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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The plan below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today Summarise the information by sellecting and reporting the main features and make comparisms where relevant

The map illustrates the development which took place in a recreational area at Grange between 1920 and today.

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Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Some individuals believe that a considerable amount of time and money is spent on conservation of wild animals, and that this money could be best spent on the human inhabitants. I totally disagree with this statement because preservation of animals will enhance medical research, tourism industry, and ehthicals values .

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Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email •Recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn •Explain how your friend could learn this sport •Suggest that you both learn this sport together

Thanks for your email, I’m so happy to want to learn a new sport.

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Houses are essential for people. Some people think that the government should oﬀer free houses for people who cannot aﬀord to pay for it. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Dwellings are primary for linving. There exists a debate that the government is responsible for providing free houses to people who cannot afford it. On my own opinion, the authority involvement is necessary but free offering is not a proper strategy. This eesay will delve into both perpectives in a comprehensive manner before my positon.

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nowadays, plastic money replacements such as credit card or debit card are extremely popular, even more than banknotes and coins. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and include your own opinion.

Throughout history, humans have used many items as a mean to conduct their trading. After many changes overtime we have reached to a Plastic cards such as debit and credit cards.

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Should long-term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Sometimes it could be difficult to find a new job after long-term unemployment, which could lead to the government having to support individuals for a longer period of time. Some people believe that these job-seekers should be put to use through voluntary work as a token of appreciation for the nation's good will. I stronlgy agree with this statement as bolstered below.

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Many people think technological devices such as smart phones, tablets and mobile phones bring more disadvantages than advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, we can not imagine a life without electronic devices which has made our days much easier. The question is how many benefits do we get from modern technology and are there any concerns about such a topic.

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Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

It has always been argued that these days it is hard to emphasise at educational institutes. This essay will not elucidate the reasons of this statement but also scrutinize how it can be curbed in subsequent paragraphs.

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More students decided to take a part-time job when they go into universities. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

I am writing to inform you that near my home on 45 Oxford Street an old black car has been standing for three months now. I suppose, that it is an abandoned car because it does not have a license plate on it and no one has seen its owner.

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In many countries nowadays, young single people no longer stay with their parents until they are married, but leave to study or work somewhere else. Do you think this trend has more advantages or disadvantages?

It is a fact that a lot of young people leave their parents' house when they complete their graduation from high schools. They prefer to live independently as they continue their higher education or decide to work. This trend has its' own positive and negative side, but I personally believe that it has more benefits than the drawback.

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Employers should focus on personal qualities instead of qualifications and experience when choosing someone for a job. To what extent do you agree?

In today's world, many successful companies prefer to hire employes based on their degree certificates and how many years of experience they have for that job. And I strongly believe with the given statement. I think there are many other qualities job seekers have, so, they should consider that too. In this essay, I am going to discuss, there are many more things while hiring a perfect candidate than some cerificates and experience.

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Nowadays employment options are changing and employees cannot rely on having the same job and working conditions throughout their life. What are some possible causes? Suggest some ways to plan for the future under these circumstances.

As advancement in technology, the thinking of people is also changing. The people do not want to do othodox jobs, that people used to do in the past. And they do not wish to stay in same environment for the whole life. In this essay, I shall discuss what are the causes for this and a way to secure the future as well.

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Some people believe that smart phones are destroying social interaction today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people are indulged in their mobile phones all

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Teacher think that international students exchange would be beneficial for all teenager school students. Do you think it's advantages outweigh it's disadvantages?

The presented bar chart highlights data about how many people which were born in Australia and outside Australia residing in metropolitan areas, townships and backcountries, over a fifteen-year period between 1995 and 2010. Units are measured in percent of people.

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Educating young people is naturally important. However, some think governments ought to invest more in education for adults in need. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that youth is an asset for the country's development in the future, therefore it is genuinely important to build the adolescent’s knowledge. In the meantime, there is some opinion that stands for the government needs to be focused on educating adults who need education instead of the youth. From my perspective, I completely agree with the statement that we government need to invest more in elder education. In this particular essay, I will elaborate the consideration of my views.

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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Just like food, water and light are human basic needs, free health care services should be provided to both rich and poor in every sociaty. the manufacturing of new medical treatments and medication has become expensive, leaving the poor to suffer as they do not have the resources to enjoy the privilege of free health care.

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Many students find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school. What are the reasons? What could be done to solve this problem?

Some people put forth the argument that students are difficult to focus at the lessons in school. In this essay, I will address the reasons of this problem and propose some possible solutions.

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Some people think that children should start primary school later in life, others say that they should start it before 7 . Discuss both views, giving your own opinion.

It is often , many people believe that getting children into school an early age could be a good decision of parents ,while there are many one's have opposite opinion , ,However I strongly opine with the early study , in this ,essay i will explore more about this two views .

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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first tie this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. explain why you think your friend would enjoy a campling holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

I hope you and your family are fine and healthy. I grated to hear that, you are planning to go out for camping this summer. As you asked me for some pieces of advice.

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The percentage of people who were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting this main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given bar chart compares three different places inside and outside Australia, namely cities, towns, and rural areas, in terms of changes in the proportion of people who are given birth at two specific timelines.

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