IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 507

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Is The murder of Dee Dee Blancharde a biased case?

In 2016 Gypsy Rose Blandcharde was sentenced to 10 years of jail time at Chillicothe Correctional Center in Missouri for second degree murder of her mother Claudine Dee Dee Blancharde. Gypsy has been said to have leukemia, asthma, vision and hearing impairment, muscular dystrophy, and seizures by her mother Dee Dee. She would be fed through a feeding tube and was given SEVERAL medications that she never needed. She had the mind of a 7 year old, never had friends or had any close interactions with kids her age. She lived with her mom, Dee Dee, who was mentally ill and a hoarder. Dee Dee had a mental illness, Munchausen syndrome by proxy, which made her fake Gypsy’s disorders in order to receive attention, money, and sympathy for living with and caring for a sick kid. Soon after they had moved into their new house in March 2008, Gypsy started connecting the dots and found out what her mother had been doing to her. She found out she could walk, wasn't allergic to sugar, and w...

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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Firstly, studying the science of food has some advantages. It might improve students’ life skills. They can prepare food it is themselves also less dependent on their parents. Some of them may go to live alone to separate from their parent, so this cooking skill is very useful for them. And if you are small, you can help your parents by cooking with them. Having knowledge about food can assist us in many dangerous moments such as survival. For instance, when you are stuck in a forest and your emergency food is run out. At this moment, you have to cook something to eat, and this life skill that is the most important which is not in your notebook. Knowing about this plant can help you check if it’s toxic or eatable. So that, the science of food should be added as a subject in a school. Besides, learning about not only the science of food also many many things around our life can relax us from the stressful lesson in class.

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Today many parents force rhier children to study all kinds of courses in the early age . What are the reason behind this.? What effects do you think this practice would bring to gbs children?

My name is Shuning GUAN (Nina). I am writing this letter to support my application of the Master of Management -- Business Data Analytics program at University of Windsor for the fall of 2022. It is my intent to attend Odette School of Business, and University of Windsor is my first choice.

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Foad says that teaching adults is more fruitful than teaching kids in that it helps with your personal growth. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use personal experience and references to strengthen your arguments.

We all consider our teachers as our first role model in life, but when we decide to be a teacher there are plenty of options to consider in order to choose this job as our main career. We mostly start it by teaching young learners and as we get used to it, it seems difficult to look forward to teaching adults. Meanwhile, Some experts believe teaching adult is more beneficial that teaching kids. The main question here is that whether teaching adults would help you with your personal growth or not?

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Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more excercise and spend more time with their family and friends whereas now many suffer loneliness and health problems.What are the causes o this and what are some solutions

It is often argued that in the past, people were very happy and healthy in their lives and invest their time more in family and friends. However, nowadays they are isolated and suffer from heath causes. In this essay, I will explain the reasons and solutions to curb this problem in the coming paragraphs before reaching a solid conclusion. To start with, there are a plethora of reasons behind this situation. First of all, people are most isolated and busier in their life. In this modern era, all individuals invest their time to focus on their careers rather than spending time with their loved ones. So, in the end, they have left no one to share problems as a result of this , they fall into depressions. For example , in the UK, 50% of successful business people are in depression because of loneliness. The second reason is that human beings are living in the virtual world. People have been stuck with their social media. ...

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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn language. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

English is a language which accounts for various usage in global citizens' life, from business to manufacturing. It is said that studying English in English-speaking countries is the best way. However, it is not the only method. In my personal view of point, both are acceptable arguments.

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Cinemas are good, others say wrong. Discuss both these views.

Therefore, from a career development perspec6ve, studying such set of courses provides one with an invaluable addi6on to a career and puts her/him in the forefront of the ﬁeld, paving the

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some people say that teaching adults is more fruitful than teaching kids in that it helps with your personal growth. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use personal experience and references to strengthen your arguments.

The first thing that I found is that One of the most proven differences between adult and young learner classes is “ class management”. Although kid’s classes seem to be more fun and kinesthetic, in adult classes you are not supposed to spend a considerable amount of time on explaining about the classroom rules. Meanwhile you have more time to teach and assign interesting tasks. This might help you not to get work burn-out which is a great concern for many of us since after a while we migh...

