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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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the transformation at Sunnyhill University in 1995 and today

The two pictures illustrate the transformation at Sunnyhill University in 1995 and today. There were many changes to new buildings and recreation areas during this period.

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Most high level positions in companies are filled by men eventhough the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50%female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain % of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The diagrams below illustrate how the Islip centre will change from now to the future.

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Some people think that music plays an important role in the society. Others think it is simply a random form of entertainment. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The global relevance of music can never be over emphasised. A few of individuals perceive that, Music plays a key function in humanity, whereas others have a contrary view that, it is limited to just being a form of pleasure. These are valid points, hence this essay will discuss them and give a concluding opinion.

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Some people think that girls should take husband’s name after marriage while others feel that they should not follow this age old tradition. What is your opinion?

From past to present, in some countries ,heritage husband's name continues to be controversial, there are two valid opinions on both sides, which will consider in this essay.

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It seems clear that obesity in today’s society is to some extent due to the availability of fast food. Should the government place a tax on fast food to reduce the amount of food consumed? Do you agree? Give your opinion.

Nowadays, being overweight has an enormously communal problem in the whole world. The reason that pre-cooked food and its low prices attract people to buy junk food, most of inhabitant prefer fast food because its convenient and easy to get anywhere. Although all nation is worried about its younger generation's health, some countries are contributing to this phenomenon by increasing tax on sugary drinks to decrease health issues such as diabetes and obesity. In my mind, it is sound to me is a great decision to saving humanity. In this essay I want to pursue the whole nation to take further step for this diversity.

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Successful professional athletes can earn much more than people in other important professions, such as nurses, doctors and teacher.Someone considers it quite justified, and someone considers it unfair.To what extent tdo you agree or disagree?

The issue of incomes in various occupations has been discussed whether its amount is acceptable with the social position.Some famous sportsmen can earn more money than other essential careers such as doctors.This leads to the critics that it is unfair regarding the public contribution.In my opinion. I agree that successful players deserve to earn more money due to their perseverance and icon for the youth.

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In some countires, owning a home rather than renting one is more important for some people. Why this might be the case? Do you think it is a positive or negative situation?

In some nations, the important part of people's life is having a house rather than renting one. This is because you do not need to be worried about finding a new house after your renting time is over. You have permission to do as you would like to decorate your home. This might be the main point for the people when they discuss this kind of topic.

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Some say that rich countries should help poor countries with food and education. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.

Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of wealthier countries should take more responsibility for helping the underdeveloped nations in such areas.

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In some countries owning a home rather renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some nations, people assume that owning a house is more essential than renting one. There are several cases why people prefer owing a house to renting one. Moreover, this is a positive situation for people.

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Buying things on the internet, suhc as books, air ticket and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advanatges of shopping this way outweigh the disadvantges.

Nowadays, due to advancementss in technologies more and more people prefer tobuyheir things such as books, air tickets and groceries over the internet. The main advantages of this trend are that people can save their valuable time and they have many options over one item, while the main disadvantages are that have a delivery issues and payment problems. In my opinion, the the benefits of this way shopping outweigh the drawbacks and, I will explain my reason for it.

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Do you think businesses should hire employees who will spend their entire lives working for the company? Explain why do you agree or disagree. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Many people think that corporate companies should hire employees who dedicate their whole life to their company while others think it is opposes. I believe that there will be drawbacks for both companies and employees. This essay will discuss my viewpoints in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Many people think that every individual is responsible for their own healthy lifestyle. Other believe that governments should take care of it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One of the most disputable issues relates to healthy life style wether taking practical cares into consideration by individuals or government.As will be examined this question with both points of views,supported by reasons for agreeing or disagreeing with the aforementioned statements.

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Some say that Technology has made food surplus. Others say it has made food harmful. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Across the ,globe technology is booming at a faster rate and it is always believed that new inventory produces a positive result. A section of society is of the opinion that technology plays a significant role in the food industry by showing inclement in the rate of food production.However , others oppose this situation and strongly offend technology's role in food productivity , This issue always remained controversial , but I will going to examine both views and discuss my views in the upcoming paragraphs .

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Some people claim that workers should wear uniforms. Others allege that people should be free in their choice. Discuss both opinions, and give your own opinion.

There is a debate concerning about dress code for workers, and whether they should wear uniform or free in their choice. I believe that it is quite important to wear working outfits. Analysing the benefit of wearing formal dress, as well as the drawback for that will prove this.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

For majority of people, working traditional job under a big company or organization may be the most acceptable way of life. For others, having the right to be their own boss is their ultimate dream. Difficulties in getting employed also triggers people that it might be better to create their own opportunities. This is probably what caused the rise of entrepreneurship.

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In some countries, there is not enough respect for elderly people. Why is this the case? Suggest some solutions. Write 250 words.

These days in some countries, respect for elderly people is not enough. In this essay, reasons for this phenomenon will be analysed and relevant solutions will be provided as well. The causes of lack of respect for elder people are manifold. First, more and more young people are losing traditional values. It is true that traditional values such as respecting the elderly are disappearing amongst youngsters. Further, the modern belief system values success based on how much money a person makes. It is obvious that elderly people have retired and do not make money anymore; hence young people stop respecting them at the same time. Thirdly, because of the increasing average life expectancy, there are more and more elderly people in the society. Apparently, this trend makes elderly people less valued by others.

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With the advent of e-books, e-magazines and e-newspapers, some people believe that printed media will soon become obsolete. Others feel much more confident about its survival prospects. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

in this era , new technologies are emerging in a blink of an eye. It's a fact that the crowd is switching towards e-devices in an increased order and nowadays there is minimal use of printed media . but as we know their lots of side effects and disadvantages of using these e-devices. here I would like to mention some of the points why i disagree with the given statement.

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Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing. do you agree or disagree?

The pie chart gives information about anthropology graduates’ decisions after Bachelor's degree graduation, while the table illustrates the income for 3 types of anthropology careers with 5 years of experience.

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Nowadays there is an increase in people with an unhealthy diet and not doing enough physical exercises. What do you think might be the reason? What can be done to encourage people to have a healthier lifestyle?

In this modern world, rapid increase in people becoming obese and lack of fitness. There are various causes for these problems and each problem can be dealt with particular solutions so that people can live a healthy way of life.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The choices can change our life. Some people, including me, hold the opinion that they face numerous options to select these days; however, others opine that most things in their life are mandatory. This essay delves into the matter further and concludes at the end.

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