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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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International community should act immediately to encourage countries to reduce the consumption of fossil fuels, such as oil and gas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that It is urgent for international community to take actions in order to motivate countries to reduce their usage of nature resources, especially the fossil fuels. I agree with this argument and will develop my standpoints in this essay.

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Some believe that money for education should mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better spent on teachers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that education play a crucial role in the way people lead their lives. However, while some urge is that money for tuition should primarily be used up on better computers , I would agree with those who argued that it would be preferable spent on instructors.

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People nowadays are spending more time at workplace and it is argued this is a problem for family life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Spending more hours at the office for work to get success in life, is directly creating the intricacies in personal life as evidenced by many people. I completely agree with this notion and this essay will explain the main two effects : broken homes and negative children's characteristics.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A highly controversial of whether people should face with an unpleasant reality, such as a bad occupation and lack of money or manage to improve it. I will examine both point of views and then give my own opinion.

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Popular events like football world cup and other international sporting occassions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I believe that the portrait is an important painting in the life of the artist named Van Gogh. I also think that the portrait will appeal to many great collectors. Well, when I was in grade 9, I learnt about him in an art lesson. My teacher said that he cut his left ear himself due to he disliked an equal face. Well, his paintings are really really expensive, and they are always exhibited in luxurious museums. I have never gotten any chance to see his paintings in person. I believe that Thien is one of my country's important artists. He is very talented at painting, especially portraits. His paintings are not only beautiful but also have a soul. Well, not yet. I like paintings and really want to attend a paintings exhibition. Well, a friend is named Thien. We are university friends. He is talented at painting, especially portraits. Well, I love to learn painting skills. I admire my friend, his paintings look so beautiful. I plan to learn a painting course the next summer. N...

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Fast food is becoming one part of life everywhere, to what extent do you agree or disagree?

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in fast food becoming one part of life everywhere, thanks to the ubiquity of state-of-the-art technology, modernisation and globalisation. There is a widespread worry that this would lead to a myriad of concerns. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and so should be rejected.

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With growing population in cities, more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas. Is it a positive or negative development?

The debate over a house is a hot potato. In the current world, it is undoubtedly true that cities become more growing with population and houses become small. It has been observed that nowadays people live in a small flat or an apartment. I will discuss its negative and positive impacts on society in these upcoming paragraphs.

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You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy itfrom you.

Hello, how was going? We haven't seen each other in such a long time. I hope everything is going well for everyone.

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The homelessness is a major problem in several countries. What are the major causes and its effects on society?

It is true that one of the main problems in many countries is the homelessness. There are many reasons behind the tendency, and several effective steps need to be taken by the government and each individual to tackle them.

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Many children today are exposed to violent video games and TV programmes. How harmful is this? What can be done to fight this problem?

It is true that nowadays numerous kids are exposed to violent video games and TV shows. A lot of problems have resulted from the phenomenon, and several steps need to be taken by the government and individuals to deal with them.

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Nowadays, most large companies operate multi-nationally. To what extent those companies should have responsibility towards local communities in which they operate?

In the process of globalization, an array of organizations run on an international scale should take on more responsibilities for the regional public. I firmly believe that

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Some people think that school uniforms are unnecessary and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

No one can deny that school is the social institution where children learn social as well as moral values.Few people think that academy uniforms should be banned as it is not so necessary.I totally contradict the statement.

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living in a country where you have to speak foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Residing in a foreign nation where you have to speak their local accent can create large number of social as well as practical problems. I definitely agree to the statement mentioned.

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Do you agree or disagree about marrying before the age of 30

Most people agree that relationships over the age of 30 tend to be long-lasting than couples who get married earlier. I completely disagree with this idea because from my perspective, couples experience a better relationship when marrying before the age of 30.

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These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Advancement in society and globally has taken turns in many individual's life. Development has enhanced the movement of people from the locality where they were birthed and trained to different cities and it has given lots of advantages to a few numbers of individuals. This essay will discuss the pros and cons, and also I am of the notion that the advantage outweighs more.

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Todays schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. to what extent do you agree disaree with this statement?

Nowadays, teaching finance for students has been the topical subject of the debate.

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many people strive to maintain a successful career and happy family at the same time.what problems can this create?what are the possible solutions?

It is true that numerous persons strive to maintain a successful career and happy family at the same time. There are many problems resulting from the tendency, and effective measures need to be taken by persons and the community to tackle them.

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Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

These days, a smartphone is one of the most crucial factors in part of people's lives, especially the new generation. The first thing that children do when they woke up is to check their self-phones to update data while they were sleeping. In my opinion, the disadvantages of this behaviour outweigh its benefits and the reasons to support this argument will give in this essay.

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Many parents use punishment to teach the difference between right and wrong to kids. Many people think that the punishment is necessary to help children learn the distinction. To what extent do you agree to punish a kid to teach him/ her something important? What kind of punishment do you think parents and teachers can use?

These days, there have been a discussion in heat that was the importance of the children to learn the difference between right and wrong at prior years, and whether the punishment is necessary or not.I intendedly disagreed the way to punish kids to let them acknowledge the distinction between right and wrong.In the following parts, minor punishments are given by teachers and parents in a decent way will be demonstrate clearly.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

With the prevalence of technology, some children use their cell phones daily. However, it can be an issue for their physical health and mental impairment. This essay will provide compelling reasons to explain this phenomenon with negative development.

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