IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 242

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some believe that advances in technology are increasing the gap between rich and poor while others think the opposite is happening. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

FIrst of all, I intend to illustrate why it seems to some people that the pecuniary difference seems to be enlarged due to technology. Primarily, it comes down to the fact that rich people enjoy more resources which they can utilize to take more advantage of the latest technologies, as some of the techical tools cost considerable amount of capital to set up and operate to a decent capacity. Furthermore, the complexity rises up along with the development of cutting-edge approaches, which means that one needs proper professinal training by experts who charges substantially.

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Children are facing more pressure nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspective. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

In current times, youngesters feel more challeging from study, family and work related pressure which creates lots of detrimental effects in their life. In this essay, I will list down cause and give some solutions to tackle this situation with some relative examples.

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Developing countries require international organizations' help. spme people prefer financial aid while others think practical aid and advice are better. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are a majority of nations which are developing and they do not have a lot of facilitiies services. Furthermore, they need international aid. Some people believe that financial help is very necessary but others include me, think that consultation is useful. I am giong to write about both perspectives and give my own ideas.

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Many people are spending a lot of money on their weddings. Do you think this is a good thing?

There are many people that spending a huge amount of money on their wedding events. I believe this behaviour is not the best way to celebrate your marriage. This essay will discuss why partners should spend less for a one time event and use their surplus on their honeymoon to visit different places.

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Many people fail to achive a balance between work and the other part of live. what causes the situation how to overcome the problems

Most of the people in society have been faced to more difficulties for maintain balance between work and personal life due to lack time and over work in spare time to fulfill economic deformities of their families , howewer people may make free time to spend with families and friends joining entertainments apart from green posture might be a good solution for allmost all problems.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Living in a different country rather than your motherhood country may cause plenty of linguistics problems such as social,practical and other communicative problems but all of these problems are not permanent ones and these ones may relate to different factors of foreign countries that will be mentioned in following paragraphs.

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Children should always follow their parents’ advice . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Parents are the most important people in children’s lives. They spend a lot of time for protecting their family and teach social skills to their children, but this is not an easy job because the children want to have different experiences that some of them are safe and others are dangerous. That’s why parents must take care of them.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, technologies are changing the world above all in the cars, buses and trucks because in the future they can drive without a driver. It is very complex to achieve this goal for many reasons but in this essay, I will explain my points of view and what are the cons and pros.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

" talk about the culture of anybody according to their dress and clothes, that they choose them crediable too much" is some people's thought. In my opinion, it can be originated of their culture, likewise the method of living in these days.

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some belive that best way to improve road safty in to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars and motobike. to what extend do you agree or disagree.

road safty may depend on personal talent and skills for driving and how drivers respect to road rules ,manners and signals , even if age may be one course for safty driving , sothat I somewhat agree with that statement.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is well-acknowledged that humans, due to their evolutionary advantage, have the remarkable ability to acclimate to new environments and circumvent daunting challenges, granted that the intention is there. Hope, coupled with motivation, can unravel endless possibilities and solutions. What's more, such a journey could end up becoming an unforgettable chapter in their lives.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this

Nowadays, due to the better financial background, people can do more activities in their free time. For instance, in several countries teenagers are suugested to enjoy travelling or having a short-term job in the leisure before entering collage. In the following cntent, I will list the benefits and shortages about this situation.

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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy? (Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.)

Nowadays, the majority of people believe the important way to have happiness life is wealth. While others think, happiness can happen through activities in their life. Personally, this essay explores the way in which wealth can influence their happiness and shows alternative sources to gain happiness.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

It is often argued that professionals have mandatory to implement their knowledge in the same nation where they got the training while others believe that doctors and engineers have the right to choose wherever they want. I believe both working in their own or another country gives the advantages for their personal growth.

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More and more countries are making university education completely free for their citizens. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

In today's World, the access to the basic information is too easy with the help of science and technology such as by using the internet and chatbots. While the people can easily reach the basic information from these resources, the more complex information such as natural sciences and engineering can only be reachable from the educational facilities which are universities in many countries. Moreover, with the modernized and financially stable governments, more and more countries are making university education completely free for their citizens which will push science, education levels and technology to the higher and more advanced levels for all humanity.

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Some people think that going to a fitness centare regularly is unnecssary. Instead they believe the combining occasional exrcise(such as going for walk) with a balanced diet is enough to stay healthy. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Many people believe that going to a gym on a regular basis is not enough to stay healthy. They think that it would be more useful to consolidate doing sports and keeping a wholesome diet. I tend to support an opinion that it is essential to play sports. However, eating normally is needed too.

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With growing numbers of people convicted of crimes, prisons are getting full. People are beginning to call for the use of more alternative forms of punishment that do not involve a prison sentence for non-violent crimes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a system?

While the amount of crime has been increased a lot, it resulted the fullfilment of prisons. Some opinions state that there are other ways of punishment of crime rather than imprisionment of criminals. There are some sort of positive sides of it, on the other hand it can cost a lot for society in case not involvment those people to the justice.

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Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas. What are the reasons for this? What solutions can you suggest?

For decades, the popularity of sport activities has been enhanced among teenagers. There has been a sharp increase in the percentage of sportsman as time goes by ;however, this trend has devastating effects on teens. In this essay, I will look at the reasons for this and try to draw some solutions.

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Wealth does not necessarily guarantee happiness. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Provide reasons for your answer. Include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

it is well known that to be rich does not give you guarantee for living happy life. there are many arguments about this issue. this essay will discuss both opinions.

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transport delays are more common among people, what is problem and how could be situations be improved

At present, transport system is an essential part of urban life, after that lengthy journeys are frustrating and expensive for utilization. There turn out to be two main causes of this and several possible solutions, which I will discuss now.

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