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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think the role of parents is to discipline their children and teach them about right and wrong. Other people consider that the main responsibility of parents is to nurture their children and provide them a Safe environment to grow up in. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?

People hold differents opinions on how parents should raise their children effaciously. While there are those who believe that educating their young ones the discernment of what is right from wrong; other opine that provision of safe environment and proper sustenance are parent's main responsibility to confer to their children. In my opinion, both views are equally valid and necessary inorder to effectively bring up their young ones.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in cities and towns closing. Do you agree or disagree.

Over the last few decades, shopping online is becoming increasingly in demand. For many people, particularly youngsters, the chance of buying products from the internet is more attractive, since it is easier and faster to compared with buying from a physical store. Nevertheless, there are pros and cons to consider it. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why it is more popular to buy from the Internet as well as some of the challenges to be overcome.

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Students should choose a university that prepares them for high-paying careers. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Numerous factors play a role in selection of career path, whether to choose a profession with a lot of financial reward or to go for a sector where one’s interest resides. Some advocates that undergraduates should choose a field with high cash return, however, I strongly disagree to that belief and this essay will outline why.

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The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land in sea ? What are the reasons and solutions.

It is a vital issue which happening around every corner of the world. The animal species are disappearing in forest, zoo and ocean because of experimental of the technologies and scarcity of living lands for human. There are several steps which would help to stop the extinction of valuable spices and animals.

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations. Support your ideas with examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing.

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Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

In this contemporary world , it had became common to sent elders to old-age homes. This on going tend is supported by many , while others focuses on the disadvantages in this aspect. This essay discuss both merits and demerits and finally arrive to a conclusion.

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Traveling through air is increasing now a days. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of traveling through air.

The bar chart reveals, the rate of post-school qualifications in Australia and the ratio of gender, which held them in 1990.

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In some countries people who visit art galleries are reducing what are the reason for this. How can this problem be solved.

In modern society, the number of people in the museum is decreasing, especially in the art gallery. In a few countries ,the visitors are almost stable, such as the Louvre in Paris or the British Museum in London, but those are the exception. There are several reasons for the low numbers.

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Some people think that you can never become fluent in a language unless you have spent time living in that country. To what extent do you agree?

Though english is considered as lingua Franca across the globe, a person gets advantage if he has a grasp of the native language of that country. There has been a considerable debate over how a person can gain expertise in a foreign language. Some people opine that it is necessary to stay in that country. This essay will argue why it is important to have exposure in foreign country so that a person can easily learn the language.

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Some people encourage young children to leave their parents house as soons as they become adults while other say children should stay at their parents house as long as possible. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Recently, it has been a controversially beated debate about whether children should reside in their parent’s households or move out to settle on independent life as an adult. In my own perspective, I argued the second idea to be not only logical, but also righteous for numerical reasons.

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More and more businesses, as well as individuals, are choosing to either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.

one of the most conspicuous trends in today’s world is a colossal upsurge in thinking of use technology in the business. There is widespread worry that it will lead to a deluge of problems. However, I do not entirely accept this, and I will explain the reasons in the coming paragraphs.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is believed that these days there are an arrange of choice. I completely agree with this statement and will give my reasons below.

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Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so?

It is an undeniable fact, that parents nowadays entice their children to look for a part time job to make their free time valuable. In this essay we will examine the benefits and as well as the drawbacks of young pupils working at an early age. However, I believe that pupils should not work as it can deviate their mind from studies and goal of life, for which they need to work hard.

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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

There are numerous reported cases of commiting crimes by former prisoners after they are released. Many countries try to tackle this problem, however they have not solved it yet. The number of causes of this situation is overwhelming, therefore it is difficult to find the best solution.

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More workers work overtime and had less exercise. What is your opinion?

Work is worship, It is inevitable part of life and important in order to earn bread and butter. Health is most important factor to live healthy life. Work and exerciese should be equally important for life and it should be equally balance but many people work overtime and ignore physical exercies. In my opinion work overtime and less exercises create many problems which I mention below.

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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

In these past decade, variety of musics have been developing around the nations. Both traditional and modern music are still becoming part of music industry until now. In my opinion, both genres are important and have their own impact to the community. The reasons why people need music will be described in this essay.

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Some people believe the best way to produce a better society is to ensure there is only a small difference between the earnings of the richest and the poorest. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is claimed that some people think creating a harmony society by shrinking the salary difference between the wealth and needy people is the best way.To state my opinion,I completely disagree this point of view.

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Digital communication technology, such as email, instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and connection between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

A lot of tools are available to the public to simplify communication. Email, messaging application, and social media have greatly enhanced the way people can interact with each other.

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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, technology has a very big influence on people lives, especially in more advanced and industrialized countries. Although its' development has a lot of advantages and one of them is decreasing the crime rate by preventing and solving crimes.

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Some cities have few controls over design and construction on housing and office building. People think that they are free to choose the design they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

City planning is a crucial decision for local authorities. Some people argue that urban planning should involve a few regulations based on free choices, while others believe that city should be designed based on controls. This essay will point out why advantages of establishing regulations outweight disadvantages.

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