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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individuals do to help?

Many people believe that there are an abundance of ways that people’s activities badly affect the environment. There are a host of reasons with regard to the negative effects of the environment and many people in the world also find some solution to solve these problems.

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The best way to help underachieving pupils is to have compulsory after school activities which they must attend. This way they will become more involved in school and their grades will improve. To what extent do you agree?

It is often considered that, mandatory class attendance is necessary after school activities for underachieving students to make them more involved in their school works and to achieve better grades. I completely agree that attending extra classes after school should be compulsory because it will help students to get extra attention of their tutors and they will grow interest in their studies.

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New technologies provided machines which replaced workers to do certain physical jobs and tasks. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is believed that recent technological advancements have reduced human intervention to a great extent . This essay will explore the advantages and disadvantages of this trend. Firstly, I will discuss the negative impact of using machines and ,secondly I will discuss the positive impacts of the same.

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Stress is in our major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that the cause distress, and how we can you reduce it to?

Owing to,Hectic schedule the seasonal major problem of individuals in this world And there are various factors in modern society responsible for this, however, there are ways to limited this impacts.

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More and more businesses as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.

In the recent years, the issue of using a sophisticated modern technology has attracted people’s attention in an international business. Some people believe that it is better to implement advanced telecommunications such as computers and mobile phones to meet instead of face-to-face interactions, while others oppose that negative outcomes might be concealed. Personally, despite this trend has some merits, I am convinced that there are a large number of demerits.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is like a dream come true for the people to own a house. But the increase of house rents and values at an alarming rate is making people feel terrible to buy a house. So, either it may be a positive situation or a negative situation depends up on the position a person is present in and also on the financial support he has.

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Students leave high school without learning the way how to manage their money. What are the reasons and solutions for this issue?

Nowadays, we have seen that the youngsters tend to have more expertise into technology like playing video games rather than having knowledge in financial management. Firstly, this essay will discuss the cause and secondly, I'll suggest few solutions for this topic.

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Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion

Keeping wild animals in a zoo is a controversial issue. While there are some disagree with this action, the benefit of having wild lifes in artificial environmen like zoos also have many positive points. From my opinion, I completely agree that zoos can protecting wild animals and advantages of zoo is overtaken the drawbacks. However this essay will examine both side of this issue.

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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

Editors are responsible to determine what is broadcasted on media and papers, people’s source of information. However, broadcasting arrangements are influenced by latest trends and viewers’ preferences. This essay will elucidate people’s opinion towards unpleasant news and how frequent they should be reported.

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Many countries face the problem of low voter turnout in their democratic elections. What are the problems associated with this and what can be done to remedy it?

A plethora of nations acquire the difficulty in their independent elections like less voting per cent. A vote is a primary right for every individual in their own country. This essay will discuss the drawbacks of the above-stated line with some prominent solutions for handling the negative impacts.

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Some people today believe that the world’s increase in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis. Other people believe that world population increase is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world’s economy and society.

Population has increased day by day in world which creates lots of issues for human. Some believed that overpopulation damage the bio-cycle of world while, other tend to deem that it is beneficial in economic prospects. In this essay I will discuss both views and give my opinion in conclusion.

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Write an essay of at least 250 words to describe a sports player you like most

It has been years since I started watching the National Basketball Association (NBA) basketball championship, but the one who stands out the most is Wardell Stephen “Steph” Curry II. The first time i saw him was in a short video on Facebook when his team-Golden State Warriors met Cleveland Cavaliers in 2016. The game was fascinating and what Steph did there was something I have not seen before. Shoots after shoots, that’s why people call him the greatest 3-point shooter in history.

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Unmanned vehicles will become more and more popular in the future. Passengers travelling inside these robot cars will be only human. Do you think the benefits of these surpass the drawbacks? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this ever-changing world, technology has become a vital part in human life, especially transportation, as a result, unmanned vehicles appeared and become more and more important in the future. Some people said them to be less benefits than normal vehicles. However, my opinion is completely odd with this, I believe unmanned means of transport still bring us several of advantages.

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In the future, the main reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that some people argue that the primary purpose of going to the shopping center was to go shopping. However, other people nowadays often claim that the shopping center is becoming a fascinating place for leisure time. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree that many people tend to go there for entertainment.

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In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development. This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the countryside. This situation may bring some problems for the country as a whole. What are these problems? How might they be reduced?

The world has underwent massive changes due to globalization and industralization. As of result of this, the urban areas have seen a significant development in-terms of their standard of living. However, these changes may not be reflected in the rural sides of the population. Throughout this essay, I will discuss the problems resulting due to this trend and will suggest few possible solutions.

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Some people believe that it is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment. Others say it is the government that should take care of the environment. Discuss both views

In recent year, the issue of global warming has increasingly attracted people’s attention. Some experts suggest that the environmental preservation should be take part by individuals, while others opposed that this problem will be sustainably improved, if the government is the leader to raise awareness. In this essay shall examine both sides of the argument and mu opinion in favor will be given.

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Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world. Discussed both views.

In recent year, the disputed question of what educational levels are suitable for the youth has attracted people’s attention. Some educators suggest that completing certificate in university is a key to success, while others oppose that pursuing a job after receiving high school academic record directly gain the real experience as adult. In this essay shall examine both sides of this controversial and my opinion in favor will be given.

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The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In recent years around the world, the major concern towards the global-warming and one of the major reason for this was pollution produces by personal vechicles especially the cars. As per the British transport ministry statistics by 2030 there will be around 50 million cars on roads. This growth will lead huge traffic jam on tiny roads and airpolution. To overcome issue both government and people need to follow alternative transportation. This easy going to discuss on alternative ways.

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In many countries today, there are concerns about the unhealthy lifestyles that people lead. What health issues are linked to modern lifestyles? What answers to these problems can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer, and support your essay with ideas and examples from your own experience.

Health concerns are been growing day by day in today's modern world. Folks are too busy nowadays to concentrate about their diet and lifestyles, thus leading to physical and mental disorders. There are a myriad of medical problems which are related to the current attitude of life. To mention are a number of solutions and will mention some of the ideas and examples supporting them in upcoming paragraphs.

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Money offered for post graduate research is limited; as a consequence, some people argue that financial support from the government should only be provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. Do you agree or disagree?

Financial support is one of the important needs for graduates and postgraduates in other to fulfil their research. However, some people claim that the government should only financially support scientific research rather than other subjects . In my ,opinion I totally agree with the statement because science contributes to the evolution of the world .

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