IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some individuals conclude that a person should accept the calamity running in his , such as a disappointing job else scarcity of money , Whereas others believe that it is finner to make an effort on improving those situations . In the forthcoming paragraph , I would like to discuss both the views and accordingly elaborate my opinion.
There are two types of people i.e pessimist and optimist on any given situation . Likewise some would rather accept the bad situation and the remaining would try to improve it .The best way to handle any bad situation is to gradually improve the scenario .In forthcoming paragraph's I have discussed both the views .
Scientific researches are the most important things that are affecting our lives. It is obvious that our civilization is making progress under the light of scientific improvements. But, is it always the right thing to do to share all the information we gather from these researches? Or can it be dangerous sometimes to make every detail public?
Nowadays, with the world becoming more globalized students have more opportunity to study in other countries. Even within my country, I see a lot of people including my friends go to other country to continue their study. I think the advantages will outweigh the disadvantages. Such example would be, people from a developing country go study in a developed country and return to their home country bringing knowledge with them, but this also means people can also not return to their home country and continue living in the other country.
Technology has changed our lives.as a result people can know whole world news through the internet and online.therefore people will prefer to use the internet rather than printed things such as newspapers, books.I strongly agree with this, this essay will be helpful my statement
Crime movies and stories (crime fiction books) are undoubtedly (indubitably) becoming a very common phenomenon that can be observed in different places around the world. Regardless of age or the hometown, you will observe a variety of people are sharing the same interest and got attracted to read crime fiction books and attending crime related movies. In this essay I will explain some possible reasons stands behind the widespread of this habit along with my opinion about (robbery and murdering) criminal act related media.
In my opinion, I think I agree that parents should be the one teaching their children on how to be a good members of society. In this essay, I will try to further elaborate both side of these views, and give my reason as to why I agree on the first view.
There are many persons who can't control on their wishes due to greed and slowly slowly they are trapped in a net of unwanted wishes and they start to buying products unusually and by doing this on regular basis it leads to debt on people. So, in this essay we discuss about the behaviour of people as well as what are the precautions they need to take to prevent from debt problem.
Advance technology has made it easy for people to download music and books from the internet for free .I believe that this is constructive development .
In some part of the world,the personal life of famous people is showed in public by media where some individuals believe that they ought to accept it as a part of life.I entirely disagree with this.
Teaching is a noble profession, but these days youths are not considering their career option as a teacher especially for junior high school or for primary school levels.
The quantity of success is always measured by richness and other multitudes of material things. But in my opinion, accomplishment is not just about making money, furthermore, it is more about living life with a sense of fulfilment on a deeper level.
In the modern world nowadays, computer games has greatly become popular all over the world, especially for the young people. While many people don't think this sort of entertainment could bring any beneficials to the young generations and some thinks that violent games could be harmful to a child's development. But overall i don't agree with this statement.
Whether children should start their formal education at a very early age ignites a heated debate. Some people claim that they should begin at 7 years old at least while others adhere to that children have access to education at early age is more intelligent. My essay is going to discuss both sides of this issue and give my personal views.
Online orders have become quite popular these days. There is no age limit, people of all ages got used to it. The main reason for this to become popular is advertising. Some people argue that advertisements are quite heplful to learn about new things and be updated where as others argue that the advertisements are manipulative, they make people purchase unnecessary things. Personally, I agree with the first point and I support it by elaborating in the next paragraphs.
There were times where children used to say, "I want to become a doctor or engineer". There were also times where fathers used to be business men, doctors or farmers and mothers mostly used to be either home makers or teachers. But these are the times where a father is a business man, doctor, investor and what not! Also a mother is a home maker, business woman, tailor etc. With changing technology has come changing generations, to be more precise updated generations. My points below would explain in detail why a single career is boring and having several careers is interesting.
In this cutting edge era,Increase in the quantity of rubbish is one of the most significant issues that society is suffering from.The reason is also Society itself.This might be happening because of several reasons that are mainly created by people and industries.
It seems to be an increasing number of the youth who committed in the crime in most country all around world. There are two main causes and a couple of solutions that could be effective reducing crime. Possibly the main cause is unemployment of the young people especially developing countries today world. For instance, in my country, it tends to be related to most crime committed people who have less income than middle-class. Another well-known cause is that education level of those people especially who has just graduated their university or college. In some developing and poor countries more than half cases of the any crime occurrence is that result from who have not acquired quality education. Turning to possible solutions, most private and NGO (Non-Government Organizations) should support to job opportunities for young people who are hunting a job actively and other unemployed person whose may be less experience and skills. Of course, if people had job, they would enjoy...
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