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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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These days more father's stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays it is seen that dad's are staying at home and looking after their child, while, mom's are , in stead of staying at home, working outside. Women are actually working outside for couple of reasons : to make a financial contribution for he family and to adept themselves with the outside world. This essay will justify that it is obviously a good indicator considering all the perspectives.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.

Currently, the languages which they disappear, because of unusual the impacts which they caused the reasons of development of the modern life. Every year many languages vanish. Some people believe that it is not crucial, the fact that the life we know will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. I think that the vanishing some languages will make the factors that all the difficulties people confront while to do communication with foreign language will reduce that sort of conditions.

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14.Although families have powerful influence on children, the influence that comes from outside the family plays a bigger part in children’s development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Children's development is mainly impacted by their families, but there is no denial effect from others. I absolutely agree with this opinion, thanks to modern technological improvement the younger generation easily influences others.

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When we meet someone for the first time, we generally decide very quickly what kind of person we think they are and if we like them or not. ls this a good thing or a bad thing?

It seems natural for people to judge others according to their outlooks or behaviors at the first glance and decide whether to make friends with them. I partially agree that this judgement can benefit us and also think it can sometimes cause problems.

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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

By the thinking of that households should not be inquired to pay taxes supporting the state education system is narrow perspective. And this essay will be discussed about this statement and put the lights about it.

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Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although some people say that taking certain percentages of income to pay taxes is huge enough to contribute to their country; in my opinion, I believe people have greater responsibilities as members of society. In this article, I will talk about both sides and explain why I support the latter.

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Many parents send their children on educational trips inside and outside of their country. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays days, more kids are being encouraged by their parents to go on study tours both in the country and abroad. The outcome of such trips can have both positive and negative impacts. In the essay, I will try to explain both views.

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Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

There is no doubt that the measuring scale for the success of a person is wealth and materialistic things. I am disagreed that money is the only success factor in human life.Factors of success vary from person to person which I would discuss further in this essay.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good membes of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion..

Children have to learn how to become good members of society whether their parents or schools have the responsibility of this action. Some people believe that parents should be the one, however, others believe that school is the only place to understand this moral rule. I assume parents should be incharge for teaching how to become good members in a society.

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Some people think that we sould replace old buildings and houses in cities with more modern buildings. Other people think we should protect old buildings. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, the need of people of life in modern buildings is increasing in large measure due to technology helping to improve the quality of life of humans. Although, other people consider that we should protect old buildings instead of spoiling them

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Some people think that children should be taught at school to recycle materials and avoid waste. Other people believe that children should be taught this at home. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

It is often argued that schools should own the responsibility to give awareness among youngsters about goods recycling and waste depletion whilst others disagree and thinks that homes are considered as a better learning place for kids for such education. While primary educational institutes are considered to be the initial learning place for growing minds, I believe that parents' and grandparents' contributions can not be neglected. In this essay, I will discuss in favour of school rather than the living place as a suitable land for children to understand the importance of recycling and discourage waste production with relevant examples.

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In some countries, there is not enough respect for elderly people. Why is this the case Suggest some solutions to address this issue.

In some nations, there is not sufficient respect for senior individuals. there are several causes of these issue including, absence of strict punishments, and social media, howover, I would like to recommend some measures to address this issue such as, government could introudce laws and raise awareness among public regarding respect for older people.

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Many people work long hours leaving very little time for leisure activities .does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages.

Many of them are trying to get success life. Therefore, they are working long hours without rest time. Because, extra time works, individuals are able to get more money. Thus, folk continue work; as a ,result society gets more disadvantages rather than advantages. This opinion I am going to explain further paragraphs with relevant examples.

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Students should spend time working before beginning their university studies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a common view that young people should find task between leaving institution and starting educational institution for their own personal development. It is the opinion of this writer that students should not seek employment until the completion of their academic studies.

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Many people think student should spend time working before university study. dicuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people think that students should spend time working before going to university. Therefore, in this essay, I will look at two main reasons for whether or not to get a job before college.

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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Spending much budgets on railway systems is considered as a better approach in comparison with roads.Some critics believe that goverment should pay considerable attention to these infrastructures.I totally disagree with allocating much more finance on railways and through following paragraphs I elaborate some aspects of this public issue.

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Student should spent time working before begining thier University studies.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that pupil should do part time jobs before starting thier University college . It is agree by some student that should be spend some hours to working, therefore this wirter will show the agree of this opinion.

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Students should spend more time to working before begining the university studies. Do you argee or disargee?

It is think that young ages who started to go to the university, should spend free time to apply the job. While I argue that, I totally agreed that teenagers can be allowed to experience the earning activities.

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The only way to improve safety of our roads is to give much stricter punishments on driving offences. To what extent do you agree with this idea? Answer

Day by day, the number of casualties on the road skyrocketed as if everyone is taking lives as a joke. One of the solution that seems sensible to overcome this problem is by giving a heavier penalties toward the people who disobey the laws. In this essay, I will be discussing on why I am firm with this ideology.

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The process below shows the process of growing and making products from pineapple. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagram illustrates several steps of how the cultivation of pineapples and the production of goods made from them are carried out.

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