IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 45

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food. What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

Plenty of choices are made to purchase imported food instead of local one. One possible contributory facor is that people cannot cultivate that food in their country. However, quality improvement of local food may successfully persuade citizens to consume them.

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Many people believe that education and high qualifications will bring success. Others think that it’s not required to achieve success in life. Discuss both views and give your opinion

in this present world, some people have different view especially about this issue that many people believe that education and high qualifications will bring succes, other think that it,s not required to achieve succes in life so that, I would like highlight about the both the view in this paragraph below.

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As a part of their education, many students work at a company for a short period of time without a salary. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to this?

in this modern world, there are a lot of students working in the company for short period of time without a salary part of program education this now. I see regulation that has several positive benefits which is to must become solution for some student.

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Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Some say that produce large quantities of money as weel as having small intervals of relaxating time better than earning less of cash with more leisure time. This essay will discuss both of view of a couple cases above with qualities or quantities relaxation periods and more or less cash on hand.

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The graphs below the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000.

The given diagram illustrates the proportion of gender who in the ages of 60 to 64 in employment in four distinctive rural areas during three decades (from 1970 to 2000).

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Question--Some people say that TV Advertisement have benefits, while others believe the opposite. Discuss both views , give your own opinion and include examples from your experience

in this decade, while some individuals contend that TV ads considered to be beneficial, the others hold the contrary belief. This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter.

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Nowadays, traffic is a serious problem in big cities. Why is this so and what effects does it bring?

In this day and age, traffic is becoming a problem in different countries. Also, this problem is obtaining on sharing with other countries and all governments would create any solution to resolve this problem.

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The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

As with the advancement of technology ,people way of living has been changing rapidly.Now it is considerded,that spending whole life with one career is not a good choice,everyone has to learn different ways of earning as well as professional learning should be extended throughout life.I agree with this notion and the following essay will discuss it in details.

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Today many people spend less and less time in their homes. What are the reasons and what are the effects of this trend on individuals and society?

Some people believe that a lot of society has spend their time for their jod until they hav not many times for their time for their family.In my opinion there are many problem they should do for it.

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You should spend about 40 mins. Write about the following topic: Many people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places such as libraries, shops and public transport. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays using of cell phones is crucial for daily activities and communications. Some people are thinking to limits their use in public regions.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Museum is a place where someone can view lifestyle of past generations.Nowadays, some museums are free of cost while other museum has entry fees for admission. Imposing public for visiting museums has lot of merits as comparing to museums that are available for free.

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Too much emphasis is given for education of the young. More government money should be spent to free time activity of young people . To what extent do you agree or disagree .

In this modern society , many think education is the most important for children . However , others believe that their nations should spend more money improving another activities for students . This writer agree that students need have more free time to relax and develop their talents .

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The process of producing drinking water by solar powered pump and filter

Provided in the process is information pertaining to the method of making drinking water by using solar power. From the observational perception, the process commences with the underground water pumped by the electricity from the converter which turns solar power into electricity and culminates with the water which is purified and ready to use.

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These days, many offices and schools have open-space design. Is this a positive or negative development?

These days, open-space design is more preferably rather than single room in a some facilities namely schools and offices. In my opinion, this is a negative development which can lead to absentmindedness and easy spread of illness.

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Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. To what extent would you say that television has positively or negatively affected the cultural development of society?

Television has been around the world for several decades playing a significant role in shaping the culture of various societies, including mine. In this essay, I will explore the positive and negative impacts of television on the cultural development of the society.

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Many people believe that playing video games is a waste of time and can even have a negative effect on the health of players. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In recent years recreational activities have many changes when compared to the past few decades. Most of the individuals believe that spending time by playing video games is just wasting time and have adverse effect of their well being. I completely agree with the above notion and in this essay I would like to explain why I am supporting the majority opinion.

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Online education is rapidly increasing in popularity. What has led to this development? What are the advantages and disadvantages of online learning compared to in-class instructions?

There is no doubt that these days online education is jumping substantially to become primary education.Online instructions have improved to generate a lot of knowledge. I strongly believe that as benefits are overcome online education, this essay will discover the main points. Compared between online and traditional instructions, online learning is more flexible than old ways of learning.

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Some people think that dangerous sport should be banned while others believe that people should be free to choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the modern era, humanity has become more and more risking their lives by engaging in extremely deadly sports. Within the society, some individuals can say that it has positive side, while others argue that it have more negative impacts. Despite the fact, that it has a plenty of benefits, I believe that extreme sports offer a way more drawbacks.

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Online education is rapidly increasing in popularity. What has led to this development? What are the advantages and disadvantages of online learning compared to in-class instructions?

In contemporary period, studying in online format has become an increasing trend among students. This phenomenon occurs due to the advancement of technology. This essay will discuss both positive and negative aspects of it and provide a logical conclusion.

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The development of science and technology has been accompanied by a decline in traditional culture. Do you think that this has a negative impact on our life?

Really man? I do not really know about this topic. Can you give me another one? Just kidding=)) If I had to guessed, I would say that due to the development of modern stuffs, traditioanl cultures being kicked out of the society because they are not only crucial more but also unimportant.

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