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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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the role of women in society has changed dramatically over the last 100 years. Today, however, the burden on women continues to be heavy as a result of the numerous roles women are expected to fulfill. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, it has become quite noticeable that more and more adults do not settle in the areas which lay in proximity to places of their birth, instead opting to move further away from them. There are many reasons for such behavior. However, what remains quite unclear is whether this trend is affecting communities positively or is it the other way around.

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In many countries, crime rates among younger people have been rising in recent years. What are the causes of this, and what are the possible solutions?

In many nations, the number of offenders is growing rapidly among young people. The causes of this are lack of education and poverty and two possible solutions are providing job opportunities and supporting the government.

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Some people say that living in an apartment has many advantages compared to living in a detached house. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Few individuals believe that dwelling in an apartment is more advantageous as compared to residing in an independent home. I ,wholeheartedly , agree with the former because an penthouse offers surveillance along with all the luxuries one could think of. These will be explained in the coming passages.

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Some people think money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness

It is an undeniable fact that a great number of humans suggest that financial independence is one of the pieces of joyfulness in contemporary society. Firstly, this essay will discuss about happy, which cannot be purchased with money and secondly, will discuss an array of factors, that contribute to happiness.

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In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?

The majority of people in the world are desire to be aware of the history and relevant information where we live. The essay would discuss the main reasons for this and how can people research this information.

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The media is increasing interest in famous people who have ordinary backgrounds. Why do you think people are interested in the lives of famous people? Do you think this is a good thing?

To a larrge extend , I agree it is a great things. Media is a trend that we live in this generation, a fast technology can make a big decision while the " KOL" can be seen or not. Some of the famous people do not put much effort so that they can under the light sports whith the orgianl background. Human used to sick the attendtion from others and interested the lives of the extraordinary people. In this essay, I will focus on two aspects in the life experience and the the ability of the noraml people.

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Many people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access to software. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

To access the software of technology companies, many individuals are choosing the option of sharing their personal information. This essay argues despite the main advantage of this trend is that they get free access of application software from technology companies, I believe that there are more disadvantages as their personal data can be stolen by anyone easily.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what exten do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort punishments should be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Upbringing kids is one of the most crucial issues that people have struggled to find an appropriate way. Warning with sort of disciplines is mentioned as an essential method, however, to the point of my view encouragement is more effective since it would be just like a motivation. nevertheless, punishment on the moderate scale just for facing what consequences their mistake has had is acceptable.

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Students learn far more from teachers at schools and universities than from other sources such as the Internet and TV programs. Do you agree or disagree?

Teachers play an important role in making learning easy in schools and colleges and children are more likely to learn better from teachers than online resources and TV programs. I completely agree with this point of view because teachers have specialised knowledge and expertise of a particular subject and they can explain easily by using real-life examples.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?

Currently, in many countries, owning a home rather than renting one is important for many people. I believe this helps to maintain their financial status in society. However, it can be seen as a negative effect that many have to depend on housing loans as a result of that.

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Some people are fond of buying new gadgets phones or laptop is this a good or bad thing discuss your opinion

Nowadays technology has been popular in all over the world. Moreover, few masses opine that obtaining computers or laptops are play a splendid role in the mankind life unless, others notion that it has numerous terrible impact on their life. In this essay I partially agree that because masses can go any other seightseeing places with their gadget and without any difficulties however, this technique has multiple worse impact in health issue as well as funding problems may arise if humankind purchase a high quality software.

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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been widelly debated if the most relevant technological advance in the last century is the development of computers. I wholeheartedly agree with this statement because the use of the computer completely changed the way people communicate and interact with each other, and its invention also influenced the development of other technological devices and resources.

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People think that using smart phone in public areas should be banned. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, smartphones have become an important thing that almost cannot be separated from our lives. Although they have made communication much easier in each step of our daily lives, some societies argue that they should be reduced in public places such as libraries, shops and public vehicles. Personally, I partially agree with this opinion. The following paragraphs will explain my personal perspective along with relevant examples.

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Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people have various views about limiting make a some noise. The other part of them think we should make a noise when we want. Also, if we don't agitate with annoyed loud sound to others, we will can it. I strongly ally with this idea that community should can let out when they want. I will elaborate more on this point throughout this essay.

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Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today, because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. Do you agree or disagree?

People do not just go to museums to enjoy an art exhibition only, they want to see also the structures, history and aesthetics features of a local museum, which varies depending on each geographical area. For example, a Western museum is surely different from a museum in an Asian country in terms of building materials and also the ways artworks showed there. If online artwork could satisfy art connoisseurs or history enthusiasts, art exhibitions showing Van Gogh paintings would not be sold out quickly. For those who really know how to enjoy a piece of art, there is nothing that can replace the real-time interaction between the viewers and the real art work.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this day and age, it is a common belief that unpaid community service ought to be a compulsory part of high school programmes. However, I only partly agree. I will shed light on my opinion in the following essay.

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Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree! Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or expenence.

Nowadays, people are swayed to buy products because of the powerful advertisement that companies uses, despite not needing these products. I agree to this notion as there are a lot of businesses utilise social media influencers to promote almost anything, as well as confusing consumers with graphics online to make them visit websites.

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Motor vehicle crashes are one of the leading causes of teen deaths. To prevent such road accidents, the government should ban people under 24 to drive motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that riding motorcycles for young individuals under 24 must be banned due to the reduction of horrible deaths caused by horrific road accidents. Althrough, I agree that national authorities should establish safe driving laws in order to reduce crashes, it is unnecessary to prevent young people from driving motorcycles.

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Some people think robots can improve human life in future, while others think robots may affect society in a bad way. Discuss both view points and give your opinion.

Nowadays, technology become a part of our lives, and every day we see big changes in technology improvement.

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The pictures show the steps involved in making coffee products.

The pictures show the steps involved in making coffee products. Looking from an overall perspective, there are 8 steps in the process, beginning with harvesting, and ending with purchasing of coffee products.

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