. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, many countries are spending a lot of money to rebuilding of old architecture. Some people argue that the money should be used to other places like new bulidings and new roads. However, I strongly believe that new buildings and new roads construction will not have positive effect more than old buildings are restored.

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Some people think that news and media are affecting our life in a positive way while others disagree. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.

Some people argue that our lives have no good affected by several news and kinds of media, I strongly believe that they are positive influenceing our lifetime.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that teenagers should be spend time of their free time on local community service for free. I strongly believe that thier work in the community has a negative effect.

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