IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 735

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Students learn far more from teachers at schools and universities than from other sources such as the Internet and TV programs. Do you agree or disagree?

Teachers play an important role in making learning easy in schools and colleges and children are more likely to learn better from teachers than online resources and TV programs. I completely agree with this point of view because teachers have specialised knowledge and expertise of a particular subject and they can explain easily by using real-life examples.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?

Currently, in many countries, owning a home rather than renting one is important for many people. I believe this helps to maintain their financial status in society. However, it can be seen as a negative effect that many have to depend on housing loans as a result of that.

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Some people are fond of buying new gadgets phones or laptop is this a good or bad thing discuss your opinion

Nowadays technology has been popular in all over the world. Moreover, few masses opine that obtaining computers or laptops are play a splendid role in the mankind life unless, others notion that it has numerous terrible impact on their life. In this essay I partially agree that because masses can go any other seightseeing places with their gadget and without any difficulties however, this technique has multiple worse impact in health issue as well as funding problems may arise if humankind purchase a high quality software.

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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been widelly debated if the most relevant technological advance in the last century is the development of computers. I wholeheartedly agree with this statement because the use of the computer completely changed the way people communicate and interact with each other, and its invention also influenced the development of other technological devices and resources.

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People think that using smart phone in public areas should be banned. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, smartphones have become an important thing that almost cannot be separated from our lives. Although they have made communication much easier in each step of our daily lives, some societies argue that they should be reduced in public places such as libraries, shops and public vehicles. Personally, I partially agree with this opinion. The following paragraphs will explain my personal perspective along with relevant examples.

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Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people have various views about limiting make a some noise. The other part of them think we should make a noise when we want. Also, if we don't agitate with annoyed loud sound to others, we will can it. I strongly ally with this idea that community should can let out when they want. I will elaborate more on this point throughout this essay.

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Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today, because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. Do you agree or disagree?

People do not just go to museums to enjoy an art exhibition only, they want to see also the structures, history and aesthetics features of a local museum, which varies depending on each geographical area. For example, a Western museum is surely different from a museum in an Asian country in terms of building materials and also the ways artworks showed there. If online artwork could satisfy art connoisseurs or history enthusiasts, art exhibitions showing Van Gogh paintings would not be sold out quickly. For those who really know how to enjoy a piece of art, there is nothing that can replace the real-time interaction between the viewers and the real art work.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this day and age, it is a common belief that unpaid community service ought to be a compulsory part of high school programmes. However, I only partly agree. I will shed light on my opinion in the following essay.

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Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree! Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or expenence.

Nowadays, people are swayed to buy products because of the powerful advertisement that companies uses, despite not needing these products. I agree to this notion as there are a lot of businesses utilise social media influencers to promote almost anything, as well as confusing consumers with graphics online to make them visit websites.

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Motor vehicle crashes are one of the leading causes of teen deaths. To prevent such road accidents, the government should ban people under 24 to drive motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that riding motorcycles for young individuals under 24 must be banned due to the reduction of horrible deaths caused by horrific road accidents. Althrough, I agree that national authorities should establish safe driving laws in order to reduce crashes, it is unnecessary to prevent young people from driving motorcycles.

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Some people think robots can improve human life in future, while others think robots may affect society in a bad way. Discuss both view points and give your opinion.

Nowadays, technology become a part of our lives, and every day we see big changes in technology improvement.

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The pictures show the steps involved in making coffee products.

The pictures show the steps involved in making coffee products. Looking from an overall perspective, there are 8 steps in the process, beginning with harvesting, and ending with purchasing of coffee products.

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Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree.

There is the number of people who thinks that schools should focus only on academic success and help students to pass their examination and skills like cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught in schools. They state, that these skills can be developed by parents as well as by friends of that student. From my perspective, I strongly believe that this statement is correct, but I will be explaining both points of view with the support of some relevant examples.

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Some people think it is important to spend time in developing a successful career while others think it is more importany to spend time with family and friends. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Time is precious and many successful leaders consider it as a gift. Some people work long periods of time for their success in their career, while others think that spending time with family and friends is more important. The following essay will discuss both views and provide my opinion.

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In today's fast paced wprlf, many individual struggle with delaying tasks. Discuss a cause of this and suggest an effective sokution to overcome it.

In nowdays life, many people have procrastination habits and it effect a lot to their career. The root cause of this is having problem with time management, yet it can solved by organize and break the task smaller.

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While some think that the problem with education in poor countries is the teaching methodology used, others believe it is the lack of resources that is the real issue. Discuss both sides

One school of thought holds that the issue with education in economically disadvantaged countries is the method used, while others think that the ironic problem is the insufficiency of financial resources. This essay attempts to shed light on both perspectives before concluding that I am in favor the former notion.

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Additcted to internet is a widespread problem. What problems does it cause ? What is a suitable solution?

A concerning trend has emerged with regard to be addicted by the internet around the world. The problem is attributable to the parental skills and lack of confidence, but can be addressed by enforcing parents to take responsible to mitigate the amount of time which is used.

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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think is the cause for this? What a possible solution can you suggest?

The high rate of criminals commit more crimes after being released from jail is reportedly increasing. The underlying cause for this is that the punishment given to the offenders is not strong enough yet it can be tackled by implementing a psychological approach for the criminals.

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33.Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviours. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some say that when individuals travel, they should respect the culture of those places, while others believe that people should accept and welcome other civilazation and their way of thinking. This essay would argue that although experiencing other cultures can allow people to know more, humans should accept how individuals are.

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Some students.take one year off between finishing high school and going to university, in order to travel or to work.

Today, some graduates prefer to take a gap year prior to furthering their education at university.While this decision is not without its downsides. I believe it is largely a sensible choice.

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