IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 806

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Through out the period from the anicent to modern societies, music played an important role in our daily life, and even had an significant impact on us.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way

Most Traders and Business organizations while advertising always stress the fact that their goods and services are new in one way or the other.This could be as a result of the patronage they get from the public when they paint their product as new.I believe this has a positive effect as it helps to maximize the profit of these products by bringing more patronage.

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some people believe that carrying cash should not be necessary and all payments ought to be digital. Others argue that having paper money still has benefits. What do you believe and why? Give reason for your answer, and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

While some people believe that carrying money is much more benefitable and suitable. Another community prefer to bank transactions in online or in digitalized manner. This essay will help to explain further.

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The young today spend a large amount of their leisure time in shopping centres. It is feared that this could have a negative influence on the young and society. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view?

These days, adolescents are spending a vast portion of their leisure time in shopping centers. I believe that even though shopping centers are a safe place for spending with friends and families, inordinate time spent in malls may impact both the individual and society adversely. In the following paragraphs, I shall propound my reasons.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Professionals especially doctors and engineers play a vital role in country’s progress and they are a huge asset to a nation. There is a controversy going on regarding to their working rights, where some people believe, they are bound to do job only in that country where they did their practice while some oppose to that and say that they can work anywhere as they desire. I will shed light on both views and in the will give my take on this issue.

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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

We are living in a society which is on the big scale very unsatisfied with their current occupation as they are either not good at the job or not meant for it. Therefore is to wonder what are the reasons for this and what are the consequences of this situation. This essay will take a look at these questions and will provide a logical conclusion.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Professionals especially doctors and engineers play a vital role in country’s progress and they are a huge asset to a nation. There is a controversy going on regarding to their working rights, where a number of people believe, they are bound to do career only in that homey where they did their practice while some oppose to that and say that they can work anywhere as they desire. I will shed light on both views and in the will give my take on this issue.

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What are the possible advantages and drawbacks of being a professional athlete?

sport is one of the most important of society nowadays. it is cause person to being famous and rich. a professional athlete is goal for people who try hard at sport. however, it has some trouble too. in this ,assay i write about professional athlete

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a patient referes to you which symptoms in her mouth,describe her situation

The renaming of malignant fibrous histiocytoma to undifferentiated pleomorphic sarcoma by the WHO represents an eventual common pathway in tumors progressing to undifferentiated (8). According to the most studies, UPS shows features of both histiocytic and fibroblastic differentiation (7). Predominant spindle cell component with cytologic and nuclear pleomorphism, peripheral histiocyte-like cells with storiform pattern have been observed. Atypical mitosis and necrosis also been observed in many cases (9). In the histopathological feature, five subgroups of this tumor have been identified, including storiform/pleomorphic, myxoid, giant cell, inflammatory and angiomatoid. The giant cell type has more aggressive clinical behavior and poor prognosis. While, the myxoid type is the most common type and its prognosis is better than other types of histology (10). Our case has gain cells type of histology. Maybe, this is one of the reasons for early death and high initial invasion of this tu...

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In some countries the average worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50, while in others people can work until they are 65 or 79. Until what age do you think people should be encouraged to remain in paid employment?

In this cutting edge era, it is observed that the retirment age is very crucial and a widespread topic. On the one hand, in some nation there is a mentatory working age limit.on the other hand, in few relams the citizens are allowed to serve their motherland till 65 to 70. As per my point of view, there should be certainly a age barrier for the people but at the higher side.I will elebrate my thinking process in the paragraphs below

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You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit you for several days. Write an email to your friend, -asking him or her to bring some things from home which you need -saying why you need them -making arrangements to meet

Hurray! I am super excited to hear about your visit. Finally, we're going to meet after two long years. I've made so many plans for both of us already and eagerly waiting for your arrival. I'm wondering if you can pick up a few things from my house and bring them with you.

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Traffic and transport essay- cause &solution..In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is as problem what are the causes and solutions ?

Nowadays, traffic issues are inclined all over the globe. This essay intends to delve into the cause of this situation and suggest some ways to alleviate this problem.

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Some people feel that sports is beneficial to the society. Others, however believe that it is nothing but a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Sports pertain to any form of competitive physical activity or game that aims to use, maintain, or improve physical ability and skills. Some people argue that sports are advantageous to the community while others feel that sports are only for leisure. I firmly believe that sports is beneficial to the society and let us consider the differing opinions on the same.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. Has the positive effects been more than negative ?

In today's world, technology plays a dramatic role as well as it directly impacts people’s relationships with each other. In this essay, I will explore how technology involves people interaction, pros and cons of that. Firstly I will show how technology changes this and secondly demonstrate pros and cons of it.

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Some people prefer to live in rented homes. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trends.

Nowadays, as the price of condos and houses is increasing at a rapid speed, some people tend to live in rented homes. There are arguments on both sides, however, which we will discuss here.

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the use of media is replacing face to face interaction among many people in society. Do you yhink the advantages outweight the disadvantages?

Nowadays the use of media is much more significant than face to face communicatiıon amony many people in society. This essay will discuss both the benefits and drawbacks of this phenomenon and provide a logical conclusion.

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Some people think that one good way to promote world peace is through international sporting events, while others think that it is not. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Retaining world peace is a challenge these days. Many argue that sports events conducted at an international level might cultivate peace among countries. I completely disagree with this statement because international sports events not only develop enmity among the people but also paves way for hatred in one's own country upon losing a match.

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Some people believe that women should be able to join their country’s army and police forces. Others think that only men should be allowed to work in these areas. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Equality between men and women is always a global argument. Some people reckon that women should serve country by joining army and forces, while opponents argue that only men can servecountry in these areas. Personally , I am in consummate accord with the aforementioned notion and the following expository paragraphs will expatiate my stance with lucid examples.

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Some people say that all popular TV entertainment programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There are people claiming that each popular TV programme on recreation should focus on the education of crucial social issues. In my opinion, even though it is a good way to spread social issues through TV shows that hold considerable numbers of viewers, it is an exorbitant demand and put the cart before the horse for entertainment show.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school. Use specific reasons to support your answer.

Undoubtedly, studying art and music is an important part of developing skills, and engaging interest to education in young children. Some people believe that, teaching students art and music, in secondary school is essential, whereas other people do not consider it important. In this essay, I will discuss why all the students should be required, to study art and music, as well as what benefits it may cause.

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