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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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For all children, the ability to play a musical instrument is just as important as the ability to read and write”. How far do you agree with this suggestion? How important is it for a child to learn to play a musical instrument, in your view

As reading and writing are important in a child's development, music also offers many benefits at a young age. Teaching our kids to play any musical instrument will help them to develop different useful skills for life. In this essay, I will give two reasons why children should interact with music when they are younger.

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What are the possible causes and solutions to juvenile crime?

Juvenile delinquency is defined as the act of participating in unlawful behavior that is committed by people who are younger than the statutory age of majority. This essay will find out the causes and suggest some corresponded solutions.

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In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

In the current world, it is undoubtedly true that animals and plants are reducing day by day in many countries. It has been observed that humans are interfering enlist about the causes of declining animals and plants from around the globe with some favourable solutions in the upcoming paragraphs.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The trend of online shopping has been soaring exponentially in recent years. And it is believed that e-commerce will eventually cause the closure of every shop in towns and cities. However, from my perspective, the growth of online shopping won't disturb the custom of in-store shopping in the next few years for various reasons.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Firstly, the main reason for shools is proper education of students therefore this sort of education teaches children that democracy should prevail in all stages of life so if we want to force them to give people's aid by force, it may be effective in the short term, but in the long term, it will teach them that it is possible to force others to do things that they are not interested in doing. For instance, In many Iranian schools, school- goers are forced to participate in religious ceremonies, while research in one of the country's schools showed that when students were forced to participate, 95% of them had attended the ceremony, and if it was optional, only 15% of them were presented. Hence, this work will make children in adulthood, if they reach management positions, force their employees to have interests and destroy creativity completely.

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You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. -explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months - say how your work could be done while you are away - ask for his/her help in arranging it

I am writing to inquire to accept my appeal for work at the company's head office in Florida from March to September.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Most individuals are of the opinion that bad occurrences for exam, unfulfiling job or low income should be accepted while others disagree with this as they think it is good to improve this circumstance. I'm of the opinion that improving the situation they find themselves is important in life as it will help the individual to achieve all his/her heart desires.

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Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. What extent do you agree or desagree with statement!

some group of people believe that outdoor activities which are more physically have more advantages. From my point of view, I totally agree with this group because I think whatever can improve our physical abilities, can make our brain better and it is much better than playing video games.

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Some people think that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. They believe this would benefit teenagers and the society.What is your opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

A number of persons believe that youngsters ought to do unsalaried jobs in their locality during their spare time, with the view that it would be of great use to them and the society. In my opinion, I believe that volunteering jobs is necessary.(pls add your ideas in your introduction)

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Competitiveness amoung high school students should be encouraged. Do you agree or disagree?

Thanks to social media people have communicated each other whose never dating with them face to face. However, by means of social media people reachs many opportunities. Some experts claim that using soscial media has bad influence on adolescents several aspects.

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Q:Some parents think it is good to give their children mobile phones ,while others disagree.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today's era of advent in technology , use of mobile device has helped in communication between one another. In this essay I will discuss on both upside and downside alongside with my honest opinion.

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A friend is thinking about applying for the same course/subject that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice. Give details of the course you took at the university, explain why you recommend the university, and give some advice about how to apply.

I'm glad to hear from you again. I would also like to thank you for trusting me with such an important matter. So, here are some

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Some group of people believe that youth people like student should work for community for free and they shouldn’t earn money from their job.

Some group of people believe that youth people like students should work for the community for free and they shouldn’t earn money from their job because they think it has advantages for both community and themselves and I completely agree with this group because youth people only on that age can work for the community and after the adolescent period and after graduating they do not have free time as they have now, and in my ,opinion everyone should do unpaid community job because they can learn something that can help them in their life .

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The best way to improve standards in education I'd to ensure that class size are small. Do you agree or disagree

The best way to improve standards in education is to ensure that class sizes are small.

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Government should close companies that produce toxic waste materials without their own waste treatments facility in order to protect the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Toxic materials are an ongoing problem for the environment. There were allegations from the government to shut down businesses in order to reduce the environmental damages. I wholeheartedly agree. This essay will articulate the key factors that have a negative effect on the environment.

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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There is a certain school of thought who argue that , graduating from the university offers the best opportunity to acquire a rewarding career while others suggest that being experienced and developing soft skills is more paramount. This essay shall endorse the latter notion, however, the two divergent views shall be outlined after which a feasible conclusion shall be drawn.

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In many places new homes are needed,but the only available space for building in the countryside.But some people believe that it is more important to protect countryside and not build a new home there.What is your opinion about this,give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own experience or knowledge.

In many places, new homes are needed, but the only properly esate for building is in the countryside. But some people believe that it is more significiant to preserve the countryside and not build a new home there. There are many estates in the countryside, but we must preserve them for future generations.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that professionals plays a crucial way in the people lead their lives. while some believe that professionals should be necessary to work in the place where they did their education. I would agree with those who argued that they should be exempt to work in different countries if they want. In this essay , I will discuss both sides of the argument.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In our contemporary world, crime levels play a key role in the way people lead their lives. With regard to this, two opposing views have been suggested, one of which is related to (+noun / noun phrase) extending the time spent in prison, while the other is about (noun / noun phrase) coming up with different solutions. From my perspective, criminals should be treated with diverse methods rather than being kept in prison for a longer time.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that experts plays a crucial way in the people lead their lives. while some believe that professionals should be necessary to work in the place where they did their education. I would agree with those who argued that they should be exempt to work in different countries if they want. In this essay , I will discuss both sides of the argument.

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