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Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, building new buildings instead of repairing them because repairing is expensive as new build that has become a popular topic and many people think it is worth discussing. However, they still have not come to an agreement with each other on whether the old building is built or the old building is repaired. Whatever each side of the argument thinks, I strongly agree that definitely, the old building should be made again.
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In the future, all cars, buses, and tracks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. What are the advantages and disadvantages.

Technological changes always bring new ideas for users' daily lives. One of the such ideas that transportation facilities can be used without a pilot in the future. Therefore, individuals only take a part in the system as by-passers.
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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

The line graph shows how much money overseas visitors spent in the UK from 1980 - 2010 and the pie charts show the reasons for their visits in 1980 and 2010.
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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or neative situation?

In many countries people prefer to buy a home than rent it temporarly. The reason for that might be loss of sense of stability in their countries. I strongly believe that if citizens feel them confidence about their financial stability, tendency of buying home will significantly decrease.
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Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that these days technology has changed everything in our lives. I completely agree that newspapers will disappear with the development of technology and I disagree that they will remain an important source of news.
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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Due to technological advancement in recent decades, there are certain shifts in the way people interact with each other. These days many are seen online interaction than physical relationship with their neighbours, friends and families around them. Having such relationships we can see positive sides and negative sides as well.
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Some people think cities are the best to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside.Dicuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that living in cities rather than living in the countryside Because of high proposal of employment
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Some people think citites are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

It is thought that cities are the best place to live. Meanwhile, there is an opposition that living in the countryside is better. In my point of view, living in the cities has more opportunities to get a quality jobs and there are also a lot of services that are convenient for people to live. Besides, countryside is an ideal environment to live comfortably without pressure, it has less modern facilities and services as well.
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Some people think cities are the best place to live. Other prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some individuals consider cities as the best place to live whereas there are some people who believe the countryside is better. This essay will discuss both views with a conclusion at the end.
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Some people think cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Many individuals believe that cities are the greatest accommodation to spend their lives living in. Others desire to live in rural areas. In my opinion, both places have advantages and disadvantages.
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Some people think cities are the best place to live. Other prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is thought the best place to live is in cities while others prefer to live in the countryside. This writer agree with the first statement as its modern.
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The best way to solve the environment problem is to increase fuel prices. Agree or disagree

It would be a splendid idea to peak the fair of the gasoline. I would disagee the statement.
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Some people think cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In modern time, choosing the place to live plays a vital role in the life of everybody , especially young people. Somebody believed that metropolis are the suitable place to live whereas another disagree with this statement. It is the opinion of this writer that the latter choice is the best option.
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Many people believe that teachers and students in the classroom will no longer exist by the year 2050. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by several individuals that by the end of 2050, the classroom will not accommodate learners and tutors. Although I accept that online courses are making this trend real up to some extent, I disagree with this assumption of completely eradicating the existence of schools.
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An increasingly number of professionals , such as doctors and teachers , are leaving their own poorer countries yo work in developed countries . What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation ?

Nowadays,  many professionals such as doctors or teachers prefer to live in developing countries so they leave their own home and country . In my ,opinion this is largely because of  inexpensive payment  and  lack of modern work devices and the best solution lies in increasing employment and salary  for professionals and creating a comfortable and well-equipped workplace.
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Part 1: The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plans illustrate the changes that will happen to the layout of the sports centre at the present time and how it will be redeveloped in future of a university.
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Rich country often gives money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore developed country should give other types of help to the poorer countries rather than financial aid. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Affluent counties frequently donate financial aid to underprivileged regions, however these efforts are futile. Consequently, there should be other kinds of asassistance rather than monetary help. I completely agree with this view as given money is wasted inappropriately and should be given in other forms.
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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that the people who have the professional jobs like doctors, laywers, or engineers have to work only in the country where they have studied and others think that the professionals have the right to choose the country where they work.
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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps illustrate the changes which took place in the public park, Grange Park, from 1920 to today.
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It is widely believed that parents should teach their children to be good members of society,but there is a strong

It is widely believed that parents should teach their children to be good members of society,but there is a strong argument among people that school is the right place to educate children.
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