IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 264

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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It can be difficult for small local shops to compete with large supermarkets and with on-line shops. How does this affect local communities? What could be done to improve this situation?

Small local retailers are finding it hard to compete against big shop chains, which is causing negative effects on local communities. This essay will discuss consequences as well as provide solutions regarding this matter.

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Some believe that TV has negatively impacted communication between friends and family. What is your opinion?

TV has become a staple in everyone's home environment and watching it is now one of the main activities done with friends and family. However, some people believe that this new technology has brought changes in our communication with loved ones. Personally, I do agree with this opinion and in this essay will discuss reasons for it.

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people tend to believe that all young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work for the good of the community. Do you agree or disagree?

It is recommended that all teenagers who graduated high school should spend time to start university life volunteering jobs to help society. In my point of view, I partly agree with this statement.

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Some people think that it is beneficial for children to do paid work, while others think that it can be harmful for children. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some societies believe there are benefits for children to do paid jobs, and others think that can be deleterious for underage. Despite the badness for the children, I strongly recommend the former and the reasons for this will be covered in this essay.

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Some people think that in modern society individuals are becoming more dependent on each other. But others say that individuals are becoming more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, technological development made drastic variations in our society. And, it is argued whether recent social circumstances make individuals more reliable to others or not. This essay will show you both sights of it. Recent generations are dependent because they contact a lot. On the other hand they are independent, because they don't get situation easily to get sincere relationship with others. In addition, I totally agree with the idea that individuals are independent of each other these days.

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MANY PEOPLE ARE NOW SPENDING MORE AND MORE TIME TRAVELLING TO WORK OR SCHOOL. SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT THIS IS A NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT WHILE OTHERS THINK THERE ARE SOME BENEFITS. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

In this day and age, more and more people are spending an increasing amount of time commuting to different places, such as work or school. Many people believe that this is a detrimental development, however, others opine that travelling to places has various benefits. In my opinion, although there may be some benefits to this development, I believe that it is mostly negative.

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18.Some people think that in modern society individuals are becoming more dependent on each other. But others say that individuals are becoming more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, technological develpment made drastic variations in our society. And, it is argued that recent social circumstanaces make individuals more reliable to others or not. This essay will show you the both sights of it and, I totally agree with the idea that individuals are independent of each other these days.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects . Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and History are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is a necessity of school subjects such as history. It is undeniable that starting history is an essential for students. However , others argue that science and technology are more significant subjects comparing to history. In my opinion, students can learn both of them simultaneously but I believe that science subjects are more important.

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Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens anymore satisfied.

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Some people believe that entertainers are paid too much and their impact on society is negative, while others disagree and believe that they deserve the money that they make because of their positive effects on society. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

Few people are of the opinion that artists are being offered hefty amount of money,and they also believe that such performers spread negativity in the surroundings ,while others exacly hold opposite view to them and think they are giving positive messages through their acts . I ,however , think that entertainers are mode of spreading positive messages . This essay highlights each point in the following passages .

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People used to live in the same city throughout their lives, but now they change where they live several times. What is the cause? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

Nowadays people are more influance and informative by social media and the internet. Now It is more common families live in different cities in their life time. This will provide more benifits than negative impact. I will discuss about further in this essay.

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In some countries today, there is an 'attitude that anyone can do it' in the arts - music, literature, acting, art, etc. As a result people with no talent become rich and famous and genuine talent is not valued or appreciated. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people today say that anyone who is persistent can make it in every job they put their mind to. In addition, some people that also have luck can become easily popular just over night even without talent and just with pretty face. There is an argument that genuine and true talent are not valued and appreciated today.

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The widespread use of the internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of the web? What solutions can you suggest.

I can be ostensibly seen that technologies are increasing day-to day life because of it offers fruitful information and plenty of skills. Moreover, the cyberspace has been spread all over the place due to that it creates multiple dilemmas to every masses. In this essay, I will completly agree with this satement why misinformations and fake news are growing up but it can be solved by tha authority and people understanding.

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Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. While others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

In this day and age, some people believe that manufacturers and supermarkets should take hands in minimizing packaging dust while others argue that action should be done by customers by selecting the bio-degradable products. In this essay, I will shed light on both views before experiencing my own perspective.

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Modern societies need specialists in certain fields, but not in others. Some people therefore think that government should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society; those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive government funding. Would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?

Some individuals believe that the government should invest more money to the university fees for those youths who are currently studying specialised fields which are crucial in the globalisation world while, in contrast those who take a less essential domains shouldn't receive the fee coverage. In this, essay I will provide my points of view on whether I agree that the positive consequences of a brand-new institution policy will overweight the negative impacts.

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With the increase in transport and accommodation problems in many cities, some governments are encouraging businesses to move to rural areas. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Conveyance and housing in urban areas is one of the debatable issue revolving aroung the society. To accomodate this issue, government was trying to find out various solution. Government had been motivating companies to move to underdeveloped areas. In the upcoming paragraphs, we are going to discuss the numerous advantages and disadvantages related to the solution government came up with.

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Parents should be actively involved in their child’s education. Do you agree or disagree?

In my opinion, parents should be actively involved in their child's education. PARENTS SHOULD REPRESENT THE MOST IMPORTANT SUPPORT OVER A CHILD GROWTH. I WOULD AGREE WITH THE LATTER ARGUMENT AND IN THIS ESSAY I WILL SUPPORT MY VIEW WITH EXAMPLES.

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Some people say that competitive sports have advantages for people from different groups and countries, while others believe that competitive sports only create problems between people. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today's world, competition in any field plays an inherent role in everyone's life. There are several individuals who prefer sports activities competition for various benefits while other folks argue that tremendous issues arise due to the sports competition. In this essay, views on both the aforementioned statements with examples and along with my opinion will be elaborated.

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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One of the discussed issues nowadays is sports buildings that are provided to top athletes and for public use. It is undeniable that sport has become an essential part of our life. Whenever their no agreement on whether buildings should be provided.

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Fewer young people do farming work in rural areas. Why? Should young people be encouraged to do farming work?

In recent years, there has been a noticeable decline in the involvement of young individuals in the farming field within rural areas. This shift can be attributed to a variety of factors, some argue that encouraging young people to engage in farming is an essential to sustain agricultural communities, other contend that it should be a matter of choice than obligation. However, inspiring youngsters find farming as a profession is essential to secure the long-term viability of rural farming communities and address the needs of an expanding worldwide populace.

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