IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 804

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit you for several days. Write an email to your friend, -asking him or her to bring some things from home which you need -saying why you need them -making arrangements to meet

I'm glad to hear about your visit to Canada next month, and can't express my happiness in words. Finally, we are going to meet after two long years, and I hope you have been doing great all this time. I'm writing to ask you a favour and hope you don't mind. I need some things from my home, and I'd be so grateful if you can bring them along with you.

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Some people argue that it is not wise for an industry to replace its experienced but old workers with new and young yet inexperienced individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an argument that it is not wise for industry to replace the old and experienced workers with new but inexperienced individuals. Personally, I strongly disagree with this assessment.

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I've completed my Masters and Bachelor of Education from India.Currenly, I work in a primary school located in Surrey, BC. I worked for 3 years as a Science teacher in India. I’ve found that one of the best techniques for engaging students is to incorporate technology in my lesson plans, and to this end, I've utilized tools such as Microscope to create interactive activities and to achieve learning outcomes when teaching about DNA in plant cells.

Greeting! It’s my pleasure to introduce myself as Baljit. I was born and raised in Punjab, India.

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The charts below the amount of financial aid that four countries received and how the money was spent in 1974 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts give information about how the aid money was spent by China, Indonesia, Thailand, and South Africa and how much they received in the years 1974 and 2014.

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ome people believe that professional workers such as doctors and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many of experts believe that the experience persons such as medical man and the headmasters should be paid more than the average people like sports and different celebraties.In this essay,i will explain whatever i accepted this or denied this discussion.

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Some people believe that advertisements aimed at children have a poor influence on them and can affect their relationship with parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that, adverts plays an vital role in this era ,but fer individuals opine that juveniles are targeted in a negative way with the exposure of advertisements . I, however contends that this phenomenon have wrong effect on younger ones. This essay articulates my agreement points in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

The application of Artificial Intelligence (AI) has been thriving in different sectors like education and business. It is also predicted that it will be used in vehicles in the future. So, we may witness the vehicles without drivers after two or three decades. They may be several benefits and drawbacks of implementing vehicles that run without drivers; this essay will present them and reach a conclusive opinion.

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Some people think that studying from the past teaches us nothing about today’s life. Others argue that the history is a value source of information. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is often claimed that history has an essential role in our life while people are only concentrating on current scenarios. According to my opinion, our ancestors travelled and experienced several critical situations and provide viable remedies to confront the challenges.

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Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefit that it will replace face - to - face education. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Education plays a vital role in everybody's life. It is a necessary thing in everyone's life. This establishes a standard career. Nowadays, virtual education is given more importance due to various benefits while some people prefer traditional education. This essay describes both scenarios of the given statement.

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19 .As the world has become technological advance, computer are replacing more and more jobs that maybe lose because of computer. Discuss at lear one problem that may result.

With this, advancement in the use of technology, lots of work has been made easier and more satisfying in the past few years. While technology is becoming more advanced, the use of computers is replacing more jobs, and lots of work will be lost . In this, the essay I will illustrate on benefits and as well one problem it may result in.

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Some people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that there are only small differences between the richest and the poorest members. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by the majority of individuals that they make sure of minor differences between the affluent and indigent would create a joyful community. I contradict this notion because happiness is not about the contrast between two people. I would be focusing on the reasons behind my disagreement, which would be followed by relative examples.

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Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Throughout the period from the anicent to modern societies, music played an important role in our daily life, and even had an significant impact on us.

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Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Through out the period from the anicent to modern societies, music played an important role in our daily life, and even had an significant impact on us.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way

Most Traders and Business organizations while advertising always stress the fact that their goods and services are new in one way or the other.This could be as a result of the patronage they get from the public when they paint their product as new.I believe this has a positive effect as it helps to maximize the profit of these products by bringing more patronage.

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some people believe that carrying cash should not be necessary and all payments ought to be digital. Others argue that having paper money still has benefits. What do you believe and why? Give reason for your answer, and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

While some people believe that carrying money is much more benefitable and suitable. Another community prefer to bank transactions in online or in digitalized manner. This essay will help to explain further.

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The young today spend a large amount of their leisure time in shopping centres. It is feared that this could have a negative influence on the young and society. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view?

These days, adolescents are spending a vast portion of their leisure time in shopping centers. I believe that even though shopping centers are a safe place for spending with friends and families, inordinate time spent in malls may impact both the individual and society adversely. In the following paragraphs, I shall propound my reasons.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Professionals especially doctors and engineers play a vital role in country’s progress and they are a huge asset to a nation. There is a controversy going on regarding to their working rights, where some people believe, they are bound to do job only in that country where they did their practice while some oppose to that and say that they can work anywhere as they desire. I will shed light on both views and in the will give my take on this issue.

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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

We are living in a society which is on the big scale very unsatisfied with their current occupation as they are either not good at the job or not meant for it. Therefore is to wonder what are the reasons for this and what are the consequences of this situation. This essay will take a look at these questions and will provide a logical conclusion.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Professionals especially doctors and engineers play a vital role in country’s progress and they are a huge asset to a nation. There is a controversy going on regarding to their working rights, where a number of people believe, they are bound to do career only in that homey where they did their practice while some oppose to that and say that they can work anywhere as they desire. I will shed light on both views and in the will give my take on this issue.

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What are the possible advantages and drawbacks of being a professional athlete?

sport is one of the most important of society nowadays. it is cause person to being famous and rich. a professional athlete is goal for people who try hard at sport. however, it has some trouble too. in this ,assay i write about professional athlete

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