IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 241

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, individuals are need to earn more income to fulfil their requirements therefore they do not need to pay taxes to the government. I strongly agree with the above statement and my justification will come in further paragraphs along with some relative examples.

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Some experts believes that it is better for children to begin learning a foriegn language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweight the disadvantages?

As the world moving fast to the future with lot of development, lot of people migrate to different countries looking for new opprtunities. When migrating to a country for a job or even for a visit, knowing the native language of the particular country would be an advantage. Because of this fact many specialists consider it could be beneficial for the children to learn a foreign language at early stage of thier school years rather than late.

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Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state.

Nowadays, individuals are need to earn more income to fullfil their requirements therefore they do not need to pay taxes to the governement. I strongly agree with above statement and my justification will come in further paragraphas along with some relative examples.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

get idea about new things and update

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The Internet will never replace traditional course books in school. How far do you agree with this prediction?

ad all over the world and some predicte it will replace books in school in soon future.l personally withe this statement and this essay will examine the reasons.

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Students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different country to learn language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think students should go abroad to learn different languages and local culture for their school time. I believe that using the opportunity to explore and obtain the diversty society is far outweigh the drawbacks.

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the plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

The following maps are showed the changes the have been made to the Grange Park between the 1920 and today.

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22.Some people think that too much attention and too many resources have been given to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that excessive reserves, funds and other resources are used in the preservation of wildlife. This essay agrees with this statement because there are more important problems and extinction of animals can lead to the appearance of new species.

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Currently, more and more people respect elders and become convinced that old people should live with their families, which is in contrast to the view that old people should live at a nursing home. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is the family problems. It is undeniable that elders are one of the esspesial part of our life and family. However, there is no absolute agreement on whether elder should live with their families or at a nursing home.

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In most countries, animal and plant species are declining rapidly. What are the causes of this? What measures could be done to prevent this decline?

A generation ago, human was very much concerned with nature, habitats that over the time now is regrading because of careless. However, most of the habitats are now on extinction way. This essay will look at the core reasons for this and recommend some solid solutions.

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Some companies have uniforms for their employees which must be worn when they are at work. What are the advantages for a business of having a uniform and are there any advantages of having uniform for their staff?

Nowadays, cooperation is one of the key skills that are required to get a well-paid job or a promotion. Some part of society assert that team sports at school might be a good chance for youth to get this skill. This statement and its possible effect on a young generation will be observed in this essay.

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All over the world, socities are facing a growing problem with obesity What are the reason for the rise in obeisity and how could be tackled

The rates of obesity are risen unusually fast nowdays and spread like epepdemic in all over the world. The main cause for this problem is the amount of sugar in food, yet it can be solved by government enforcing school have a healthy diets for students

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It has been suggested that cars and public transport should be banned from city centres and only bicycles be allowed instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some suggest that only bicycles should be allowed and other transports such as cars and buses should not be used in the centre of cities. I totally agree with that statement because it helps improve the air quality and cycling is one of the best ways to reduce the risk of health problems associated with a sedentary lifestyle.

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Online education and training is becoming increasingly popular in the business world. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the distadvantages?

Nowadays, people can explore all of knowledges through the internet, including in the business world. Learning neccesarily working skill and up-to-date knowledges and trends by online courses and trainning are become a significant part of improving the businesses. By the way, even though online learnings have both benefits and something should have be concerned, I still believe that online learnings are the good ways to improve employee's abilities.

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Some people think that a high salary is the most important factor when choosing a company to work for, while others think that a good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Few masses opines that taking a huge amount of income has play a vital role while others argue that a better working envirnoment is significant to them. I completely agree with the both views as increasing payscale offer a financial stability and security however, fruitful surroundings that enhance the productivity and creativity.

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The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, Emglish have become a global language which is spoken by most of the nations. but some people regard that the widespread of English will enlarge its disadvantages. Personally, I do agree with this notion, and the following content will list the reasons.

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Some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to the society. Others argue that being a citizen involves more responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days, paying taxes can develop society's infrastructure. But what is the most effective method for dealing with the people who don't think same way? Some people believe that giving a hand to the community is more useful and lies with lots of responsibilities. I completely disagree and in this essay i will provide my opinion with examples.

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Write about the following topic: The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great. So government and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. The what extent so you agreed or disagree?

Nowadays, the natural issues are tend to the most important in our planet that means the government in each country should prioritise these problems, and the big companies have to be more responsibility to control the CO2 emission. Meanwhile, some people believe that everyone should be involved in this situation and we have to be cope with the challenges together. From my point of view, I agreed with boths of these views and my ideas will be shown in the following paragraphs before the conclusion inclined.

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In some countries today, people are having their first child when they are older. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Introduction

One of the controversial questions is that people are having their first child when they are older. The decision to have children at a later age is becoming popular in modern society and the drawbacks of delayed parenthood likely outweigh the advantages.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foregin language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country . Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own pinion.

In current times, youngsters feel more challenging from study, family and work-related pressure which creates lots of detrimental effects in their life. In this essay, I will list down causes and give some solutions to tackle this situation with some relative examples.

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