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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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describe piechart given about each language spoken by student in the university

Pie charts illustrate the number of students that were able to speak each language--only French, only German, only Spanish, another language, no other language and two other languages-- at one university in the UK in 2000 and 2010. The figures are given in percentages.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Commercials have been a means of promoting the company products which effectively attract customers to make purchase of them. However, there are some opinions that these ads are not trendy as they used to be, thus people no longer take notice of them. In my point of view, although advertising doesn't guarantee people's attention all the time, it is still a way to draw a number of attractions to buyers.

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The plans below showthe layout of a university's sport centre now, and how it will look after reevelopment

The diagrams compare the university's sports centre layout prior to and after the renovation plan. Looking more closely at the layout, It can be seen that there are considerable discrepancies between the two maps after the construction plan.

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Young people learn more about good behavior from books or films/movies than they learn from real-life experiences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the explosion of the publishing and cinema industry in recent decades, youngsters are choosing digital and printing content such as novels and movies to learn positive behaviours rather than real-life cases like people in the past. Several individuals agreed with this motivation while the opposite one don not. In my perspective, both approaches should be considered in terms of their unique effectiveness.

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Some people think that art is waste of time ,while others have a different view.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary epoch,whilst some people hold the view that art is a quintessential subjects, opponents and I believe that it is not crucial,because it waste time .My contention will be further explained

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A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject.

I am writing to you regarding the project management course that you may apply for this semester. As you are already well-awarded I passed this amazing and very practical course last semester. As an industrial engineering student, you will need project management not only for your future career but also this knowledge can help you to improve your management skills and have a better understanding of how to prioritize tasks and steps with an eye on resources and time.

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Research has shown that consumerism is a major problem of the young generation due to the effect of the media. why and what are the consequences?

In this day and age, consumer spending is greatly affected by the use of media influencing the youngsters leading towards a considerable concern. There are certain reasons to this phenomenon and its aftermath.

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All children should study a foreign language in school, starting in the earlist grades. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is said that every student should learn a foreign language at the early stage of their school career. From my perspective, I would completely agree with that statement as there are many benefits to students compared to a few negatives. In the following paragraphs, I am going to discuss the advantages due to learning a foreign language earlier.

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Some people prefer to provide help and support directly to those in the local community who need it. Others, however, prefer to give money to national and international charitable organizations.

Few consider extending their help and support to the needy locally, on the other hand, few support through donating to national and international charitable organizations. Contribution towards the betterment of poor local communities or who need help, using either way has its own significant role. This essay will further discuss both views individually in the below paragraphs.

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Some people say that instead of seeing the internet as a way of opening up new possibilities worldwide, we should be concerned about the effect this is having on social interaction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Several people claim that we should be concerned about the impacts internet have on us instead of always perceiving it as a key that positively opens up new possibilities over the world. This stance somewhat suits mine.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look afterredevelopment next year. summarise the information by selecting and reportng the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant

The maps compare the layout of a southwest airport as it is with a proposed design next year.

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Some people believe that playing sport is important, whereas, others think it’s just a leisure activity for some people. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion also.

Sports play an crucial role in our life.Some school of thought believes that taking part in game is vital, however, another school of thought refutes it by arguing that it is only for relaxation and rejuvenation.This essay will elaborate on both these viewpoints, and explain why the former choice is the ideal one.

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Many people are opting for several careers as compared to a single career to earn more money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The single career option is not so fascinated nowadays. The new trend is to have many earning options and educational qualifications will be continued along with an individual in an entire life. I agree to some extent because it depends on an individual’s choices. Although strong-minded people can make their career and earn money in the same field because of personal choice, multi-career humans can easily earn and enjoy their life completely.

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Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones .why is this the case ? Do you think this is a positive or negative development ?

A significant amount of hours of the day is used by some youngsters on mobile phones .

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The number of indigenous tribes living traditional lives in the world’s rainforests is decreasing. Within a few decades the last of these indigenous tribes may have disappeared forever. What are the causes of this problem and what can be done to prevent it from happening?

In modern times, due to increasing the amount of immigration, it can be seen that the excessive load of indigenous tribes who lived in rainforests regions moved to cities. There are some following issues, and a few problem-solving methods.

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Some People claims that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

Some individuals assert that domestic wastes are not sufficient recycled. They believe that if residents are entitled to pay the penalty, by the ministry, waste management will increase among the public . In my opinion, although environmental awarenesses regarding individual responsibilities are raising, it seems that stricter regulations should be enforced on the disposal issue.

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Some people believe that the government Should take care of old people and provide financial support after they retire. Others say individuals should save during their working years to fund their own retirement. What is your opinion? Give reason for your answer and include examples from your own experience

Some people believe the the government should finance on social services like retirement pension for adults instead of spending its budget on public services like agent need while others say individually should save their fund during their working years. This essay will delve in the upcoming paragraph and subsequently will explore perspective in turns.

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Museums and art galleries should focus on works that show the history and culture of their own country rather than works of other parts of the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the entire world we have symbols of our ancient which have been protecting from them on museums. Some people believe they have a priority target only on their profession product which is produced in their own society in spite focus on foreign country's art. I believe we have to defence both of them and I want to explain why in the next two principle.

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“Some people think that Government should take measures to improve the health of its citizens. Others think it must be managed by individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion”

It is true that in today's scenario, the epidemic diseases increase day by day and individuals face many problems However segment of society opine that authorities must take measures to enhance the medical care of its citizens

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Some people who have been in prison becomes good citizens later,and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to tenagers about the dangers of committing a crime .To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A section of society opines that Ex-convicts become law-abiding citizens after being released from the cells.However ,people believe these are the people to advise adolescents about the consequences of committing an offence.I totally agree because it will help adolescent abide by the laws and helps reduce crime rates.This essay will explain the reasons for my stance as well as examples in the subsequent paragraphs.

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