IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 561

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people are happy to spend their whole lives in the same area. Other people prefer to live in many different areas. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people are very happy and spend all life in the same area but some people move and go to another place. I think it good for people to go to many places and check if they like it or not and then decide to live there with family.

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International travel is becoming cheaper, and several countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

As a medical professional, I have a strong interest in combining technology with my healthcare expertise to enhance the treatment and life quality of patients. Recently, I have had an opportunity to collaborate with a start-up on a digital care project that aims to create chest wearable devices to help physicians monitor COPD patients easier by collecting physiological parameters of patients remotely. We have also developed an A.I model that is capable of predicting early COPD exacerbations based on hospitalization history and abnormal symptoms from collected data. As a result, physicians can monitor remotely, increase self-management of patients, intervene promptly and avoid hospitalization.

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In the future,nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It may be true that there will be nobody who will purchase newspapers or books due to easy access to read everything which are desired by people on online without payment but there are some drawbacks which can lead to consequences in society. In my opinion, I suggested that newspapers or books should be continued to print out due to some reasons such as some areas which do not accessible to the Internet, some writers and paper factory In the following paragraphs I will discuss why I fully disagree with that mentioned statement and develop my opinion.

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Educational institutes in most nations go through serious issues with the conduct of their students. This situation has root causes and solutions which will be discussed in this essay.

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Certain individual tell that sparing time to enhance a successful career is the most vital thing. Opponent say the time spend with friends and family is more important. Debate both sides and give your opinion?

There is a wide spread consensus, among certain individuals that self learning is the best mode of learning and does not require the aid of a teacher. While, others are of the opinion that guidance by a professional is important. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and provide my viewpoint.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The information in scientific research, business, and the academic world has been improving the development of many global aspects. Due to the accessibility issues, it is proposed that the information should be accessed freely. However, rejections also come to this idea as it is perceived that the information is too important and too valuable to be accessed freely. In my view, the proposal of giving the free access to scientific research is strongly worth to be implemented. Despite my opinion, this essay will elaborate both aspects of this discussion.

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some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people advocate that our modern life caused too many choices and available options. In my opinion, numbers of our choices depends on different parameters including the place we live, economic level and many more factors, although dramatic increase of options is undeniable. Generally, choices play a key role in everyone's life. Some of these choices have short term effect, while others influence our life permanently. Nowadays, with increasing technologies and expanding interpersonal con...

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19. Some people think that success is the best measure of intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?

Some men and women believe that our intelligence is equals our success. However, in my view, we can be estimated in other ways. There are various forms.

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In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.

There is no doubt that the adolescence stage takes place of changes among youths. Although all workplaces could be beneficial to teens, I believe that adolescent jobs could be disadvantageous to them. In this is say, I will delineate both notions, and then come up with my opinion.

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Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?

Illiteracy is a prevailing socio-economic concern in the modern world, moreover this inhibits the economic progress among the developing countries. There seem to be three main causes and two effects on both individual and society level, which will be discussed here.

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In the past most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smart phones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the development?

Over the last two or three decades, the technology has evolved with myriad innovations, resulting in communicating portable devices such as laptops, smartphones and tablets. At present, many people tend to work from home using these telecommunication techniques rather than travelling the workplace daily. In this essay, I will explore the pros and cons of this development and try to draw some conclusion. I will start by looking at the advantages. One of the major plus points of distance employment is, you do not have to commute to work. Traffic congestion in rush hours has become the global issue today. So, as you do not attend the office physically, it will save not only your money but also precious time. Secondly, working remotely will allow more freedom. Many employees have a tough timetable in their daily working routine as they have to attend continuous meetings by preparing numerous presentations. But at home, you will have a chance of watching television, gardenin...

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The US film industry has too much influence on the film industry around the world. Governments have a duty to invest money in their own film industries to protect and develop their cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

The US film producers has a greater impact in the film production all over the planet. I support the idea that, our legislators is their responsibility to fund their individual film industries to safeguard and promote their norms. In the coming paragraphs I'm going to elaborate my point regarding this issue.

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Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It is believed by some individuals that who consider becoming successful is totally depend on our risk-taking ability and chances whilst others believe luck and people should plan the future carefully. Therefore, I will clarify my viewpoint with examples and reasons in the forthcoming paragraphs

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Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly (Services, information, tasks). Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays we live in the era of immediacy where people's patience runs easily.This phenomenon is mainly to the revolution of technology. which I think in my opinion is a positive development.

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The tendency of human beings copying each other is shown in popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

In this era of globalisation, lifestyle has changed a lot and people try to adjust to the varied situations. As a result, many things have changed such as rules, technologies, and crowd fashion. As we are living in a modern world humans started to copy the outfits of western culture and also this is an opportunity for the retailers to grab profits by selling products that are essential within that decade. However, from my ,perspective it is a good development considering the developing world, of course.

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Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the developed world, a large number of universities tend to provide some of their courses on the internet, which allow people around the world to gain an acknowledgement remotely. Personally, there are either positive or negative outcomes from this teaching approach and I will elaborate in the following essay.

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Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree about this opinion?

There is a tremendously controversial perspective heating a debate whether people devote full attention and resources on the preservation of untamed animals and birds. While this statement is valid to some extent, I would contend that it may do more harm than good.

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Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features amd make comparisions wher relevant.

The diagram illustrates the processing of milk and the production of dairy products for commercial sale.

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Some people feel that boarding schools are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

Some people think that boarding schools are the best choice for juvenile, whereas others think that it is not good, because of some reasons. However, the issue is not entirely straightforward, and the argument can also be made against the idea. This essay will discuss the debate and a give concluding view. One the one hand, supporters of boarding school say that living independently gives some advantages. First and foremost, cause is that students can boost their confidence when they live in dormitory. As if children living on their own, they become independently to make decisions, spend money smartly and cook well. Secondly, it is often said that living in boarding school, students can focus on their lessons and spend time in boarding school library with their friends. At least, dormitory students could learn cooking therefore would not hunger. For instance, my classmates, who live in university dormitory said that below advantages, they learnt cook well and started to sp...

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One of the major problems that faces today’s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment. Discuss this statement and give your opinion.

The environment had experienced a dramatic increase in society in the past two to three decades. As per the World state Documentary, the world’s national growth rate will increase in the upcoming ten years. Moreover, the essay will explain the effect caused by increasing the nation worldwide.

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