IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 259

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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some people think that museums should be enjoulyable places to entertain people while others believe that the purpose of museum is to educate people . discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people argue that museums should be an entertainment places.while others believe it is for educational purposes . However I personally with museum for educational purposes and this essay will examine the reason.

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many people are optimistic about the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes in the world. to what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism?what changes would you like to be made in the new century?

the advent of globalisation along with widespread capabilities of computer and the internet make one optimistic about bringing positive changes in the world in the 21century.although serious problems like energy shortage ,pollution,global warming and the threat of war are looming large over humanity,internationalisation and greater understanding among the nations can bring about a bright futuer.this essay also looks in to some of the desirable changes which i wish to happen in the new century.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is no denying the fact that people who live outside their countries could have serious problems with the language they speak, while it is a commonly held belief that whenever you want to deal with something in your daily rotten you must speak to get what you need, and hers comes the problem, there is also an argument that opposes it, in my opinion, I do consider that it is a real issue people should take it in consideration, and try to solve it as fast as they can.

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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the public keep up with the latest news through different media. While, some people believe that newspapers are the best sources of news, others, myself included, think that people can be informed about news via other mass media.

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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn about the news. However, others, believe that they can learn the news more effectively through other media.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.P

Nowadays, more and more people are undergoing cosmetics surgery. The reason why they decide to alter their looks can be a lack of self-assurance and to compensate for their needs to being seen in society. I, for one, disagree entirely with the given statement on the basis of compelling reasons.

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the best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is giving up to six years of free education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Poverty has become one of the main social issues in many developing countries. I disagree with this view point that teaching individuals reading, writing and using numbers within six years of free education, is the best way to reduce poverty.

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Some people feel that the private lives of celebrities should not be openly shared by the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, daily routine of many celebrities is being widely shared on different media. I agree with those who think that the personal life of these names should not be revealed.

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some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skill than those who prefer to watch TV. What extent do you agree or disagree?

It has always been argued that infividuals may improve their imagination and dialect skill with the help of reading books than watching television. I partially agree with this given statement and this essay shall shed light upon my perspective in subsequent paragraphs.

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Job satisfaction is more important than earning a high salary. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It has always been argued that job gratification is much essential as compared to getting a high package salary. I partially agree with this given statement and this essay shall shed light upon my perspective in subsequent paragraphs.

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A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? GIve reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write atleast 250 words

Nowadays, there are different thoughts about whether the salary or the satisfaction is more essential in adult's life. While part of the society believe that earning more money is play a key role in satisfaction, others think that being happy about what you do in job is crucial. I slightly disagree with the given statement and in this essay I will outline the reasons why I believe job satisfaction is bring joy in people's lives rather than money.

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Solving environmental problems should be the responsibility of one international organization rather than each national government. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, all people in the world are aimed to increase their income and earn a better life. Therefore, one of the most common topics for discussion is money and how much of it every person has. This idea and its influence on society and human beings will be observed in this essay.

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some people say that school should teach good behavior to children and introduce them to right and wrong. Parent should not only be the ones responsible. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The co-parents have an unquestionable responsibility to inculcate good behaviors and attitudes in the children. Nowadays, there is an argument about the school mentors should discipline their students by teaching good habits and ethical manners, and whether the parents of children should not be majorly liable for this. Here, I completely disagree with the opinion, and think that it is difficult for teachers to inculcate positive life patterns in students while completing huge syllabuses and the limited learning period.

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smacking is a good way to teach discipline. Do what extent do you agree or disagree?

I was born in Ahmedabad city which is located in Gujarat. I did my 10th in 2007 in the first class from Bapunagar municipal school and after that, I chose science stream and completed 12th in 2009 with the second class during my high school education I studied many subjects such as Mathematics, Physics and Chemistry from Sheth C L Hindi High School. Moreover, I enrolled in a diploma in computer engineering from 2009 to 2012 with a 6.56 CGPA from R. C. Technical Institute.

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Some people think that the main goal of schools should be making children into responsible citizens and good workers, rather than benefitting them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying the fact that educational system is so crucial for any countiry. While it is commonly held belief that school should train young students to be well-beeing citizen, there also an argument opposesing it. In my opinion, I consider that the benefit of good educational system will lead to a better society in the future.

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Many people believe that technology creates significant impact of modern life. Do you agree or disagree?

In the recent years, technology has greatly transformed the way of life of the society. There are people who agree and disagree to this motion. I totally agree that technology has shifted the course of humanity in various ways. Technology has increased covenience and efficiency in daily life and enhanced learning and education.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, technology has been growing sharply in various aspects of people's life. Phones are one of the most advanced and up-to-date of human's technologies, which all people access to that and they get its benefit. The offspring's usage of Phones is an unavoidable matter in many fields. In my view, this development has more negative impacts than positive effects, based on two reasons: physiological and societal effects.

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Some people believe it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show affection to them. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Relationship is an important part of our everyday life. Some people claim that giving gifts and presents is important to support relationship between family and friends while other argue that there are better ways to show affection to them. To my personal point of view, giving presents is a good way to support relationship but at the same time, we should remember other ways of caring them such as spending free time and talking with close ones.

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Many people prefer to watch foreign films than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In many countries, people give preference to watch movies made by the forelgn countries, rather that local. There are several reasons for these occasions, and from my perspective financial support will provide a solution for this.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, technology has been growth sharply in various aspects of people's life. Phones are one of the most advanced and up-to-dated of human's technologies, which all people access to that and they get its benefit. The children's usage from Phones is an unavoidable matter in many fields. In my view, this development has more negative impact than positive effect, based on two reasons bring in physiological and society effects.

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some people think that government is wasting money on art and that money could be better spent somewhere. Do you agree or disagree.

Art is profoundly important as it reflects country’s culture and a way to represent its people. However, it has become a debatable issue whether government should spend money on the art or should that money be utilised for other purposes like building roads, constructing buildings etc. I vehemently believe that money should be spent on art.

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