IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 262

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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It is important for people to take risks, both in professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantage of taking risks outweight the disadvantages.

Risks are a must in both professional lives and personal lives. This is a topic in which most people are debating over as some are willing to go the extra mila and tak those risks for more gains whilst others are not. Taking risks is something we as humans are unable to avoid as in every scenario there is something to give up and to gain. In a sense it is considered gambling but by doing so we can always grow and adapt to the opportunities we have taken.

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The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to encourage people from the suburbs or the countryside to live in the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The following essay discusses that people who live in the countryside should move to the city because it is one of the best ways for solving transportation problems. I completely disagree with this statement because people that live in the cities travel a lot, too. And that means they also can cause different kinds of traffic problems. And moving all the citizens of suburbian area seems an irrational idea to me because in this case, more people will live in the cities and even more people will cause traffic jams and they will experience even more transportation problems.

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Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before. What do you think are the main causes of this problem? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays many people are not in a perfect physical sittuion due to using technology and stay in their houses more than before. There are so many things in individuals modern life that are causing this problem and we are going to talk about them in this essay.

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In the past people liked to store knowledge in books. However, in the present, we prefer to store knowledge on the Internet. Do you think the advantages outweight the disadvantages?

Starting with this view.In the past people liked to get khowledge from books. But nowadays people get the khowledge from internet.I think that advantages of storing the khowledge from internet is more than the disadvantages. I want to start with the advantages of this view.

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Female are better student than male. Discuss both view and give your opinion

There are many beliefs that female are better than male when it come to studying, while other think opposite. In the writer's opinion, female students are success in studying than male because of their haute disipline.

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Unhealthy food has negative effect on both individuals and on the society they live in. Some people think that the government should tax the unhealthy food while others say that fat tax is unfair an unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Healthy food is delicious source for people can have a good background in mental health, which means we should choose to use healthy food to build strength. On the other hand, all of us know that unhealthy food has a better smell, so somebody thinks government should balance it with them to compare with healthy food. In this essay, i will discuss about pros and cons of this problem.

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some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, belive that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both view and give your opinion

In these days and ages, there is a noticeable opinion that teaching children behaviour to be a good citizen of the public is the responsibility of parents. Whereas, attitude depends on the school. This essay is written to strongly agree with parents have a role of educating the children.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, businesses usually emphasise in their advertising that their products are new in some way.I believe that it is a positive development.

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Engaging with leisure activities with juvenile might improv their capacity more compare to the reading. I strongly agree for this concept because it impact to the social and physical well being. This essay will elaborate profoundly to justify my opinion.

To begin with, physical wellbeing is one key consideration, which is able to gain by engaging with practical sessions. If played with teens, which would enhance physical functions, that leads to burn extra calories and loose weight. In addition, using intelligence when playing might develop their cognitive function as well. However, youngsters, who obligated with reading for long run could be grown linguistic ability only. For instance, when I was psychiatric nurse, I analized that children who fond of reading were not much healthy and intelligent than, who were participated to the enormous activities in the psychiatric hospital. Therefore, we tend to deploy more teen into the outdoor sports rather than reading.

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is it better when teaching student at shool or at home?

Many people believe that studying at home will have more many benefits than learning at school. In my opinion, I disagree with the idea and I will explain the reason why.

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Computers are becoming an essential part of education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that computers are becoming an integral part of the academic system. While there are some visible drawbacks such as how overuse the computers can affect our eyesight or induce pupils to cheat on their homework, I believe that with supervised school, this trend is positive in the education.

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Some experts suppose that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens happier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Few people think that when a nation is already economically strong, any additional increase in wealth does not make its peoples satisfied. In next paragraphs i will discuss both positive and negative points. I think it is a positive step taken by the government.

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Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

yes i agree to this fact that much money has been spent for repairing or for the maintenance for the old buildings but to some extent i believe that removing or vanishing the old buildings properly are not the good idea as these old buildings are the symbols of our historical or traditional values so according to my knowledge or my belief we should repair these buildings or arrange the proper maintenance for these buildings time to time to avoid the big cost at one time. definately today's world in modern world and technology is going on a hike in now a days . i also agree that technology has provided as much ease and benefits in our daily life but it also has much consequences . but again talking about the fact that modern buildings are undoubtedly provide much attractions and comfort but developing modern buildings by removing or vanishing the old buildings is not a good idea because old buildings represent our traditional values and provide knowledge about the history of our coun...

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In some countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In some nations, migration from rural region toward urban area is rising, resulting in a significant decrease on the population of those places. In my point of view, this movement can have several drawbacks, like a decrease in some rural products, and lack of experts, doctors and generally speaking, disappearing of some carriers resulted in over population in cities. that I will explain in the following essay.

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Some people say in all levels of English from primary schools to universities tomuch time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that education system spends a lot of time to theoretical skills rather than practical. While I agree that real-based experience seem to be essential, I do not agree with the fact that learning facts time should be decreased.

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Is a better for students to study from home rather than go to school do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that is better for students to study from home rather than go to school. In my opinions I disagree with the statement.

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Some people believe that it is bestto accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is often argued that taking in a disappointing situation is a good choice, while others belive people should attempt to get a better enviroment. Although accepting a worse situation might help people living easier, this essay believes that it's better to try to get a satisfactory situation.

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As parents, they should be required to attend parenting courses every year to bring up their children well and give them a better environment for growth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been observed that health care facilities are encouraging the newly blessed parents to join parental program. I endorse this statement as this would be a resolute approach to train the parents with adequate knowledge of their child upbringing. The are many benefits people can avail from the parenting courses. The schemes are entitled with the advance techniques and pedagogy that needed to up bring the new child. Their teaching structure follows the guidelines according to the developmental stages. In addition, new parents not only acquire the first hand knowledge about the vaccination schedule but only handle the emergency situation meticulously. To cite an example, it has been reported that 67% of new born babies face the colic condition and they cry for the several hours. Such training courses help the parents to cope with this situation. Despite of the fact parental courses ameliorate parental skills, the extravagant subscription of parental coach packages have financial b...

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You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year.( Task 1 letter writing)

I am writing this letter to express my interest in your job that taught my language to your two children for a one year. It was published in the Australian newspaper.

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Computers have become so advanced and interactive that students in the future will have no need for a human educator in the classroom. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer

There is a general believe that technology has revolutionized the utmost educational landscape where children will no longer require teacher’s assistance in the classroom. I firmly believe that children need sheer guidance of teachers in various aspects of their study matter.

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