IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 257

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that government should tax unhealthy foods to encourage people to eat healthier. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, people encourage themselves to lead a healthy life because of many rising diseases. Even though many of them aren't concerned about eating healthily. I agree with the taxation on unhealthy foods and that should be implied to reduce its usage.

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Nowadays, there is a greater focus at all levels in education on science and business studies rather than the arts. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

There are plenty of subjects we might learned from school, however, people put more attention on the education of science and business (trade) studies than the arts in recent years. As my personal notion , I think this situation has a positive impact on our society, and the following content will describe the advantages of this opinion.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

All over the world, increasing number of people are becoming more interested in knowing about history of their household or apartment.There are plenty of reasons for mentioned topic but the best way for building the knowledge about their habitants' history is surveying in websites and connect with old member of their nighberhood.

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Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

Ecommerce plays a major role in morden period people use to buy food online. It is increase day by day . But majority of food they use to buy is not fresh or either rippen off .

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Some people think that government should tax unhealthy foods to encourage people to eat healthier. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays people are very addicted to junk food. Every street and everywhere where we can find junk food at affordable rates, so people are not hungry they just go to test the food. For that people are sick very often and sometimes it causes very huge illnesses that lead to death.

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Today foods travel thousands of miles from the farm to the consumers Why is this? is it a positive or negative trend?

Nowadays The international nutrition send foods from the farm to the custmer even that require en extensive distance. Personally, In my opinion that is negartive those countries who have been receiving food,This essay will argue that I feel that for two reasons which i will explore in the following essay.

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Some people say that what children is their behaviour. other leave the amount of time they spend on television influences their behaviour most. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that parents should teach children. how to be good members of society Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Society believe that ,mother and father should teach kids ,how to be good members of society. Other people think that, school is the place to learn this. I will discuss both views and I give my cpinion.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems

Living in a country where a person has to speak a language one is not used to can cause serious social issues and also practical problems. However, I believe these issues might not be as common.

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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job .On the other hand; other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills are more important. Discuss both views and express your own opinion.

Some people think studying at universities is the only way to get a high paid job. Ands some people are of the idea that experienced employees can do the job and there is no need to have high level education. This essay will discuss both these point of view and argue in favor of the prior.

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Some people think that excessive use of smart phones badly affectts teenager’s literacy skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people suppose that extreme usage of cell phones has negative impacts on literacy capabilities of the younger. I totally agree with this statement because mobile phones have numorous automatic features and adolescents spend the limited time on developing their literacy skills.

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Solving environmental problems should be the responsibility of an international organizational rather than each national government. Do you agree or disagree?

In my personal opinion, environmental protection belongs to the responsibility of both international organizations and government organizations.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The given plans indicate the current layout and the upcoming changes to the airport site after the next year’s refurbishment.

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In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. to waht extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the influence of modern technologies and computers has drastically increased. Parents start argue that the waste of time every day in front of a monitor might have a harmful effect on their child. This statement and its validity will be observed in this essay.

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In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?

Effort is an aspect of professional development encompassing various dimensions within education and employment. Number of factors can contribute to education and employement. Several factors contribute to why some individuals demonstrate a different work compared to others. Motivation plays a role as those who have a passion for their endeavours tend to invest more time and energy into them. Which results in external influences such as background, upbringing and socioeconomic status can shape an individuals work ethic. For instance individuals raised in environments that value work may naturally adopt a sense of diligence and commitment to work.

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Some suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this.

Some people think the student should go to work when they a few years between school and university.Because they think this is a way to increase experiment,and can learn some rule of the society.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or diagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

It is often believed by some certain individuals that printed newspaper or books are not necessary anymore, while other opine that loosing the behaviour of "touching" paper can have big consequences on our society. I'm going to discuss deeply this topic in my essay below.

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ome people believe that the advent of economical air travel has been beneficial by making international travel more accessible, while others argue that is has had a very negative impact. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays many people are concerned about abundant amount of time spent on the mobile phones. Somebody even compares the harmful influence of mobile phones to smoking and suggest prohibiting it's usage in some places. I strongly disagree with that statement since mobile phones have became an essential part of our daily life and can not be equal with such a bad habit as smoking.

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The kine graph below sjows monthly revenue in 2008 in four shops of a jewelry company.

The line graph illustrates data about monthly income in four different jewellery shops within one company throughout a one-year period.

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A country should spend money on skills training or vocational training for practical work, rather than on university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nоwadays people believe that vocational schools should be prioritized upon universities when it comes to supplement of funds. I agree with the statement due to several reasons which I would like to enlist below.

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