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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people believe that rich countries should provide poorer countries with help that is not financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whenever a poor nation is hit by calamity, the government and various organizations all over the world support it. However, critics think that the well-off nation should distribute gifts in kind instead of monetary endowment. I agree with this although there are a few acceptions two reasons in favour of the idea and an exemption is explained below along with a conclusion.

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You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.

My name is Adriana Fonseca, I currently hold an account at Bank of America and yesterday I received my bill related to my credit card, I need your help to solve the problem that I am facing with a lot of charges.

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Topic: Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is reducing the amount of maximum speed of vehicles. Others think that other ways exist. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Road safety is the major priority nowadays as there are a lot more drivers as compared to the past. It is believed by some to reduce the speed and others think of some alternative ways instead of adopting the former one. Therefore, I will discuss both views in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people think that school and government should take responsibility to transport children to school. While some people think that parents should get children to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, there is a debate about who should be responsible to take children to school. Some people believe governments should take the responsibility of commuting students to school, while opponents argue that children should be safeguarded by parents when they are going to school. In this essay, I would like to analyze the two statements above and give my own opinion that school is supposed to be the sector that transports students to school.

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Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, some individuals opine that children have to stay at home and enjoy their time playing without enrolling in schools at this early age, others would argue that they must go to school as soon as possible. Although I am convinced that children have the right to enjoy themselves at home, I would support the second opinion that they must go to school as soon as possible.

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The plans below show the layout of the ground floor of a school library in 2001, and how it changed as a result of renovations in 2009.

The map depicts how the design of the ground floor of the school library was transformed after being rebuilt over a period of 8 years ( 2001 - 2009 ).

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Why are some people who leave school early more successful compared with those who complete their studies. Provide reasons why they are more successful and what are the requirements for success?

To become well-accomplished in life, you need more than education. In this essay, I am going to elaborate, how many drop-outs become successful than, those who completed their schooling.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about leg of sleep?

These days, people are getting fewer and fewer hours of sleep , an action that leads to lots of health and behavioural problems. This essay will discuss the main issues associated with this habit, and propose a possible solution .

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Some people believe that the best way to travel within a city is by car. Others believe it is best to travel by bicycle. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, everyone has their personal cars and they use it for transportation purposes. Even they need to go anywhere in the city. On contrary, the use of cycle is getting declined. Some argue that, using car as mode of transporation is best for travelling within city. But, others argue cycling is best option for travelling. I strongly believe that, we should use bicycle for going anywhere within the city. And in this essay, i shall discuss its benefits as well.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Through international organisations as well as bi- and multilateral partnerships, developed countries have given financial aid to developing nations. Nevertheless, there have been no remarkable results among poorer countries from this assistance. Thus, there is an increasing idea that wealthy countries should help by alternative ways rather than continuing to give money. Although financial aid is still essential for plenty of developing nations, I agree that the support of great powers should not stop at money.

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A country's future depends on it's young people. Therefore, a country should invest heavily in its youth. Do you agree or disagree?

It is reckoned that young citizens are able to define their country’s future, hence, a country ought to invest significantly in its youth. From my aspect, I, 16, strongly agree with the thought.

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The picture below shows the difference in the layout of the conference centre in 2010 and 2025. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture illustrates the changes in the appearance of a conference centre between 2010 and 2015.

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Students leave high school without learning how to manage their money. What are the reasons and solutions for this issue?

It is true that teenagers graduate from high school without knowing how to handle their finances. I will discuss about that oppinion and give causes and solves/SOLUTIONS for that problem.

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowdays, buying things on online shops, such as groceries, clothes and movie tickets, is becoming more popular. So, for this many people now are talking about how to take advantage of online shopping, On another hand they are a huge group warning for the affecting of internet shopping.

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Childcare training courses should be mandatory for all parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples.

Parenting is one of the crucial roles in everyone's life. Some people think that childcare training courses should be compulsory for all parents. However, others believe that childcare is an instinct for individuals. I agree with the former notion and I will also discuss the benefits of childcare training classes in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email • recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn • explain how your friend could learn this sport • suggest that you both learn this sport together.

It was a pleasure hearing from you. In your letter, you wanted my advice on learning a new sport. I believe this is a brilliant idea as indulging in a new sport will not only improve your current skills but also help you in maintaining an active lifestyle. These days various sports there are becoming popular which you can explore.

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MANY PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT MODERN MUSIC CAN HAVE A NEGETIVE IMPACT ON THE YOUNG. OTHERS BELIEVE THE EFFECT OF MODERN MUSIC IS POSITIVE.

Music is a form of art that has the power to transfer emotions to humans. As a matter of a fact, depending on its different attributes, it could influence positively or negatively the people that listen to it. In this essay, I will explain how this phenomenon happens focusing on modern music and its impact on youth generations.

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: Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unneccessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.

It is thought many people that kids should always be around their clans while others claim that this activity is unneeded or even harmful. In my point of view, I think that it is crucial for children to spend time together with their families.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, medical care is the most important in a human life. It's is necessary to take care of our health. However, on this generation the medical care has evolved significantly such as, machines and technology, this helps in the treatment of serious diseases, for example, cancers, heart disease and other diseases it could infect humans.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this a positive or a nagative development?

In this days it's widely noticed that due to unstoppable, massive abandoning of rural territories, the number of countryside people is declining. And dramatically, as any phenomenon, it also has its advantages and disadvantages. In my point of view, it can mostly lead to negative consequences. So, in the upcoming paragraphs, there will be shed a light on the dark side of such sort of migration.

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