IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 784

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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More and more people are opting for and consuming ready-made food instead of freshly cooked food. Does this practice has more advantages than disadvantages? Discuss

Nowadays, people choose ready-to-eat foods over fresh-cooking food. Although this may not look tasty to eat and have limited menus, it allows people to save time cooking and be convenient for everywhere. and I believe these privileges farther any potential disadvantages.

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The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that women’s situation has improved dramatically in the majority of societies during the last 50 years, but unfortunately, there are still some countries where the equality of genders leaves much to be desired. I strongly believe that those women who lived in the 1960-1970 would be struck by the great change that has occurred in the world in terms of female rights.

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more than other people in important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays sports stars can earn millions of dollars. Some people think this is fair, but in my view successful sports professionals are grossly overpaid. People who support high athlete wages would argue that sports stars only have a limited time to earn money. Top athletes have to spend many years training and pushing their bodies hard to perform well at an elite level. As a result, they are constantly at risk of injury, which can end their career very quickly. Also, usually after 5-10 years, they start finding it difficult to compete with newer, younger players. Consequently, many top athletes are forced to retire before age 40, so they need to earn a lot of money to last a long retirement. That is all very well, but the salaries paid to top sports stars are excessive and unfair. For instance, football star Cristiano Ronaldo is paid over $30 million a season to play for Manchester United. Such a figure is beyond the retirement dreams of any normal person and ...

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Many famous sports players advertise sports products. Do the advantages of this trend are outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays the advertising of sporting goods by famous sports players are growing up, it is giving an upsides for us, for ambassadors who advertise it, for advertisers and for the whole company generally. But is this contain only perks as we can imagine it? This essay will provide these questions and will separate the advantages and the drawback for parts.

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People are living in a ‘throwaway society,’ using things for a short time and then throwing them away. What are the causes of this? What problems does it lead to?

The diagram shows the process by which a production line makes a frozen fish pie.

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In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single sex schools or co-educational Schools. Some people think that children going to single sex schools have the disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?

In many parts of the world today, parents are authorized to choose where their children will study, either in a single-sex school or a co-educational school. A certain segment of individuals argues that those who attend single-sex schools might have disadvantages later on in their lives. In my opinion, I raise my hand with the supporters of this notion, and the following paragraphs of this essay will analyze two factors which will contribute to this affirmation, as well as my opinion.

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Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important. Discuss both views.

Zoos play an important role in the conservation of different species of animals from extinction.Two groups of people have different opinions, the first group of people states that, caging animals in the zoo is a cruelty while, the other groups of people have an opinion zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important . Both views are discussed further in this essay .

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You eat in your college cafeteria everyday lunchtime. However, you think it needs some improvements.

In my opinion, due to social responsibilities, everyone and everything have to do something. However I disagree with the statement is that private companies should supply sports facilities.

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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think that it will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disasvantages to having one language in the world?

English language may become the only language spoken in the world in the future owing to the developments in tourism sector. The trend would bring positive as well as negative changes into the world.

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Throughout history, people have dreamt of living in a perfect society. However, there is still no agreement about what a perfect society would be like. Why do people want to turn this dream into a reality? What can people do to help create an ideal society?

After world war two, so many changes taken place, like people’s lifestyle, eating habits, social life and businesses; It has taken many things away from human kind for instance, home, food, education and joy life. Peoples great achievement for predecessors were food, education, clothes, shelter and job with average wages. However, present day things got changed in every aspect, everybody has their own expectations and dreams to chase. To make dreams come true every single individuals’ contribution is mandatory. I will elaborate on the same in coming paragraphs.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Now a day, fast moving lifestyle and eating more junk food and drinking beverages is creating more and more health related issue in current generation like it is increasing blood sugar level. I strongly agree that such products prize should increase by government. In further discourse, I will enunciate ideas in favor of my belief with some opposite belief some people have.

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With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed?

Due to in present day, technology impacts most of our life which changing the world not like before. This such effect peple have long live. Now I am gonna explain how benefit on this and what should we do for the future.

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Some people say that after finishing their education adults can increase knowledge through continuous reading. Those who disagree say there are other ways to increase knowledge. Discuss both of these methods and give your opinion.

Adolescents must ameliorate their expertise after completion of studies in order to be prepared for real-time challenges. Therefore, some group of individuals believes that rigorous reading will help expand their skill while others are in favour of pursuing more useful ways to master in-demand abilities. In this essay, I will represent both views as well as justify my side of being in support of the second view.

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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Home has a special place in every individual's life which provides comfort, stability and security. Hence, it is completely acceptable for people to know about the history before shifting in to a new house.

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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve the crime. Do you agree or disagree?

The highly controversial issue today related to whether the advanced technology which can prevent and solve crime helps the crime rate nowadays decrease compared to the past. As for me, I totally agree with this opinion because advanced technology helps to solve wanted people and the development of information supports to propagate criminal issues.

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The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Over the years woman's role in society has changed drastically. A certain segment of individuals argues that the current issues that happening with kids are happening due to this change as women started working in offices. In my opinion, I firmly stand with this notion, and the following paragraphs of this essay will analyze two factors which will contribute to the affirmation as well as to my opinion.

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How do you think children should spend their free time?

The table illustrates the percentage of Canadians in households by a variety of families type between 1984 and 2020.  Overall, the figure for a single person, single parents and households with no children exhibited upward trends over the years, whereas the number of those whose families with kids in Canada showed a decline.  At first, the percentage of a single person was only 6% in 1984, and the number increased steadily to 12% after the year 2020, doubling from the beginning of the time. Additionally, DINK families in which households are two incomes and no children were less than one-fifth, with 19% in 1984; however, it increased by 6% in 2014, and levelled out at the end of the time, with one-fourth of Canadian households proportion. It is witnessed that the figure for lone parents was only 4% before it experienced a threefold rise to 12% in 2014 and remained the same until 2020.

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Nowadays governments are investing more in public transport such as buses and trains rather than in building new roads. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

REGARDING FUNDS, THE MINISTRIES ARE FOCUSING MORE ON OPEN TRANSIT RATHER THAN CONSTRUCTING NEW ROADWAYS. HOWEVER, BOTH HAVE THEIR OWN PROS AND CON'S. THOSE WILL BE DISCUSSED IN THE FOLLOWING PARAGRAPHS.

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Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Technology resulted in new life strategies that were not available before, Children nowadays are obsessed with spending their day playing computer games, then going outside and enjoying themselves with their friends. In my opinion, I think with no doubt, that outdoor activities is so important in developing children's personalities and skills.

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As a result of tourism, many historical buildings and sites are being damaged beyond repair. What could be done to prevent this?

With the unprecedented progress in the tourism industry, numerous cultural heritage like castle, monument, and natural structures has deteriorated even if various restoration is taken. A bunch of parsonages accords that to mitigate this drawback a multitude of solutions can be taken such as creating awareness among individuals and taking initiatives through the administrative authority. By citing examples, this discourse will clarify the aforementioned procedures.

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