IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 48

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In many countries, an increase in crime has be blamed on violent images on television and in computer games. To what extend do you agree

It is undeniable that criminal records have proliferated in many countries. On this matter, some people think that violent movies and computer games can encourage this phenomenon. From my perspective, there are several factors which trigger crime. However, those activities are related to this matter to a certain extent as they can be likely to change characters and attitudes of audiences, particularly ,vulnerable younger generation. Thus, this essay intend to discuss how violent movies can influenen on viewer.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Advertisements have become an inseparable part of every business these days. The market is so competetive that advertising techniques are developing day by day. One of the most efficient techniques is the promise of innovation in the product that is being advertised. Everything comes with a consequence and this emphasis on innovation is not an exception.

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Modern lifestyles are completely different from the way people lived in the past. Some people think the changes have been postitive, while others believe they have been negative. Discuss both these points of view and give your opinion.

Some people argue with this problem that can compare to high style than people old before modern era. This essay will discuss about the positive impact and negatif impact.

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In many countries, an increase in crime has been blamed on violent images on television and in computer games. To what extend do you agree or disagree

In the contemporary era, it is said that the content with violent scenes have dominated crowds to commit more and more crimes as the years pass through. As inappropriate TV shows are illustrated throughout flatforms entire world, it induces people to do more illegal actions. This essay will explain my opinion as I completely agree with the statement with some specific reasons.

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Some people think that the modern communication technology is having a negative effect on social relationship. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In the information age, the growth of technology spread in all of the world, leading to the toxic alter in the way which people interact with others. This essay shows the writer’s opinion that totally disagree with this statement.

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The car is a disastrous 20th Century invention that has made the world's cities more dangerous and polluted, as well as being responsible for the deaths of millions of people in accidents. Do your agree or disagree?

All around in the cities, car is common transportation that started in 20th century until now. However, it gave bad effectlike pollution and manu accidents and the death of million people. I agree with the statement because more disadvantages from using car.

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Many people who care for the elderly do not have enough time to took after them. What is the problem related to this? What are some possible solution?

A lot of citizens who look forward to the older generation do not have much time to service themselves. The root cause for this is elder people are too old to take care of themselves and also they easy to get sick than other young individuals, yet it can be solved by focusing on technology to develop services or donate money to service groups of volunteers.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Many countries have compulsory military service for young men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men, and possibly for women too. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

I agree that all countries have military service for men. In my country, there is military account for all dude and I think that this is a good thing. It teaches fellow many new things and new skills that are important for life. Also for young people, it is fun doing military account. I made many friends in my country with military office. It is good for countries to have military and military needs folk. If military business is in the country then the army would have people and also young people would learn new teachers. On the other hand, I do not agree with military supply for women. Nowadays there are some women in the military and this is not a problem for them. but I think that not all women want to go in the military and not all person are strong for the military. Maybe female have other works or can stay at home. I think that this is chosen for female and compulsory military service is not a good thing. Nowadays there are problems in many countries with behaviour of young p...

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Write about the following topic: In the last decade, there has been a great increase in global air travel. What do you think are the reasons for this and do you think it is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

It is more trending from last few years that people visit more countries via airplans.there are number of reasons for this increasing air travel worldwide such as societies have multiple resources to know about golbe and financially more stronger than ever before.Following paragraphs will discuss about this statement . To comence ,fastly increasing technology make this possible to traval different countries.Internet has great influence on communities to see all around the world and indulge people to visit all these attractive places.For instance,ancient time proponents only know about few places of their states and only ellite class could be able to travel more states of a country,but now people want to see all those places that which they are interested. Further more,number of new airlines are introduced in last decad,which created compitat...

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The graph highlights data about the amount of carbon dioxide (CO2) gas produced per person by four European countries over a forty-year period between 1967 and 2007

The graph highlights data about the amount of carbon dioxide (CO2) gas produced per person by four European countries over a forty-year period between 1967 and 2007. Overall, greenhouse gas emissions decreased in the United Kingdom and Sweden. However, in Portugal and Italy, during the same time period, the quantity of emissions increased.

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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

The charts compare the layout of a university's sports center now, and how it will update after replacement.

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Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or allow them to whatever they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be consequences for these children when they grow up?

Some people assert that increasing the use of media devices for communication has a negative effect on the young generation's reading and writing skills. To protect the children's academic abilities, I believe that the Internet has to regulate as soon as possible.

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Some people think that a high salary is important when choosing a company to work for while others think that a good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are discussion topic about between salary and good working atmosphere. While some poeple claim that high salary is more important than good working atmosphere, other people claim that good working area is more important. I strongly agree with the second part and in this essay, both views will be discussed and my own opinion will be stated.

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Some people believe that professionals such as doctor and engineers should required to work in the country where they did their training .Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Every people can live as free in this world but, some people have high level of education contain of different major. As you can see this type of human they like to effective for their country or foreign country. Some others they are agret if, a person who study or have good occupation they must to stay their country for all the time and retired there.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

In this contemporary era, a lot of individuals around the world suffer from insomnia. This essay discusses about the ill-effects of this situation and also provides solutions that can help one with getting a good sleep at night.

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Some people think that children should not watch television because it has negative effects, while others believe that televison helps children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people believed that, children should avoid watching television because it could bring various negative impacts, however opponents think that television could bring many benefits to the children. In my opinion, there are more disadvantages compared to the benefits because spending too much time in front of the screen could disrupt children from spending quality time with their family and also it could bring health related complication in the long term.

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Problem: International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local habitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

In the recent years, international tourism has played an important part in the economical development of many regions, leading to the improvement in lifestyle and infrastructure of such places. On the other hand, many worries about the impact tourists create on the local population and the ecosystem surrounding the tourist-centered locations. This essay will shed lights on how the benefits of people travelling globally can outweigh the drawbacks.

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Some people think that it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems such as railway and trams. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a belief that investing in motorways and roads is more crucial thanin public transport for examples trams and railways. Personally, this writer disagree with this statement and will explain why in the following sections.

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Test 11 task 2: For many people, the reason they work hard is to earn money. To what extent agree or disagree?

In our modern era, a lot of individuals are hard-working due to money. This write agree that society acceptance and personal demand outweigh working for fun.

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Differences between countries are becoming less evident. Nowadays, people are watching the same films, fashion, brands, advertisements and TV channels. To what extent do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages.

In the era globalization, geographical barriers among nations have been gradually increased which encourages people to consume the same types of content on TVV and other means of media. From a personal perspective, I believe the drawbacks regarding regional culture loss far outweigh the benefits brought by this tendency.

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