IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 297

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Taking a year of between finishing school and starting university is a waste of students' time. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days taking decision regarding study, break and choice of field is very important because there is a lot of competition in every sector of life. Before commenting my decision that either students should take a year of between school and starting university or not, we should discuss both the views.

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Some people believe that a good way to reduce crime is to have longer sentences, while others think that there are alternatives to this problem. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Jaskirat Kaur: In these days, corruption has become one of the social scourges of the society. It is believed by some people that long-term punishments should be enacted to mitigate the atrocity issues, whereas others are considering substitutes to reduce the case rate. This essay will discuss both the aspects and will also share my perspective. scandal rate has been rising mainly in the rural areas. There are several reasons as to increase the span of sentences to reduce the number of criminals. Firstly, this will prevent the potential criminals from involvement into any kind of illegal activity. Secondly, keeping them behind the bars for a longer time would make them regret about their lives and hence they will

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The management of your company is considering hiring new talent through new means. The management is contemplating two options and has sent out an opinion survey to know from its employees the method of recruitment that should be preferred. Option A: External recruitment: Larger pool of applicants who are more specialized and provide a fresh outlook Option B: Employee referrals: Quicker and less expensive way to hire while boosting morale of existing employees

I personally feel that hiring new employees through an external approach is the most suitable choice for our company. Though the other option is almost equally appealing, I would like to elucidate a couple of reasons to justify my choice.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plans illustrate the current state of Southwest Airport and how it will be transformed in a year.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Technology has become the biggest invention in modern days. It is deniable that technology has easier our life ever before. we do not do love we can not deny this scientific revolution. The most necessary goal of science Should twill have to improve people’s lifestyles. I personally agree with this Statement.I shall provide Some reasons to support my view. To begin with, there are neumedo reasons why, i agree this phenomenon Our peop All people are dif not find a better way to survive in vins. It was able to damage our antibodies power within few hours. Therefore, whereas greene come to a blessing one world Population. Siemislit reçurey made -a exeunt madicen which was a kind of vrecines of cavidion This vaccines assist to ozemo ve on our bodie mallover, His abo increage 0 antibodies which was dudly after by vines of 17. The significen The most important point is that, Science has Part and parcel day to day life. Even we cannot live without science courrrently. For exampl...

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In the past, knowledge was contained in books. Nowadays, knowledge is uploaded to the internet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Previously, knowledge was merely existed in books, however presently, knowledge can be uploaded on the internet and can be accessible to million and billions of people all around the world. In the following essay, I will discuss some pros and cons of uploading knowledge on the internet.

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The demand for food is increasing worldwide. Why has it happened? What measures could the international community take to improve the situation?

population congestion, Some countries in africa, set up institution to distribute food

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some people believe that in the near future there will be no borders between two countries while other fell that national borders will always remain. discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Breakthrough in medical science are by far the most significant advances in world society over the last 2 centuries.

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In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development. This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the countryside. This situation may bring some problems for the country as whole. What are these problems? How might they be reduced?

Due to the mass economic development over the recent years, the living standards have upgraded in the urban areas but not so much in the outskirts. Due to this, it may cause problems to the country as whole.

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Some people prefer to directly help or support people who need it in the local community. However, others prefer to give money to the national or international charities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give your opinion.

Helping people in need is the most noble work a person can do. Some people opine that helping someone in pain at the same moment is more important than donating money at charitable institutions nationally or internationally.Both view points have there Own valid reasons that will be discussed in forthcoming paragraphs before giving my opinion.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

A lot of individuals support that the best method to enhance community health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. However other people believe that public health just can influenced a little and that we should take other action. In this essay, both point of view will be explored before discussing my opinion.

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Some people think that student which selected academic subject who attend to the university should study subject as science and technology. give your openion

Some people think that student which selected academic subject who attend to the university should study subject as science and technology. In my opinion university student should have an ability to select the subject base on their knowledge and they can think what they want.

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It is often said that the subjects taught in schools are too academic in orientation and that it would be more useful for children to learn about practical matters such as home management, work and interpersonal skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some believe that the education in schools are too academic in orientation and suggest a more practical approach. In my opinion, learning practical skills is more important because this will prepare the students for adulthood, in both private and professional life. Moreover, subjects taught by in practice result in faster and longer-lasting learning.

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Nowadays, full-time university students tend to focus on their studying. Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in other activities too. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

nowadays, full-time university students tend to focus on their studying and not be involved in other activities become a more talkative debate.

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Nowadays , People have adopted an unhealthy lifestyle. Why do think this is ? How could this problem be solved ?

Lifestyle is becoming one of the most important things in our life that determine what kind of person we are in the future. In this modern day, everyone has a choice about their own life. Some people agree to have a healthy habits, they choose to eat food with balance nutritions, exercise more, and enough sleep. On the other hand, others tend to take a bad way of life such as eat junk food, less sleep, and less workout. This choice could lead someone into a bad condition, physically and mentally. This essay will explain the causes and how to address those issues.

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Some people that money for education should mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better spent on teachers.

Whether relative importance of computers and teachers is a matter of debate. While there is a grain of truth in the assertion computers are useful tools, I side with the view that teachers can be more skills to increase to knowledge.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recent times, the environmental problem is more critical. Some people believe that the loss of specific kinds of plants and animals. However, some individuals argue that species loss is more essential than environmental problems. I agree with the statements.

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In some countries, girls and boys are educated in different schools rather than in the same school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Education plays an important role in an individual's life because it provides skills, communication techniques and personality development. Also, schools are the base element for study despite a bunch of countries preferring convent temples for their girls and separate for boys. This scenario has a few benefits as well as limitations, which I will demonstrate in my further writing.

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Many People say that globalization and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. Use specific reason and example to support your answer. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In the past few years, nature has faced a degradation with the technology advancement and the rise in the number of global brands. I firmly agree with the notion that because of the growing numbers, pollution has degraded our environment to the worst condition.

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Write an email to the restaurant's manager in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things:

I am writing to you to express my concern about my recent experience at your restaurant. I booked a place for my anniversary dinner party with my family on 31st December 2022. I had an inferior experience with the service and the food.

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