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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people say that computer have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. Discuss and give your opinion.

In today's globalised world computers are getting an integral part of our life. Some people claim that new gadgets relieve our life. Others believe modern tools are harmful for human health. In this essay I will discuss both sides of this issues.

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Nowaways, more teenagers want to become famous actors or singers. Why do you think this is happening? Is this a positive or negative development?

As ones realize, many young people would like to become famous actors or singers these days. one might have different arguments, but I believe this is happening because teenagers are able to see how famous actors or singers live by watching social media, and parents allow their children to have occupations. I believe this is a positive development.

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Professional workers like doctors’ nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to the society, so they should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that nowadays society can’t do without professional workers’ contribution, but it is also important to build personal entertainment and hold sports events. People may have different opinions on whether paid more for professional workers. I disagree that we should be paid more professional workers.

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Some people say that the main environmental problems of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The sustainability of ecosystem, since directly determines the existence of all creatures on the Earth, has always drawn great concerns from all over the world.The booming population, however, together with the deterioration of environmental circumstances, have already threatened the maintenance of ecology.

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Some people believe that children should study all subjects at school, while others think they should only study subjects they are good at or find interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

In recent years, education has attacted the general pubilc’s attention. Some people believe that the school should teach students about subjects them do ing well . While others say that school must teach childrens all subjects. This essay will give some reasons to support both views.

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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

Recently, the usage of social media has gained certain popularity among the public. it is widely notice that more and more human adoption social media, and there are some public who believe that there is a risk would leakage of information when they are on the social media websites. However, I believe the advantages outweigh the disadvantages for social media becoming popular.

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Buying goods and services online is very popular and has many advantages, but it is not always safe to shop online. do you think the advantages gained from shopping online outweigh the disadvantages?

Globalization is emerging at a rapid rate and individuals are being more tech savy, in this modernisation, doing online transactions

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number of male and female partiicpants in the olympics

The following bar chart and graph represent the participation of male and female players in the Olympics in the years 1924 to 2012.

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Children should play online games nowadays. Discuss advantages and disadvantages.

Children at between the age of 4 until 18 they have to play video games to waste their time in finding new games to play on. Video games have purchased several new games for the children to play on. This essay will discuss the advantages and the disadvantages for children to play video games.

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In today's world, private companies rather than government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Nowadays, the private sector is doing notable work in scientific exploration. Some expound that it is a good development because they can invest more in research work, while others oppose this due to the security vulnerability. I equivocate the latter notion and believe that demerits outweigh the merits. In this essay, I shall propagate my viewpoint with reasons.

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in many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents' home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples.

In many nations around the world nowadays, thoughts about young children after they complete their high school. They tend to go out and experience new life on their own or with relatives, and friends. I absolutely agree with this and will discuss it in the next paragraphs.

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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Nowadays a huge number of individuals prefer live their lives near their hometown or in the same country. This essay first will discuss that stable life is the main reason for this choice. Then it will focus on the fact that people live in their comfort zone as the strong side of this topic and will suggest that they lose the chance to know something new and change their lives as key drawbacks.

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The first man to walk on the moon said space exploration was going to change mankind’s life. Some people argue that it made only a little change to our lives. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Curiosity about exploring the world beyond the earth has always been a hot topic of debate amongst the scholars. Some people argue that exploring of space, and reaching on the moon has altered our lives. Meanwhile, the other half believes that it has only made slight changes in human being's life. This essay will explore both the notions and will provide a logical opinion.

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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and university in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

Migrating abroad for tertiary education has become increasingly popular (widespread) among learners. Although it can have some negative outcomes for some , according to me the positives are more potent .

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Some people believe that violent media directly results in violent behavior. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is generally believed that nowadays the number of destructive actions is increasing alarmingly. People said that there are many considerable reasons which lead to this serious problem. In my opinion, I reckon that most of present savage ways are directly relative to violent media by the following causes.

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and cociety. To what extent do you agree?

Today is an era of modernization. When it comes to social media, there are different viewpoints where one group is seen validating this trend and another, descends the same and considers it as fallacious to both individuals and civilization. In this essay, I will be opposing the latter group of people as I believe that it's not social media that is harming people and society, it's their own habits that do so.

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Computers are being used more and more in education and so there will soon be no role for the teacher in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is extremely common that schools and universities are becoming to use computers in an educational mood, but for this reason, the role of a teacher is not less important. I completely disagree with that statement and this essay will explain my point of view in detail.

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Working long hours causes a great deal of stress and can be very bad for the health. The government must find a way to reduce this thype of stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undoubtedly true that the majority of underdeveloped nations suffering through a recession where their rules and regulations are not up to the mark and employers are exploiting the labour and completing their assignments forcefully them. I largely agree with the view that regimes have to take stern steps to deal with this kind of discrimination. I will discuss the way how lawmakers can control this and give my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people believe that it’s important to spend a lot of money on family celebrations while others think it’s a waste of money. Discuss both views

There are two type of people about spending money for celebrations which some people would like to allocate a lot of money, and others would like to spend a small amount of money. Big celebration with big family could bring memorable moment, but small party could make strong bonding. In this paragraphs, we will discuss these two perspectives.

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some people say material possessions are very useful in bringing us happpiness, but others argue that they are useless in terms of providing happiness. discuss both views and give your opinion and reasons

There are a considerable amount of people who opine that having money makes them happy, while others claim that money does not play a role in it. It seems to me that, capital can bring a multitude number of positive emotions but true happiness. In this essay, we will take a look at both sides of the argument.

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