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you are working in a sports centre. tell your friend about a position available in your company. How you know about it what the positon offers why your are telling him

I am writing this letter to let you know that my company is offering a job. Currently, I'm working as a customer service representative in a sports centre and it's been almost 3 months I've been working for this company. I came to know about this position from my uncle who is the manager here.
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Many people today prefer to socialise online rather than spend time with friends in the local community. To what extend do advantages outweight disadvantages?

Nowadays many human being opt to spend their time online instead of meeting friends and hanging out with them,while a least figure of people choose to meet there best friends out. Neverethless there are a relevant disadvantages. theis essay will argue that, I feel that for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
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Nowadays the football supporters behave violantly. what is the cause? how we can solve it?

Nowadays, it is a pervasive phenomenon in all around the world that fan boys and fan girls of football competition show outraging behavior while they are watching the race. There are some reasons and advices in order to alleviate this problem.
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The internet will bring about a new freedom of information and so narrow the technology gap between developed and developing countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Recently, information which is new freedom will be brought by technology and it has become a popular topic. Many people think it is worth discussing.However, they still have not come to an agreement with each other on whether technology bringing new freedom of information zooms gap between countries of developed and countries of developing or not. Whatever each side of the argument thinks, I strongly agree with the idea that new freedom of information will provide a balance between countries thanks to technology.
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Money is important in most people’s lives. Although some people think it is more important than others. What do you feel are the right uses of money? What other factors are important for a good life?

Money is important in most people’s lives. I guess most of us will agree wilth that.
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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, thanks for modern technology, people’s live can say that it is more improve than before but besides that, it also has some drawbacks for everyone. Hence, it is not certain that science is really upgrade the quality of people’s live.
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Some people say that feeling of competition should be encouraged in children others say they should be taught to become cooperative. What is your opinion?

Children are the tender buds of the society and they are required to be taught values of life. Therefore, some people tend to believe that the possession of cooperative values is required for them. I will discuss the merits and demerits of both aspects before reaching to any opinion.
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Nowadays, more and more people choose to live by themselves. Why is the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

In the modern society, a growing number of people, in particular young people, tend to live independently has become an increasingly popular choice. The phenomenon exists for various possible reasons, such as generation gap, job transfer, further study and so on. From my perspective, this is a positive life choice to individuals and a family. There are certain possible reasons as follows.
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You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened, and that you want your money back. Things to include: - Facts. You need to be concise but explain what happened. - Polite. No one responds to insults. - Outline what you wish from this. What do you want to happen? - Firmness. You want to be taken seriousl

I am writing to express my annoyance with the from you restaurant in last night.
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Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by government. others believe those who financed the construction of a building should be free to design it as they fit. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

THE development of infrastructure in urban areas is always a concern of debate. Some groups of people believe that the layout of building should be decided by authorities. Others argued that fund supporters ought be free to build buildings. I believe that both parties should be involved in such matter.
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Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

The argument over whether work while studying leads to get a variety of problems for some students in their education, has not been settled yet. I believe, without a doubt, it is a hard task to focus on your studies and not be overwhelmed whereas you are at job, as many scientific articles have shown. Therefore, in this essay I would explain the possible solutions I can suggest and the causes that lead to this occurrence.
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some people think that the best way to solve global environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The global environmental problems are coming in the first earth problem`s list, therefore all offers should come hand in hand to end these troubles and have a clean planet.
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Governments should spend more money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The money spent by governments on roads would be better allocated to railways. I completely agree with this point of view because railways are more environmentally-friendly and also safer than roads.
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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that a significant number of people have a desire to to be on the etch of their life doing extreme kind of sports.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that a significant number of people have a desire to to be on the etch of their life doing extreme kind of sports. It is undeniable that adrenaline has become an essential part of our life. In this essay I will look at the question of correctness of this case as well as examine factors responsible for peoples' willings to do risky activities.
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These days mobile phones and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Mobiles have taken over the world, and their extinction is nowhere near. Every human owns a mobile phone and finds it extremely difficult to navigate without one. There have always been debates about whether they are good or bad for us. This essay will summarize how the advantages of a mobile phone outweigh the disadvantages.
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In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effect they have in terms of health on society?

Nowadays, there is a flexible market for products wich lighten or whiten peoples skin. And the companies who are selling these products are in a good selling range and they are making a lot of money. There are so many details about this market and the customers, that i want to discuss about in this essay.
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Many today feel that attention spans are becoming shorter due to the prevalence of social media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, a lot of people use the smartphone. Hence, they spend many time to watch social media useing with their smartphone. Some people argue that numerous people have a short attention. Because, they watching social media time is increasing. I strongly believe that people's short attention time reason are social media's short contents.
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Nowadays ( these days), many ( plenty ) people choose \ing ( decide) to be\ing self-employed (freelance), rather than to work\ing for a company or organisation. why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

There is no denying the fact that plenty of people rather than working for company or organisation decide to be freelance. This essay will discuss the reasons behind this trend And spotlighting the disadvantages to be freelance. 
To begin with, there are many reasons for making people working as freelancers. Firstly, to they get the choice to work two jobs at the same time. In other words, some people want to make profit from their hobbies, while they drive something else. In addition, some people finding getting up at six o’clock hard, because of that, they prefer work anytime they want. For example, my friend Hamza, he quit from his job last year because he cannot find himself working in the morning. 
In terms of disadvantages, regardless of being comfort about the time, also it is not steady income. It is also possible to say that may will come days without sales, and that huge risk, and will be serious problem if you have a family. In addition, it is stressful if you have to dea...
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universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what eztent do you agree or disagree?

It is widely believed that universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject . Personally, I strongly agree with this view for a variety of reasons.
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Write about the following topic. It is sometimes said that ‘travel broadens the mind’. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Do not write your real name and surname or email address in your ans

It is believed that those who travel become very exposed.Therefore i completely agree because people get exposed to different cultures and traditions of the places they visit and also become more innovative and creative.
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