IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 238

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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the best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is giving up to six years of free education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Poverty has become one of the main social issues in many developing countries. I disagree with this view point that teaching individuals reading, writing and using numbers within six years of free education, is the best way to reduce poverty.

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Some people feel that the private lives of celebrities should not be openly shared by the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, daily routine of many celebrities is being widely shared on different media. I agree with those who think that the personal life of these names should not be revealed.

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some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skill than those who prefer to watch TV. What extent do you agree or disagree?

It has always been argued that infividuals may improve their imagination and dialect skill with the help of reading books than watching television. I partially agree with this given statement and this essay shall shed light upon my perspective in subsequent paragraphs.

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Job satisfaction is more important than earning a high salary. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It has always been argued that job gratification is much essential as compared to getting a high package salary. I partially agree with this given statement and this essay shall shed light upon my perspective in subsequent paragraphs.

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A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? GIve reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write atleast 250 words

Nowadays, there are different thoughts about whether the salary or the satisfaction is more essential in adult's life. While part of the society believe that earning more money is play a key role in satisfaction, others think that being happy about what you do in job is crucial. I slightly disagree with the given statement and in this essay I will outline the reasons why I believe job satisfaction is bring joy in people's lives rather than money.

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Solving environmental problems should be the responsibility of one international organization rather than each national government. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, all people in the world are aimed to increase their income and earn a better life. Therefore, one of the most common topics for discussion is money and how much of it every person has. This idea and its influence on society and human beings will be observed in this essay.

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some people say that school should teach good behavior to children and introduce them to right and wrong. Parent should not only be the ones responsible. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The co-parents have an unquestionable responsibility to inculcate good behaviors and attitudes in the children. Nowadays, there is an argument about the school mentors should discipline their students by teaching good habits and ethical manners, and whether the parents of children should not be majorly liable for this. Here, I completely disagree with the opinion, and think that it is difficult for teachers to inculcate positive life patterns in students while completing huge syllabuses and the limited learning period.

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smacking is a good way to teach discipline. Do what extent do you agree or disagree?

I was born in Ahmedabad city which is located in Gujarat. I did my 10th in 2007 in the first class from Bapunagar municipal school and after that, I chose science stream and completed 12th in 2009 with the second class during my high school education I studied many subjects such as Mathematics, Physics and Chemistry from Sheth C L Hindi High School. Moreover, I enrolled in a diploma in computer engineering from 2009 to 2012 with a 6.56 CGPA from R. C. Technical Institute.

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Some people think that the main goal of schools should be making children into responsible citizens and good workers, rather than benefitting them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying the fact that educational system is so crucial for any countiry. While it is commonly held belief that school should train young students to be well-beeing citizen, there also an argument opposesing it. In my opinion, I consider that the benefit of good educational system will lead to a better society in the future.

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Many people believe that technology creates significant impact of modern life. Do you agree or disagree?

In the recent years, technology has greatly transformed the way of life of the society. There are people who agree and disagree to this motion. I totally agree that technology has shifted the course of humanity in various ways. Technology has increased covenience and efficiency in daily life and enhanced learning and education.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, technology has been growing sharply in various aspects of people's life. Phones are one of the most advanced and up-to-date of human's technologies, which all people access to that and they get its benefit. The offspring's usage of Phones is an unavoidable matter in many fields. In my view, this development has more negative impacts than positive effects, based on two reasons: physiological and societal effects.

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Some people believe it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show affection to them. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Relationship is an important part of our everyday life. Some people claim that giving gifts and presents is important to support relationship between family and friends while other argue that there are better ways to show affection to them. To my personal point of view, giving presents is a good way to support relationship but at the same time, we should remember other ways of caring them such as spending free time and talking with close ones.

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Many people prefer to watch foreign films than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In many countries, people give preference to watch movies made by the forelgn countries, rather that local. There are several reasons for these occasions, and from my perspective financial support will provide a solution for this.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, technology has been growth sharply in various aspects of people's life. Phones are one of the most advanced and up-to-dated of human's technologies, which all people access to that and they get its benefit. The children's usage from Phones is an unavoidable matter in many fields. In my view, this development has more negative impact than positive effect, based on two reasons bring in physiological and society effects.

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some people think that government is wasting money on art and that money could be better spent somewhere. Do you agree or disagree.

Art is profoundly important as it reflects country’s culture and a way to represent its people. However, it has become a debatable issue whether government should spend money on the art or should that money be utilised for other purposes like building roads, constructing buildings etc. I vehemently believe that money should be spent on art.

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Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather than rent it. Do you agree with this statement or not? Why?

The choice between renting and buying a property is a complex decision in a human beings journey towards acquiring a place to call home. Each district has its advantages and disadvantages, prompting people to carefully choose the place they will call their home upon their specific needs and circumstances. We will explore the aspects of both renting and buying, while considering facts such as financial stability, investment potential, creative freedom, privacy, and maintenance responsibilities.

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Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising chilren and less on teir working life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some of them are argue that females are good in look after youngers than males. Therefore, mothers should focus their house works than that of their professional lives. I am totally agree with this statement because, when comparison with women's skills and attitudes, they have more soft skills than men. Furthermore, according to my point of view, farthers have more strenth than mothers to enhance the family finacial states. In this essay will discuss, mothers are the best to guide their children until grow up them.

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Smoking should be banned in public places because it not only harms the smokers, but also those who are nearby. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Smoking is a main cause for serious illnesses and whole society affect some negative effects due of this bad behaviour. Mainly this phenomenon does not only effect for users but also effect person who are connect with among those addictors and seen this addicted behaviour. In this essay I will discuss both point of view considering social drawback from these situation and personal rights for democratic society.

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More and more people nowadays are learning on the Internet of going to class. What are the advantages of learning online? Do you think online learning can totally replace the classroom learning?

We can see that most of the people in today's era are opting for online classes rather than going classroom. There are some merits as well as demerits of this trend. I will discuss both perspective of learning in this essay.

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24.With the increasing demand for energy sources of oil and gas, people should look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched natural places. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages of damaging such areas?

It is said that individuals should look for places where sources of oil and gas can be found, since more and more of them are needed. This essay would argue that despite these products can lead to industrial revolution, it also causes environmental damage, this means that the advantages do not outweigh the drawbacks.

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