IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 236

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Here is the number of Tourist Visiting X Country in 2019 and 2020. also the data for annual income in various Businesses in X Country in 2007 and 2008

The bar chart illustrates the number of visitors that took vacation in X country in 2007 and 2008, while the table provides the data about income of X Country each year between 2019 and 2020. Overall, the number of visitors from all countries collapsed, especially from the USA and Canada. All forms of industries also dropped with hotel and resort got the most visibly fluctuation through the year.

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Many criminals commit further crime as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

There is an assortment of evidence indicating that indiviudals with a history of crime activity may continue to engage in similar behavior after their release from jail. I wholeheartedly agree with this statement, since it is a recurring occurrence and in order to mitigate its impact mental health, it may take several decades of stable control by public services.

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The best way to solve the world’s environment problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is indeed true that fuel is damadge our environment and fuel use increase in this era. In my opinion, I disagree with the given staetment because people can not stop useing fuel. In this essay, I will discuss about solve the world's environmet problem.

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The best way to solve the world’s environment problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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some people think that libraries are a waste of ressources and money. so computers should replace them. however,others do not agree. discuss both sides and give your opinion

The use of libraries has decreased over the years. People use to go to libraries to read their favorite books or even just to hangout and study.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with help problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development ?

Prevention is better than cure and getting treatment early before it worse. these days, a plethora of people do not meet their own medical officer to get the various conditions of diseases and they use other tricks to cure them. in this essay, I would like to talk about negative feedback on this according to my mind there are no positive remarks.

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A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.

People valuing process by social hierarchy and individual affluent in recent times become more suitable, by which old attribution, including individual prestige and benevolent act is become more irrelevant. I do agree that social flag and wealthiness is more imperative than individuals-old-fashioned judgement, such as honor and generosity, but the old one can not be abolished.

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Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by government rather than private companies. To what text do you agree and disagree?

Scientific research across the world plays a significant role in national development. Some people think that governments should conduct crucial scientific research rather than private companies. I believe that scientific project should be carried out and supervised by the state.

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People can eat a wide variety of food that can be grown in other areas. As a result, people eat more food produced in other regions than local food. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Transportations have an immense power to promote things worldwide. People have more opportunities to taste different kinds of food. Whereas ,some people are more willing to enjoy the other localities’ food. In this essay ,I will outline the pros and cons.

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Celebrities are usually famous for glamour and wealth rather than their achievements. Some say taking them as an example can be dangerous for young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowdays wealth and glmour are considering more influencial than the talents of the celebrities. while some people believe that it will give a bad examples of the following new generation. I completely agree with the view and I will explain my support in this essay.

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Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on earth. do you agree or disagree?

Whether how to use money is a highly subjective discussion point. However, from prior experience, it is more beneficial to spent the money on boost the quality of life on our planet, despite those who believe that space research is worthier. This essay will highlight the major points of this proposal.

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Some people believe that schools should reward those students who show excellent academic performance while some believe that only the ones who show significant improvement in the grades should be rewarded. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, some students achieved a good grades after doing their hardworks in the examination. Certain people think that insititute should reward those students who show brilliant academic performace while some believe that only the ones who show significant improvement in the grades should be rewarded. In this essay, I will discuss both views and explain them.

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Some people believe that schools should reward those students who show excellent academic performance while some believe that only the ones who show significant improvement in the grades should be rewarded. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, some students are achived a good grades after did exceed hardworks. Certain people think that insititute should reward those students who show brilliant academic performace while some believe that only the ibes who show significant improvement in the grades should be rewarded. In this essay, I will discuss both views and explain them.

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Many people believe social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree/disagree?

Social networking sites has been widely used and followed by everyone though it be a kid, youngster or old aged professional. Social media has become part of our everyday routine. where it is often argued that social media usage has its positive aspect in terms of increasing opportunities as well as a source of entertainment. But I believe that both individuals as well as society are badly affected by the usage of social media platforms.

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In some countries, people prefer to rent their home rather than buy one. What are some advantages and disadvantages renting a house?

In this modern technological era, people prefer to advance favpcilities and comfortable as well as easy lifestyle. In many nation, person priotirize to rent their home instated than by one own home. There are list or merits and demetis renting a home. Disadvantages outweigh the advantages. I will explain in insuring paragraph.

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Young people are often influenced in their behaviors and situations by other of the same age. This is called peer pressure. Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

Nowadays, it is debatable whether young adults are tremendously influential by their friends in terms of behaviors and daily life situations, which is called peer pressure. I would argue that youngsters might addicted to unhealthy substances and lessen the interest for education because of the bad friends, and these disadvantages far outweigh any potential advantage.

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It is important for people to take risks,both in their professional lives and their personal lives Dobyou think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages

As human beings,We always struggle to achieve our targets.Sor far that,we face a lot of difficulties through this way.People argue that it is important to take risks in their peoponal and professional lives.In my opinion,I truly believe and I think the disadvantages.

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Millions of dollars are spent on space research evey year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that millions of dollars are spent on space exploration. While it is a commonly held belief that the government should improve living standards instead of spending on space research, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that the government must enhance the living standards on the earth.

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Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Somw people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on earth. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people belives that we should invest more in improving the condition of life on our planet, some said that money must be used in space exploration more. It is the opinion of this writer that more money should go to look into outer space because of good sign of poverty and the need of understanding the universe.

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people who live in large cities face a range of problems in their daily life. what are the most significant of these problems? how can these problems be tackle?

nowadays, citizens who live in urban areas are faced in their daily life a sense of problems. the significant of these problems are cost of living and crimes around their accommodation, and then submit developing equipment for security.

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