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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

academy plays an important role in the overalll development of children. Young minds learn alot from the school and it's environment. Children develop their social, physical and emotional skills over here. During this some of kids started facing issues with their social skills as a result of this they started having problems with student behaviour.

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The best way to improve health is through regular exercise, to what extent do you agree or disagree

It is sometimes considered that the most effective means of promoting health is by engaging in consistent physical workout. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this view because exercise promotes physical fitness and reduces the risk of developing certain diseases.

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some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing

Some people argue that there is not nothing bad if you are sticked doing same activities regularly while others can not live without changing. In this essay, I will look both sides of the argument and give my own opinion.

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People nowadays tend to have children at older ages Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent times, people prefer to have their offsprings at older age, this might lead to some complications but I think it enables the couples to be able to prepare for the child birth financially and psychologically,moreover,complications as a result of having children at older age can be corrected with the modern technology.

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Today more people are waiting until their thirties to get married and have children. Do you think this is a positive and negative development?

Presently, most of the people do not want to get married and have children in order to create the career till thier thirties. I am completely certain that first of all, every human being should create thier own life before they get married and have children.

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Many can’t speak or present well in public. Some people think that it is important to speak well in public, so the training should be from school. Do you agree or disagree?

No doubt , it is crucial to speak well in public for school going student ,however the school play significant role in this trends as the student spend maximum hours in the school .Although this issue contains various views and i Personally agree with this statement which i can briefly explain in upcoming paragraphs.

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Studies show that many people in the prison have low level of education. For this reason, some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate in prison, so that they can get a job when they leave prison. To what extent do you agree.

Most of the prisons around the world have majority of prisoners who are confined for one crime case or the other, however it is supposed by people that that the best way is to ensure formal learning so that they would get job after they leave the prison, therefore in my opinion it is agreed that this theory should be emphasized, however this essay will pinpoint the reasons.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this contemporary era, there are contrasting views, where one section of society believes that it is preferable to put boys and girls in separate gender schools for their education, and other section is of the mindset that all students may find it more advantageous when they study in co-education school. This essay will elucidate both these view points in detail over subsequent paragraphs.

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Although most people are richer than in the past, modern life seems very stressful and the number of people are suffering from stress is at a record level. What are the main causes of stress in modern life and how stress could be reduced.

here are several reasons why people are more anxious in modern society in comparison with previous centuries. Both problems and its solutions will be mentioned in the following paragraphs. This essay elaborates on the reasons for high stress in regular life and possibilities to solve this.

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some people think that iNTERNET HAS BROUGHT PEOPLE CLOSER TOGETHER WHILE OTHERS THINK THAT PEOPLE AND COMMUNITIES ARE BECOME MORE ISOLATED. DISCUSS BOTH SIDES AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

There are some arguments that agree that social network connects everyone together, while many people would not agree with that point. This essay will discuss how social media can help everyone keep in touch easily, showing the confidence of people who would prefer face-to-face meetings, and why I prefer using the social network to offline meet.

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The picture shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram given illustrates the process of how wasted glass bottles are recycled.

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Some children spend hours on their smartphones everyday. Why is this the case? Do you think his is a positive or negstive development.

Nowadays some youngsters overuse smartphones daily. The main reason behind it is risen demand on these devices amoung the elder people that are role model for youngsters and also amount if intertainment that smartphones contain.This is overall a negative trend for young generation despite one single benefit that it may bring out.

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More and more people are moving away from agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work.What will be the reasons of this.What solutions can you offer.

In the contemporary epoch individuals opt to reside in urban areas rather than in countryside in order for them do make a decent living.To me not only does this phenomenon have adverse impact on countries economy,but also dwindle agricultural sphere and I will develop this idea in subsequent paragraphs.This discourse is to appraise reasons of this issue and preventive measures to tackle with it.

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Neglegtion of science based subjects.Reasons and solution

In the conteporary epoch the problem of neglegting science based subject in university increaseS*rapidly severe in numerous nations and countries.From my staindpoint the main reason of this is low income with which this faculties provide their students in the future,however there are other crucial reasons for this phenomenon.In this discourse i am to appraise the main reasons and negative consequenses of this phenomenon.

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Some students work while studying, resulting in a lack of time for education and constant pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

While acquring an education is essential, numerous students multitask out of necessity, causing them to sacrifice precious study time and puts them in a contant state of frenzy. Furthermore, it strikes as an obstacle for them to be on top of their coursework. One might investigate various factors leading to such situations for learners; identifying the grass-root problem can help devise a solution to alleviate the students' exhaustion.

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Today more people are overweight than before.what in your opinion are the primary cause of this? What are the main effect of this epidemic?

Nowadays, it has been noticed by summer individual that people now weigh more than they use to. This is largely due to their inactive life style and over consumption of processed foods which had increased the rate of morbidity and mortality. This essay will explain these with relevant examples and a logical conclusion Will be drawn.

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Some people think that they can be fit by going to gym, while other think that there are other better way to remain fit. Discuss both the views with your opinion.

In recent times, gyms have gained immense popularity amongst the youth and working folks. Many believe and credit gyms for their fitness, however, people are also of the opinion that there are various other methods to be healthy. This essay discusses both point of views as well as expresses my opinion.

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Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home, and more children will study from home, as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this will be a positive or negative development?

In this contemporary era, the advancement of technology has led people to work or study from home as computers have become cheaper and can be accessed easily. This essay will discuss my complete agreement on this notion and we will elucidate the reasons in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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People nowadays tend to have children at older age. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

In recent times people are adhering to the culture of giving birth at older age. Most importantly this phenomenon affects the children in one aspect or the other. Therefore, this essay will highlight the pros and cons of giving birth at later age.

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People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages ?

Nowadays, people tend to start childbearing at their older ages.

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