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Ahat are the reasons of increasing pollution and how can be solved it ?

Rising in pollution level has become great concern for every country.There are different reasns responsible for this issue, however it can be tackled with the assistance of government and people.

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International travel is becoming coming cheaper and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourist. Do the advantages of increased tourists outweigh disadvantages?

Now a days, most of people like to go on an tones. As international travel agencies providing low charges for travelling the many people would like to go on tour. In my opinion, with the international commuters will have the more benefits.

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Nowadays many people choose to be slef-employed, rather than work for a company or organisation, Why might this be the case ? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In recent time is has been seen that many people are choosing to be self-employed rather than working for someone else.In this ,essay we will discuss the major reason reason behind why people are choosing to be self-employed and what can be the disadvantages of this. On the one hand, Nowdays due to lot of competition organisations sometimes take up the project with unrealistic deadline. This cause thier employee to work long hours to meet this deadline. This cause employees to work for long amount of time due to which there is no work-life balance for such employees. This gradually increases and can lead to an unhealthy lifestyle increasing the stress among such people. Many people feel pressured working under their bosses simply because they think they could a better job on their own. Due to increaser in competition inside the organisation ,itself many think that they are not getting the opportunity they deserve. A major factor contributing to this factor could be unequal p...

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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job.On the other hand other people think that getting experience and developing skills is more important.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays in the society students aims to get a top rated degree from a reputed university or a college.Whereas some are tend to self working criteria.some people believe it is better to have a university degree to get a job to make their life more secure.In my opinion I believe that is true.

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popular events like football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in existing international tensions and releasing emotions in a safe way . To what extent do you agree and disagree with with the opinion

Sports play as an integral part of any civilised community. Though big sports events are considered as an opportunity to improve relations among countries, but these events come at great cost. This essay will discuss in detail as to why such huge affairs are not everybody’s game.

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Exposure to international media, such as films, TV and magazines, has an impact on the local culture. What do you think of these impacts? Do you think that the advantages of these impacts outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is believed that the local culture of a country is influenced by watching international media, such as films, TV and magazines. In this ,essay we will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of this topic. On the one hand , watching international movies ot TV shows helps people to understand different cultures other than their own. They can come to know that how the world outside works. Having such knowledge can help people understand each other much better. This will help create a...

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many believe that it is important to protect all wild animals while others think that it is important to protect some, not all of them. discuss both view and give your own opinion.

There is a contentious controversial argument over wheather to save our planet and environment meanwhile some animals are going to extinct . In this essay I am going to examine this question that should we save all the animals or part of them ,however I think we should save all of them .

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In many countries, people wear more western-style clothes (suits and jeans) than their traditional clothes. Why ? Is it a positive or negative development?

At this day and age, the majority of people prefer to wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than their country's traditional clothes. There are two main factors behind this phenomenon. Moreove, this change has both

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5. Some people believe that reading stories from e book better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary world, the children are exposed to all kinds of technologies like TV, computers and use of such gadgets are inevitable. Some individuals argue that it is far more beneficial for children to read from an electronic gadget rather than spending hours in front of the television or personal computers. This essay will argue that electronic books are no better replacement for computers or television.

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international sporting events are costly and bring problems to the hosting country. To what extent do you agree or disagree? give specific example.

sports are played a quintessential role in individual life. Despite benefits, international sporting events create certain complications to the host countries to a great extent. I partly concur with this given statement.

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People are becoming famous with the help of TV programmes and the internet. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Social media is a really useful thing for some reasons. With the help of the internet you can easily become whoever we want for example, famous. It is not really hard becoming well-knowned by TV programmes or the Internet. No matter how old we are if you can do at least "something" interesting to other social media users, I guarantee you guys can get a little bit of popularity doesn't have disadvantages. May be it is because you can easily get tones of hate for doing or saying something wro...

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These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

Nowadays, secondary schools in particular suffer from the scarcity of teachers as more and more people find teaching less attractive. In this essay, low pay and a burden of the work are blamed to be the reasons pay rise along with an appointment of teaching assistant will be given as ways out.

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