IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 737

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many people spend a lot of money on clothes, haircut and beauty products to enhance their appearance. Discuss advantages and disadvantages.

millennium has ushered mankind to ever increasing need of maintaining one’s image. It seems easier to people to get same by purchasing apparels and cosmetics. I intend to explore merits and demerits of this tendency in upcoming segments.

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In some countries, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

Sometimes parents give their children freedom to make their own decision on everyday matters. Some people say it is a wrong idea because in the future these children more likely to think only about themselves, I think it plays a crucial role in the development of children.

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Smacking childern is the best form of discipline To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education comes from parent plays an importance in the growing process of children. And each parent will have different actions and Smacking children is also a way to teach them when they are spoiled. In my point of view, I disagreed that Smacking is a good way to control Children. The effects of Smacking on children and some serious issues will prove this.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's topic, few people believe that the adolescent group should do their part for the community in the meantime without getting paid. As well they do trust that it will benefit them and society. In my opinion, I agree that teenagers taking part in volunteering will help in their personal growth.

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In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

In the recent years, There is a trend of having external cuisine instead of the domestic one. There is a multitude of reasons contributing to this issue, so several measures must be taken to surge the turnover of the local cuisine.

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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. what damage does plastics do to the environment? What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem?

There is no doubt that plastic pollution is one of the serious and growing issues to the environment. In this essay, I will discuss what negative impacts plastic products has on the earth, and also outline what measures government and individuals can take to deal with this important matter.

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Some people think that in the modern world we have become more dependent on each other, while others think that people are now more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The swiftly evolving modern society has been deeply changing the live pattern of all the people. Especially after we steping into the era of the internet , everything that had been considered a complex task can be easily finished without too much effort. Some people thus claim that we are associated more and more tightly.

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The take below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates the details of the underground railway network in six several cities over the centuries. Overall, it is immediately apparent from the chart that the highest number of commuters frequently used the railway network in Tokyo, while London has the oldest railway system with the longest route.

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Social media addiction: Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s ,world it is argued by some people that the use of mobile applications such as Facebook has bad effects on individuals and society as well. I partly agree with this point of view.

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Some people think it is acceptable to use animals for the benefit of humans. Other people think it is wrong to exploit animals for human purposes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about animal protection and animal rights. However, whether we should utilize animals for human purposes has recently caused a heated debate. In my view, it is acceptable to reasonably use animals for the benefit of mankind and impossible to completely cut down the human's reliance on animals.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutio

Nowadays mankind is dealing with a huge headache caused by global climate change , and the gradual increase of ocean levels has been frightening. This essay will try to examine several problems caused by global warming and two elementary measures for tackling the problem.

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Many people are choosing to move to cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Moving to cities, also known as urbanisation, is a phenomenon where loads of people from rural areas move closer to the heart of a city. In common, the urbanisation movement is done to reach a goal; a better financial situation for the family in order to fulfil the basic needs for daily life. Most people who grew up in rural areas do not get equally proper education at an early age. Thus, they are likely not able to step higher into getting a better job to support the family's financial condition. People believed that moving to the cities would create a better future for the family. Truth be told, it is not just a mere grapevine heard by the people.

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Global warming is one of the various climate issues. Discuss the possible causes and offer measures to control the damage caused.

Global warming is one of the major concerns for our environment since our childhood. We all have read and learn a lot about it since years and this is currently giving some major setbacks to climate and weather all around the world. There are various causes of this that includes burning bio-fuel, chemical waste from factories amd deforestation. I will discuss few major causes along with solutions in the coming paragraphs

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Topic: More and more people think there is no need for printed paper newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Increasing population of the masses doubt the need to print paper newspaper. Only a few number of people still see the need for printed paper newspapers. In my opinion, i agree with the larger community of people who see no reason for printing a newspaper. Analysis of cheaper use of the cyber space for information and the ease to recall any information needed in the internet will evidence the reasons why printed paper newspapers is gradually loosing its importance in the dissemination of information in the society.

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Topic 10. In some countries older people are being encouraged to work longer and not to retire. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working beyond retirement age.

As, old people will work at the age of retirement it has both sides good as well as bad.

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some people beleive that it is important to keep the home and the work place tidy and organized. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view.

I strongly agree with it is important to keep the home and workplace place organized and tidy because it has lots of benefits. My viewpoint is disuse blow.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In the modern world, having a gap year has become popular. Experts, educators, and the public seem to have been discussing this issue for a long time. Some will agree with the statement, whereas there are opponents of this view. In the end, I am going to give my own opinions on examples that I will be going to discuss.

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In the age of information technology, it is crucial to consume cash properly and there are countless stuffs to do.

In the age of information technology, it is crucial to consume cash properly and there are countless stuffs to do. Some society believe that funds should be utilized on rail roads than highways.I do not quite agree with this statement and spending budget on route is much more paramount rather than roads.

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Some people think it is harmful for people to watch advertisements, others think it improves our lives. Discuss both views and give your own.

Some individuals believe that it is detrimental for people to watch adds, others think it improves our way of living. While some people belive that adds improve our lives, I believe it is destructive for citizens to watch advertisements because they are intrusive that distract and the information describing a product is bias.

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