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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many countries have compulsory military service for young men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men, and possibly for women too. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In many countries men have to do military service after school for one or two years. Some people think that this should be compulsory in all countries for men and maybe also for women. I agree that there maybe some benefits to military service but think it shouldn’t be compulsory for all people.

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One of the widely discussed issues these days is the importance of teaching children to distinguish right from wrong at an early age.

One of the widely discussed issues these days is the importance of teaching children to distinguish right from wrong at an early age. Therefore, it is essential for adults to punish their children in order to encourage them to understand this distinction. Personally, I strongly agree with this affirmation for two reasons, firstly it develops the skill of think independently, and secondly it allows them to see the world in several ways.

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Over the last two hundreds years the discoveries in the medical area are considered as the most important progress in our society. This is the widely debated topic and I absolutely agree with it, as these discoveries completely changed people's life for the better.

Over the last two hundreds years the discoveries in the medical area are considered as the most important progress in our society. This is the widely debated topic and I absolutely agree with it, as these discoveries completely changed people's life for the better.

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Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It would indeed be a hard task to isolate a country which is unaffected by the phenomenon of demand for oil and gas .People would not find it shocking ,if, this trend were to heighten in the coming years ,considering the current trajectory of the modern world .Increasingly laid out for all to see and fast becoming a fixture of many discussions is an issue from all that pertains to the effects of oil and gas in remote and untouched areas .This essay shall analyse the issue from all sides and argue that oil and gas have more benefits ,whichever we look at.

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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is quite common these days to play video games in many countries to relax, fun. This trend would create certain benefits but there will also be some drawbacks. This essay will talk about this trend.

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Do the advantages of modern technology outweigh the disadvantages?

In moder times, with the advancement of modern technology, people can enjoy the comforts of life compared with the past. Although there are some drawbacks in modern technology, the wide range of modern technology helps people in office work as well as in housework. I firmly believe that the positive effects of current technology outweighs the negative effects.

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In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Acros

Crime is increasing day by day in many countries and shooting people is one of them. Some folks believe that having weapons at home is the main cause of this. I disagree with this statement, because a lot of people keep guns for self-defence only.

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Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The way the new generations are being raised is different from the 70s and 80s. I believe this is the reason for the high number of crimes among underage children. Thus, psychologists believe that they lack social and emotional learning. I strongly agree and I will discuss my reasons below.

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Your English-spaekng fiend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your firend. In your email recommmend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn Explainn how your friend could learn this sport Suggest that you both learn this sport together

You asked me to recommend a new sport for you to try and my recommendation is figure skating! I think it'd be the perfect sport for you since you already know how to skate and have been speed skating for the past few years. Plus, I think you'd love the pretty dresses figure skaters wear for competitions.

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Some people think getting old is entirely bad. However, others think that life of the elderly in modern world is much easier than in the past. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Getting old is a natural process that nobody really likes. When you reach a certain age, your physical conditions will inevitably deteriorate, and you may suffer from various kinds of diseases. When you retire, you will feel isolated because your previous work contacts may be all gone, then you may feel useless to the world. Furthermore, when you get too old, you’ll have to rely heavily on the support from others, either physically or emotionally, and your life will become a great pressure to your family and the whole society as well.

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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

The maps give information about the current and after the development of the university sports centre.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

There is no doubt that these days several families face this problem the world> The question is, what is the preferable rent or owning a home? I am going to discuss this essay and give my point of view.

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Some people think that because children find subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult, they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?

There is no denying the fact that the phenomenon mathematics and philosophy .Is ubiquitous across the globe due to its paramount importance. One school of thought opines that it is worthless. However, others consider that a couple of problems also occur because of the same. It seems to me, although this has numerous demerits , plethora of merits are also there which will be elaborated on in upcoming paragraphs.

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The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

These pictures illustrate the process of making tomato ketchup. Overall, there are 15 stages in the diagram, from harvesting tomatoes to eating.

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In some countries , more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Most of the countries people are more interested in engaging in finding of history about the houses and buildings that they live in. let’s dig into it further in this essay.

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People should follow the customs and traditions when they start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that one ought to keep his traditional usage and principles when he moved to a new nation to inhabit. This essay totally disagrees with the statement. Each country has its own tradition and life principles and local legislation that must be respected by other people.

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If people go to live in another country, they should follow the local customs and traditions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the question about living abroad has become a hot topic. With the number of people going abroad increasing, it is necessary for people to pay more attention to observe the local customs and traditions. I agree that people should follow the local customs and traditions.

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It is observed that not enough students are choosing to study science. What are the causes of this? What re the effects on society?

Science has been chosen less nowadays, many factors cause this situation and in some cases, every society and government is inflluenced negatively.

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Some people think that the government should ban dangerous sports activities, but others think that people should have the freedom to choose sports activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent days, sports became more significant issues in many countries. Few individuals feel that the government should not allow dangerous sports, but others think that people have the right to choose their interests in sports. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and give my opinion in the summary.

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It is important for the childern to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. puninshment is necesssary to help them learn this distinction. to what extent do youagree or disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment parents and teachers be allowed to use?

Many people say that it is essential for their children to be aware and gain the knowledge on the differences of right and wrong at their early childhood. Therefore,

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