IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 985

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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the youth are not interested in reading newspapers or watch the news on TV. What are the reasons?

In recent days, in many nations, some of the youth people are not interesting on reading newspapers or watch the news on TV. In this essay I will explain why a few young people read newspapers or follow it on TV.

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while recruiting a new employee the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities rather than qualification and experience or vice versa discuss both sides and give your opinion

The continued rise of the world's population is a big problem such as enviroment’s problem, climate change and poverty in third world countries. In my opinion it's a kind of problem that everybody knows but literally has no idea how to deal with.

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You have a pen friend living in another country and he/she is curious to know about the major news items in your country.

I hope you are doing well. It has been ages since I wrote to you. I was very busy with my board examinations. It is a big step towards my future. It seems to me as if the whole world is gearing up for a new beginning with unexpectedly surprising measures.

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Write an essay to an educated reader to discuss both advantages and disadvantages of advertising. Include reasons and any relevant examples to support your answer.

Now a day, advertising is a very common feature of all our daily media. Despite some obvious advantages of this trend, I would to discuss both advantages and disadvantages of advertising.

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Shopping online has various advantages for consumers but it may also have several disadvantages including the loss of individual privacy. Do the advantages of online shopping for consumers outweigh the disadvantages?

In various nations around the world, many people are doing online shopping rather than shop. Some of the consumers think that it is extremely efficient for them whereas others are not. It is undeniable that online shopping gives people a great number of cons, nevertheless there are some drawbacks to it. I personally believe that the benefits are more significant.

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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In most countries around the world, technology is unexpectedly advanced and can have certain uses. That is, if used in the right manner for the right purposes such as tracking and surveillance on certain people which is done almost everywhere, it is now so common that it goes unnoticed. This essay will discuss the positives and negatives of the given points.

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More and more companies are allowing employees to work from home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Humans like to socialize more rather than being alone and working environment is the right platform for this. If any pandemic situation demands work from home can be advisable but not for long because,it can affect the person both physically and mentally. However, doing job from house has some merits also, the demerits surpass this. This essay will examine the topic in detail by providing relevant examples.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Multinational companies are the pillars of every nation, and business plays an important role in the global economy. In other words, a significant growth in economy is needed for country’s development. For this reason, marketing a product in an attractive manner is necessary to get reach in public, and it can be achieved by different modes of advertisements. This essay examines the purpose of advertisement and the positive impacts the company receive through this.

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Friends have more influence than family on teenagers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Lots of people have been arguing for a long time about influence on teenagers. Does friends really have more influence than family? Some people adhere the opinion that peers and friend mostly affect on important decisions of teenagers.

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Shopping online has various advantages for consumers but it may also have several disadvantages including the loss of individual privacy. Do the advantages of online shopping for consumers outweigh the disadvantages?

In various nations around the world, many people are doing online shopping as this ease their daily life routine. However, certain people think about the loss of individual privacy by doing so. While there is a clear drawback to this, I personally believe that the benefits are more significant.

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Nowadays, many people spend less and less time at home. What are the causes of this? What are the effects of this on individuals and on the society?

In the current scenario, people usually spend lesser time at home.There may be several reasons behind it and it also depends person to person; like people who are introverts are comfortable staying home,while this doesn't happen in case of extroverts.This has also caused an effect on the individual itself as well as on the society.

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now days people choose to be self-employed rather than work in organization, what are the causes? what are the disadvantages of being self-employed

Nowadays, all those can produce works by the insurance of the right of the freedom. So, many people tend to enploy themself that of the organization. The reason why they shoose this was is because they are able to work anywhere, and there are various jobs in the world, therefore, the worker is unnecessary to work in their desk.

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Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that cannot always expect job satisfaction and a permanent job is more important . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days, employment is one of the most important factors associated with everyone's life. Some people believe satisfying of their job is more essential than job security since they will do their work well. Nevertheless, others disagree with it because full-time jobs can make their finance safe. From my point of view, I agree with the first side as the result of motivation.

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In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I don’t agree that a developed nation should pay for the healthcare provision of its aging population, as this will lead to bankruptcy for that nation. Even though there are many advantages to providing free health care for every citizen, such as protecting the health of poor people, the current health care system is too expensive to provide it without charge to everyone as they grow old in the future.

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Students should pay the full cost of their own study because university education benefits individual rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years around the world, there was a big debate on spending money by graduates to pursue degrees from the university. Even though, it looks like the graduation certificate is beneficial to the person who received it and we are not supposed to ignore this knowledge will serve back to the nation. I strongly agree the complete cost of the University expense is not from the student pocket as it leads many young talents who are financially poor.

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"By investing in tourism we can earn a lot of revenue and growth in national economy. At the same time it destroys the local culture. What is your opinion?" Give your opinion in no less than 250 words.

Tourism is one of the biggest industries worldwide. It has grown, especially over the last few decades, by leaps and bounds. This is happening because the global citizen now takes even the slightest of chances to visit the uncharted territory. So, all the countries are eager to invest more and more in it. It has its rich rewards, but there are drawbacks too. At the forefront of all demerits of exploration is the impact on local perception. Still, in my opinion, such demerits cannot outweigh the benefits of the industry. In the modern ,age the experience of one country or society is open for all to observe and take part in. When incoming tourists get in touch with a local civilization they do not necessarily destroy it. It is understandable that they leave a bit of their own cultural identity in the place they have visited. But that is not destruction rather a healthy demonstration of cultural mixing that is happening incessantly all over the world in other ways ...

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More and more business as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.

With the steady advance in communication technology, many companies and individuals are using it for their daily interaction. Modern communication systems have provided many positives such as flexibility in term of time and location, on the other hand, it has its own negatives such as distraction and losing human identity. This essay will discuss the pros and cons for using it as a replacement for face-to-face communication.

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Young people are often the first to suffer when job opportunities are scarce. In which ways does age affect employment opportunities? How might employers deal with the issue fairly?

Sporting has become a topic of broad interest. Some people maintain that becoming host of major sporting events such as football world cup or the olympics will have some advantages to the country. However, there have some fees can be excessive and may be divert money from other important areas. This essay will pinpoint the benefit of hosting a sporting events and in my view, this trend will affect the financial implications.

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In some countries more and more international travel is becoming cheaper and more countries are opening their doors to increase the number of tourists. Do the advantages of increasing tourism outweigh the disadvantage.

Globalization ease up the travelling from one country to another country. Several countries reduces the expenses to promote the tourism of thier country and hence hiked the rate of tourists day by day. In my opinion, tourism gives lots of opportunities to the country which promotes.

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Children ore focing rnore pressures nowodoYs from ocddemic, socio, ond commercio, perspecfives. Whol ore fhe couses of fhese pressures ond whcrt rneosures should be loken to reduce lhese pressures?

It is commonly said that today's children are pressurized and are facing harder and harder academic, social and commercial challenges. This essay intends to discuss the causes of these pressures and suggest somemeasures to alleviate the problem. I believe that children must be shielded from such mounting pressures.

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