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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people argue that in the future, teachers will be displaced by the growth of computers. How far do you agree or disagree?

Throughout centuries, education has been one of the most critical issue for all nations. It also has changed in terms of methods ,which react to our society with technological tools that really affect our systems. Whatever the devices are effectively important for modern world, teaching is a complex and specific matter which becomes teachers as important as technology. I strongly support that teachers have to be in the education system permanently because they can approach pupils sociologically and psychologically.

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Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say trees should be planted in the vacant area of cities and towns .while other believe housing facilities should be built instead. Do agree or disagree?

The diagram illustrates the numerous stages of producing woollen things using raw materials from sheep.

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Some people think that competitive sports should be included as a subject in school, while others believe that it has negative effect on children. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

Adolescents are strongly influenced by famous people, they believe that these stars are the perfect example to follow to have success in life. I believe this thought can have a negative development on young souls, because many are not able to distinguish what it is right and what is wrong to emulate. By doing this they could end up in copying some bad actions done by their idol.

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Some people believe that the best way to control accidents on city streets is to lower the speed limit, but others think there are better ways to improve the safety on city streets. Discuss both views and give your opinion

A certain segment of the people believe that imposing speed limit is the best way to control road accidents, while the others of the view that there are other measures to curb the situation. This essay hopes to discuss both these view and arrive at a conclusion.

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Some people believe that the best way to control accidents on city streets is to lower the speed limit, but others think there are better ways to improve the safety on city streets. Discuss both views and give your opinion

A certain segment of the people believe that imposing speed limits is the best way to control road accidents, while the others of the view that there are other measures to curb the situation. This essay hopes to discuss both these views and arrive at a conclusion.

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In many countries, traditional dress and costumes are considered efective ways of maintaining links with the past. How ef ective can traditional costumes be, in this sense? What other ways exist to help citizens connect with a country’s past?

Nowadays, people are changed as time changed. So, people use to change in their daily activities and fashion sense. Like, in the past people ware use to wear simple homemade clothes which was shows their culture also we can easily identify by clothes. But now the community changed their fashion so they were modern clothes.

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It has been noted that many people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their work and did not bother with the idea of “work-life balance”. To what extent should people try to have a good work-life balance? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As we can see in many biographies, famous people tended to devote all their lives to their careers, which make some people wonder whether we should take the work-life balance idea seriously. However, I strongly agree that the work-life balance is crucial to our lives.

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Some people think the cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom. However, others think that cheap air flights should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is said that low-cost airplane provides more travel opportunity to the public, while some argue that it ought to be banned due to the pollution problems. However, I entirely concur with the former statement on a basis of broarden people's horizon by can visit different countries freely.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or book because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people are of the opinion that nobody will purchase printed newspapers, books, and magazines since they will be able to find and read all of them for free. In my point of view, I totally agree with the opinion that individuals will be able to read everything online without paying. This topic will examine agreement with the topic and two arguments will be given.

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To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?

Due to the rise of population, people need more food to eat. However, a country should not utilise insects based food as a food source because eating them has a negative effects on earth.

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues facing the world today. What are some of the causes of global warming? How is it affecting our planet, and what can government and individuals do to solve the problem?

In the recent modern world, danger of global warming has been increasing and threating our daily lives. There are a few critical reasons that this issue is escalating, namely, an increasing fossil fuel usage and deforesting of green areas on the earth. As a result of these conducts, CO2 emissions has been surged and that has been damaging atmosphere of the earth. I believe there is a significant role that government should do to prevent this issue and each one of us can should also take an important part to protect the world.

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In many workplaces, online communication is getting more common than meeting face to face. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, online communication is getting more popular than meeting face to face in many companies. In my opinion, online conversations have more benefits compared to its drawbacks.

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Some people think multiple choice tests are better than tests which require you to write an essay. Other people think that tests which require you to write an essay are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether multiple choice examination is more worthwhile than writing an essay to determine your education. I am in favor of the opinion that it should be essential to write an essay on the given topic.

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The percentage of overweight children in the western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

There has been much discussion revolving around the question why there has been a rise of obese youngsters in the western society and what effects it could have. This essay will explain possible causes and effects of it.

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It has been said that reading for pleasure is better in developing imagination and language skills than watching TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people assert that reading books develops imagination and language skills better, than watching television. Personally, I am in favour of the latter view that TV can also expand speaking skills and creativity in a person.

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Some people think multiple choice tests are better than tests which require you to write an essay. Other people think that tests which require you to write an essay are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There is a debate going on whether the multiple-choice tests are better than the tests which requires you to write an essay. There are pros and cons to each type of tests, and I am going to present them.

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Many people believe that educational standards have decliend in recent times, particularly int he areas of literacy and numeracy. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.

In several countries, some people think it is needed to spend big amount of money on constructing new railway for bullet trains between cities and some people think it is better to spent money on enhance existing public transport. While thinking of the benefits for the citizen, I believed that it better to improve existing public transport to provide commute workers.

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Some business prohibit smoking in any of their offices. some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, majority of the business prohibits smoking in any of their companies, and lots of countries have banned smoking in their workplace

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Many nowadays prefer online education to face to face education. Do you consider this a positive or a negative development?

In the last three years ago, the pandemic situation has a huge change for this world. Especially, Education that people must have to learn through online channel than onsite since covid-19 situation and affect presently. Many prefer online study more than face to face study at school. In my opinion, onsite learning is greater than online study, as I will explain.

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Developments in science and technology have caused environmental problems. Some people think that a simpler way of life will protect the environment, while others believe that science and technology can solve environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is hard to deny that a simpler lifestyle can reduce the consumption of all kinds of resources. Such a fact leads some people generate the opinion that this way of life will protect our environment. However, I firmly believe that the development of science and technology is the best way to tackle the environmental challenge.

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