IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 301

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that children should be raised by all the family members (e.g. Uncle, aunt and grandparents) rather than only parents. Give your opinion.

Some society believe that kids should be grow up by the involve of all the family member such as uncle, aunt and grandparents rather than only parents. This essay will disagree with this opinion since the children's development should be handle by the parents without any distraction from other parties. This essay will first explain abou the reason why parents hold the crucial work to raise their children and continue to deliver the disadvantage if other people involve in the development of children.

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Nowadays people are having more fast food. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

In the contemporary era, humankind has been consuming much more junk food year by year than it was long ago. Although, it seems that in today's world a population of the globe has been given many warnings about the cosequences, but, unfortunately, as it may seem is not enough.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years.Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend?

Over the span of a decade, approximately the 20 per cent increment is observed in the number of obese children who live in western countries. This essay will elaborate on the main reasons of this issue as the wrong nutrition and inactive lifestyle, and then outline possible outcomes, including health and depression problems among the teenagers.

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In the future all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passangers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

With the rapid development of technologies, otomotives manufacturing will makes all the transportation into driverless mode, which is without intervention of human as a driver. I believe that this kind development will bring more benefits than the possible drawbacks they own.

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Some people say that schools should teach good behavior to children and introduce them to right and wrong. Parents should not only be the ones responsible. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In recent years, we might find the children in public especially in school were playing a phone for any occasions such as playing games, watching videos on the internet, or just scrolling social media, while the school actually not permitted the students to borrow their phone when in study time at school because infrequently, the children have a less of concentration if they are using too much screen time during the school day.

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too much emphasis is placed on education. more government money should be spent on providing free-time activities.To what extend do you agree or disagree?

there has been controversy about whether more funds be spent on educaional purpose or on providing recreational activities by government. From my perspective, I am in an opinion that the government should allocate more money for such leisure time activities which as important. I will discuss my arguments in the following paragraphs.

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In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music

There are various genres of music. In contemporary societies a minute fraction of younger generation pays attention to classical music. There are numerous reasons for this, which I will explain in this reason, and there are substantial elements that illustrate the importance of encouraging youngsters to play or perform traditional music.

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It is believed that children from countries with a high level of unemployment should be offered just with a primary education and should not be offered with a secondary education as anyway they will not get a job in the future. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

There has been some certain debates in less economic developed countries with high rate of unemployment on the issue of education. Some people think that young people must be provided primary basic knowledge whilst others suggest they should not allow adult higher education. I completely disagree with this argument.

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Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world's fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that air travel causes pollution and uses a lot of fuel, but I disagree that air travel should be ected. I believe that restricting air travel would solve some problems but would lead to many other problems.

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Some people think that children should be raised by all the family members (e.g. Uncle, aunt and grandparents) rather than only parents. Give your opinion.

A child should be raised by all the family members like uncle ,aunt and grandparents rather than only parent. The child should grow in an environment were it spends time with all family members and shuold also know the feelings or meaning of the term family.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the current era, it is becoming increasingly common for companies to highlight on the novelty of their items. I wholeheartedly believe that advertising new products have both pros and cons.I will give further explanations in the following essay.

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People think that goverments should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve envinronmental problems. Give your opinion

The most problem of our circumstances caused by pollutant from cars and other vehicles. Many people believe that the best solution for the problem is rise the price of petrol. I agree that increasing the cost of fuel will impact to reduce greenhouse gas emissions and air pollutions, however that policy can effect for lower income people in a country.

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More students travel abroad for further education. Do you believe the advantages of this experience are greater than the drawbacks associated with it?

Nowadays, education has become an integral of everyone life with it people cannot achieve goals. Therefore, for getting best study students are migrating in big cites. I am totally disagree with this statement due to some reasons. This essay will explain all points in forthcoming paragraphs with relevant facts.

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Life has become much stressful compared to our parent’s generation. As a results, stress-related illnesses are increasing around the world. Why is stress such widespread in the modern world and what do you think can be done to overcome the problems caused by stress?

Peer pressure in the today's era has led to an increasing people suffering stress-induced diseases, which is also making our life challenging compared to the good old times. However, I believe it can by resolved by introducing awareness programs in a society.

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Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by some that music, art and drama are equally important as other subjects at school, particularly, in the early years education. I completely agree with this because it focuses on their holistic development and also enhances their creativity skills.

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Some people believe that if people are allowed to buy guns, they will be able to protect themselves and the crime rate can be lower. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Nowadays, weapons are starting to be legalized by governments because they believe it. However, I do not agree and I suggest that guns or riffles should be banned in order to reduce any harm.

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Some people think it is better to have many short holidays during the year. Others believe it would be beneficial to have fewer, longer vacations. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Adapted

There are people who believe that it is better to have many short holidays during the year. While others think there are more advantages than backwards to have fewer, however, longer vacations.

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As housing is a basic need for people, government should provide free housing for everyone who cant't afford it, To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that housing is a simple condition of humans, people need to be provided free housing by the government because they can not buy it. Many people are very lucky as their parents gave them a house or a flat but a lot of people are not as lucky as them. In my point of view, I agree with that opinion, however, it is also difficult for the government.

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some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid communuty work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays youth generation are very powerfull, independent and one step forward in every field, situation and work. Few mankind claims that youngsters should be ready to giving helping hand in community work without any cost. So it will be win-win situation for teenagers as well as community. To larger extent I will agree with the given statement which i elaborate in trail paragraphs.

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some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid communuty work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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