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ith the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

The two diagrams illustrate the current and the proposed modifications for a house building.

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Some people think that new technology always improves the lives of workers. Other people believe that it results in disadvantages for workers. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

The revolutionary changes in the matter of technology has significantly impacted the lives of the people.A school of thought believes that modern technology always act as tremendous valuable aspect for workers ,whereas some critics ponder that there are some negative ramifications of this practice. This discourse delves into both arguments in the subsequent paragraphs.

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It is important to study the literature of their own country than of other countries. Do you agree or disagree with this?

A canal knowledge of other languages wouldn't be a negative one . The study of literature has to do with patience and concentration. Some people think it's important to study their countries language to others.

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Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

Most offenders regret their past behaviors after receiving punishment, but some do not feel guilty and keep on violating the law. The reason for these people to continue their crimes comes from many aspects of life, yet there are general measures to engage in this problem.

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Unemployment is getting increasingly serious in many countries. Some people think students only need to get primary education, while others think secondary education is necessary. Discuss both views and opine.

Unemployment is the biggest issue in many Countries. Some individual believe that primary teaching reveals all problems but others think that secondary schooling is more beneficial for students.i shall discuss both views in my upcoming paragraph with a crystal clear conclusion.

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Advertisements have impacted our modern world. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of advertisements.

Advertisement, wich has played a vital role in this modern era,might harm influence towards wrong product;nevertheless, it is believed by a few masses that marketing have adverse effects on our society.This essay will not only discuss drawbacks of of it but also benefits of broadcasting.

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Adverting discourage people from being different individuals by making them look the same.Do you agree or disagree?

Advertising is one of the terrific invention on the present age. Individuals always find their uniqueness in advertisements and define their identity.Rather than preventing people from being different individuals, it allows people receiving all sorts of choice and building divergent individuals so that they can avoid being made look the same.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that unpaid community service should be a mandatory part of highschool programmes. However, while I believe that community service is beneficial, I think that it should not be a compulsory part of the school curriculum. On the one hand, there are reasons why community service is beneficial for students. First, public service improves students’ social skills and responsibility. This is because public service helps students to engage directly with different communities, widening their social circles. As a result, their social skills, such as communication skills, problem-solving skills improve, which may be helpful in their later lives when they enter the competitive labour workforce. Lastly, public service strengthens students’ sense of community. As students take part in community service, they get to help the community where they live. This may make them aware of the responsibility that they have with the community, helping them feel useful. On the oth...

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that a lot of constructions, such as buildings and offices are now built with an open-space design. While it can be argued that having constructions built with an open-space design is beneficial, I still believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages, and this is a negative development. There are two main reasons why people might believe that this is a positive development. Firstly, the relationships between employees might be better. This is because working in an open-space area brings employees closer together physically, breaking down the invisible wall between people. As a result, employees can interact with their colleagues more easily, making it more approachable. Lastly, it might have positive effects on the collaboration between colleagues. As employees are bring closer together, they have better communication and interaction with each other. This benefits employees with a better flow of information, resulting in better management for managers....

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, custodial sentences have been a topic of debate. A school of thought holds that imprisoning criminals for a significantly long period is the best way to curb criminal activities in society, while others recommend resorting to other effective solutions. In this essay, I am going to clarify the status quo, before giving my perspectives.

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Some people believe that technology has made man more social and others think it has made him less social. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Nowadays,there is a challenging discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of technology topic among people ,at the same time, some individuals opine more using tech could disrupt a sense of social intimacy in the community, but, others argue and allege that technology has many positive effects on the social interaction around the world ,so, I am going to discuss both facets of this topic to clarify it.

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Many feel that happiness is mainly an individual responsibility, while others feel that there are important external factors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Satisfaction or happiness is one of the most important aspects in human life that have always been discussed especially during recent years. In my opinion happiness is a personal possession that a person has to develop and flurish it in his personal life.

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It seems clear that obesity in today’s society is to some extent due to the availability of fast food. Should the government place a tax on fast food to reduce the amount of food consumed? Do you agree? Give your opinion.

These days, the number of citizens, who are overweight has dramatically increased due to the abundance of fast food. Some people believe that the authority should impose a high tax to minimize unhealthy meal consumption by their citizens. In this essay, the reason support why placing tax is a promising remedy will be presented before my perspective is reached.

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Some people think that video games are advantageous, while others believe video games are harmful to the people who play them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days, it is undeniable that video games are playing a key role in a large number of people's lives, particularly kids. Some see that they should be highly appreciated because, for ages, they have been really useful to children, whereas others believe that they are incredibly disadvantageous and playing them has been a big issue that must be solved and alleviated. In my opinion, I see that playing video games has a lot of pros and benefits despite it might have been only negative online activity for a long period.

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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of playing sports and participating in physical exercises.

The exercise involves anything done physically with the aim of keeping fit. The pros and cons of involving in sporting activities and body exercises will be highlighted in this essay.

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In this technological world, the number of new inventions has been increasing. Please describe a new invention, and determine whether it will bring advantages or disadvantages.

Technology has become increasingly popular in Western countries since the 1970s and it has also been a part of many cultures around the world. Many people choose to buy the newest technological invention, such as the computer or tablet with internet. The only question is, whether the internet offers more benefits or drawbacks. This essay will discuss two key points why the internet can be considered beneficial in modern society.

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It is impossible to help all people around the world in need so governments should focus on people from their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often suggestiong to regime should pay all atention to provide own people vital needs instead of strive for another nation because it is not possible to always help all folks around the globe. This notion seems to be true as positive key to help all continents.

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Being a celebrity such as film star or singer brings problem as well as benefit. Do you think that being a celebrity bring more benefit or more problem?

Social media platforms are the way of life for many people today and the celebrity culture is at the heart of this. People are discussing if limelight has more pros or cons. The following passages will highlight why benfits outweigh teh disadvantages.

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Many people think that it is better to get advice from old rather than young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people hold the point to prefer to receiving advice from seniors instead of youngsters. From my point of view, both elderly people and young people have their specialties and advantages from different aspects, the old are more experienced and mature to give advice on professional career, enterprising choices etc. On the contrary, younger people are better at creativity for fresh ideas. Which is better to ask advice for should depend on the substantial questions.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is common in many countries to teach a secondary language at a primary school and many parents start raising bilingual children in some modern families. This essay will overweigh its advantages more than its drawback, the confusion with mother language, which many parents misbelieving. Learning a new language at early ages has scientifically proven advantages of improving child's brain while the misbelief is just a conjecture with no valid claims.

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