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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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The plans below show the layout of the ground floor of a museum in 1990 and in 2010

The two planes present changes to the ground floor of a museum between 1990 and 2010. Firstly, the most striking alteration was the size of the entrance, which was extended and approximately doubled in size. Secondly, the reception was moved further to the right from the museum office and enlarged almost twice the initial size. Another major change was made to the gift shop area, a café was built and the area became larger. Furthermore, a lift was constructed between the café-gift shop zone and the natural history room. Needless to say, one of the biggest modifications was the replacement of the biggest area on the ground floor, the archaeology gallery. The gallery was split in two sections, the children’s interactive zone and the poster display area. Moreover, the statue that was initially located to the left of the stairs, was relocated right in the center of the ground floor. Taken as a whole, the ground floor of the museum has undergone a number of adjustments between 1990 and 2...

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Serious social problems can appear to the surface when move to a new place that have different language and you should to talk a foreign language, as well as practical problems. In my perspective, I totally agree in this case, since language is a method to communicate with others.

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Media violence encourages violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In this modern era, media is becoming popular for getting information but it inspires individuals to create violence in society. Although people might become aggressive to watch it , owing to it spread awareness among the general public and individuals get a chance to know about their rights. I will discuss it in the impending paragraphs.

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Many students do not finish school why is this and how can problem be solved?

I strongly agree with this statement that many students do not finish school. There are so many reasons besides people who do not complete their education.

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Some people agree with spending lot of mpney on large wedding while others thinks it is a waste of money. What is your opinion?

Spending lots of money on weddings has both sides. Many public thinks that less money should be spent on weddings but on their hand some even think that more and more money should be spent on that. According to me as a wedding function is the most important function in life so money should spend but, it should have also a limit on it.

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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

There is increasing tendency amongst people from some nations who want to know more about the history of the house or building they live in. This can be out of some curiosity or just for fun to share with their family. However, it can be needed for more practical reasons such as interior or reconstruction. This essay will explore the reasons behind this trend and suggest how to find out useful information.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people hold the idea that everyone should get equal punishment for their crimes. While others believe that before reaching a final verdict one should always listen to their side of the story . What were the conditions and events which compel them to do so? I will explain both viewpoints in forthcoming paragraphs, Although I agree with the latter ones.

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Some believe that people who do physical work should be paid on par with the people who have high level degree. Do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals are of the view that people who engage in physical jobs are to be paid equally as scholars who have high degrees. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this statement and I will elaborate further on my reasons and give some examples to support it.

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Many peoplebelieve thay a university education is necessary for a good career. Do you agree or disagree? What other factors can contribute to a good career?

In this contemporary era, folks spend many years in colleges and universities to get proper education regarding their future desires. However, some reckon that, to become successful in the upcoming time, a body needs to complete his graduation in an institution. Well, I partly agree with this notion and I am going to shed light upon my views in subsequent paragraphs.

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Human activities have had a negative effect on plant and animal life all over the world. Some people think that it is too late to do something about it while others think that there is still time to take effective action. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Human activities such as operating factory and agriculture has left a big damaged on plants and animals life on earth. While there are more countries and people realised this fact and started to take action to fix the problem, however many think it is too late to try and do something while others believe there is still enough time to heal the planet. In this discussion I will be talking about whether there is still time left or time is running out to fix all problems arised from human activities.

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School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. this is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. teacher need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all cost and go back to teaching basic study skills. do you agree or disagree?

NOWADAYS,STUDENTS ARE VERY MUCH DEPENDENT ON ONLINE SOURCES FOR EVERYTHING . THIS IS REALLY A BACKDROP FOR REASING AND WRITING SKILLS .IN THIS ESSAY I WOULD LOVE TO DISCUSS ABOUT THE PROS AND CONS OF USING COMPUTERS IN EDUCATION AND GIVE MY OPINION .

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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason behind the growth in the number of overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is undeniable fact that there are number of people who are facing serious health issues due to being overweight .It has become more visible these days wrecks havoc not only on the developed nations but also to the third world countries which have led to catastrophic scenario caused bty infinite reasons which has made the situation more worse. This essay will outline causes and solution of the people suffering from overweight due many grounds before coming to the final conclusion.

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Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. This has negative effects on themselves and the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Young people tend to spend the majority of their free time in shopping centers recently. However, many people believe that going shopping brings us more drawbacks for ourselves and the community than benefits. From my point of view, I firmly agree with this statement as going shopping is an interesting way for us to entertain ourselves. Although, we need to manage the amount of time and money we spend on it to avoid it being a huge issue for our finances.

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Many believe that living in a city offers greater benefits compared to life in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that many people think living in urban provides potential benefits rather than staying in rural areas. I totally with agree this statement because to get an education for their children and are accessible the vitals of life depend on the improvement of the country, such as business, the latest version of houses, and technology.

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?

Undoubtedly, technology is being dominated in today's world, every person is relying on technological gadgets which the most used are computers. In every profession, these are used which welcome both optimistic as well as pessimistic effects. This essay will discuss both viewpoints in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Many schoolchildren today take part in work experience sessions for short periods of time instead of attending school. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

It has been a popular trend for some time now to put children into what can be called ‘work experience placements’. The children are taken out of school and take part in various types of work, usually for around a week. Some people criticise this trend, but I can’t see how it can be a negative experience. One of the criticisms is that children lose a week of schoolwork. With the pressure to do well at school increasing, children need every bit of help to maximise their potential. Taking them out of the school, it is therefore argued, stops them from getting access to needed education for a whole week. As the students won’t really be of much help to a workplace for just one week, it would therefore be better for them to remain at school. While this is a valid point, taking a child’s entire experience of school into account, a single week away does not make a significant difference. Indeed, if the timing of the week’s work placements is done correctly, the week can also serve as a ...

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doctors recommend older people for exercise regularly. however, some people do not excersie. what are the causes?

Exercise is the main goal of fitness, as it not only gives us strength but nourishes our minds. However, many individuals are indulged in this at an early age, which has some benefits as well as negative impacts.

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A group of individuals claims the physical athleticism determines the standard of achievement one can receive, while another group claims that sport is more based on sportsmanship and more mental factors. This essay will give reasons to support both sides and explain why they are equally important.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self employed, rather than to work for a organization.What might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self employed.

There has been ongoing debate regarding the topic of self employment. Although some individuals prefer to work for a company, others believe to open their own business. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons behind this phenomenon and also mention the drawbacks of being self employed.

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The images illustrate the process of generating electricity at a wood chip-burning power plant.

The process diagram shows how to produce electric power from the woodchips at a wood-fire power plant. There are several stages in the process to manufacture electricity.

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