IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 236

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In most countries, the crime rate is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. Why do you think that is? What can be done to reduce the crime rate?

The number of crime rate has been increasing rapidly in recently, crime rate is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. Today, we are going to discuss both side of this issue.

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Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.

The role of father and mother in a family has been a topic of debate since ages. The notion that, it is the reponsibility of the female partner to raise the children and also that it is is up to the women to make the decision of having a child is deeply rooted into the society today. This essay will be

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that most the people are going to face problems in their life one way or another, and in order to solve this different situation some of them stays with the accepting ideas without doing anything, while it is a commonly held belief that improving the remarkable situation is a mean need, this essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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Many people today prefer to socialise online rather than spend time with friends in the local community. To what extent do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Some people like to chat online with their friend while the other would like talk with some close friend in the local area. From my point of view, I agreed with the latter view and my supportive idea will be shown in the following paragraphs before the conclusion inclined.

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Many elderly people are no longer being looked after by their family, rather they are living in nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Children nowadays no longer take care of their parents because they are living in nursing homes when they get old. This essay will discuss the main positives and negatives of this statement.

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Some people saay that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so commin that we no linger pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Our world is filled with advertisements that make people purchase products, however some argue that those have become too common and ineffective in promoting things. In my opinion, many companies have learned to adapt to changing customer behaviour and found new ways to catch people's attention.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Few people think that, allowing children to make their own decision can make them selfish.well other believe that, if children will make their own decision, then can help them in future growth.In my opinion parents should let their students to take their own decisions. It will help them to equipped with leadership skill and can build the capability to understand what is right and what is wrong.

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Some people think that it's a good idea to socialize with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it's important to keep working life completely separate from social life.

Nowadays, People live in the society according to the different ideas Thus, they have own ideology due to some of them believe it is a better way to build-up strong relationship and gathering with their staff when they have free time. In addition, other humans prefer to keep separate work life and personal life for their life benefits. However, my opinion is, I personally agree with keep separate personal life and work life. This essay will discuss both views and provide reasons with examples forthcoming paragraphs.

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Nowadays,there are a large number of coffee shops and fast-food vendors on high streets and in town centres.Why are there so many of these outlets? What effect is this having on the society?

In today's world food industry is rising a lot due to the high demand in society was high. Coffee shops and fast food will be discussed in this essay.

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tourism is always a force for good which enables people of different countries to understand each other do you agree or disagree?

The role of the tourism in the world today is widely debated, others claim that it is indeed a force for international understanding. However, i personally accept this, and i will explain why in this essay.

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THE USE OF MOBILE PHONES IS AS ANTISOCIAL AS SMOKING. SMOKING IS BANNED IN ERTAIN PLACES SO MOBILE PHONE SHOULD BE BANNED LIKE SOKING. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

Nowadays, people are addictive to their mobile phones and use of mobile phones in public is also same type of social problem as compare to smoking. In both situation that are addictive and type of unusual things for the social life of human being.

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Write about the following topic: In most successful organizations, some people believe that communication between managers and workers are the most important factor, other people say that other factors are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is undoubtedly truth that, Few people concur that discussing with the labours and managers have played a significant role in the company because of they improve not only social skills but also enhance cognitive power while others notion that other resources such as, becoming comfortable environment and dress codes are crucial to every persons.

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Some people say that schools should teach good behavior to children and introduce them to right and wrong. Parents should not only be the ones responsible. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The role of school and family in educating children has long been a topic of debates. Some believe that only teachers should teach and introduce youngsters to good behaviors, while other do not. Considering the above arguement, I strongly advocate that teaching the young require both parents and teachers efforts.

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Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is true that the main reason of habitual festivals are forgotten and that people attend these cermonies for a more recreational purposes. While I agree that it becomes more common to have fun during festivals, I believe that there are still some committments to traditions that lead to people' appearance.

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Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities (for example, helping at home or at work). Others believe that, outside of school, children should be free to enjoy their lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people today argured that students in whatever ages should do extra chores such as doing house work or at work. While, others suppose that they should be free to do what they want besides going to school. In my view, the latter option is appealing for some reasons.

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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

Nowadays, there are various different genres of music and its importance for human race has been widely acknowledge. This essay will elucidate the underlying reasons why the existence of music is essential in our life. Additionally, it will discuss whether a country's traditional music holds more important position than the international music and why I disagree with the statement.

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Tourism is causing environmental problems all around the world. What are the main causes of this? What are some solutions?

It is claimed that tourists may harm green areas globally, primarily through littering in open fields and contributing to deforestation. There are several solutions that should be implemented to address these problems.

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The cost of electricity for the average household is increasing in many countries. What are the causes of this phenomenon? What are the possible solutions?

It can be ostensibly seen that, nowadays the electricity bill is continuously surging in some of the worlds. simply because, rising the global demand for power supply in all the continent. so, it can be solved by applying solar panel as well as zero- waste blogger. In this essay I intend to analyse some frequent reason and also measures to solve these problems.

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In some countries, it can be difficult for people over the age of 50 to get good jobs, despite their experience. What do you think are the causes of this problem, and what measures could be taken to solve it?

In many countries today, people are more than ever talking about earlier retirement. People also seek the law where they over 50 and some years old don't have to work anymore and have decent pension. Other part of people still wants to work over 50's and contribute society with their work. I will discuss both pros and cons in this essay on this topic nut I believe pros might outweight content of cons.

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Many young people choose to take a year out between finishing school and starting university in order to gain work experience or to travel. The experience of non-academic life this offers benefits the individual when they return to education. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

A lot of young people choose to spend their time one year after graduate from high school to work or studying before enrolling in university. The experience that they will get by doing these will be beneficial before returning to education. I totally agree with this as working and experiencing different cultures can help youngsters to find their passion and to understand themselves deeper which would help them in dealing with collage life.

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