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The majority of people think that studying at home is better than going to school. This writer disagrees with this statement and will explain why in the essay below.
Nowadays, amount of movies coming up is crazy. Many think that censorship is one of the ways which can regulate what to show in movies which is also demolishing entertainment industries. In this essay, I will explain both sides and conclude why Censorship is important.
There is an discussion between people that studens should study at school or in their home. This writter totally argee that student being teach at home will bring more benificial than learn at home by themselve.
Most of elder people are not used to workout and feel difficult to move since they found health problems on their body. For them, it is hard to find a good excercise in their circumstances which is lack of time because of a distance from office to home. In Korea, some elder people still need to work so that they make a living themselves. And some have phisical issues so that they feel hard to workout. Therefore, to start small excercise in their situation is better to get used to workingout to elder people.
The bar chart gives information about the percentage of the consequence of a survey on buying and drinking habits of coffee and tea in five cities in Australia in the last 4 weeks.
Many of the successful people have reading habit. For example the founder and owner of Microsoft, Bill Gates reads on average one book per week. This has led many to believe reading is a good habit to be cultivated however there is another group of people who think the type of books one reads play a key role too. In this essay we will look into both opinions.
Nowadays , World population and house marketing have clearly increased at least by twofold therefore certain communities afford to buy or rent according to their income . The pros and cons of the above situation are debatable .
Nowadays, people sleep less because of the work, they spend long time in offices and focus on their future career. However, not receiving enough energy from sleep can lead to stress. I believe that insufficient amount of sleep can affect on people’s health, productivity at work.
Nowadays, some people hold an opinion that athletes are not good role models for children. While this may be true for some people, I believe that athletes are excellent idols for young people. On the one hand, there are some athletes who create scandals, influencing young people in a bad manner. To be more precise, it is now common to see athletes that consume narcotics , rape women, and avoid taxes, which are all examples of unethical behaviours. Therefore, if child sees his favourite athlete perfoming any of the aforementioned behaviours, he might be influenced in a bad manner. For instance, football playe Jayson Greenwood has recently been acused of rape of his girlfriend. Consequently, children who see their favourite football player rape other woman might consider it as normal, having a bad impact on them. On the other hand, since most of athletes come from lower class families, they usually motivate young generation to work hardly. It is because young people are able to put th...
Nowadays, numerous students are willing to attend a universiy in a foreign country as studying abroad presents you plenty of opportunities such as broadening one’s horizon and language skills. Therefore, I reckon that the pros of studying abroad outweight cons
A group of individuals present the view that the young generations are more enthusiastic and energetic in the workplace. Therefore they are more worthwhile for the firm. Others believe that older employees are more experienced. I strongly agree that experienced employees are more valuable for each profession and in the following essay I am going to explain my opinion in detail.
Nowadays, although doctors recommend that older people should get regular exercise, many older people do not take enough exercise. At the same time, however, there is some uncertainty about the reasons for this situation, and how it might be resolved In this essay, I will examine the issue and seek some possible solutions
In some nations, people desire to find out the past of where they live, which is reasonable to know what happened in their house since people has the curiosity about unknown thing and it might help them to discover more meaningful matters.
Smartphones have become an addiction nowadays especially for young ones. It has become a debatable topic whether spending a lot of time on smartphones is beneficial or harmful for children. This essay will present the causes for this along with my opinion.
The adminstration of museums is different from one country to other , especially, about charging their services to vistors or not ,So that some countries museum are charging while ather are for free.Although not charging the museums increase number of vistorts, which lead to increase the historical Knowladge among citizens. It may lead to put pressure on employees Despite of this imposing money on it leads to prosperity and increase forgien currency.personally I feel that imposing money on museums better than not charging it .
Spending time on watching television has both of negative and positive affects.I totally agree with this statement as some people argue with the benifcial side and others believes in harmfully .This essay will shed light what is the good and bad impact of television in kids .
School system is not complete if there no possibility to check the real knowledge of students. Previously, teachers tend to do it in continuous periods of time, but more and more of them change it to exams. This decision and its consequenses will be observed in this essay.
Films are being produced all over the world throughout the year. Many people suggest that their preferences to watch a film, which is produced by a foreign film maker rather than spending their money to watch a locally produced movie. I agree with this notion.
There is a trend in many countries that newspapers and TV programs were replaced by the internet because of technological development. In the following paragraphs, I am going to explain why it is a positive innovation.
The graphic describes the ratio of people who are unable to read and write in six different areas in one year divided by gender. In general, Developed Country has the smallest amount while South Asia has the biggest amount compared to others.
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