IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 43

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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It is best to save money, for example in a bank or savings scheme. How far do you agree or disagree?

Saving money in saving program such as in bank is a better method. I personally agree with this statement for some reasons that I will explain why in this essay.

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In many countries, more and more men are staying at home to look after their children when women work full-time. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?

I believe that the content of this question is a thought provoking, disputable and debatable issue in the contemporary world at present, and I am inclined to think that it is a negative development for a variety of hypothesized and pertinent factors. Therfore, I could elucidate this topic to prove my inclination and hypothesis as correct.

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more and more people want to move to big cities. Why is that? What extent is the good trend ?

Moving to the large urban center to have a lucrative career is becoming popular in the world. Although overpopulation can be caused by transfering to metropolitan area, the economy of center will be raised rapidly.

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The most important of science should be to improve people's lives. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?.

Some people consider that science is a tool that should force on qualities of individuals' life. I completely agree this statement. Here are my reasons.

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Write about the following topic: Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, many people who have work are hate it or have no talent for it. In this essay, we will discuss why this happening, and will look at some examples from author's life.

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Nowadays, children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some think that these activities are not beneficial for a child’s mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this era, kids consume a lot of entertainment media such as TV and video games. I strongly agree with the point of view that getting children too much entertainment can negatively affect children's mental health and their social life skills due to its easy accessibility.

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Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

It is a common view that modern technology has bridge the gap between people while others argue that it has make relationship between people become worse. This writer holds the believe that the relationship of human become worse is the resulted of today's technology.

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Some people think an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution. Others think there are more effective ways to do this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is true that in this day and age,opinion is divided over whether worldwide car-free day is an effective measure to lower air pollution, while others think there are more efficient methods to accomplish this.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In these days, companies try to showcase their products as a new one in some way, because customers are more intrested in discovering new things and this can be a positive development. This is because, companies may try to think outside the box and also avoid copying from others to create a new product.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The plans illustrate the changes that have been made to Grance Park, comparing its look on the first day of its launch in 1920, to how it looks now.

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At the present time,the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults,compared with the number of older people. do the advantages of this sitation outweigh the disadvantages?

Helpful beverages play an important role in our life. I have decided to do a project on what kind of drinks parents in Zetland consider best for children and found a table with the results of the opinion poll on this topic. Below I will give my comments on the results of the poll.

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In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age. Is this a positive or negative development?

In recent days, several states implemented laws against age discrimination while hiring. This can cause both pros and cons to countries. However, in my opinion, I consider such laws to be positive development since the disadvantages.

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Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as everyday basics produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance. TO what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Exchanges of manufactured products across countries are a great way to maintain trade relationships.

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In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem.What are the causes of this and wha actions can be taken to solve this problem?

Congested traffic in major cities globaly have been the major concers for several states. This essay will address the root causes of road jam, and propose viable solutions to ameliorate this stance.

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Most people believe that social media such as facebook and instagram negatively impact on society and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Overall, I disagree with the statement because technology has become an indispensable part of life, and various applications like facebook, instagram, and wattsapp are the latest inventions of technology. In my essay, I tend to explain various reasons for my disagreement.

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With increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

First and foremost, more employment opportunities will be created thus putting people into working mode. By this, mostly the youth will not be just loitering around rather, they will be busy in their respective work stations. In addition, they will be able to put something on the table. For instance, my uncle has really improved ever since he was employed as a clerk in the industry at Samburu for the past five years. Therefore, the more the industries, the more space will be created for people to work.

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Some People claims that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think law are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

There is no doubts that more garbage from housholds could be recycled. It this essay I will explain the reasons why the oficial policy is the most effective way to rise the level of secondary usage of rubbish.

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Population in cities is growing rapidly. What are the effects of it? What solutions can you give to maintain a good quality of life in urban areas?

The globalization is growing rapidly, as seen by the increased of population in the metropolitan cities. The mobilization of human into cities are mainly driven by economic growth. Job opportunity and accessible facilities are some of the main reasons of why people migrated to the cities. Indeed, there are positive and negative impacts regarding this issue.

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Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines to test the safety of the products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The provided diagram illustrates the way in which geothermal power is used to manufacture electricity. Overall, five main stages are shown on the diagram, beginning with gathering the cold water, which is then pumped down and injected into the geothermal zone; and finally operating the turbine and producing electricity.

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Write the advantages and disadvantages of child labour.

As we explore our surrounding, we are known to silent struggles of innocent children behind the doors of factories,farms and industries.Such suppression of innocent smiles are considered as child labour.Beside the mix reviews about this topic,child labour have become a growing trend nowadays,making it a crucial scenario to discuss.

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