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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Television sports shows such as Olympic are a good source of motivation for youths who do not like to exercise much. To you agree or disagree?

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal surge in the number of people believing that youngsters need to watch sports activities on television.I completely agree with above mentioned statement and this essay will delve into a discussion of my supporting view in the upcoming paragraphs.

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FUNDING ART, MUSIC,AND FILIM IS MORE IMPORTANT THAN FUNDING PUBLIC STRUCTURE.AGREE OR DISAGREE

These days,Funding is the most important factor associated with everyone's life satisfaction.If a question about investment in art, music and film very important rather than in investment in public it will difficult for us to make a decision on this issue.Some people are firm believers in funding art thanks to preservation.Others,on the other hand,have always shown devotion to funding the public due to society.In this essay I will discuss both sides and why i am in favour of public funding.

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The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

These days, mankind assumes that the growing population is an enormous issue being faced by the human race. There are many reasons that drive the continuous rise of the number of humans. One of them can be more than two children in one family. Another reason is the improper management of manpower. I totally disagree that it is the greatest problem being encountered by many nations, ,,instead it is an opportunity for the labour force used for the development of society.

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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

In this day and age, there has been much debate revolving around changes in the lifestyle of people yielded by information technology development. From my perspective, the detriments of information technology outweigh its merits.

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Television is dangerous because it destroys the family tie and community spirit. It is said by some that television absorbs so much of people’s time that they have no time to talk to each other. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

Some people might say that watching televisions can destroy the warmth between families as it takes so much time and eventually lead to no talk between family members. Although I accept that there are some negative impacts about that but I disagree about the statement.

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Some people work on the same type of work for their whole lives while others prefer to change their work type. Which of the approaches is more reasonable in your opinion?

A few individuals prefer working in a similar field of industry for their entire life whilst other people want a work change. In this essay, I will discuss both viewpoints and also give my opinion. Firstly, I will explore doing the same job throughout their lives and moving forward I will consider the second view of different preferences in jobs.

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Some people believe that children should spend all of their time with their family. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.

Spending time with family is in fact very good for children as they can share everything with their parents and the bond between them will also increase but at the same ,time it will definitely have a negative impact on their growh. This essay will disagree that children spending their time completely with family.

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one of the best way to solve worlds environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel prices. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

To begin with, as they say fashion are influenced by culture and tradition but in this day and age fashion are greatly dominated by social media influencers and content creators around the world.

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Some people think the developments involving the Internet have brought people closer together while others think that people And communities have become more isolated

It is undeniable That modern technology Has a huge impact in our society in this day and age like Internet. However, there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that the usage of Internet as a medium communication brings people closer while the other argues online addiction Causes Social isolation and confinement. In my opinion, I believed Internet has bridged the gap of communication and enhances socialization.

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computer these days can translate all kinds of language with greatee accuracy.Hence, our children will not need to learn more language in the future. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that nowadays, computers like a laptop can translate avarious languages with awesome accuracy which maybe lead to our next generation do not need to study more foreign languages

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Children are facing more pressure nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of this pressure and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

There is a debate concerning that an increasing number of children are struggling with stress come from academic, social an commercial sides. This essay discuss the reasons for this pressure and then give some solutions about that.

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Nowadays, more and more older people compete with younger people for the same jobs. What can be reason for this? what would you suggest as a solution?

Nowadays in majority occasions, individuals are working in the same job despite of their age or gender. This essay argues about causes of working in mix ages. Although, it finds some possible solution to this statement

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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth of overweight people in society? How can this problem be resolved?

Being overweight has become a serious health issue for many peoples and it is increasing day by day. The major reason for this is inappropriate diet and this can be resolved by following a perfect diet. However , the diet plan can vary for each age group.

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The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages of this trend ?do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, industrialization countries have accompanied by speedy life and peop le do not have enough time for cooking and usually convenience food help them, but I think is not useful for them and there are more disadvantages than advantages.

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Some people think the government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Social issues related to what subjects should be invested in have been widely discussed among people over centuries. It is hard to deny that more money spent on science would pose stress on cultural diversity, such a fact leads impressionable people to generate the opinion that the government should not invest more money on teaching science than other subjects for a country's development and progress. However, such a statement suffers from both logical and factual fallacies, and it should be examined meticulously. As far as technology, effectiveness, and culture are concerned, I strongly hold that the government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects for a country's development and progress.

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Some people think the government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Social issues related to what subjects should be invested have been widely discussed among people over centuries. It is hard to deny that more money spent on science would pose stress on culture diversity, such a fact leads impressionable people to genrate the opinion that the government should not invest more money in teaching science than other subjects for a counntry's development and progress. However, such a statement suffers from both logical and factual fallacies, and it should be examined meticulously. As far as technology, effectiveness, and culture are concerned, I strongly hold that the government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects for a counntry's development and progress.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.

In today’s world, many languages are in all of the countries around the globe, and despite the fact, that some of them perished. it is important to preserve the remaining languages .

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

There is an idea in some societies that encourages the young generation to take one year gap between finishing high school and starting university studies. There are several positive points associated with this option such as receiving a great deal of experience, and being familiar with various situations, and also there are some negative points like being away from education and personal expenditures.

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In the 21st century, contact between many different parts of the world has developed rapidly through air travel and telecommunications. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays the world is getting closer. With the advancement in technology, people are connecting globally because it is covenient to travel and have explicit phone conversation. There are umpteen merits as well as demerits to this development. However, in my viewpoint, it has helped everyone to grow exponentially. I will shed some light on the same in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people believe that visitors of other countries should follow local customs and behaviour .Others disagree that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people think that foreign visitors should follow local norms, another countrycountry should welcome diverse cultures .I think foreign visitors should do what the Romans do,,otherwise their behaviour might seem offensive to the locals.

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