IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 43

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

In today's world, we are approching with an advancement of scientific kowledge to improvise the people's lifes. It's a harsh truth that the aim of science is to offer a better lives to all human beings. This is a heated argument nowdays among lot of peoples, some are favour with statement whereas some reject this notion. However, I agreed with the aformentioned statement. This essay will further emphasie on my perspective with suitable examples and leads to possible conclusion.

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Q: Many people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access to software. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In the present day, most companies' technology orders personal data for access to software. Some people argue against this trend. While others say it has demerits. In this essay, I will explore some foremost pros and cons.

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The bar chart details the amount of waste that was disposed via landfill, burning and dumping at sea, in a particular European country between 2005 and 2008.

The given bar chart shows the data about the average amount of disposed waste disposed of by three different methods in one European nation from 2005 to 2008.

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Research has shown that the transportation of products and people are the main source of pollution. Some people believe government should be in charge of this, while others believe it is the fault of individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Research has presented that the people and transfer products are the major polution source, someone thinks that government should be in responce for this, while others say that it is the fault of workers. The government can not control all processes, however I think that all processes is on workers then their are to blame.

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Some people believe that time spent on television, video and computer games can be valuable for children. Others beleve this may have negative effects on a child's development. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

An argument has araisen on whether watching televison, video and computer games have a positive impact on children lives', or are they inducing a sense of harmfulness in their development. In this essay, I will discuss both the merits and demerits of this situation and conclude with my own perspective.

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young people who commit crime should be treated as adult who commit crime ? to xetent do you agree or disagree?

Juvenile offenders should not be treated as adult criminals. I disagree with the statement because of the following reasons. Youngsters are not mature as their counterparts, peer-pressure is high among them, and transformation of behaviours in teen is easy.

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Social media is popular and used by many people. However, some people think that social media can be bad for mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The social networks is known and loved by many people. The social networks have positive effect to lives of same people and some people have negative effect on lives. In my opinion everybody uses social networks differently.

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People doing dangerous sports like bungee jumping, scuba-diving should be responsible for their own life and rescue workers should not risk their lives for these people. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe rescue workers should not save people who do dangerous sports. They should be responsible for thier own life. I disagree to this because the job of the rescue workers is to rescue people who do dangerous sports.

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Some people think that children should have the freedom to make mistakes, while others believe that adults should prevent them from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

As I have mentioned previously, in Colombia there are many courses or training which are related to ‘Public Health’. Nevertheless, there are no programs with a similar well-structured curriculum without offering core subjects with specializations to learn specific skills. It should be emphasized that the ‘Graduate Diploma Public Health’ is balanced among social and behavioral factors, economic health characteristics, epidemiology, and health promotion.

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Many students choose to complete at least some part of their university studies in a foreign country. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad

My interest in studying the ‘Graduate Diploma of Public Health’ at Torrens University comes from different reasons. First of all, Public Health is crucial field to manage and control healthcare systems as well as introduce health promotion and disease prevention policies. Secondly, it is required to dive deeper into healthcare research implementing public health techniques to implement precise methodologies and accurate results.

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The char below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

The bar graph illustrates the change in average family spending for a week with per cent of their weekly income in 1968 and 2018.

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Today,people are using the things and rhrowing or replacing it with latest models or latest fashion . Do the disadvantages pf throwaway society outweigh any possible economic advantage ?

now days people are using the stuff and converted it with brand new models

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Sports play a significant role in promoting physical and mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Sports play a crucial role in boosting not only physical and mental health but overall wellbeing of an individual and has created unprecedented benefits. I completely agree with the statement as sports help in enhancing muscles of the body, improving focus, and ameliorating mental health conditions like depression and anxiety.

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Most countries aim to improve their standard of living through economic development, but many important social values can be lost as a result. Do the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?

The is no denying the fact that the improve the standard of living through economic development will affect in social values and can be lost or reduce as a result of the development. This assay will analyze the topic on both of the view, and express my opinion.

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Universities should accept equal number of males and females students in every subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some believe that universities should admit both sexes in equal quantity, while others believe that some subjects are not compatible for women. I believe that some courses are not equally beneficially for both sexes. This essay will discuss why it is not necessay to give admission to both ladies and gents in the equal amount.

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With increasing use and development of new technology, many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform . what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

There is no denying the facts that in many part of the world machines are used to perform certain tasks which humans used to do.while it is commonly held belief that human are capable to perform any function there is also an argument that technology is more countable and more capable than humans this essay will analyse both points of view and express my opinion.

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It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science as a subject. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Science plays a vital role in the development of various sectors. As per the observation in many countries, students are not willing to study science as a subject in their academic programs. This essay discusses why students should choose science as a subject in academics and its effects on society.

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Health services are a basic necessity. However, private companies have made them quite costly for ordinary individuals. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh its disadvantages?

In this essay, I want to argue about health services especially private and costly ones.

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Many university students nowadays live away from their home and their parents because of their university location, while others live with their families. What are the advantages and disadvantages of each situation? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many college students now live alone without their mother , father ,sisters and brothers because the location of their college not near the home . What are the advantages and disadvantages of living away the home for study ? In this essay I will write about two points of view .

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Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think is a good idea or a waste of time? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant exaxples from your own knowledge or experience

In the past years a tendency of taking a time off before attending university have grown strongly.Every year more and more schoolars prefer to take a year off before going to academy.The gap year utility is agreed,as advantages outweigh disandvantages.This essay will prove it by explaining the opportunities of taking an year off.

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