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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Nowadays many people choose to be self employed, rather than to work for a company or oragnisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

These days, some people prefer to have own business rather than being employee who working for a company. In this essay, some related reason that why this phenomenon occur is argued. Also, some cons of self-employment are presented.

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Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to only be meant for adults. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes, and what solutions can be offered?

Being obese was once only a condition that adults suffered from, but it is becomming more common in children. This essay will first discuss how fast food and sedentary lifestyle are the primary causes of this growing problem and then outline how education and increased exercise are the most viable solutions.

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Some people believe that modern technology has enhanced sociable behavior, but others think it has reduced social interactions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The unprecedented growth of social media use bring positive and negative outcomes to individual's life. While many people believe that modernization of technology led to improve the manners of society, others think that it causes decreased social communications. In this essay, I will outline both views and explain why people tend to limit their social interactions as a result of the current developed technology.

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The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governtments should invest funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement

Country runners are spending lots of money in the fields of arts, drama and music. On the contrary , the government can utilize this money for the improvement of buses , national banks etcetera. I , however ,disagree with the latter as the promotion of a nation's culture as well as the awareness of social issues are possible due to the fields of cinema and numerous art forms only.

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The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governtments should invest funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Country runners are spending lots of momey in the fields of arts, drama and music. On the contrary ,government can utilize this money in the improvments of buses , national banks etcetera. I , however ,disagree with the latter as promotion of nation's culture as well as the awareness of social issues are possible due to the fields of cinema and numerous art forms only.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

Nowadays, the crime rate is rising. By taking a look at the problem, we’ll notice several reasons that affect the issue. The most prominent cause is a lot of ex-convicts return to commit crimes after they get out of prison. In this essay, I’ll focus on discussing the causes, motivations and solutions of why ex-prisoners back to breaking laws again.

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Some children can learn efficiently by watching TV. Therefore, they should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are some opinions about the effects of television on children's education. Some people think that this is useful for the young generation's perception, while in the mind of others, there is more negative effect than the positive. I agree with the second group of people.

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Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

it is said that there were significant advantages for studying face to face with a group of pupils in a classroom over online method. Personally, I could not agree more with this view, the purpose of this essay will explain my prompt of agreement.

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Many university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others feel it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for their qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

For a long time now people in government or university officials with the help of students are trying to not only improve or change the subjects taught in universities, but also they strive to make the studying experience more enjoyable and fulfilling. An example of this would be allowing pupils to attend additional classes to their liking next to their main course. Some people praised this change and others did not. In this essay I will elaborate on both sides of the matter.

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Many people believe that formal 'pen and paper' examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. What is your view of examinations? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is believed that traditional examination methods on paper are not suitable for judging one's academic intelligence. While the argument seems strong ,however, with the current approach such as applying the computer method, traditional method is more exceed in terms of easy to express their knowledge and gripping the question.

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Although more and more people use public transport, some city streets are still overcrowded with traffic. How can this problem be solved? Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Traffic Jam is becoming a very concerning problem to the worker community as various streets are packed with more autonomous vehicle than people. Many are choosing to travel via public transport, however, still this problem persists. In my opinion, a very effective way to resolve this problem is limiting private vehicle ownership.

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Children today spend more time watching television than they did in the past. Describe some of the advantages and disadvantages of television for children.

Nowadays technology are increasing day by day this is because teenagers are taking knowledge frequently. recently speanding time by the kids in front of television leads to merits as well as demerits. In this essay i intend to analyse the benefits in education programme however side-effect such as sedentary lifestyle and potential health problems.

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Some people believe that smartphones are destroying social interaction today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Currently, mobile phones have been frequently harmful for masses this is because all works must be completed by the laptop that lead to hazards impact not only their mind but also on their body. A few

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Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is a common belief that studying in a conservative classroom environment with students is superior compared to remote learning at home. I believe, this approach is completely beneficial for learners because they can be more proactive, and dedicated to their subjects far away from distractive tools such as computers and laptops.

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With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?

Nowadays, social media has a significant impact on our lives, especially among youngsters which can lead to certain dangerous situations. It is obvious that media and the available internet are to blame for this negative tendency, however, this can be prevented if proper measures are taken at society and each family.

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some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertainment and ecological important. Discuss both views

Although some people think that putting animals into the cage not suitable behaviour as a human being , others believe that zoos are crutical for entertainment activities and also it has some benefits from ecological point. This essay will discuss both opinion.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreing languahe at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advanantages of this outweight the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include some relevant examples.

These days, it is increasingly popular to know more that one languages so parents are looking for the unversities who can teach children when they are in their primary school. Some people belive school can start their classes when they pass out from primary standerds. I completely agree with this point of view and i will discuss in below paragraph.

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Some people think travelling abroad band is a valuable experience for young people. Others think it wastes too much time and expense. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People vary in opinion related to moving away from own country.Some folks believed that it is virtuous and precious life movement whilst, others oppose that idea by saying that it is time consuming and expensive.As per my opinion, both viewpoints have valid

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that, non-academic subjects, like physical education and cookery should remove from school syllabus so that student can concentrate on academic work because it is giving lot of pressure on young people to succeed on academic sector. However, I am completely disagree with this statement because students should taught all kinds of education to be successful on life.

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The chat below show the percentage of family income spent in different categories in South korea and Singapore in the years 2000 and 2020.

The charts illustrate spending in South Korea and Singapore in five categories in 2000 and 2020.

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